Rach&Cindy|OSGall|MayUr|Destined To Be Togthr|Pg17 - Page 9

Originally posted by: -afsha-

End was also dofferent and the whole OS was different

Loved it

It was looking actually all this happened on Sets of MJHT

Originally posted by: Sneh-Jiwan

OMG you Have done such a great job !! You two really needs 👏 I Loved every bit of this !! Please keep up what you are doing and keep Us updated !! Lovely Jovely Stuff !! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey sindhya..that was just beyond awesome..i cant tell u hw much i loved it..!

Sanaya showin attitude to Rati?..well i can just hope thats nt the scenario in real life!..

but then she fought wid Arjun too..n obviously she did'nt have anyone..but he was always there for her when no1 else was..thats so sweet..but then she did'nt realize it..

Maybe she felt he was doing it for the media..but when ur in a profession like this, i know it feels that way!..so it wasnt entirely her fault. But atleast they cleared it out ..

do write more

-aish

Originally posted by: nikki028

that you hurt those people the most, who you love the most. You get easily disappointed with them, you feel betrayed and lost too easily to be true.

cindy............awesome one yaar....n these red lines....uff....tht touched me.....tht ws absolutely super correct....u r absolutely an xpert in portrayin facts related to relationships.....

my most fav moment ws tht ARTI hug....😳..........

truly cindy....it ws truly an awesome OS...their convo lookd so realistic..

nywz i hv also req.....do tell me when can i ask u my req...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

sindya

very very nice oneshot

after reading this the media and rati's talk

in this shot everthing seems true i know this is fiction but

your writing skills make everything true

awesome one shot

and how he thought you write very beautifully

lovely one shot

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

hiya darlinz....

wow yaar.... awesomeeee updatess.... u both are jus great at dis!!!!!
i loved the arti update... i did get a lil confused at the end when u wrote nupur... so imm gona read it again... hehehehe
but looking fwd to moreee mayur and arti updates babezzz....
love you guyz
xxxxx

Originally posted by: Senny

wow sindhya wow wow man, that was one really awesome oneshot, i thought as it was really happening.

i don't know if it is like this for real, but in the end all goes well for both rati and arjun.

i miss them together. You have done an amaxingggggggggg job, you are an awesome writer and i thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Keep it up and thankyou so much for the pm.

God bless.

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Ugh. Expect me to be on FULL RAGE ATM!

How come i didn't know about this?

*stares at Rach and Sindhu*

*crosses arms too*

... still gets no answer.. oh WTH. i can't stay angry for long..

Congrats on the one shot gallery and i hope sometime if thats okay with both of you i can make a special appearence??
:D

Rach loved the first OS with MN.. beautifully written and only if that were to happen in MJHT .. perfect way for nupur to realise M wasn't in the wrong.. and that hug at the doorstep.. i could totally imagine it.. goosebumps running through my body.

Siindhhu- the ArTi OS..

: O

it was AMAZING.. i mean.. if either AB/Rati were to read this.. and all the "speculations" were true.. imagine what they would have to do? i would have loved it if u can cont on from there.. but then again t doesn't have to have the same name. Get wat i mean??

LOVED IT BOTH OF YOU!

*hugs*

xxSonii

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

yayyy arti one-shot

this was mind blowing...so perfectly in characters.......i totally felt like this was a real scene.. real people wow too good yaar