Blah blah, Woof woof [AR One shot]

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simran1285

@simran1285

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Updated my comment on page 1!

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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Surfaces. She knows a thing or two about it.

Happiness may not be permanent but at least it can be captured and stored for future references, she muses.

Talking is overrated anyway.

those three lines summed the entire part as far as i go... in general inejoyed the breezy feeling of this part... personally i thought i missed a real sense of fair, at least tad bit... that could be cause of how many i went to as a kid and how vivid they are in my mind still... AR dominated the scenes for me over the fair.. which i liked and didn't equally for that one reason :D

ps: yes miss M ... i'm most certainly alive, despite the universal conspiracy of cutting my journey short with overloads of work and ill timed fevers :D shall catch up with u on chat soon, i missed by like some 30 minutes today was out getting dinner after posting a much delayed chapter...

also, there i a bunch of poets u have to remind i must tell u off! dude, if for nothing else, i'd re-read fowles every time over for the enormous expansion in basic poetic references! :)

cheers,
nj

Edited by spln - 15 years ago

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ammygurl

@ammygurl

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Hey sookie...
How are you?
This was a perfect one shot..It was the best I could have ever imagined in present tense..*smiles*
I have actually never witnessed a one shot to be in present tense and that too good..:)
I just loveddddd it...
She doesn't mind the silence in the car on their drive back home. She likes silence even more now. And in this silence, they communicate.
I loved this line..:D Lovers do communicate in silence...:)

Please do write more...Consider me as ur all time reader...
:D
Take care and wud u mind PMing me when u write more?
Thanks..:)
Ananya

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Reine

@Reine

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

OMG Sookie!!!

I just love your writings!

They are so different from the usual fan fics and romances!

I hope you write many more!!!

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suvi_rox1

@suvi_rox1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

hi sookie...i know i m always late..bt as usual never forget to comment..
so it was an ar ff..bt u know i noticed u nt even once mentioned the characters by their names as armaan n riddhima..bt no problem in imagining them..cause i am die hard ar fan n restricted to reading only ar fanfics..i dont know why??????bt cant issue n interest fr reading another characters ff..srsly..bt this was good one shot..i liked it...bye tc

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

hey sookie*

lovely one..

mmh....wonder why did u kept that title?

anyways loved rids POV,nice way of describing things from ones POV...

loved the whole thing...

small small happiness and moments that made her realise her love..

and yes...loved these lines

--Happiness may not be permanent but at least it can be captured and stored for future references, she muses.

--She listens to silence. She knows that they won't talk anymore.Talking is overrated anyway.

loved it !!!!

good wishes..

keep Pming me..

sri:-)

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

love the feel of the piece, gentle and contemplative

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

hey sookie,

this was awesome...i'm floored by it's beauty....it's left me entranced!!
the way it was written has rendered me speechless....the emotions depicted were so enigmatic ...yeah enigmatic so much was hidden in that silence....

yet it captured my soul and leaves me wanting for nothing more....

These verses were so aptly true..i loved them.... "She doesn't mind the silence in the car on their drive back home. She likes silence even more now. And in this silence, they communicate.

He drops a kiss on her forehead when they make final stop for refreshments before they head home. She listens to silence. She knows that they won't talk anymore.
Talking is overrated anyway.

many a times silence is a killer but here silence spoke volumes...the way the story was woven kept me glued to it .....

and it was even meaningful coz silence is not alwayz inert and a punishment....it's not necessary that a talk can be cathartic and help you...silence does help.....
and i learnt it now reading this !! :)

do write more
I loved it !!
Keep it up
and i must say the name of your FF's too are unique love them too

tc
fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 15 years ago

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: simran1285
***Reserved***

will be back sooks

Ok Back and am at a loss of words. Everything was too beautiful and very picturesque. Hmmm, I am having a hard time penning my thoughts down for this one. I am going through a bit of a testing time and let's just say that this has suddenly made me feel all fuzzy inside.

Thanks Sooks :)

Thanks Sims. Glad you liked it. 😊

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: spln
Surfaces. She knows a thing or two about it.

Happiness may not be permanent but at least it can be captured and stored for future references, she muses.

Talking is overrated anyway.

those three lines summed the entire part as far as i go... in general inejoyed the breezy feeling of this part... personally i thought i missed a real sense of fair, at least tad bit... that could be cause of how many i went to as a kid and how vivid they are in my mind still... AR dominated the scenes for me over the fair.. which i liked and didn't equally for that one reason :D

ps: yes miss M ... i'm most certainly alive, despite the universal conspiracy of cutting my journey short with overloads of work and ill timed fevers :D shall catch up with u on chat soon, i missed by like some 30 minutes today was out getting dinner after posting a much delayed chapter...

also, there i a bunch of poets u have to remind i must tell u off! dude, if for nothing else, i'd re-read fowles every time over for the enormous expansion in basic poetic references! :)

cheers,
nj

Aah..NJ, I had totally forgotten about this thread! Now I am responding :-)
Well, what can I say! I am a city girl and the fairs I went to were not the glittery kinds you find up in your part of the geography 😆 My experiences have been quite different and the story reflects that. So there!
Its an AR story lady. So they WILL dominate over everything else. :D You hear me?

Thanks a ton for dropping by😆 :D

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