Breathless ~1~...*Note - Page 143* - Page 13

hi shrina,

quite a part.......all armaan's point of view really good...........esp. the description of the almost fall of ridz..........so time to meet the gang will be fun..........
thx 4 d pm
update soon..........

ps even i read the ff's till 3 or 4...lol...its fun

luv kj

Great part!!!

hey it was luvly!!!!!!
thanks 4 PM!!!!!!!!!!
do continue sooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Waiting 4 RM parts :)

@ Prinnia - You liked it?! Thank you! I'm flattered! You're very welcome with the PM! 😊

@ sanjana25 - comment soon lovely! I'd love to know what you thought! 🤔

@ disco_diva - mind blowing?! THANK YOU! it's my pleasure with the pm 😳

@ Nadz-I'm DYING for your detailed comments! Put me out of my misery woman! 😒

@ Aakriti - Amazing?? I'm so glad you liked it! I'm from London. 😊

@ killerabit - I can't believe you loved every bit! I'm so flattered...I just reread it after a full night's sleep and I was like ahhh mistakes!

@ krazy4kash - Hey lovely! I see you're nocturnal like me! I'm happy to see you liked Armaan's POV,,, Oh my god I forgot to put up a disclaimer to say there was gonna be swearing and you reminded me! Yeh the Riddhima falling scene was intense - I'm looking forward to a more fun time! 😃

@tamanna17 - Hey gorgeous! I don't think we've met before. Thank you for taking time out to read and comment!! I'll update soon! 👍🏼

@ Radhika - Thank you lovely! It's so nice to know you liked it and you're welcome about the PM...as always! 😉

@ cute gauri - Thank you lovely! No need to say thanks...you're always welcome! I'll continue soon!! Thanks for commenting! 😛

I'm so overwhelmed by everyones support! Seriously this FF would not be happening if it weren't for you guys!

To my gorgeous silent readers...don't be afraid to comment! I don't bite and I'd appreciate any feedback... good or bad!

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

heyya shrina... okay m gonna call u shrinz... sounder cooler... haha... okay.. jus caught up with this girl... n you won't believe it.. its one of the best piece of writing m currently reading... you goo gurliee.. i dunno why but is made my day hun... you go again and i totally understand the breathless part.. my my.. if nothing else it has soo been breathless so far.. lol... take care and can i be one of the specail ppl to get a pm now? haha... the comment's turning out as long as ur parts so i'll shut my gob... tc...love...rav / ravvy / ravz.. take ur pick...xxx

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i jus noticed ur reply n u r from london... high five homie... not exactly... m from birmingham... but anyhoo high five.. lol...

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Wow gorgeous! Made your day?? This has made MY day! Haha call me what ever you'd like!
Best piece of writing?! Are you serious? You're spot on girl about not believing it considering this is my first ever FF. Haha,,,I loved your breathless comment and it was exactly the reaction I was hoping for so thanks SO much for that!
You're a Birmingham lass! I have family there and love Bullring! I mean what chick doesn't right? High five! lol
Can you be one of the amazing peeps added to my PM list? Ravvy...you would've been added regardless after that comment lol I'll add you straight after this.

Keep reading, keep commenting! I'll appreciate it!

Love Shrina xx

@ curiousindian - hey! glad you made it to my FF! I just visited the site and had a look at some of the homes. Wowwwwwwww is all I have to say. I'll definitely be using some of those pics. Thank you so much!

@ Rapi!!! YAYYY! I was waiting for you! Aww it sucks you're gonna be away for a while but I'm glad you atleast came to check it out! Oh and don't be silly....comment whenever! 😊 I don't mind!

heyy--
gr8 chapter-- and pls dont apologize for the length-- the longer the better !!!
a little note on ur breathless moments-- i really enjoy them-- its kinda cool to have visuals on the whole thing- it gives the whole story more character !
loved the part-- looking forward to meeting the rest of the gang !! =)

i finally read chapter 2, shrina!! regardless to say, i loveddd it!!