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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy dear
too gud
loved it
wow sammy is back would love to read more
plzz cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update!!
did Samrat send her the flowers?
Plzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
promo: nupur is running in the hospital n falls.mayank picks her up.. m=nupur tum kya race me participate karrahiho?????
n=mayank...yaha hospitalme koi gunjan pe line maraha ha...pehle usne usse phoole bheje phir..chocolatess...phir ek barasa teddy bear!!!
m=kya????
n=ma us shetan badmash lafangeko dhundke rahungi...
other hand gunjan is walking on the corridor when someone pulls her in dardk store room...puts his hand on her mouth....
guy=ssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
g=ka..kaun ho tum????
guy=mujeh nahi pehchana.....chashmish???
the guys slowly moves his hand....
g=samrat!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee promo dear..
mindblowingggg..
yuppiieeee.. sammy is backk...
cant wait for d next part..
pllzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
HAAAYYY...
Sammy is bakkk....
Cont soon...
Cant wait....
Love
Sana... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome promo dear
wow sammy is back yayyyyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwwww

awsomeeee promo dear...

sammy is back..yupieeeeee

continueee soonnn

cnt wait for it nw...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome promo mera samrat wapis agaya
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Posted: 15 years ago
yayyyyyyyyyyyyy sammy back
awsomeeeeee promo
cont soooooooooon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=63 gunur r in the genral ward...nupur is keeping an eye on gunjan...a ward boy gives a file to gunjan..nupur stops the ward boy.. n=ek minute..woh kya dia??? w=dr armaan ne file bheja tha wahi dia.. n=thik ha jao... nupur was walking in the corrider very tensed...when mayank pulled her in a corner... n=are..kaun ha??? m=hum ha bhai... n=ufff..mayank tum bhi na chodo mujhe,..,.... m=are..wase to kehti rehti ho ke ma koi romance nahi karta aur ab jab karraha hu to.. n=uffo mayank...tumna har cheez gaalt time pe karte ho... m=matlab????
n=matlab ma yaha apni behen ko leke pareshan hu aur tum...ek minute mane tumse kaha tha ne ke uss insaan ko jake dhunke leke ao jo mere behen pe buri nazar daal raha ha...to kya hua?? dhunda uss insaan ko???
m=ab..nupur....woh..ma...
nupur becomes angry n pushes him..
n=ek kaam dia tha..woh bhi dhangse nahi kia...jao aur tabhi mere samne ana jab us badmash lafanga tumhare sath ho jao!!!
nupur angrily goes from there...
m=abe yaar..thora romance ke mood me tha...ye ladkia itni confusing kyu hoti ha??? kash sam hota..to meri madat kar deta....bhai tujhe miss karrahahu..jaldi aa..aur iss nupur ko mananeme meri madat karr..
scene shifts...
gunjan is in the cafe...drinking coffee..when a guy comes to her with a box in his hand..nupur was going to enter the cafe seeing the guy coming to gunjan she hids behind the door..
n=ye kaun ha??? kahi yehi to....dekhti hu...
guy=excuse me mam..
g=ji????
guy=ye gift apke lie...
g=mere lie???
n=ye gunjan ko kya deraha ha?????
mayank was also coming that way..seeing nupur hiding..he puts his hand on her shoulder...nupur shouts n turns
n=kaun ha???
m=are ma hu...kya hau chilla kyu rahiho???aur ese choroki tarah kya dekhrahiho???
n=mayank tum...chup raho..aur idhar mere sath khare raho..
m=sorry ma abhi nahi khara reh sakta mujhe dr armaan ne bulaya ha...
n=par...
g=kisne bheja ha mujhe?????
guy=apko khudhi pata chal jayega...
saying the guy leaves..gunjan feels a bit confused she also goes to the locker room..
n=thik ha.,..jao tum ma akelehi dekhti hu...
m=ok...
mayank leaves..nupur turns n sees noone was there..
n=are...ye kaha gayab hogaya???? iss mayank ki to...isse baat karte karte woh admi bhi chala gaya..aur gunjan kaha ha???
locker room...
gunjan opens the box n finds chocolates...
g=chocolates???? woh..aur meri favoritee.....ye kisne bheja mujhe??? jisne bhi bheja usse meri pasand ke bareme pata ha....pehle mere man pasand phool...ab ye??? par kaun ha...kahi samrat..nahi samrat ko aneme abhi ek hafta baki ha...phir ye sab????
then her pager rings....
g=abhi nahi..badme sochungi..
gunjan keeps the box in her locker n leaves..then nupur comes n sees the gift..
n=ye kaun battamiz ha jo meri behen.....
then a ward boy comes. with a big teddy bear in his hands...
w=dr nupur....
n=kya ha??? aur ye teddy bear???kisne bheja ha???
w=ye dr gunjan ke liye kisine bheja ha...
n=kya????????????? gunjan ke liye..kisne??? aur tumhe kaha mila???
w=mane gate pe isse para hua dekha..aur dr gunjan ka naam likha tha isme...
n=acca..mujhe do ma gunjan ko dedungi....
the ward boy gives the teddy bear to nupur..nupur keeps it..n was furming in anger...
n=ye jo bhi karrahah usse pata nahi ha..ke kiski behen ke sath kaaraha ha..agar mane bhi uska band nahi bajaya to mera naam bhi nupur sharma nahi......
nupur gets up from there n was running in the hospital searching for mayank...
n(in mind)=ye idiot mayank kaha pe ha?? kabse page karrahihu....
then nupur's foot slips n she falls...
m=nupurr!!!!!
mayank rushes to her n gets her up..
m=nupur kya karrahiho??? race me particiapte karrahiho kya??
n=hh.....hhaa....ma......maaa...maya...
m=ek minute pehle saas lelo..
n=mayank pata ha tumhe..is hospital me koi ha jo gunjan me line marraha ha..
m=kya?????????????????
n=ha..
m=tum hosh me to ho..bhala kiski itni himmat tumhari behen se..
n=shut up mayank..tum subhah se meri baat ka mazak banaraheha..ma serious hu...koi gunjan k=pe line marraha ha..usse subhaha se gifts bhej raha ha..pehle phool phir chocolates aur ab ek teddy bear...
m=par ha kaun woh???
n=paata nahi...par itna mujhe zaroor pata ha ke mujhe ye pata lagana ha.....
scene shifts....
gunjan was walking in the corider when someone pulls her from her hand n drags in the dark store room..pins her against the wall..n puts his hand on her mouth....gunjan was very scared...she dropped the files which were in her hand,....
g=kkka.....kaun ha......
guy=ghabrao mat chashmish...ma hu...
hearing the name "chashmish"..gunjan was surprised.....she stopped moving her handss......the guys slowly moved his hand from her mouth....gunjan was shocked to see....
g=SAMRAT!!!
yes..it was samrat..who was smiling at her.....smiles appeared on gunjans face.,..n tears of joy started to flow.....she wasnt able to express her happines..without saying anything gunjan just hugged him tightly..as tightl she could..samrat also held her back...
mayur..
both were searching for gunjan..nupur was beiing more tensed not able to find gunjan.....
n=mayank..kaha ah ye????
m=yehi kahi hogi..chalo dekhte ha..
n=terrace pe dekhe???
m=chalo....
sajan....
after 10 to 20 minutes later gunjan samrat slowly broke the hug...he cuupped her face n wiped the tears...
s=are??? ye kya?? mere janese pehle to tumne kaha tha ke tum nahi roigi?? phir mere janeke baad itna royi ke akhe laal kar diye????
g=nahi...woh....
s=mane kaah tha na chashmish ke mere janke baad tum roigi...
g=ab..bass bhi karo samrat....aur kya na ro ma?? ek mahine keliye gaye the tum..pata ha ek mahina...30 din hote ha..aur kitna ghante najanae....ek din bhi dhangse tumse mane baat nahi ki....tumhi batao..mere lie ye asan nahi tha..samrat...
s=to tumhe kya lagta ha kya ye mere lie asan tha????? nahi chashmish..ma tha zarur waha..par mera dil...maan sab yehi par tha....kyuki tum yaaha thi....to ma waha kya karta??? aur dekho..issiliye ma ek hafta pehlehi lot aya...tumse milnekeliye...aur tumhe surprise denekeliye ma abhi tak kisise bhi nahi mila...subhahse tumhe gits bhejraha hu..
g=to woh sab tumne bheja?????
s=ha.....kyu accha nahi laga?????
g=bohot accha tha.....khass karke woh phool...
s=aur teddy bear????
g=teddy??? kaunsa teddy???
s=are wahi baar wala jo mane tumhare lie bhijwaya tha....chocolates ke baad...
g=par mujhe to koi teddy nahi mila...shayed ma tab duty pe thi...locker room me hoga..
s=chalo..abhi sabse milte ha.ma to mayank aur bhaise se bhi nahi mila..aur bhabise daat paregi bina baatye jo aya..chalo...
samrat turned to leave when gunjan holded his hand..he turned again..
g=ek promise...karo pehle...
s=kya?????
g=yehi ke phir kabhi mujhe ese akele chodke nahi jaogee...sath leke jaoge..chahe kaam keliyehi kyu na jao..
s=thik meri princess ma tumhe sath leke jaungaa...ab khush???
g=bohott!!!!!!!!!

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