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piya-jiya

@piya-jiya

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1031

khush thank for the scene

its really sad part but i liked it

so we have to guess who her husband was before ,i dont want to reveal our her let it be in my mind haaaaaaaa

but khush its a lovely n emotional scence

love u

🤗

yupeeeeeeeeeee!!!! me first to comment 😃

Edited by muni-loveAN - 14 years ago

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#1032

Khush a nice emotional scene. Loved it.. Thanks for it 🤗

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#1033

hottie...🤗

u already knw evything!! n hw i lovd it!..
but still m gona repeat it ovr here...😳
juz lov ths scene dear..
itz not necessary that ff shuld alwaz b romantic..
az ths one izzz soo emotnl
n that too writn by uuuu, i stil cnt beliv u cn rite smthing lik ths..
i mean such a tough job hottiee...
u really gav justice to it👏
so u hav provd that u not only good in writing romantic prtz but also in emotnl too..😃
ths os of urz.. really made me cry.😊
n lov each n evry prt, the beggnin n ending too.....
the way u hav potreyd charctr of nikk izz kabile taariiiff...
beutifully wriittn dear
n keep it up..........⭐️
jhappizz

Edited by chaitali_an - 14 years ago

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jibreen

@jsha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#1034

aww khushim ur scene as so good first i was crying when i read her husband died i thought he was Abhi 😭 but in the end i was so hppy when iread the last part 😃

khushi plz try to write the scenes often when ever u get time😆

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1035

khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..........

thanks for a beautiful scene!

I don't know if I am sad or happy 😕

Reading your scene evoked so many emotions ....... but it was really very nice. The way you have brought out Nikki's feelings in the whole scene is just beautiful ..... so deep. Generally when people move on after loosing someone you get a feeling that they are betraying the one who is gone .... but here you have shown how special they both are to her so beautifully .......

really a very nice scene ..... more than AN .... I liked the way you have expressed the feelings 🤗

Edited by ANfan_1810 - 14 years ago

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1036

@ angel_sub, abhilasha_123, hemvb, -Kalindi-, ANfan_1810, jsdoll, wow123, muni-loveAN, chaitali_an, jyothi_cool, hapinezz13...thanks for liking the scene! And yes, I'll be expecting comments...whether good or bad, from those of you who aren't my silent readers! 😉

@Muni...thankyou for the comment! Well no you really don't have to guess who the husband was, because I don't know it myself 😆 I just had this random thought when I finished the 4th Chapter of "P.S. I Love You" and I wrote it up. 😳

@Kalindi...thankyou!

@Cherry...thanks! OMG why is it so hard to believe I wrote it? 😲 😛 Yes well normally in the AN FFs we're always going on about Abhi's past, and his earlier girlfriends or wife or whatever...I was going to do the same, actually 😳 but then when I wrote it, somehow it turned out to be Nikki who suffered the heartbreak. Glad you liked it so much! 🤗

@Jibreen...thankyou for the comment sweetie! But I hope you seriously didn't cry 😲 yeah I will write when something comes to mind...I generally always do 😉

@Annie...thanks for the beautiful words, sweetie! Oh don't worry, we're both in the same boat. I don't know either whether it's sad or happy...confusing, actually. Somewhere in between. But that's life. It's not necessary that everything that happens should have only one particular emotion attached to it. Sometimes we find joy in sadness and at other times, vice versa.

Yes, I have this philosophy that moving on is a part of life. Life isn't stagnant and you can't make it so. And to continue living isn't betraying the one you loved before, it's just finding someone special anew. 😳 What I wanted to show was that they're both special to her, in their own individual ways. They don't need to compare and one needn't be more important to her...it's just a question of the difference between past and present. 😊

Glad you liked it sweetie! And see! My reply is larger than your comment 😆 😆 😆

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1037

khushboo,
liked your scene.. the emotions are spot on. and the whole mystery about who is this second man was nice too. I have ready Ps I Love you and I had totally loved how it described those minute details about getting use to and liking each other.. like the lamp in the bedrrom and all. you brough exact same emotions. good job.

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#1038

Hey Khush, jst read ur scene n I was cryin. I mean literaly yaar. I thought u made my Abhi dead. The flashback made me think dat it was Abhi. I mean d pillow fights n all those stuff, I only cud imagine Niki wid Abhi. Bt den as read ahead, the description of d 2nd man made it so obvious 2 gues who he was goin 2 b. Lovd d scene 2 d core. Nice emotional scene 4 a change n d bst line was "U dont hav 2 think of me, bt jst dont 4get me."Awww😊

Edited by Nehu_1 - 14 years ago

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.Dalisay.

@.Dalisay.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1039

Heey khushh first of all this is 4 uu... 🤗

I was really craving for some AN stuff n u write this.. 😃 the secne was emotional realy made me cry over her 1st husbands death. as everyone out here i also thought it was abhii!! but thankfully abhi was ther in her arms in d last scene yyyeeaaa!!!
I dnt care what was d name of that guy or who he was, just im happy that nikki finds her love againn..😊

Edited by ANrucha - 14 years ago

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shalini

@wow123

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#1040

hey kush

i like how u express the emotion part into words which is diffcult in its own. To loose someone whose very close is very heahrtbroken feeling and i watch many movies based on it. (one i love is "Ghost" movie- it make cry)

..but i have one complain here althougth i loved ur first part a lot but same time i fell second part where Abhi landed in Nikki's life is cut off in short. I like it more if u elborateit further😉