Saccha Pyaar: Part 46-47 - Page 118 (Nov 26th) - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I liked how u portrayed Nikki n Ridzi's frdship......very nice part Hinal!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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liked both parts!! they were sweet. thx for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ohh haha so he didnt hear!!! but im glad he heard the bit at the end, cause now he can fell jealous! and good, riddhima needs to become confident and bit more bold! cant wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey hinal....
both parts were too gud...
waiting 2 read more...
cont soon...
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Part 16

Armaan's House

Armaan went home and thought about nikki and riddhima's conversation..

Rid – I know.. I wish ki woh bhi mere bare mein aisa hi soche.. I really love him nikki

Armaan was in deep thoughts as his door bell rang and brought him back to reality. He opened the door and found abhi standing at his door looking amazing.

Arm – wohh dude.. nikki ko impress karne ki poori tayarri chal rahi hai.. I see

Abh – how am I looking?

Armaan was about to answer when abhi saw that armaan wasn't ready

Abh – armaan! Tum abhi tak tayyar nahi hue? Humme nikalna hai.. remember... aaj hum sab dinner pe jaa rahe hai.. come on dude..

Arm – chill.. main abhi aaya... gimme 5 minutes..

Armaan got changed and came out. He was looking kind of stressed out as he had been thinking about ridz too much.. he was constantly finding himself thinking about her. Abhi was noticing his acts and asked if everything's alright. Being the cool dude, armaan told abhi that he was fine. The two dashing guys then left for the restaurant on their own bikes.

The Restaurant

Armaan and abhi reached the place. They got off their bikes and started walking towards the main entrance when a sudden breeze hits them. They get the chills and see the two beautiful girls looking very dashing and elegant walking towards them. It was the first time armaan noticed riddhima's beauty as she was wearing nikki's red halter knee length dress. Armaan could not close his eyes as he was amazed by how beautiful riddhima was in his favourite sauce waala laal. Abhi was standing there unaware of his surroundings. Nikki was wearing a strapless knee length dress that was black. Their dresses were very normal, not so expensive but the guys were just mesmerised by them.

Arm – (in his head) riddhima is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen

Abh – (in his head) she is so perfect.... I will tell nikki how much I love her today.. no matter what..

The girls reached in front of them and saw the guys staring at them so they both screamed out..

Girls – hellloooo.... kaha kho gaye?

Guys – huh (disturbed from their dream world)

Nik – we're here.. andar chale..

Abh – sure nikki.. let's go (taking her in the front while ridz and armaan walked behind them)

Arm – you're looking gorgeous basket..

Rid – thanks.. tum bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho (looking forward and walking)

Armaan stopped walking as he felt like he was the luckiest guy in the world at the moment when ridz said he was looking handsome. Ridz noticed that and was glad that she was impressing armaan, she then pulled armaan by the hand . ridz - chalo!

Abhi nikki ridz and ammy were all about to enter when someone showed up

Person – excuse me.. aaj iss restaurant mein sirf aur sirf couples aa sakte hai.. so you can only enter if you have someone with you

Abhi and armaan were both secretly happy as they both clasped their hands with the beauties standing beside them.. nikki was glad that it was couple's night, although she didn't know why. She just knew that she wanted to be with abhi everytime because he cared a lot for her, and it was obvious. While nikki was smiling at abhi, ridz was extremely delighted.

Ridz – (in her head) this is the perfect day of my life!

Person – ok so you may go in.. your table is by the window on the left side.

Arm – kk thanks.. let's go..

Abhi – may I? (asking for nikki's hand)

Nik – (she giggled a bit) sure

They all went and sat down at the table. Though they were sitting together at one table, all of their eyes were only looking at their respective partners until a waiter disturbed them and asked them what they were going to order. The guys did the honour and ordered their food and they started having a conversation

Nik – nice place armaan... good choice

Arm – (trying to make nikki get impressed with abhi) actually sirf yeh party ka idea mera tha, is restaurant ko abhi ne pick kiya hai.. its nice naa basket?

Ridz nodded but she knew that armaan was lying . she didn't know how she can say that he was lying but she felt as if she understood every action of armaan's. She knew that armaan was the one who picked the restaurant but she was wondering why he lied.. riddhima thought about abhi likin nikki but wasn't sure so she excused herself cause she knew that nikki would come with her as well

Rid – umm.. mujhe washroom jaana hai.. I'll be right back.. ok

Nik – wait ridzy.. I have to go too.. we'll be right back (ridz smiled)

Riddhima had hoped that she would come along so she could ask nikki is she feels something for abhi

Guys – ya sure

The girls left for the washroom and abhi and armaan started talking about ways to impress nikki

Abh – nikki is looking so gorgeous today armaan. I really want to tell her.. main usse batana chahta hu ki main usse kitna pyaar karta hu

Arm – abhi.. mujhe pata hai kit um bahut betaab ho rahe hoge lekin you have to still impress her.. agar tum sirf use directly yeh kaho ge kit um usse pyaar karte ho to shayad woh bahut over react karegi.. and if you have a good and charming impression on her.. woh shayad tumhe ek mauka de.. you never know

Abhi – tum theek keh rahe ho armaan.. to mujhe kya karna chahiye?

Arm – the love guru will help you abhi..

Abhi – shut up armaan aur mujhe bataao.. isse pehle ki woh aur ridz aa jaaye

As soon as abhi said riddhima's name, he himself started to think of ways he could impress her.. he was lost until abhi snapped his fingers in front of his face and gave him a pleading look...

Arm – dude.. (thinking of ideas) you should ask her for a dance!..ya thats it.. (abhi was just staring at him blankly) you know, slow dance... ladkiya isse bahut impress hoti hai

Abh – lekin usne mana kardiya to? (nervously)

Arm - dekh.. tum bahut acche dikhte ho, you also have a very sweet and charming attitude... har koy ladki tujhe haa karegi.. don't worry yaar.. woh tujhe reject nahi karegi

Abh – I really hope so

Ridz- don't worry.. woh tumhe mana nahi karegi (smiling)

Abhi and armaan looked at her and their sudden reactions was to open their eyes wide and stand up

Arm – tum!

Abhi – tum yaha kya karahi ho riddima?

Rid – guys.. main koi bhoot nahi hu so stop (telling them to stop with their act of intense staring).. and abhi... remember.. main tum logo ke saath yaha dinner pe aayi hu..

Arm – where is nikki?

Rid – oh.. she went to go get a drink.. mujhe nahi chahiye thi isliye..

Abh – riddhima.. listen.. don't tell nikki about what you just heard.. please

Rid – don't worry abhi.. I won't.. but I will tell you one thing.. (sitting down beside him) she is getting impressed

Abhi was happy and asked – sacchi?

Ridz nodded – ya!! Abhi usne mujhse yehi kaha....

~ Flasback ~

Nik – ridzy! Can iask you something? (riddhima nodded) how do you know if you love someone?

Rid – well.. jab tum kissi se pyaar karti ho, to tumhe har wakt ussi ka attention chahiye hota hai, woh jab tumhari taarif kare tumhe bahut accha lage aur well.. lots of things.. lekin tum kyu yeh pucch rahi ho?

Nik – nahi.. woh aise hi

Rid – come on nikki.. you can tell me...

Nik – umm woh.. actually aaj abhi jiss tarah se mujhe dekh raha tha.. mujhe aise laga ki uske dil mein mere liye kucch hai.. aur jab hum sab armaan ke ghar rehne gaye the.. tab se mein har wakt uske bare mein hi sochti rehti hu

Rid – toh do you think that you are in love?

Nik – yehi to mujhe nahi pata ridzy... lekin I know that I like him (blushing)

Rid – aawww.. you look so cute when you blush... ohh.. I see.. tum isliye washroom mein aayi mere saath.. apne doubts clear karne (laughing)

Nik – stop it ridz (getting embarrassed) accha ab chalo.. warna woh log soche ge ki hum log itni der se yaha kya kar rahe hai

Rid – okay okay nikki.. hum jaa rahe.. abhi se milne mein itni betaabi?

Nik – ridzy!

Rid – okay sorry baba... chalo

Nik – umm ridzy.. tumhe koy drink chahiye? Mein jaa rahi hu.. tumhare liye kucch le aau?

Rid – no its ok.. cyu at the table

Nik – k

~ Flashback Ends ~

Abhi was all pepped up after hearing that nikki actually did like him. He gathered up his courage and decided to ask nikki out for a date. Nikki was coming and abhi prepared himself

Nik – (sitting down) k guys.. m back

Abhi coughed and began – nikki...



Hi Guysss!!!
I am so glad that i am getting so much positive feedbacks.. its really gr8 to c ppl enjoying my ff... i hope you all enjoy this part as well.. i have tried to make it a bit longer..
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hey hinal...nice update...
thnkss 4 da pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
good job Hinal.....Abhi-Nikki getting together...love it!!
And ridhi told Abhi that Nikki is getting impressed....how sweet!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hINAL--
TUM to sach me farishta nikli, yaar!! 😆
what a way of keeping AR and AN together!!!
Amazing ff...
Update soon.....
and pls dont make Nikki say no to Abhi....He's shooooooo shweet!!!!!!
😳
Have I ever told u that i luvvvvv u? If i havent, im telling u now!!!!
🤗
Luv, Sheena
Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
dun wry.. she won't say no 😉
i love you toooo 😛

HiNaL


Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

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hINAL--
TUM to sach me farishta nikli, yaar!! 😆
what a way of keeping AR and AN together!!!
Amazing ff...
Update soon.....
and pls dont make Nikki say no to Abhi....He's shooooooo shweet!!!!!!
😳
Have I ever told u that i luvvvvv u? If i havent, im telling u now!!!!
🤗
Luv, Sheena

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part, glad armaan is feeling attracted towards riddhima! continue soon!

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