Weekend With Rahul Muskaan - 34 - Page 45

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Hey Reemz!! Thanks for reading!! If u have any time atm.. would u mind updating? if u have time that is..


hmm.. pari.. agar blackmail hi ek raasta hai toh i guess i have to use it na 😉 actually even i am out of ideas.. im also thinking yaar..

MD last time bol rahi hoon...thanx mat bolo mujhe😆
arey yaar time nahi hai...i was just goofing around so thought to read!!
i have SAT's tomorrow..so i'll have to sleep in like 10mis...but i promise ki jab mein free hongi toh zarror likhongi😳
@Pari...blackmailing Shilpz ki puraani aadat hai😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Shilpz
Di ek quest RM r in singapore right?
Tho can I write a scene with them on the beach?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sure Pari!! anything chalega!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

RECAP:

"rahul yeh dekho' acchi hai na??" she asks but he was still lost, she waves her hand in front of him.

"oye kahan ho??" she asks and he gets back.

"huh' haan wo' kya keh rahi thi?" he asks and she looks at him surprised.

(OK I am cont but it will be a short part and not verygood. To plz mujhse gussa mat hona😆)
M: Are rahul kahan kho gaye ho? Maine pucha ki meri mehendi kaisi hai?(shows R her hands)
R: Bohut koobsurat hai, bilkul tumhari tarah.(Staring at her. Both lost in each other's eyes LOL😳)
M: umm..Rahul kahi aur chale?
R:(back to reality) Ha..ha tum bolo tumhe kaha jaana hai?
M: Beach,
They reach the beach and muski starts playing with water while rahul admires her beauty. muski slowly comes near rahul and splashes him with water.
R: Are yeh kya kardiya tumne yeh mera fav shirt tha aur ab karab hogaya!!!
M: Oye mere khankajoore, yeh angry man ki shakal kisi aur ko dikha aur shirt sirf geela hua hai kharab nahi(realises that she said khankajoora, Rahul on the other hand was so happy to hear that name again)
R: kya kaha tune...and starts going near her
M: kuch..kuch nahin.. wo to bus aise hi..aur tu yeh kya kar raha hai
They both r now very close to eacother)
R: main...maine tho khuch kiya nahi hai......Muski tries going away from there but rahul hold her hand..... lekin maine yeh tho nahin kaha tha ki main kuch nahin karunga(and gives an evil smile. Muskaan is confused..... and in a blink of an eye she gets splashed by water and is wet LOL)
R: hahahaha teri shakal dekhne layak thi
M: Rahul tune mein tujhe chodungi nahiii ...and strts running after him
R: pehle pakad tho sahi...
Muskaan trips and falls.. AHHHHHHHHHHHHH
R: Muskaan tum thik tho hona apna pair dhika
M: nahi nahin main thik hun bas chota sa chot hai (feels really uncomfortable having rahul so close to her)
R: muski dekh tu chal bhi nahin sakti hai tu mera support lele
M: No no main chal sakti hun..and looses her balance but this time lands in rahul arms and gets lost in his eyes.
R: Imitates her main chal sakti hun. agar phir girjaati tho. Mera baat kabhi to suna karo
(Rahul takes hr to the hotel room and all this time muski is just lost in his eyes not paying attention to any of his words. Rahul puts her on the bed, but sees that she still has her arms around his neck😉)
R: Muski hum hotel pohunchgaye hai, tum mujhe ab chod sakti ho, well not that I mind having u so close to me
M: Ah ha ha woh sorry main..main
R: MERE khayalon mein kho gayi thi 😉 mazak tha main medicine leke atha hu tu aram kar
Muskaan thinks: Yeh mujhe kya horaha hai main uske baare mein kyun itna soch rahi hun. Jab bhi woh mere saath hota hai kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai ki sab thik hojayega. Nahin muskaan apne feelings ko sambhal ab woh tumara pati nahi hai. woh tumse pyaar nahi karta (ofcourse he does😉) Ab woh sirf mera dost hai. Ha sirf mera dost.
Ok guys that's it. I know bohut bura hai and not at all romantic but I'm very bad at writing romantic stuff😆 It's up to u if u want a romantic scene between RM with rahul applying medicin or not. If u want u can also ignore this part and cont writing from Nadz part. Just don't get angry at me😆 Aur I didn't edit my part so there might be many mistakes in it.
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pariiiiiiiiiiii!! what a sweeeeeeeeet part!!

hayye hayye.. mere kaankhajoore 😉

loved every bit of it!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

HUG Attack for u too!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow pari, so good!! r u writing for second time only? can't believe it.. very well written.. especially d dialogues.. :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Pariiiiiiiiiiii!! what a sweeeeeeeeet part!!

hayye hayye.. mere kaankhajoore 😉

loved every bit of it!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

HUG Attack for u too!

Thanx Shilpz di aapne itne bure part ko acha comment diya hai😆😆
My jhappis to u too 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rapi_c

wow pari, so good!! r u writing for second time only? can't believe it.. very well written.. especially d dialogues.. :D

Thanx Rapi yes my second time and coz of Shilpz di Unhe Na nahi kehsakti na😉
Happy that u guys like it and I'm also surprised I mean I personally thought ki aaj tho sab log meri band bajadege itni buri part padge😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_smile

Mansi di, saba and Nadz wonderful parts👏

I read all of them 2 times😆😆😆
Loved RM in the theme park. And rahul scared of rollercoaster ride😆😆😆 it was so cute😳
My jhappis to u all🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Someone cont soonnnnnnn



Im glad u liked it 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Hey Pari! U continue.. abhi tak tune likha hi nahi hai re 😆

Awesome Part Nadz!! Loved it!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗



Awww im just glad u liked it🤗🤗🤗

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