Mayur FF - One shot (The three little things)

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Bronze.

@Bronze.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

great os kainath...

Althought, it was difficult at first to imagine mayank and nupur switching places..the story kinda grew on me..

the grown in their relationship was so wonderfully shown in the 3 things per day deal.

And the last scene completely blew me away, i guess i was like rest of the class.

great work

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Arpita Madan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

I bow down to you in admiration and awe. :P:P:P OH MY LORD THIS IS AMAZING I HAVE NEVER READ A LONGER OR BETTER OS I MEAN WOW WOW WOW . eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

write some more!!!

hugs

arpita

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

omg this os was completely mind-blowing!!
it was so interesting, it was like i was watching a movie
the ending was very unexpected lol
never thot thats how their presentation wud turn out
it reminded me of james n lily from HP tho,
samrat was like snape too
which made me like it ever more cuz i love james n lily n the whole hp series
gosh this was fabulous
ur an awesome writer

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

man awsum...too gud!!

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how do u cum up wid so many ideas??tht too novel...wowwwwwwww

i eman 3 facts for day!!its awsum...

my fav one was him singing..lolzz it had me in splits..rofl!!😆

while th one wen he shouted at nups and told her hw she behaved wid him for such ling time was touching...

th way she said sorry..awwwwwwwwwww so sweet!!

i luved th flirty mayank much more!!!

would luv to see it on screen may juss for aday..

keep it up yaar!!

luv

nihu

Edited by ILuvArjun - 15 years ago

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

can it get any better?

this is one heck of a one shot.. and a feel good one too.. i had saved it in word as the page was screwing up and read it at school.. u have no idea how much better my day was made..

i loved the concept first off and the way u had each different meaning and the way they both grew on each other! I loved it Kainath, your such a talented writer
:)

Mayank's character was so adorable, he reminded me so much of Ajab prem ki ghazab prem kahani';s Ranbir Kapoor from what i've heard of the movie.. hahaha. i totally loved it, it was not at all Mayank that we know and how we normally portray him in our FF's or especially ur FF u have now!..

Last scene.. was MAGICAL! snogging in class..

haha

loved it..

Great OS

xSonia

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

wow... this was such a fantastic one shot.....👏
i jusss loveddd it!!!! 😳
i loved it how dey did the 3 facts everytime dey met....😳
it actually seemed reallly realistic....😊
but i cant believe wot dey were doing instead of dere presentation 😉😆
this was soooo awesomeeee huni
totallly lovedddd it
xxxx

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

oh my goshhhhhhhhhhhhh kainath this was sooooooooo damn good man,

your ffs will become landmarks of MN for me, i will alwayssssssssss remember them , sowie this being a one shot. please continue this one as well na, KEEP Rockinggggg.