Breathless ~1~...*Note - Page 143* - Page 60

Awwwwwwwww...
are they all gonna kiss and be lovely and have a merry timeunder the stars???
🤣
I was just kidding...Nothing like that ever happens in ur ff....which is a good thing..except for AN -- they're sooo cute.
R u gonna have em in the next part??


But really, what is the pic 4???
And i thought you were updating in a few hrs YESTERDAY????kya hua???

Thanks for the lovely FF so far. This probably is the first time i m actually commenting in ur FF. i have read all ur part its just fantstic. i love how u explain each n everythin n make us feel that is actually happening. Cant wait for the other update. Plz update soon.

God!! I missed out on three updates.. Holy crap man... Anyways, am up for now... So bad of me!!

Anyways, I just loved it!! Both the parts and the beckon.. The pic was amazing!!

Starting on with part 8: Armaan's bad mouth man.. How many times in a day he blurts or even thinks about the word 'F**k..?? He's an complete asshole... I'm not at all glad his name resembles to mine!! Ridhima's attitude was the best part!!

About part9: Okay.. like nothing much happened.. but on a whole I loved it...everyone got their turns in the teasing session... and woah.. Begun... Eau.. I hate that too!! and Ridhima's retort or perhaps revenge was amazing! 😉 Kudos on that!! 👍🏼

and Beckons: I'll keep it open in the other tab while I read the part 10, surely... and I'm hanging around for that!! 😃

P.S: Add me to your PM list.. :)) I'll be glad if you do that!!

So, I end my bhashan now... 😆

See-ya...
Hope to receive the PM soonish!! 😊

@ Shilpu - I just checked my amazon here in the UK and they don't have it...the american website's selling it for 30 dollars?!! is that for real? Ahhh sorry for the delay...I've not been feeling well and fell asleep on the couch....sorry!!

@ Sab - Awww honey...don't work yourself too hard! We all procrastinate...don't worry about it... Trust me I've been there and done that and after all of it you'll be sleeping like a baby for 20 hours straight....mmm doesn't that sound good?? lol

@ Pooja - Isn't the pic just beautiful?! Glad you liked it honey...thanks for commenting!

@ Komzie - Spot on...I loved astronomy too...I'd always beg my dad to get me a telescope. *sigh*....6th-10th??? I'm talking more likes 1st-6th...now THOSE were the days...all of my energy spent on food playing and pooping....yeh baby! Good luck lovely!!...Smack them!!

@ Prajna - Awww thanks for the guesses! lol...I'll put you out of your misery soon! Promise!

@ aangelis - Yup...I love stars! Can't wait to post my next update!

@ Sakshi - If i haven't said it before I'll say it again! I'm jealous...The only stars I get to see around here are the ones that flash red and blue and move through the sky...grrrrr.....I'll update soon....love you! xx

@ AbhiNikiLuver - Haha!! That made me laugh...no I can safely say that you're right and that's not going to happen!! haha!
No AN in the next part...sorry honey!
I know i know...I wasn't feeling to well and completely fell asleep on the couch....then I woke up....went to college...came back...and then fell asleep!! I need to get my game together! Will update soon! Thanks for the comment!

@ Alsha - Hey Alsha!! I've definitely seen you around so I'm so glad you commented!! That's really nice of you...thanks so much for the kind words! I try my best to make everything as realistic as possible...I'll update soon...hopefully I'll see more of you! Thanks honey xxx

@ - Armaan- - Helooo stranger! Haven't I added you to the PM list?! What?! Shoot..I'll do it now!
I guess it's my fault that you missed the last few updates then!!
I'm glad you're loving it so far!! Yayyyy!
Part 8: I agree...Armaan has one dirty mouth/mind....haha..I'm sure you're nothing like Armaan even though your name resembles his!! Ioved Riddhima's feisty attitude too...so much fun to write up!
Part9: Chapter 9 was pretty slow...I know....I just take forever to write things up and bam! it's already 10 pages on microsoft word! I hate begun too! haha...high 5! Thanks! I thought Riddhima's little comeback was really appropriate for her...even though it was small!
beckons: Yayy...I'm glad you're sticking around!
That was no bhashan! lol...I'll update soon...thanks Armaan!

Nice teaser Shrina darlin...

nice picture promo.i saw the picture and started thinking if it has any letter or figure but cant find anything.waiting to see how the pic is related to the part.continue soon........

great promo👏👏👏.cant wait to see what is the connection between the picture and the story.continue soon.........

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ Sab - Awww honey...don't work yourself too hard! We all procrastinate...don't worry about it... Trust me I've been there and done that and after all of it you'll be sleeping like a baby for 20 hours straight....mmm doesn't that sound good?? lol

Awww Shrina! You are jealous? lol