Saccha Pyaar: Part 46-47 - Page 118 (Nov 26th) - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
hii hinal...
i just read ur Ff.... u r good riter i must say...! i just all 8 parts in one go and they were really interesting... i really wanna see AR.... scene.... actually i m dying to read their lovestory...lol... i m seriously looking forward to ur FF....
awsome work...
keep on riting !! good work
conti soon..
Love M....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwww.......
small part, really. no probs though .....
great job. i love an! update soon! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 9

Abhi – you know actually mujhe bhi mere parents ki yaad aati hai lekin unhe to mera chehra bhi accha nahi lagta
Nikki was surprised when she remembered...

FLASHBACK:

Abhi – no its ok.. tum sab ab mere dost ho aur doston ko hak hota hai jaanne ka. To thik hai.. ab me start karta hu. Mein jab ek chotta baccha tha, mere parents mujhe bahut ignore karte the. Mujhe pata nahi ki ye sab unhone jaan buch ke kiya lekin kabhi bhi mere saat time spend nahi kiya. Mujhe kabhi bura nahi lagta par phir bhi mein har raat ko god se ek hi wish maangta, ke mere parents meri taraf thoda dhyaan de. Unfortunately wo kabhi nahi hua aur jab mein thoda bada hua, I think about 10 years old, mere parents ne divorce leliya. Aur phir wo dono ne decide kiya ki mein mere uncle ke pass rahu to jab se me chhota tha tabse me apne uncle ke saat rehta tha. Lekin ab mein akela rehta hu.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Nikki – you know what abhi, yur really a cute guy... (saying this she punches him lightly on the arm)
Abhi smiles at her and for the first time, Nikki feels different when she looked at him. She could tell that he was adoring her and for some reason, she didn't mind him. They had an eye lock for quite a while when Nikki realized what was happening and changed the topic


Armaan's Car
Rid – you know mein akeli jaa sakti hu right...
Arm – ya I know.. lekin bahut raat ho gayi hai plus mujhe abhi ki bhi help karni thi
Rid – abhi ki help? Kisme?
Arm – wohh.... (shocked as he was so close to revealing abhi's secret) actually abhi ko... abhi ko woh.. ummm... (he didn't know how to save himself so he started to change the topic by complimenting ridz) tum aaj kitni acchi lag rahi ho... I really like this colour... sauce wala laal (he winks at her)
Riddhima was feeling kind of bad for him because of "sauce wala laal"

FLASHBACK:

Arm – riddhima, ab to hum dost ban gaye hai right..
Rid – ya.. right..
Arm – to phir mera ek kaam karogi please
Rid – theek hai.. kya hai?
Arm – actually nikki ko ye letter de dena.. pleaaseeee.
Rid – sure (with a plan going in her head.. she grabs the letter)
Arm – thanks basket ?
Rid – its ok... (acting innocent)
Armaan left the lockerroom as he was paged for duty
Riddhima went in armaan's locker as he had left it open, and found a diary which contained all his girlfriend's numbers... she had the most amazing and funny plan stored for armaan
Rid – ab aayega maza.. mujhe bahut sweet samajhte ho na dr.mallik, aaj mein tumhe bataaongi mein kitni sweet hu...
(the letter just had some sort of invitation to a date in a fancy restaurant for nikki saying that she should wear sauze wala laal as he loves that colour)
Instead of giving the letter to nikki, ridz made many copies of the letter and sent it all to his previous girlfriends...
That night, armaan waited for nikki, but then was caught himself in middle of all of his previous gf's wearing his colourr..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rid – woh.. I'm sorry about that
Arm – ya sure... anyways... its ok..
Rid – to tumne bataya nahi ki tum abhi ko kismet help karna chahte the?
Arm – wohh... (thinking again) yeh to uske picche hi pad gayyi : mutters under his breath
Rid – tumne kuch kaha?
Arm – nahi to.. woh... main keh raha tha ki.. yeh dekhoo.. sanjeevani aagaya! (he gets relieved)
Rid – ohh.. well bye.. and thanks a lot armaan
Arm – dosti mein no sorry no thank yu... (gives ridz his million dollar wink)
Ridz gets out and goes to Sanjeevani and Armaan goes to his house
Sanjeevani
Mus – thank you dr.riddhima, mujhe maloom hai ki bahut der ho gayi hai lekin hume intern ki zaroorat thi
Rid – no dr.muskaan, its ok.. mere liye sanjeevani mera dusra ghar hai.. ?
Mus – very good dr.riddhima,
Rah – ha.. I agree, agar itni mehnat aur lagav se aap kaam karti rahegi to ek din aap apne papa ke tarha ek bahut acche doctor bansakte ho

Backup Info on Rahul and Muskaan: They both love each other but are scared to confess

Mus – anyways.. to Dr.Riddhima, aap ko general ward mein jo patients hai, unke medicine charts update karne hai aur uske baad children's ward mein unhe injection lagaana hai... phir aapko ghar jaane ki ijazat hai.. any questions?
Rid – no ma'am, I'll take your leave
Rah – woh ek din bahut acchi doctor banegi, bilkul tumhaari tarha
Mus – rahul...
Rah – ohh. Woh.. actually .. (holds up some files) mujhe yeh case files study karne hai.. bye
Muskaan smiles and says bye , rahul leaves and ridz starts working in the general ward.


Sorry for the small part but I have decided that I will make short parts but just keep updating regularly :)
im glad that i am receiving many comments..
thanks to all yur comments :)
i really get inspired 😃

Wid lots of luvv,
Hinal
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Posted: 15 years ago
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GREAT PART 👏
JUST DONT TAKE SO LONG NEXT TIME....THX FOR THE PM......ABHI-NIKI STORY MOVING ON???????.....UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part dear....
keep continue..
thanks for the pm...
lots of love
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!!!

that was good one...

liked suas wala lal scean,,,,really she is sweet..

update next one soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved my space
heyaa hi sweety
will read the parts and will comment soon here
take care
love you lots
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Just caught up with the FF. Very nice. Loved it. Please continue.want to read more from u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Guys!
Thanks for all the comments :)

Here is the updated PM List =)

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I hope yu like the coloured writingg lol...

Well, I will post the next part tomorrow... and that's a promisee 😃
Hinal

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Part 10

Armaan returns to his house and goes inside

Nik – hi armaan!

Abhi – armaan? Armaan kaha se aagaya (he was without his glasses)

Arm – abbey yaar.. chashme ke bina to ye bilkul andha ho jaata hai

Abhi – (puts on his glasses) oh.. hi ammy

Nik – its too bad ki ridz ko jaana pada...

Arm – yup.. lekin duty calls yu know.. anyways.. hum log ab game start karte ha..

Nik – yu mean resume right?

Abhi gulps

Nik – to abhi, I dare you to... I dare you to ask Dr.Muskaan for only rectal exams this whole week!! (she starts laughing hysterically)

Armaan eventually starts laughing too.. but abhi's face was worth watching.. his jaw was wide open... he was shocked

Abh – wat.. that.. that's just stupid.. mein aisa kucch nahi karne waala..

Nik – (controlling her laughter) too bad... dare hai.. agar nahi karsakte to bata do na...

Arm – nahi woh karega... abhi (staring at abhi)

Abh – lekin kyun? Yeh kaisi dare hai?

Nik – agar darte ho to aisa hi boldo na.. bahaane kyun banarahe ho?

Abh – im not scared ok

Nik – then do the dare (smiling as she knew abhi will do the dare)

Abhi – whatever... lekin ab tum bhi dekhna... tumhaari baari aayegi tab tumhe kaisi dare deta hoon

Arm – wow.... to abhi.. get ready for rectal exammsss.... (hi fives nikki)

Abhi – armaan... tu bhi iske saath?

Arm – sry dude.. haalat hi kuch aise the...

Abh – ya sure...

Arm – ok... so ab phirse spin the bottle

This time the bottle landed on Armaan's side.. so armaan got a dare from Nikki

Nik – armaan!!!! Tumhe hai na.. pata hai kya karna hoga? (she said very sweetly)

Arm – (raises his eyebrow as he knows that nikki is no where close to innocent)

Nik – tumhe.. 200 push ups karne hoge!!! (acting superior)

Arm - :O... (laughs) theek hai.. here it goes..

Armaan did 200 push ups and when Nikki expected him to stop, he just kept going and going until he did 350 push ups

Nikki was surprised...

Abh – nikki.. don't be surprised.. college me ye dude like 500 push ups karta tha

Nik – wow... I feel sorry for the person who will get you mad

Arm – thats completely true (winking at her)

Abh – (coughs) *ahem ahem

Arm – oh... sry dude...

Nik – kya hua?

Arm – kuchh nahi... bas yunhi

Abhi – to ab sirf tum baaki ho nikki.. truth or dare?

Nik – I pick... tru (thinking this : if I say truth then they will think that I'm scared of tehm.. but if I pick dare then .. o my god.. meri to band baj jaayegi.. mein kya karu?)

I pick truuuuthhh.. nahi.. I pick daree (she said confidently)

Arm – are you sure?

Abhi – tumhe darr to nahi lagega na?

Nik – no way... mein dartti nahi hu

Arm – I know, darati ho

Nikki slaps armaan and says shut up armaan

Arm – ouch (pretending to be in pain) im sorry...

Nikki –watever.. to kaho.. mujhe kya karna hai?

Abhi – you have to... tumhe...

Nikki was somewhat scared inside because she knew that after what she had done, he is going to give her an even worse dare

Abhi (mujhe to isse kuch aisa dena chahiye joy eh kabhi nahi kar paaye.. mujhe rectal exams de rahi hai... now watch...)

Abhi – yu have to.. (he was about to say something when he looked at nikki.. he melted right away and forgot about the dare he was about to give her so then armaan jumped in to tell her the dare)

Arm – tumhe mere attic main ek poori raat guzaarni hogi

Abhi and nikki – WHAT? (they were both surprised)

Nik – yeh kaisa dare hai?

Abhi – yaa.. man that;s not fair...

Arm – dude (he pulls abhi over) tu yeh keh raaha hai? Isne tujhe rectal exams diye ha.. yaad hai ki nahi?

Abhi - I know dude lekin..

Arm – yo..

Abhi – fine... theek hai..

Arm – so nikki, are yu up for the challenge?

Nikki – armaan thats a stupid dare...

Abhi – to.. mera dare bhi stupid hai.. lekin main to karunga right..

Nikki – fine... (she speaks after thinking) tumhaara attic haunted to nahi hai na?

Arm – lagta hai tumne paranormal activity dekha hai...

Abh – nikki aise kucch nahi hai.. infact its not even close to scary..

Nikki – theek hai.. lekin agar kucch hua to main tum dono ko nahi chodungi

Arm – fine.. but take my word on it, uppar tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi hai.. lekin ha, agar by chance koi bhoot woot aa gaya to mujhe mat kehna..

Nikki – uppar bhoot hai?

Arm – (starts laughing)

Nikki gives him her stern look and he eventually shuts up

Nikki – k guys.. mein jaa rahi hu


I hope you guys are satisfied!! Thanks for all yur comments.. and keep reading..

nd please tell me if my story needs to move on quicker/slower.. cuz im only in grade 9..

dun really have the experiencee 😆



HiNaL

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