D FIST OF DESTINY [rajeev/priyanka] fic

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Hey Reet, very nice update....Roshni's character in past is so strong i simply luved it😊...n its too painful to c Saket in pain but the moment that Saket n Razia shares r so sweet ninnocent.plzzzzzzzz do update asap.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Hmm...nice one. But poor Saket is in such a terrible state....I hate it when I need to fear of sumthing...and here he lives each moment in fear!!! How painful it must be!!! And when he says, when she remembers everything that day will be the end of his lyf.....awe....me feeling so sad!!!

And here we go wid another series of names.....like Roshni aka Rashi and Arjun aka Azzu....ryt? hehe...waise u r ryt....even I hav 5/6 names...haha.

It was a gr8 part.....u describe emotions beautifully....specially Saket's.☺️....Pls continue soon.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Poor Saket !!

Always in a state of fear that he might be separated from Roshni...

There's some dark side to their past,it seems.

So Arjun ka bhi aur ek naam hai..Azzu. Aur roshni ka naam Rashi hai!!😆😆😆

You were so good at describing Saket's emotions...

And amazing at writing that martial arts training session...

Awesome UD...

Please....ab itna zyada intezaar mat karwaana!😃

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Hey reet…

Its an Amazing part yaar…saket loves rashmi so much n he fears that he will loose rashmi once she gets her memory back……so sad to see him like this..u described really well the emotions of saket….n the morning scene is very well written

So azzu ki entry bhi hogayi….n rashi azzu r good pals……. It seems u r well known about martial arts……bahut acche se describe kiya hain tumne training session ke bare mein 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This time its ok we understand the reason for your late update but next part thoda jaldi post kardo yaar….cant wait for long

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Superb part dear.

I feel bad for saket.He loves roshni and feared to loose her one day.

U wrote very well the emotions of saket.Roshni is very sweet.

Continue soon dear.

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

hi reet.,

update was wonderful.

trazia's childliness and saket's pain arecexpresed beautifully.

please continue

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Update was very nice

Saket tries to be strong in front of Razia so that she will not remember her past and hopes that she will be happy. He is afraid of what the past may do to her. He wishes that he could always protect the playfulness in razia.

please continue soon

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Hi Reet!!!

Just finished reading this wonderful story. You have given it a whole new treatment. That is really awesome. Some things have become clear and many more still remain. This story has a certain freshness to it. Besides it is a RP fic. Awesome. Waiting for the next part. Post it soon. and please inform me when u update the next time.

Love
Guglu

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reet

@rajeev's_reet

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

hello my readers.

.how r you doing...

happy new year to all of you ....

...firstly i m awfully sorry for not updating ......

next m sorry for not replying ....

and again m sorry...

actually ....i was going through so many things.....dat just cudnt make it ...

at first ...i cudnt update..as i was very much anxious about my results....it was making very late to come out....rumours were sprding....

on decembr 1st wk it was out......

pehle humlogon ko itna bata dia jata hai ...ke hum sare subjects me pass huye ke nahi...fir uske 10 days baad aata hai ...TR ...total result...

to humein pehle bataya gaya....ke mai pass hu...

fir tension....acchi marks aaye ke nahi...caz....jabtak TR nahi aata hai...risc reh jata hai....result ke gadbadi me...

fir nikla tr....i hav scored...74.6 % in the exam....

stood 3rd in my medical college...

guys frankly speaking..uske turant bad humein college jana padha..

is medical college me laptops le jana bohot mushkil hai....

fir papa as a gift mujhe south india tour pe le gaye....uhase wapas aayi ....to dirct mai college hi gayi thi...so cudnt make it.....

ab mai aaplogonse maafi mangne aayi hu....m really sorry guys.....

thanks for bearing me..take care ...

love u loads ..

reet

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reet

@rajeev's_reet

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: guglu088
Hi Reet!!!

Just finished reading this wonderful story. You have given it a whole new treatment. That is really awesome. Some things have become clear and many more still remain. This story has a certain freshness to it. Besides it is a RP fic. Awesome. Waiting for the next part. Post it soon. and please inform me when u update the next time.

Love
Guglu

thank you guglu....

thank you so much ...

aah...just tried to make it a bit offbeat

yeah i know ..i had left it in myst ....i will clear it up eventually ...

m glad that you liked it so far ...

i will post it and inform you...:)