D FIST OF DESTINY [rajeev/priyanka] fic - Page 10

Originally posted by: vvdn

plzzzzzzz update !!!

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very nice

Saket tries to be strong in front of Razia so that she will not remember her past and hopes that she will be happy. He is afraid of what the past may do to her. He wishes that he could always protect the playfulness in razia.

please continue soon

Originally posted by: vvdn

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Update sooon......

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey reet'

Its an Amazing part yaar'saket loves rashmi so much n he fears that he will loose rashmi once she gets her memory back''so sad to see him like this..u described really well the emotions of saket'.n the morning scene is very well written

So azzu ki entry bhi hogayi'.n rashi azzu r good pals''. It seems u r well known about martial arts''bahut acche se describe kiya hain tumne training session ke bare mein 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This time its ok we understand the reason for your late update but next part thoda jaldi post kardo yaar'.cant wait for long

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Poor Saket !!

Always in a state of fear that he might be separated from Roshni...

There's some dark side to their past,it seems.

So Arjun ka bhi aur ek naam hai..Azzu. Aur roshni ka naam Rashi hai!!😆😆😆

You were so good at describing Saket's emotions...

And amazing at writing that martial arts training session...

Awesome UD...

Please....ab itna zyada intezaar mat karwaana!😃

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm...nice one. But poor Saket is in such a terrible state....I hate it when I need to fear of sumthing...and here he lives each moment in fear!!! How painful it must be!!! And when he says, when she remembers everything that day will be the end of his lyf.....awe....me feeling so sad!!!

And here we go wid another series of names.....like Roshni aka Rashi and Arjun aka Azzu....ryt? hehe...waise u r ryt....even I hav 5/6 names...haha.

It was a gr8 part.....u describe emotions beautifully....specially Saket's.☺️....Pls continue soon.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey Reet, very nice update....Roshni's character in past is so strong i simply luved it😊...n its too painful to c Saket in pain but the moment that Saket n Razia shares r so sweet ninnocent.plzzzzzzzz do update asap.

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Saket's feelings on seeing his angel Roshni sleeping was described very well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The day Roshni won't be here will be the last day of his life!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Saket kitne pyaar se Razia ko neend se jagata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saket Warsaw jaa raha hai toh Razia ko gift chahiye!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Razia hugged him so lovingly and said I love you and Saket whispered he loves her too!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Saket said be careful and that reminded her of something!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Probably she herself used to say this to Soni a lot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Poor Saket!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Always in a state of fear that he might be separated from Roshni!!!!!

He loves Roshni so much and fears that he will lose her once she gets her memory back!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

He wants her to be okay but not with the memory of her past!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Razia got worried to see tears in Saket's eyes!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Even she cares for him so much!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saket wanted to kiss Razia on her lips and he wanted to be assured that she will always be with him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But his self brought him back to reality!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Instead he kissed her forehead and told her to promise she will always be there and she hugged him tight!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Razia's childishness and Saket's pain are expressed beautifully!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Azzu aka Arjun is mad at Rashi for being late!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Rashi needs a new bokken but she probably doesn't have enough money left to buy it!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The martial arts training session was described very well!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Rashi is a perfectionist and a stern demonstrator!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

"here man here" …arjun approached one.

"watch me carefully"

"dis is a control ..umm naa… use ur left hand on the elbow and right hand near the wrist …"

D student did a gesture..as he showed..


"yaa rite…."

"It will leverage uke to the ground….like dis…"

He showed him d full stance….

"See this grip should also apply pressure into the ulnar nerve at the wrist…so..Maintain dis strain okay…?"

"Yeah shodan…!!"

"Huh… so.. wats ur plan for dis weekend.. …?" she asked him

"Nothing…gotta hav a boooooooooring weekend as usual...."azzu made a face.

Arjun neared rashi…who was testing agility of a gal doing makiwara…(a type of karate where d pal have to strike d post)

"Rashi … plz check dat guy…
Dat …d long haired boy…his grappling is seemed to be perfect u check another time…he is appearing for 'katame-no-kata'(grappling contest) in Yorkshire dis month…"

"If he wins …dere will be a sure hype of students in zing..and u gonnna slip out giving me a lil party rite…? rashi shook her head saying dis …

"Yaaa u always get me right babe…"

Rashi threw him a disgusting look nearing d guy he was talking about.

After some hours of nonstop practice… dey r found relaxing sitting in d wooden floor siping water from bottles..

At d same time…..
somewhere in Ireland

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"So wat to do..?"he looked at their expressionless faces…

And came a silent reply….

Is there anyone who gonna explain me..?

Ahem… joster.. I think .. we should give up d try this time…police has been very alert …a guy dared to speak up

D person joster clad in a grey over coat and very sharp cut face stared at him blankly…

whispered …
" if someone would hav abducted ur children and said u give up d hope…Wat u would hav done ? u would hav given up rite?"

"Aah…no I mean joster… it wud be very difficult …its just ..not possible..…"

Joster nodded silently.. murmured…
"yes its nt impossible …!!"

"I know a person who can do this…" joster remarked unmindfully

Everybody looked to his face with doubt full looks and queries..?
Does he know wat he is saying..?

What u r looking at …joster looked at one person…mike ..do you remember the famous shipping scandal.. at Glasgow….

Yeah….but nobody has a clear idea who did it…..nobody was caught…

Hmm….i know...so it will be done …he nodded his head ….but problem is that …will he accept this job….will he do this….

U mean u are going to appoint the same person did that years ago?

Joaster chuckled…..