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OMG what a lovely update Shrinz!!!!!!!!

Hi,

@ Sameera ' Honest to God that must have been one of the sweetest comments I've ever received! I've never really considered myself to be very confident or strong'.that's more my older sister's territory but I'm very flattered that you seem to think so. I couldn't just leave Breathless and my life because this has happened'yes it's scary'yes I've never experienced anything like this and yes we're uncertain of mum's future but what can we do? Thanks for wishing me well lovely'your comment genuinely made me smile. As for the proposal'bring it on baby'we're two days post valentine's day and I'm still single. Time for a change! *wink wink* lol thanks honey! Xxx

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ Komzie!! It's so nice to hear from you! I'm doing really well... my whole family is. Mum's doing well too and it's seriously so sweet that you and your mum are still so committed to making my mum better when you haven't even met her. I've never experienced anything so sweet and I don't even know how to thank you. Believe it or not I do actually pray everyday that you and your family gain the strength that you need after your personal situation. We have mutual love for each other! Lol Thanks a lot honey! How are you coping?

4.30am?! Sleep woman! Yeh the DMG AA really pissed me off soI twisted them around and gave them a better personality (in my opinion)... glad you like them Komzie!! Lol AA heave... I have to admit I've never been their biggest fans... but it's so much fun to write them up! Yup it's not a normal situation but I love real Anjali...I LOVE blue raspberry! (Though I'm a bubblegum fiend... anything bubblegum flavoured and I turn to putty sssshhhhhhhh don't tell anyone!)...(and I'm nearly 19).....(screw it... I don't care)....(when's your bday Komzie?)... lol at the smurf comment!!! Haha!!

Yehh I love getting to see her different sides....she's cutest when she's around Atul but I just love her sarcastic humour too much to give it up!! Lol

Glad you found the ending funny and not lame! I know... tut tut tut AN....Keerti situation shall be addressed in a chapter or two...needless to say she was NOT watching!! Haha...GROSS!

Love you right back Komzie!!!! Will take care of mum and will keep praying for you. Thanks a lot for being my IF rock! Lol mwah!

Aw Shrinzie you are the sweetest girly ever! MWAH! Thanks babe. Yes we do have mutual love for each other. 😉 I'm so relieved to hear that Aunty ji is doing better and everyone else in your family, including my favorite person (you) are doing good too. Do me a favor babe? Give Aunty a big jhappi from my side and tell her everything will be okay. She's strong because she's a mom and she needs to be stronger for you. It works every time. Trust me, that's how I kept my mom from going into major depression. I just forced her to think that she had to do it for me and she's normal. lol. I'm coping perfectly. Dad visits me in dreams and yells at me now. *sigh* NOTHING has changed. Before he'd make my life hell in person, and now even after he's dead and gone he never leaves a chance. Good ol' dad. yup. ROFL! Mom's birthday was on the 17th so we went out and had a blast. Finally got her to be the old Sitara. I'm not too fond of the new slightly depressed and tense one.

Sleep? Who the hell does THAT?! I should ask... what's that? a term that seems so very distant to me. COLLEGE does that to you. lol. Even when I take a semester off, I can't get enough sleep. I had a strong feeling that bubblegum was a personal preference. lol. 😉 for some reason, you totally strike me as bubblegum flavor loving girl. I was never too fond of it, but i always loved my tangy funky flavors. Still do. Can't settle for the boring "upper class" type flavors. lol. Almost 19 huh? Did you bid your jawaani goodbye already? I know it's hard... TRUST ME! it was the hardest thing I ever had to do in my life. Say tata the bye bye to my jawaani. *sigh* I remember when I used to be young... now I'm just old and nearly senile? rofl. My birthday is on June 16th. Which reminds me, weren't you supposed to add me on facebook missy? *glares*

Love you more hot stuff! I'll always be here when ya need me.



komzie

hey shrinzie!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG...I loveee this part!! Your such a brilliant writer. 👏 But I'm dying for an AR part...please update soon 😳

@ sasya - Hello! Yep I'm finally back and it feels good! Mum's doing okay...thank you for asking. She won't be back home for a month or two because she's in rehab to get her paralysed side working again. Glad you liked the part! Yup I was trying to make the ending slightly surprising considering everyone reading my FF is always two steps ahead of my twists and turns! Lol AR coming up in the next part...don't you worry. Thanks for the support and I'll catch you later with hopefully a longer part because *shock horror* you guys actually like them! Lol see ya lovely.

@ Tahmina - Thank you! I try to make them as different as I can but not change them completely! Ha...thanks for picking out your favourite line...I love when people do that! Yes! You found the last part funny...I've read it so many times that deffo didn't stay funny. Ha ha ha. Awww you're sweet for wishing my mum well and super duper thanks for the buddy request. It makes it so much easier for me to PM you! Catch you later Tahmina xxxxx

@ shininggal2008 - Thank you for liking my part and wishing my mum well. You're sweet. I'll continue asap with a longer part...you're great for sticking with me! =) Thank you xx

@ Suzzane - Hey ms Huda14...I was wondering who you were lol. Welcome back with a new screename. Agreed....lots of teasing in store. Ill continue soon and lol at the addicted one. I like that! Catch you later Suzzane (Wow that's going to take a bit of getting used to!) xxxxxxx

@ cezzuprerna - Thank you so much for your best wishes....they mean the world to me. Awww updating was no trouble at all....trust me. Mum's in hospital and visiting hours do take up a lot of my day but after I come back all I want to do is update update update! Lol Love you right back and thanks for liking the part..mwah xxx

@ Shel - Hey Shel! Thank you sooo much....I'm glad to be back! You're very sweet for wishing so well for my mother and I....I'll be strong for the both of us!

Thanks again for liking the part! Next update will be longer....promise!...and a lot better considering the very requested AR are making a comeback! I'm definitely taking my time unfortunately but will be back asap....love you Shel! Xx

@ sweetaddiction - Hello lovely! How have you been? Thank you for wishing my mum well....that's sweet! You don't even now the both of us in real life and you're still praying? Wow!

Contrary to your belief....not many people and I still believe I'm in full form yet but thanks for thinking so! I'll work on it....promise! Glad you liked the part with AA and a bit of AN at the end lol.....Aww...thank you for giving me time. I'm suffering from writer's block at the mo but will try my best and I hope I have goodnews about my mum too! Lol thanks a lot lovely! Xxx

@ kd_luv - I'm glad you're fine! AR coming up.....hope you like it xx

@ dipu - Hello! Glad you liked the part an AA honey! Will update asap! Thanks for commenting dipu! Xxx

@ Sheena - lol...glad you liked the last part ms AbhiNikiLuver lol....thanks for wishing my mum well....thanks for having me back so warmly...and thanks for looking forward to my next update lol. Catch you in the next one honey....mwah xxxx

@ karanshraddha4 - I'm feeling a lot better thanks and I hope I update regularly too! Lol I'm so happy you were eager for the next one and this FF isn't fading away! Back with a bang?! Aww I don't know about that but hopefully I'm getting there! Glad you liked the AAness of this chapter...oh and then the ANness n the end. Lol....Don't worry lovely....AR are making a comeback next chapter....where are they? What are they doing?...all will be revealed cos honestly....I don't know yet! Haha.....will update asap....thanks for commenting. I love that you've come across my ff!

@ Sakshi - Oh the AA in the FF and the AA back in the show is a complete coincidence. I stopped watching dmg close to two years ago but do tell me how things are going with them! Lol Glad you liked the part! Haha....your comment about falling in love with all the guys makes me laugh because that's exactly how I want it to be! All of them have loveable qualities (well I think so).....glad you told me that haha! Oh good luckgood luck wih all your exams....hope you ace them lovely! Catch you next chap (hopefully)...love ya xxxxx

@ Angel39 - Hello! It's really nice to meet you and I'm glad you've come across my ff! Sorry for the late reply but a big THANK YOU for appreciating my work! It's o sweet to hear you find my style gripping! Amazing! My taste in music is definitely not universal so I'm glad you enjoy them....I want them to be slightly unknown so that if you ever hear them again it straight away makes you think o my ff. Oh I'm a selfish being lol....Thanks for wishing my mum well! That's really nice of you and I will definitely try updating soon!! Thanks honey xxx

@ Sameera - Oh my goodnessI wasn't even aware that there was a Singles' Awareness Day?! Is that just something your crazy ass made up? Oh bought mum flowers on v day....I'll just pretend they were from you! Lol...Agreed! No more depression! Stopped watching DMG a good 2 years ago and now I can't because of hospital hours....why what's up? Fill me in....fill me in. All I know is Riddhima's getting married to some guy who looks like my little brother....and I don't even have a little brother! Haha! I would LOVE to be a creative on the show and seriously not ust me but absolutely anyone can turn it around and make it amazing. But I'm guessing the creatives are 50 year old pan spitting, pot bellied men.....*sigh*

Haha at the flat comment....so true....so true lol.....Sameera I'll marry you!!! Catch you later hubby! Xxx

@ Komzie - Awww I am jhappi-ing my mum but right now she's on antidepressants anyways...guess it's standard procedure for stroke victims. I'm glad your mum isn't too badly affected and that she's staying strong with your help. Moreover I'm glad you're doing well! Awww lol...I don't know whether your dad visiting your dreams is a good or a bad thing but atleast some things stay constant after all the change! Lol Happy belated birthday to your mother....wish her a very happy birthday from me! I'm sure you made her really happy....

I know! I've taken time off and I pretty much get 12 hours of sleep a day and I'm STILL shattered! Haha....I love me some bubblegum....or pretty much any unsophisticated flavour out there! Agreed with the boring upper class flavours idea....nuh uh. I know!!! 19 feels old! It's my last teen year *weeps*...where did my youth go?! Haha....nearly senile? Yeah right!!! Oh god....everyone around me keeps telling me to get another facebook after I deleted my old defect account....but it seems like so much effort! Upload pics....re-friend all your friends....yada yada yada....I'll get there. I'm living off of my sister's account right now! Haha....All of my current pics would all include hospitals and patients....FUN! lol.....I guess once my life kickstarts again it'll give me a kickstart to get up on facebook again. Watch that friend request spot!

Catch ya later honey!! Mwah! Xxxx

@ oochita - hey oochita!! The AA being on the show and in my ff was coincidental but let me know how everything goes! I've not been watching dmg for around 2 years now but it's cool to know that AA are finally back after all those strangers came on the show! Haha...Oh the Armaan shouting at Rahul and Muskaan bit will come up in the next chap....look out for it Oochita! Glad you liked the part and you're very welcome for the PM. Awww Mum's got a long way to becoming fully recovered but thanks for wishing her well. That's really sweet of you! See ya lovely!! Xxxx

@ qazplm - Glad you liked this part honey! I know not everyone's an AA fan but I thought I'd give it a shot anyways. Its sweet of you to think I'm a good writer...I'm flattered!!! Next part will be AR....not to worry lovely! Will update asap! Thanks for the comment sweet stuff!!

Hi Shrinzy! 🤗

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ Sheena- lol...glad you liked the last part ms AbhiNikiLuver lol....thanks for wishing my mum well....thanks for having me back so warmly...and thanks for looking forward to my next update lol. Catch you in the next one honey....mwah xxxx

Yup,yup, Lil' Miss AbhiNikiLuver luvved it!!!!!!!!! 😉
A complete contrast from the AN we get -ooops...I meant GOT in DMG.......
Hayyo rabba.........they were complete fire and ice!!!!!!!!
Passionate and lovable.....
here, they're loveable.............and mushy.............in the good way!!!!!!
Btw-- that dude who looks like your (imaginary) lil bro is yours truly's (Abhi's) lil cuz........Siddhant Modi.........married to his senior doctor...... 😭
thinks to herself - kya zamana aagaya!!!! (no offense to anyone or Siddhima fans)
I mean i'm not saying it was wrong,but..............
Yah.............tc of urself and ur mum!
Hopefully, auntyji will get better, and you will shower us with ur updates!!!!! 😳 ⭐️
mwah to you too! *grabs Shrinz and gives big smoochie-smoochie kiss to her*



XOXOXOXO,
Sheena

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ Angel39 - Hello! It's really nice to meet you and I'm glad you've come across my ff! Sorry for the late reply but a big THANK YOU for appreciating my work! It's o sweet to hear you find my style gripping! Amazing! My taste in music is definitely not universal so I'm glad you enjoy them....I want them to be slightly unknown so that if you ever hear them again it straight away makes you think o my ff. Oh I'm a selfish being lol....Thanks for wishing my mum well! That's really nice of you and I will definitely try updating soon!! Thanks honey xxx