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beautiful update maisha
just fantastic
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update.....
very nice!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow so cuteeee n awesome update so wow dey gonna tell AR abt der relationship awesome let's see wat will be der reaction n den aww sajan scene Sammy always saves gunji from falling hehe lovee it do continue soon
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wow lovely update dear!
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superb update.....sajan and mayur scenes were sooo cute....cont soon
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wow dear...
superb part..aww sajan's scene in the pathlap was very very cute..loved it...plzz continue soon and thanks alot for the pm!!
love,
gunjan mariya...
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tht was sooooooooo awesomeeeee i just love it
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awesomeeeeeeee updt..
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awesummmmm part

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part-72 at night....mayank n samrat in mayanks room...mayank was worried for nupur as she was angry.. s=mayank....bhai ka phone aya kya??? kab araha ha????? m=......................... s=mayank m=........................................ s=mayank,.!!!!!!
m=ab ha ha...bol na samrat kya keh raha tha????
kya hua dude?? kaha kho gaye????? koi problem ha kya????
m=are nahi yaar...pareshan hu......
s=kyu?? nupurse larai hui kya?????
m=ha....aur is baar shayed woh thori zyada gusse me ha......
s=kyu??? tune srk ko leke kuch serious bol dia kya????
m=nahi yaar...woih actuallly.....
mayank tells him the whole story...listening to that....samrat bursts into laugh...
m=samrat tum has raheho????
s=aur nahi to kya karu???? yaar...tumhari story ha ke....koi comedy ka kahani???
m=sam ma yaha pareshan hu aur tu ha.....
s=accha sorry yaar....sorry....to ab??
m=ab pata nahi..usse phone karreahu par woh phone nahi utha rahiha........msg dia par reply nahi kia ha....
s=hmmmm lagta ha shayed sachme udass ha
m=tu koi idea batana yaar...kaise usse manau???????
s=ummm......sochne de.......
after a while both sayank thought...n then...
s=idea....
m=kya???
s=chal.......
sharma house....
gunjan was sitting quitely in nupurs room....as she was angry...n thorowing all her clothes one by one on the bed....
g=di...
n=kya ha?????????????????
g=ahista diii....tum mayank ka gussa in bechare kapdo pe kyu nikal rahiho???
n=gunjan dekh mera dimag wasehi gusse me ha...mujhe mayank ka naam yaad mat dilana samjhi warna tujhe bhi ma...
g=di relax ma gunjan hu....shant hojao....plzzz
n=kya shant hojau???? usse ma chodungi nahi...pehle pyaar jatata ha aur phir ekhi paal me... by god..aur ab sorry bhi bol raha ha...iss baar ma usse maaf nahi karne wali...
scene shift outside of sharma house...sayank were at the back of the house standing in the garden...
m=samrat itni raatko gharke bahar woh bhi in red roses ke sath ma bilkul jokar lagraha hu..
s=pyaar me insaan pagal banjata ha to tum zarasa jokar nahi ban sakte?????/
m=shut up sam..aur hum yaha kar kya raheha??????
s=woh upar nupur ka kamra.....ye raha siri upar jao..
m=kya????? tumhara dimag to theek ah darwaja ha phir ma siiri se woh bhi khirkise kyu jaunga??????
s=kyuki ye style ha..aur lafkioko mananeka tarreeka samjhe??? tumhe usse ye jatana ha ke adhi raatko tum usse choro ki taraha chupke milne aye ho....taki woh impress ho.......samjhe???? aur is tarahse jaoge to usse baraha romantic lagega...kyuki ese filme heroes jate ha...
m=are wah.......accha idea ha...wase tujhe kahase mila???
s=chashmishse milneko ye idea kaam karlia ha mane...isisliye deraha hu..
m=oho...abhi samjha...to ma jau???
s=ha jana........
m=par tu yaha kya karega?????
s=dekh gharme koi nahi ha....sirf gunjan aur nupur...tu khirkise nupurke room me ja.....phir ma sirise chashmish ke room me jaunga...
m=are par ma utrunga kaise???
s=sulah karke baad....darwajase chale jayenge.....ok???
m=theek ha..chal...ma jata hu......
mayank starts climbing the ladder....meanwhile in nupurs rroom...
g=accha di shant hojao aur ye sab chodo aur sojao....
n=mujhe neend nahi arahiha..
g=theek ha ma jati hu....gud nite di.....
gunjan hugged nupur n kissed on her cheek....nupur smiled back n pulled her cheeks.......
n=gud nite...
gunjan left the room..nupur closed the door....n was arranging he clothes...mayank peeped from the window n saw nupur working...he was happy seeing her.......nupur didnt see him.....mayank slowly came behind her...n put his one hand on her mouth n another hand on her eyes....nupur dropped the clothes.....n was trying to take ooff his hand........
n==uummmmm.............a......
mayank was enjoying her reaction....her hair was coming on his face.....he spoke up.....
m=bare bare shehrome esi choti choti galtiya hoti rehti ha...........
hearing the voice nupur became calmed...as it was familiar......mayank took off his hand from her mouth...n brouth the red roses infront of her...n then moved anoter hand......nupur opened her eyes....seeing the roses a smile came......she took it n turned n was shcoked to se mayank...
n=mayank..tum...
m=nahi.....raj....raj apni simran ko manane aya ha...
nupur was on cloud nine..she jumped into his arms......mayank wrapped her around........both were very happy.....
scene shifts to sajan...
gunjan comes to her room...the loghts were off...she came in n switched on themnm...when she turned....
g=aahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
gunjan was frightened seeing samrat sitting on the bed..
g=samrat tum....phirse khirkise andaar aye???????
s=are wah..tumhe kaise pata???
g=tum kya kabhi darwajase ate ho???
s=chashmish mere sath reh reh kar kafi samajdar hogayi ho..
g=veryy funny....accha yaha kyu aye??? thori der pehlehi hospitalme mile the na????
s=actually aj mere aneka programe nahi tha...par jab mayank nupurse milne aya to socha tumse bhi hi bolhi di..
g=kya??????? mayank bhi di se milne yu khirkise........by god..tum dono bhai bilkul pagal ho...
s=kya kare...tum behnone humhe deewana jo bana dia ha......
g=chalo chalke dekhte ha ke...woh kya karraheha...
gunjan turned to leave.......but sam holded her hand..
g=kya hua????
he pulled her to himself n holded from waist..
g=samrat kya kararhe ho???
s=are woh dono apne ap romance karrahea ha..to humhe bhi...romance karne do..khamakaha unke beech kabab me haddi banneka koi matlab nahi ha....
gunjan smiles....n holds him form shoulder...
g=by god...tumne to moke pe chakka mara ha...
s=kaise???
g=aye the mayank aur di ko milane....par khudki apni love story leke beth gaye..
s=kya kare tumhare khayal atehi hum khudko bhul jate ha.......
g=woh to dikh raha ha...
mayur
nupur breaks the hug n was blushing...
m=by god..aj to barahi accha neend ayega aur sapna bhi..
n=ye sapna kaun ha mayanak?????? tumhari gf ha??? ha bolo mujhe....
m=nupur shant hojao......sapna matlab dream..tumhara sapna....
nupur smiles...but then changes her expressions into angry looks...
n=wase yaha kyu aye ho???? mera autograpgh chahte ho??
m=ha....jisse permanatly apne dilme rakh saku....im sorry nupur..(holds his ears)mane subhah kuch zyadahi...
n(laughs)=by god mayanmk....tum kitne cute lagraheho.....(pulls his nose) ekdam ek cute bacche ki tarah.......
m=tum has rahiho..
n=ab sorry...wase thank you..mujhe tumhara ye rose wala surprise accha laga.....
m=ar khirki wala????
n=khirki wala???
nupur then realized that he came here from the window....
n=mayank tum theek hona??? tumhe chot nahi lagi..are is taarhse khirkise aneki kya zarurat thji??? chot lagjata to........
m=nupur ma theek hu..relax...tumhe manaekeliye...ye idea lia tha.....
n=samrat se rite??
m=ha....
n=by god.......par...mujhe accha laga ye dekh kar ke tum mere bareme itna sochte ho....
she gives him a kiss on his cheeks...
m=thanks to mujhe kehna chahiye kyuki mujhe lagatha aj mujhe tumhare maafi nahi milegi....
n=nupur bhushan bare dilki ha....sabko maaff karti ha....
both smiles...
n=accha samrat ha kaha???niche???
m=nahi tumhari behen ke kamreme...
n=chalo milte ha...
m=chalo...
sajan..
gunjan was sitting on the bed...n samrat was lying on her lap...gunjan was carresing her hand in his hair...
s=chashmish....kab humari shadi hogi?????
g=kya???
s=kab tum mere ghar aogi?? aur har raat isitarah mujhe sulaogi..
g=samrat malnhotra...sapnese bahar ayiye..kyuki ap jo sapna dekh raheha...woh pura honeme...ummm..abhi kuch tima ha...
s=janta hu..partabkeliye.....adjust karlunga......
mayur comes....
g=di tum..
n=are wahh./....mayank humto kabab me haddi ban gaye..
s=jab janti ho to ayyihi kyu???
g=samrat..
n=wah bhai..mera ghar meri behen...ma na au??
samrat gets up..
s=ma bhi kehsakta hu......meri bhabika ghar....meri gf..to??
n=samrat tumse batome jitna muushkil ha..
s=thanks.....wase mayank ka surprise kaise laga???
n=umm./..acchapar...dea keliye tumhe thanks..mere is saduko tumne kuch to sikhaya...
s=dont wwoorry....age aur bhi bohot kuch sikha dunga......
m=wel...sam..ab huhmhe chalna chahiye...
s=yup...ok sirls...kall milte ha...
girls-bye..gud nite....

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