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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 4:

The next day,kripa had woken up early?.and she was making pasta for him?.i know that u will it coz im only good at making pasta..i was eagerly waiting for him in the class?.he was there?and I waited impatiently for lunch time?I initiated a conversation with him?but he didn't want to reply to any of my talks?he behaved rudely today?though he's known to be rude?ive asked him to help me with an exercise..i was confused at it?..

a-cant u do it by urself>im a student like you here?im not some god that would know all the answers?n the exercises that u already know why do u ask me so often about them pretending?..ask the teacher if u find them tough?. and let me concentrate?

I was shocked how could he have figured it out that I only pretended not to know the exercises?why was he so mean?i looked at him with tears threatening to roll down my cheeks,but he avoided my gaze..he looked fierce and his eyes were charcoal black?..he looked fiercely handsome..but I wasn't intimidated..i wanted to talk to him ask him what was wrong..why was he taking all his frustrations on me?but before I could..he disappeared as soon as the bell rang only once?.

I went behind him,running,avoiding to fall?.an saw him talking rudely to manek.i couldn't comprehend what was happening?.but I was sure that he was rude because of his anger on manek?

Wanted to enlighten the atmosphere.i went to talk to him?he was heading for his car?

k-angad.im sorry that I have disturbed you?

he looked puzzled?

k-i know u were angry at manek..but please angad don't get angry at me..i value our friendship don't ruin it?.

a-who told u that we were friends??he asked fiercly,trapping me under his gaze?.

k?uh uh.what??what do u mean Angad?we are friends..u helped me out Angad so many times?and Angad I hate u saying this Angad?.how could you?

Kripa was on the verge of crying?.but she tried hard not to break down in front of him..she demanded an explanation from him?why was it that he whenever he was frustrated,she would become the victim of his anger??

a-ive told you to think that we were friends?.and I only talked to you to help you with your homework?..but u were pretending?and I don't like it at all?and now leave me.i don't wanna see your face right now??just leave?

K-angad..i know u r upset at something?.ok to enlighten the mood?lok what I have brought for you.please accept it?

Angad was curious about it..and opened the container.surprised to see food in it?

a- what is it?what n why have u brought this..

angad couldn't eat this,not only this because he was?..

k-are we playion 20-20 questions ask me later and later we'll discuss?

a-i cant eat this.

k-i ensure it's healthy,no extra oil..not too spicy.

a-ive told u don't want it.,

now kripa couldn't hold back and was crying?why was he always mean?

a-kripa look im sorry..im really touched that u have prepared it for me.but I cant eat it because im?.vegetarian?I cant eat this?look this pasta has got few pieces of chicken?u see im so sorry?.

He wept her tears?and kripa was shocked..his finger was cold..colder than ice?she looked at him perturbed and as if knowing what was on kripa's mind,he swiftly took back his finger?.

Kripa was aghast?.K-u r so cold?

A-yes,huh because..he couldn't provide an explanation?."I have to rush"

Before kripa could say something,he was in his car and he was in no sight?.in few seconds?.

Later,surya was back at home and was tensed?.he then said that a man was badly attacked by some sort of animal?.kripa was terrified?.and was perplexed as well?when she asked further kripa asked when did that happen..he had said?13.00-14.00?and during this time?Angad wasn't at school?kripa shuddered at the thought of something happening to Angad?..but she didn't know that later she would contemplate on thinking that Angad maybe was the bad,wild animal??.

Identity revealed?..

Edited by AK-Karansha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG dude!! That was awesome! Poor Kripa yaar. She prepared the pasta with so much love and hope and he made her cry! Thank god he felt bad or else i was thinking the guy, vampire or not had no feelings! You havnt actually showed any interaction with his siblings and i'll be waiting for that. Will Kripa be best friends with Aalia? Anyways update soon and PM me. You're an awesome writer by the way. ~Jot~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I want ti kick angad he is too bad she cooked for him and he shame on you angad... aww poor kripa . please update soon thank you for pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for pm
angad is so mean
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5:

Later at night….i was writing in my diary……all the events that have occurred with me….i couldn't recall how I caring I was bfore….never…with surya….never.i always blamed him wrong that I got separated from him.he could have stoped mum or even tried to claim my custody…but maybe that was for the best..living away from surya..made me somewhat independent…not that much but still…whenever mum went out to dine with her new husband..i would stay alone…even with Charlie but at least he would bring me in the police station and made me sit there providing me with so much food..i want so much fond of food…as a kid.i was overfed by surya….living with mum had made me control my appetite….this contribute mainly for my present weight…

Yes….angad khanna..the most handsome guy ive ever seen in my life and who was my first curush and then first love….i wasn't so keen to fall in love before..and wasn't for love but rather against…..mum and dad loved each other so why did they have to separate..and divorce in the first place??i didn't believe in love…it was just s*** according to me..but Angad khanna had aroused such feelings in me,....with which I was alienated….i didn't think that I had such feelings in me…these feelings made me realize that I was a girl.bu what was there with Angad khanna that I felt so feminine…..so madly in love….everything about him invites me in.be his attention,help,face,smell,eyes,anger…..

Back to my diary…..i was writing hw Angad had refused my pasta….but I was also touched when he said that he was equally touched by my sweet and caring gesture…he didn't like my pasta and refused to eat it because I had made chicken pasta and h was vegetarian….so at least he was sincere with me…yes I have decided to make veggie pasta for him…but why did he denied that we were friends?maybe because he didn't befriend with anybody and he couldn't show that I was only his friend….maybe because everyone would envy me...

But I couldn't help thinking about what surya had told me…there was a murder b some sort of animal…and Angad,was he safe.he wasn't even at school..bunked school and never came back..omg.was he safe??i couldn't hold myself and dint know how to ask dad…but I went to talk to him…

K-dad..wo kya hua aapne kuch pata chala kya?i mean kaun sa animal that?and who died apart from that man?

Before,I was least interested in listening to surya's day at work…and today I was asking questions about his work…surya was indeed surprised but approved that I was showing interest in reality—according to him..

S-kuch pata nahin chala hain…lekin bahut ajib taike se maara hain.body to hai…sirk galey mein ek nishaan hain..jisse bahut bahaa hain lekin kuch zyaada khoon nahin mila wahaan par…pata nahin kis tarah ka jaanwar that…lekin tum pareshan kyun dikh rahi ho?

K-dad…wo mujhe ek classmate ki chintha ho rahi hai….woh Angad hai na..wo school se gayaab pata nahin kahaan chala gaya that aur phir school bi wapaas nahin aaya..mujhe dar kayi uss jaanwar ne usse kuch..she couldn't utter these words because she was in pain…emotional pain…

s-angad?u mean Angad khanna??haan dekha tha maine usse wo hospital mein tha…

kripa was aghast—hospital mein?

s-haan apne dad se milne aaya tha wo…Angad is planning to settle in atlantica…and that was why he came to meet his dad dilip khanna.hes a very good doctor,..if he could.he could work in any highly paid hospitals but he's here because of naina…his wife…a charismatic and helpful lady..

I glanced at dad praising another woman and chuckled…he stared at me and then chuckled too..not what u r thinking krips..she's a good lady…

Dying of curiosity—why is Angad going there?

s-that I don't know.but heard his relative is ailing…and he's going to look after him…

I ws terribly disturbed…why did Angad have to go….was he leaving me forever…..

I couldn't sleep and decided to watch what was on tv..i was a film on vampires….it made me feel kinda afraid,disgusted as well….and I was intrigued and thought about Angad….angad was really really fast…he was cold…icy cold..his eyes changed colour….was he a vampire…this bit after having watched the film,ive dreamt of…I was dreading the fact that Angad was a vampire…how foolish of me…I was impressed by the actor.he was indeed really handsome…and his everything invited the actress..wait….could he be.he never did eat…I need some evidence…..i was just associating crap things with Angad.vampires don't exist..we are living in this modern century….

When I went to school the other day….i was introduced to Krishna Walia ..… he had returned from a trip in America yesterday and was back with his siblings… Karan,Kali,Kannya,Ketan….they were blood-related siblings….they looked as if they were always alert…Krishna knew kripa from birth…yes he knew her because they weren't humans like the KHANNAS..they had grown together and played with each other till kripa ha moved with her mum….kripa vaguely remembered him but was pleased to see that Krishna had grown in to such a handsome guy….

Angad didn't look please at all the way Krishna hugged me and the ay we were both talking to each other and laughing…I was going to play basketball and was thinkii=ng of a strategy to escape from this dangerous class…whn I heard two man fighting…..i could recongnise this voice whenrever I wa.this was Angad;s voice but who was the other one?

Krishna…I was too shocked…

K—u stay away from her.i'll shield her from anything and u and ur horrible family..u will be responsible if anything happens to her..

A-why will I harm her?i care for her that's why im sounding rude to her..

K-then why did u talk to her…u shouldn't have in the first place…

Why were they discussing over HER..were they both in love with each other.i wanted to ask them but my teacher had found me.and last thing I saw was Krishna was grabing angad's collar and Angad was letting him….and when I turned again I saw krishna's siblings and Angad siblings at one side each side glaring at the other….

Who was this "her"?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 6:-

GOD?.everynight wil I ask myself tons of questions like that?where there are no answers..i think I have to ask Krishna about it?I think god really herad me and Krishna and his other siblings were invited by surya?.kali and kannyya instantly became my friends and karan and ketan was like really charming?but they were 2 years younger than me?they were twins and kali and kannya were twins as well..and 1 year elder than me..krishna was of the same age like me?..

We were in my room later discussing of what Krishna had missed at school..and that was when I seized the opportunity to bore him with my questions..

Kpa?so u r in love..hmm?

Krs-what??no way?

Krp-don't deny..ive heard u ..

Krs-what are u talking about?

Krp-who is this her?

Krs-I don't know what u r talking about.

Krp-u had a fight with khana?

Krs-oh yeah nothing important?

Krp-tell me why both of you were fighting over this her..tell me her name?

Krs-not to sound rude i'd advised u not to talk to him..

Krp-me..am I the her?

Krs-yes.i shouldn't have said that?

Krp-what tell me why were u not allowing him to talk to me?

Krs-kripa u don't know about the khannna they are not what they seem to be?

Krp-they are what then?

Krs-just avoid talking about it ya.

Krp-no I want to know,?

Krs-look u wont believe me so..

Krp-I'll believe you..

Krs-well its's a legend and I don't think it exists but it is said that the khannas are the descendants of the cold-blooded one..but it's all a myth u know?

Later I was perplexed ?what did he mean by this?.cold-blooded one??i googled it and what I found was vampire-related information?what the heck??was Angad no the khannas vampires?dad would surely know about this..but why did onl Krishna knew about it?

I tried to talk to krishna again but he avoidd the talk?I later talked to ketan?he was really the ougoing type and visibly had a crush on me?silly crush so I asked him:hey Krishna was saying about the khanna being the coldblooded one..he told met to ask u because u are very smart...and know more than him,as u r always alert and,who didn't say that boosting the ego of a guy,would have him melt?

Ketan-it's a myth that they are blood-suckers?but there haven't been any case never,,,so I don't think they r really what is according to this myth?. They would have grown dangerous but they are not?

Kripa--but how come u walias only know about this myth....?and then he evaded my question and said "I have to rush" and disappeared..just like Angad had said?when I asked him about being cold?..if khannas are vampires then what are the walias??

Again I had the dream of Angad drinking the blood of an animal then a man..and the man was none other than?.no it was a girl..and it was me..i was appaled and wanted to hide somewhere,.no angad isn't a vampire..it's all a myth?..

Dance party was the most celebrated event at school...i didn't have a dress..so I went with my harshini and other pals to buy an outfit...I went to search for dresses in other shops and then realized that ive lost my pals..my mobile battery was really low..and then I was scared...few guys were ogling at me..and were touching me!!!!1when out of nowhere,angad came in a rush in his car and rescued me..those guys were like a deer caught in headlights?and ran off??with only one look they cwere appalled..

Angad drove like a maniac?..and stopped at a cliff?.

I was shellshocked..

k-i know what u are?ur eyes change colour,,u r fast like the wind?u don't eat anything?u r ice cold.ur skin is pale?u talk like u r from another time?how long have u ben seventeen?

a-a while..

k?I know u r?.

a-say it loud.

k-vam?vamm?vampire?.

a-r u scared?

k-no..u won't hut me..

a-i will hurt you.

k- I trust you..

a-why do u?

k-because u care for me..

a-no..

k-u cant deny this u care for me that's why u seem aloof..

a-no I don't..

k-i heard u fight with Krishna?

I heard him let out a growl?and abruptly turned to face him..

a?his eyes were charcoal black and then amber?

a?I care for you,,,u r the only human that have stirred emotions in me?u made me attracted to you?I cant help myself smelling you.u r intoxicating.only your smell?.

k?why and how did you know my pretsense?

a?he left a chuckle..then said?it as all aliya's doing?.she saw that u were thinking of how to attract my attention?and I pretended all along.as I love ur silly questions..let me tell you u r a very bad actress?I had to talk to u ..that what aaliya had advised me?.the longer u suppress?it gets only stronger?so I talked to you?

and the I realize I couldn't endanger ur life after the man who had died?

k?did u kill him?

a-no I didn't.there are some vampires who dink human blood?.we khannas drink animal blood because we don't want to become a monster?those vampires who killed that man?I didn't want them to kill you..and that's why I avoided you?

k-but how?

a?they wont know if I befriend a mortal?I was just insecure..

k-and what are the walias??

His eyes grew charcoal black again?

k-tell me because they told me ur truth?

a-they are pure blooded-family..they are werewolves?.they don't get along with us vampires..they aren't as us.immotal?they protect mortals?and that's why are against vampires but they don't know that khannas are vegetarians?like only drink animal blood?

k-u r what?immotal??so what ur age ???

a-im 104?

k-what?/u r like my great-great ?great grandfather then?.

a?yeah u ca say so?

k-now that I know ur truth will u be my friend?

a-yea aaliya told me that it was fine for me to befriend you?.

k-is she ur advisor..

a-yes?she is.she predicts?but it's always subjective?

k-and ur other siblings?

a-I read minds..am very fast....karthik is new vegetarian..and controls and change people's emotions....alyas predicts?manek is really strong..and anita is known for her tenacity?

k?wow.

a-what are you thinking?

k?now I think uve invented this story of vampires?u can read minds so read mind?

a- I cant read urs?

k-im abnormal?

a-im a vampire,u r with a vampire right now?u aren't scared being with a vampire right now...u r like nothing happened...and u say that u r abnormal?yes u r abnormal in the sense that u r not frightened like any mortal but u r abnormal,as here u r nonchalantly talking to world's most dangerous predator..No urs I cant read I don't know y..it's frustrating u know..

k--hmmm...but im happy about it...

Because Angad would have known her feelings for him....

And they had become good friends....the walias intervened though....aliya had become good friends with kripa....

karthik was trying hard to control his urges...he couldnt help smelling kripa....angad had control because he had considered kripa as his own....to what extent no one knew..

anita was really angry of AK'S friendship and that's why she made a plan..and mishty's return was the most crucial factor o her plan.

Next:mishty bose?dance party?kripa crying??

Edited by AK-Karansha - 15 years ago
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awesome , mind blowing , kripa is so sweet she took every thing so normal , i am looking for next part angad is gona hurt her and misty i will kill her.thank you for pm dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome , mind blowing , kripa is so sweet she took every thing so normal , i am looking for next part angad is gona hurt her and misty i will kill her.thank you for pm dear

most welcome dear...😊
well ya kripa is really really understanding but a bit dumb..who will befriend a vampire?
angad will be helpless...and mishty will be so cruel.....being a vamp...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omg dude!! That was awesome!! I loved it.
YAY! Angad and Kripa are friends. Anita is really stupid. Kartik is well..i dunno.
Soooo uggh! Mishti is coming.
Update soon and PM please.
~JOT~
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i would like ur p.o.v on the walias.thanks..

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