D FIST OF DESTINY [rajeev/priyanka] fic

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello friends...i m reet
some of u may know me as dere old fren..some may b new to me..i m here to post a fiction..D FIST OF DESTINY
will look forward to your response..hope u will help me..!!
i will try to satisfy my readers best..!!
in doing dis...shaina helped me...i dont know recent rules...plz help me out in dis....
thanx a lot ...
i will start it in next post

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Posted: 15 years ago
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D FIST OF DESTINY
friends....i m starting another fic..this is also a rp fic....but dis will be a suspense thriller....cocktail of suspense...thrill...n love...and relationships....

i m eagerly waiting for ur responses.....and honest comments.....

i m giving d character sketch now.......

rajeev khandelwal
priyanka bassi
ghazal rai
harshad chopra
arjun bijlani


Prologue

dis is a story of mainly four young stars....dey also hav other friends....who were students of oxford university of London...

they all are Indians....some of dem r from india...came in london for study....some r residents of London....some came from...different parts of world....they met co-incidentally...and became gud frens....really best buddies.......dey came to oxford for derr graduation...and.....dey became. ..like a family there..

everything was going fine...until.............................
Destiny made a play wad them.......d common student's life forever changed....dies is all betas of one person .........(d character playing by Rajeev khandelwal)
he changed derr life...derr aim forever... actively or passively...he was responsible of d change of d students life.....

a mysterious character -rajeev khandelwal....wat he is...who he is...wats his real name...what is his occupation....nobody knows surely.........
d students met him accidentally...

now d students life is at stake...they r now a part of a dangerous life....part of a precarious mission...dat life has chosen for them......
they dnt know what their future lie ahead.....

Edited by rajeev's_reet - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Doctor how did u find her…???is she all right….???a magnetic handsome hunk tried to conceal da panic his voice……!!!

Don't worry…Mr. khan….she will be all right by evening…..!!i can completely understand ur nervousness…. But relax……..she will okay….trust me……

I trust u fully sir……!!!A anxious husband sighed a breath of relief…….

Dis is Mr. Saket ahmed khan a charismatic Youngman of around 28 years….above medium hight….barrel chest exclusively handsome ….extremely charming….looking astoundingly royal in a glow white costly suit…..in a simple word…he is hot………

But his face was pale…n worried……..!!
D unconscious lady lying on d bed in front of dem is his wife ……Razia…….Mrs. Razia ahmed khan ……………………

She has a platonic beauty in her pale face……she is very young…23 years old……she is lying unconscious in d bed……

Saket bent down to smoothen d loose curls of hair falling on her face……he placed dem behind her earlobe wid a great adore….

Doctor radland fledger noticed him minutely………got up from his sit and patted his shoulder ……..dnt worry my son…!!!....every thing will be fine….y r u so upset son….???u have seen her in worser condition dan dis……she is much better now……she faces d attacks very often son……..isnt it….???

Saket slowly nodded his head…..stiil eyeing his beautiful wife……

"Yes doctor u r right….i have seen her in worsen conditions…..and dats y….don't want repetition of d old days it makes me so panicked……..its been a long time she is suffering….she had had enough doctor….!!!I can't afford to loose her……I can't…..I love her dr……… love her more dan anything…"

"I know son….." dr. fledger patted his head sympathetically…….she loves u too….!!!
"God bless u my son…god bless ur love….."

D old doctor crossed "..i will pray for u…..!!!"

Thanks dr thank u so much……its u….for whom I hav her alive till now…inspite of so odds……!!!

U r most welcome son…but dats my holy duty……!!!i will take ur leave now….take care son….urself and take care of her….!!!


I will surely do dat….saket passed him a thankfull smile….and said lets go…I will see u off….

Dats okay son….!!!....i will manage….u stay wid her…….!!! Doctor fledger assured him…….

Saket's eye reflected gratefulness ……

Bubye doctor fledger …..take care…….!!!

Saket spread out his well gripped hand for a shake ….!!!

A surprising reaction quickly passed thru fledgers face……as he shook sakets hand
Every time fledger held dis young man's hand a unknown sensation passed thru his nerves doesn't kno y……???....!!!!..........

Doctor radland fledger climbed down frm sakets small cottage…..

Dis is a small village in Poland aviltang near d city Warsaw…….it has a very thin population…

doctor started his old fiat …..and soon disappeared in d horizon……

doctor radland fledger is a doctor of general medicine and neurologist …..he is attached wid da church of next village tanelrim….

He knows dis sweet Indian couple from last one n half years….
Dey r really sweet ….cute n loving…….but derr fate has played a dreadfull game wid dem ……razia is suffering from dementia……..a loss of memory….she has no idea abut her past life before an accident in which she has lost her memory……..completely dark……and just living in her present……


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dey met n accident abut 2 years ago wen dey were coming back from derr first honeymoon in Switzerland to lion at france…..derr hometown………..on d way back dey met wid an accident dat snatched away her memory …….

Saket left no stones unturned to….make her fine as before….but his and his appointed all doctors all efforts gone in vain ……he had spent all his money after razia's medication ….. but nothing cud make her well…..

Razia started loosing control on herself wenever she faced attacks….she became wild…..and after it…everything is normal…except a mild headache….even she cant remember wat she has done during da attacks………

Finally all relatives started giving derr opinions loudly….in stead of whispering between demselves …..some suggested saket to to send her mental asylum …some suggested of remarriage…as dis young eligible bachelors appropriate candidates were ready in derr relnships……everybody wanted to rag his or her name wid saket ahmed khan…….so every ones eagerness started increasing……finaly it turned to open taunting razia…dat worsen razia's condition…both physical…n mental…….

Frustrated saket decided to shift seeing decreasing state of razia's……he decided to wind off his business and sell other properties……he thot to leave france…..and dey shifted to aviltang……a remote village near Warsaw…in Poland………far away frm his relatives………and known persons……

Widin a couple of weeks of shifting…one night razia faced again da attack….advised by da neighbours saket went to da church in search of doctor fledger …and dat was da beginning of derr frenship…

Fledger started liking dis fateless young couple…..derr childishness derr happiness da bondage of cute love between dem made fledger a feeling of sympathy n love wid da couple…….going beyond his profession…..


Fledger noticed dis Youngman who loved his wife most ….everytime wen razia suffered da attack saket went crazy….used to do his utmost to give her a little relief…but cudnt….to his utter despair……fledger started liking dis young Indian devoted husband…..deyy reminded him of his own wife who has passed away 12 years ago….

But sometimes fledgers intuition sensed something abnormal abut saket…….very often…but he sensed……such as wenever he shook hand wid saket it seemed he is not a common civilian person….fledgers 35 years of experience in his profession…gave him d idea…d grip reminds of a hawk……a warrior's hand….

Doesn't kno y…sometimes fledger feels uncanny abut his identity……

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Aisa kya huya tha jisse the lives of the four changed forever??😕 😕 😕 😕

Saket is really worried about Razia but Dr.Fledger assured him that she will be alright by evening!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saket loves Razia more than anything and couldn't afford to lose her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Why does Dr.Fledger get this unknown sensation each time he holds Saket's hand??😕 😕 😕 😕

Poor Razia!!!!! She is suffering from memory loss!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Uski yeh haalat unke honeymoon ke baad se hai and nothing could make her well again!!!!!

Fledger likes this couple very much and they reminded him of his own wife!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Fledger feels that there is something about Saket and seems to have a a doubt about his true identity!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Saket's grip reminds him of a hawk and its a warrior's hand!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

So things are clearly not what they seem!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Doctor….!!!..ohhh so u r here……!!!welcome doctor…….we have been waiting for u so long….!!!!

A husky masculine villager voice broke fledgers thot………

Everything is fine fledger….stop being ridiculous……u r sounding silly……he muttered under his breath and got involved in his circumstances…..





After seeing off doctor fledger saket dint came back to d room…he seemed somehow lost in his thoughts…..he stood there still crossing his arms on his broad muscled torso..

This doctor fledger ..regarded as d most kind person of d area ….doesnt seem to be fooled easily….isn't it..? why I m feeling dat I have seen a sparkle in his eyes….a question…..?
He crossed himself….its all because razia 's illness….she needs to recover fast…..its been a long time..she is going thru dis..

Razia …how's she…?ohh…I forgot in all dis….may be she has got her senses back in this time…saket hurriedly walks back inside..

Razia sleeping serenely in her bed….cuddling like a baby…as if nothing had happened in d last night…

Saket smiles…takes d next sit beside her…..taking her one hand in his palms…

He is living wid her for last two years under a same roof…
d experience of dis relation is like heaven to saket…… for d first time in his solitary life he shared a relationship with somebody.. so deep n so close…joy… pain…love …happiness …everything ..

saket wished to stop his life here … he was unknown wid social relation ships for his entire life..

he recapitulated his old days….. No experience he could remember dat seemed to him as a good one…. He concealed a deep breath…

but d day when he met dis gal…never thought life will turn up like dis……he also can be expected to some one…a person who is desired by his wife .

he remembered d first day of London when d story started….

Nobody could ever imagine….destiny will play this game wid dem….
Saket will be having relationship… he chuckled at his own thought…..no one can find any resemblance in his past and his present …..its like he has got a new life to live

SONIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII…………………………………..!!!!

A panicked voice breaks his trance….. Horrified saket turns back at his wife…
who has got up on d bed erected .....sweating profusely.

She has waked up again wid d same awful dream…



Wat happened razia…..look at me....shhh…..there is nobody else nothing….calm down……..….shhhhhhh….. I m here with u…don't worry….razia…plz relax…



Razia clings to him…. stuck with him in a unknown horror…don't leave me alone plz…don't …u wont na……??say dat u wont….a insecure voice trembled in unknown fear …..



Relax razia…..shhh…I m not going anywhere without u…u know it na…den y r u thinking like dat….???.saket rocks her back n forth…and rubs her back to console her to forget d dream


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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is nothing new to saket….



It happens regularly with razia since last two years………



But will she always ask d same question…??dis eagerly…. "…..don't leave me saket….."



He shuts his eyes tight..….dis very words make his knees weak…evrytime..
Saket's heart weak… he…who has never cared for anybody in his bloody damn life..



He has loved her……though always tried not to…but he had fallen for her …deeply madly in dis last two years….he cant think for a moment dat he is nt wid razia..


In one way saket sometimes frightens at d thought if her memory comes back one day…will he loose his only one relation ship he had got in his entire life…


Saket scares his own destiny…..he doesn't want to loose razia…..but its not possible in anyway after d sec she will get back her senses….


if life wud hav a bit normal…more easier to live…more easy to dream of…..if dey wud hav really shared dis relation ship…..sakets wishlist has only one thing to pray...RAZIA…


But he knows dis cant be…..caz dis is life..!!he has taken dis to be true..



He wished in his weakest moments of life to stop d time here….But d very next moments make him think in wat condition razia is living right now…and wat she was wen he met her around 7 years ago…… severe difference from dose days and in dis days….




Not only she has changed … but she made saket life also changed totally…now today she is d aim of his life…..his love life..


Saket often gets gloomy thinking of d next days


But nothing is in his hand…he will try his level best to recover her from d shock she is existing now a days…no matter wat happens after dat….. he can bear her hatred also after dat… yes he can ….!!



"Saket… I m hungry ..plz get me something to eat na…" she looks at him innocently holding his chin in her soft beautiful fingers...she seems almost normal right now..


"Sure darling "…saket touches her cheek lightly wid great affection " ….u just seat here..i will be back… don't get up…u r not okay… do u understand me…?" a bit seriously dis time…


"Yup……I got it…..!! " razia makes a puppy like face …


Saket shakes his head and cups her face in his palms
Pulls her to him and nudges her nose wid his…..

I love u sweetu....!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Fledger dismissed his thoughts and assured himself that everything is fine!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Even Saket has realised that Dr.Fledger isn't fooled easily and he has seen a sparkle in his eyes!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Saket has been living with Razia for the last two years and it is like heaven to him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It has changed his life and he wished to stop his life just here!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Razia ne neend mein Soni ka naam liya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Yeh Soni kaun hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

I loved the way Saket comforted Razia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saket has deeply and madly fallen in love in these past two years and can't think of a moment when he is not with Razia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He is scared that when Razia's memory comes back he will lose the only relationship he had got in his entire life!!!!!

Saket wishes that they had really shared this relationship!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲That means that they are not husband and wife!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

But then he wants her to recover from the shock and is ready to bear her hatred after that!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I wonder what had happened in the past!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The love and affection between Saket and Razia is very cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9

hello friends...dats all for today...thanx shaina for her help...she is a swt heart!!!

will look forward to ur replies..
thanx..
reet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its a little bit confusing
but i guess it will clear out once the story progess
really nice fic
please continue soon

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