#4 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai?????(AR)note:149 - Page 43

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ankita plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update jaldi se.... :(
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soo sorry di for commenting late
actually i was busy in studies
just now read the part
it was veryyyyyyyyyyy romantic update
will wait for next update
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di kahan hoo
ab tou eid bhi khatam hogayi plsss di are you waitin for christmas?????????????
di occassion buhat saray jamay hogaye ab aek sath hi post mat kariega warna enjoy kam kar patey hain
DMG bhi acha nhi araha aur aap bhi absent hoo KPABHSH k sath,
life borin hogayi hai
di jaldi se update post kardo naaaaaa
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di kahan hoo

ab tou eid bhi khatam hogayi plsss di are you waitin for christmas?????????????
di occassion buhat saray jamay hogaye ab aek sath hi post mat kariega warna enjoy kam kar patey hain
DMG bhi acha nhi araha aur aap bhi absent hoo KPABHSH k sath,
life borin hogayi hai
di jaldi se update post kardo naaaaaa

love u always karan
love u all
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THANKS KSHAN
REALLY LOOKING FORWARD AND TELL ANKU DI TO HAVE FUN AT
WEDDING BECAUSE THEN WE ALL WANT loooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
update for part than usually anku di does
love heaven and i reallly misss u and Ff
waitin..............
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Granny..sorry...late se comment kar rahi hoona..maafi kar do...plssss....Two updates ke comments ek saath kar rahi hoon..
Part-150
mele aarish baba..kitna pyaara pyaara hain..humesha bas ek hi game khelna hain..
JHAAT.....
choooo chweet.
arre arre..ye riddhimaa aaj kal sapne mein khaane ke baare mein sochti hain...bechara armaan pata nahin kya kya jhelna pad ta hain...lekin iss mein bhi pyaar jhalakta hain...
The way u described Armaans thoughts for understanding riddhima...hats off...👏
I am eagerly waiting to see what is going to happen when padma and riddhima have face to face talk about their relationships.
vowww....aalllllloooo ke pranthe.......agar mein uss time par vahan hoti to ek dum se khoodte khoodte khaa leti.😆😆.my fav
I liked it wen both AR kept fast to support each other..
phir se ANKIT.😡😡😡..issko kyun laayi aap picture mein..gandu ankit..mujhe nahin pasand..mere aalish ke mumma ko chedta hain...gandu kahinka...
vowww..BB match..kitne dino baad dekhne ko mila..😃
Mujhe pata hain nehu ne aise kaam kyun rakhe bet pe...taaki vo aaraam se saare kaam princess se karvasake aur vo IF pe ghoomi kare...meli nehu mummaaa..🤗
this ankit naaaaaa😡😡...i will kill him..maardoon kya..aap permission do maar deti hoon..
Ye chaaro AA, RM yahan par bhi...lagta hain inki confrontation bhi interesting hogi aage ke parts mein..
kaash mein bhi uss jagah hoti AR ko dekhne...u described the nature and their feelings very well..👏👏
Luv u granny for this..
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PART-151 :

Grannyyyyy!!!!! main aapko kissi kaloon...kya jhakaaaas update tha..
just loved it frm the bottom to bottom of my heart ...muaaaaazzzzzz...maine sapne main nahin socha ki KPABHSH ka itnaaaaaaa accchaaaaaaaa part padhne ko milega...phir se kissi aapke liye...😛
Ye update mein kya baatun mein aapko...mujhe sharam aa rahi hain..itni to mein kabhi sharmaati bhi nahin hoon jitni part padhke sharmaayi thi...
The starting fight of Armaan and ritu...😆😆🤣..Armaan ka dimaag aaj kal supercool express train se bhi tez chalne lagi...
Ye kaisa chirag hain...apni biwi par shart..of coz jiski biwi itni bak bak karti ho to pati bhi aise hi niklega na....lmao..
Nehu mumma ne bhi naa..kitnaa accha prank khela...mujhe to itni hasi aayi..maine vo vaale lines baar baar pade...
CHAND SCENE with AR was just wind wind blowing👏👏👏
Ab main itne acche mood mein ankit aur anjali pe comment nahin karna chaungi..so leave it
sach mein i really like AR scenes and their passion...it was really reaching to the peaks of peaks of love... 👏
The way u explained the def of compromise and sacrifice...i liked it..
sach bataun granny..aapki har ek update mein kuch na kuch seekhne ko bhi milta hain....thanks a lot for dat..
will be waiting for ur next update...
Thanks for the PM
lots and lots of love...
nikko(nisha)😊
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Thanks a lot friends for your lovely support, my bro's marriage's ossum, really enjoyed a lot but missed you tooo…

Dear heaven: HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR..

May god bless you and may all your wishes come true…



Part-152

Ri: riddhima pranthe taiyar hai kya???? (ritu shouted from outside)

R: bas 5 minutes ritu… (then twisted her neck little back and looked at armaan who's standing at the back of her with his arms wrapped around her loosely and was nuzzling on her neck) armaan chodo mujhee, ritu aa gayi na maar daalegi…(armaan shaked his head) please armaan, breakfast banane do na, tum jao bahar….

A: let me help you(with a sweet wink and tried to take small ball of dough from her hands, riddhima raised her hand to say no but before she could armaan leaves his hot breathes on her neck, again making her lost in him, as he kissed her on neck, riddhima holds his hands lightly and closed her eyes, hitting her head on his collar bone, he started sucking her ear lobe while looking in her eyes side by side their hands were playing with dough, riddhima slightly twists her body and moved her arm around her neck and kisses on his cheeks and was about to hold his lips when)

Ri: riddhima 10 minute ho gaye abhi tak prantha nahi bana kya???? (riddhima's slightly confused at first trying to recognize voice then came in present and slightly pushed armaan while biting her tongue thinking kya ho jaata hai mujhe baar baar, iss armaan ke chakkar mai to na ek din achi tarah phasungi, where as armaan's smiling seeing the expressions of riddhima, ritu entered in kitchen) aaj hume breakfast mil to jayega na nanand ji????

(suddenly her gaze fell on armaan) oe tu yaha kya kar raha hai aur ye tere haath aate se kyu bhare hain, (then looking his hair with surprise) tere baalo par aata kaise aaya??? ((looking at riddhima doubtly) kya ho raha tha yaha par????
(riddhima started looking here and there feeling slightly embarrass in heart and praying if she could not guess anything, then looked at armaan…)

A: jayda kuch nahi teri nanand ki pranthe banane mai madad kar raha tha, bechari kal raat se bahut thaki hui hai, to socha thodi madad kar dun…(riddhima showed him eyes slightly, he winked at her naughtily, then started whistling and moved towards tap after pushing riddhima a bit…)

Ri: haan riddhima tum kuch thaki hui si lag to rahi ho, raat ko theek se soyi nahi kya.. (armaan presses his lips to control his laugh where as riddhima started looking down) aarish ki wajah se nahi so payi kya??? (riddhima muttered " uske pitashree ki wajah se nahi so payi) ya kuch khaya nahi tha isliye neend nahi aayi..(hardly she completed this line armaan started laughing loudly..)

A: (with a giggle) haan kal raat ko 3 baje inko bhuk to bahut tej lag rahi thi, aisa kuch mere kaano ne suna tha…(suddenly he shouted when hitted by bowl) aaaaahhhhhhhh…(and started running for his life when saw riddhima with bellan coming at his back, ritu's thinking why riddhima's over reacting so much, riddhima's saying I wont spare you armaan, armaan showed her thumb and rushed to room, where as ritu called riddhima back for pranthas, after 5 minutes)

R: ritu ye prantha armaan ko dekar aaja..

Ri: ajeeb hai tu, abhi 5 minute pehle uss bechare ka bewajah sir phodna chahti thi aur ab uske liye prantha bhej rahi hai,nahi actually tum dono hi ajeeb ho, samajh nahi aata kya ho tum dono..

R: (smiled a bit) to samajhne ki jagah tu simply usse prantha de aa… (she smiled naughtily, ritu moved towards dining hall slightly confused with riddhima's smile, all were shocked when armaan shouted "aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" after having one bite of prantha which's full of red chillies as well as lot of imlis, riddhima giggled and from serving window showed him tongue)

Ro: abe kya hua, aise ladkiyo ki tarah kyu chilla raha hai????

R: (while placing one more prantha in his plate) are ye chilla thodi na rahe hai, ye to keh rahe hai waaahhhhh kya prantha bana hai…

Ro: itne bhyankar tareeke se excitement jaahir karne ki kya jarurat thi???

R: actually bhuk ke kaaran ye jayda hi tadap rahe the isliye pranthe dekhkar apni feelings ko control nahi kar paye…(all shaked their heads and started having their breakfast, riddhima asked armaan to have his breakfast)

A: riddhima mujhe sach mai bahut bhuk lag rahi hai..(he muttered)

R: to jaan khaao na, tumhare liye kitne pyar se maine ye pranthe banaye hai, abhi 4-5 pranthe aur lekar aa rahi hun tumhari tummy bahut badi haina 1-2 mai kaha paet bharega, wo pranthe mai aur bhi jayda pyar se banaungi..(she winked and turned to go, when armaan holds her hand)

A: riddhima majak mat karo, mujhe hospital jaana hai parso inauguration hai…

R: waoo armaan hamare khayalat kitne milte julte hai, mai bhi to yehi kehna chahti thi, jaldi se breakfast karo rather than mera haath pakadkar time waste karne se…(in between ritu asked armaan to eat fast as he's hungry, riddhima smiled naughtily when looked his bechara face and moved in kitchen, after making 2-3 pranthas she thought to end this kidding session thinking "kahin sach mai naaraj na ho jaye waise bhi hospital ke liye late ho raha hai usse, and made aalu prantha for him, but was surprised when saw him missing from table, she quickly rushed to table and) ritu armaan kaha hai???

Ri: armaan abhi abhi room mai gaya hai…

R: aur breakfast???

Ri: abhi abhi to kiya hai, aur kitna khillayegi usse, ek din tondumal ban jayega…(she got busy with niki and prachi where as riddhima's forehead tightens when found his plate empty thinking armaan ne itni chilli waale pranthe khaa liye and with in a second dropped plate and rushed towards room but found no one in room, she called armaan's name several times and stopped when heard his very little voice may be due to distance,

riddhima tried to follow voice and reached near window, found him standing near car and was talking to someone on phone and with in a minute he's in his car, riddhima from above called his name but he didn't listen, he started his car, riddhima wanted to go and meet him and hug him tightly but on other side thinking "kahin jab tak mai niche pahunchu armaan challa hi na jaye,

aur uski shakal bhi na dekh paun" she remained in dilemma side by side his breakfast's also bothering her, she again called his name but as if her voice's struck in her throat, he accelerated his car and started moving, riddhima kept on looking him, suddenly her gaze fell on side mirror and saw him giving her a flying kiss with a sweet smile, riddhima's eyes as an instant started dropping water and she holds her ears,

armaan from mirror shaked his head and then crosses his hands on his chest then points her in mirror saying I love you, riddhima smiled a bit then holds curtain and placed her head on wall feeling bad for his breakfast, she again mumbled sorry jaan, soon she received message from him "pranthe sach mai bahut pyar se banaye the(with a wink) tasty the, but don't why my tongue's still burning, I tried water, I tried sugar but no affect, may be waiting for your treatment..(again a wink followed by smiley and then tongue)"

riddhima smiled and kisses on screen, then goes down, ritu asked her for breakfast, she first said no, but when ritu forced her she took plate, on the verge of placing prantha but then thought "kyu na aaj chilly prantha taste kiya jaye" with every bite she dropped water from eyes as chilly's last thing she wanna taste ever, yet she's enjoying every bite remembering armaan's face,

then she got up for washing her hands, as soon as she's over with washing, she found one towel hanging in front of her eyes and shivered deeply when found one arm wrapped around her waist, she smiled and blushed a bit, then took towel and was cleaning her hands when felt her neck line being traced by his fingure with a line of kisses, she moved her head on other side as a reaction of tickly that she's feeling and closed her eyes, when

Ni: oe riddhima kya hua?? Aise kyu khadi hai, 10 minute se tere haath ni dhulle kya??? Riddhimaaa…(waving her hand in front of his eyes, riddhima came in present and looked here and there with confused eyes, niki asked what happened, riddhima mumbled "armaan" but then realized that it's just her visualization, she kicked herself mentally and left the place, around 11o'clock after feeding aarish she came down and settled next to ritu, started peeling vegetables when heard "chee chee"

riddhima looked above and found armaan standing with his killing smile and opened arms, riddhima showed him eyes as if saying armaan sab hai yahan, but armaan neglected her expressions and settled on floor and placed his head in her lap and kept on looking her in continuation, she blushed a bit when armaan moved her arms around her neck and pulled her a bit down while showing her tongue, she smiled and let herself pulled by him
easily, suddenly..

Ri: riddhimaaaaaaaaa……….. (riddhima got scared and looked at ritu) ye kya kar rahi hai,(riddhima's still looking her confusingly) tu mattar(beans) ke daane jameen par kyu daal rahi hai, aur unke chillko ko apni godd mai kyu saja rahi hai, aaj hume inn chilko ki sabji khillane ka iraada hai kya???

(riddhima looked in her lap and felt embarrassed, slightly pulled her hair thinking " ye kya ho raha hai, ye achi baat hai armaan ki khud to maje se hospital mai kaam kar raha hoga aur yaha na hokar bhi har jagah khud ko chod gaya, paagal kar diya hai iss ladke ne mujhe, abhi tak ye baat sirf wohi jaanta tha par ab bahut jaldi duniya ko bhi pata chal jayega, mujhe kuch karna padega" she got up with force)

Ni: kya huaa???

Ri: kaha jaa rahi hai???

R: hospital???

Pr: kyu???

R: jo yaha na hokar bhi har jagah hai usse waapis hospital mai chodne jaa rahi hun…(all made confusing face but riddhima didn't care and moved to her room, get dressed herself in a white capree with a red top having steps such that her belly button's visible, then covered herself with jacket, moved down, all were shocked to see her like this..

Ri: riddhima are you sure na??? tu hospital hi jaa rahi hai na??

R: haan kyuuu???

Ri: kyunki tu aisi dresses parties mai bhi nahi daalti to hospital???? (riddhima smiled a bit and asked her not to use her brains and give her one tiffin, ritu nodded, after taking tiffin, she started walking towards hospital)

As soon as she entered in hospital all eyes got jammed over her, she neglected everyone and kept on walking while placing aarish against her shoulder and aarish blanket covered her tummy properly, she reached in OPD where armaan's busy in giving instructions to workers for the installation of new machine….. (riddhima cleared her throat to gain attention, armaan twisted his head back)

A: (with slight surprise) tumm???

R: hmmm.. ji maii…(smile)

A: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho??(coming near her)

R: (moving more close to him) tumhare kuch keemti pal churane aayi thi, kya ijajat mil sakti hai???

A: oee hoyeee… ji bilkul, hum aur humare pal sirf aapki wajah se hi to keemti hai, aapke bina inn palon ka kya mol, aapko nahi lagta??? (he winked,riddhima smiled a bit and looked down, he pinched her nose, then took aarish from her) aaja mere laal, mere pile, mere hare, mere nile, kaisa hai aur subah se kitni baar susu potti kiya…(aarish slightly kicked him on his chest, then chuckled, armaan smiled and hugged him, when heard some noise, he quickly turned back only to find machine's one corner on floor..) ohh shit,

(he handled aarish back to riddhima and rushed towards machine, riddhima waited for 15 minutes when one worker told her to wait in waiting room, she nodded and waited there, half hour passed when she saw armaan coming from front, her lips covered with wide smile, but as soon as he reached the door, one worker again called him, he looked at riddhima, she nodded with patience, he asked just 5 minutes, she smiled and started playing with aarish, half hour passed but he's no where to be seen, she feeded aarish, after sometime he entered in room..

R: finally aapke 5 minutes over ho gaye..

A: (while looking in file) hmm lagta to yehi hai…waise tum abhi tak gayi nahi???

R: aise kaise challi jaati, abhi to tumse theek se baat bhi nahi hui…. lunch laga dun agar free ho to…(armaan nodded, riddhima served him,feeded him with lunch, waiting him to look her at once and say something or do something but he remained looking in file, riddhima felt a bit bad but thinking that work is important) mai tumhari kuch help karun?

A: nahi, ab tum ghar jao aur rest karlo, hum shaam ko milte hai…(riddhima felt weird, in between armaan left when one worker called him, he's so confused that he forgot to say bye to riddhima, obviously she felt very bad, she made face and dropping lunch box there, she took aarish and came out from hospital without saying a word… as soon as she left armaan came back saying "riddhima saari problem solve ho gayi, machines ab proper output show kar rahi hai, challo cabin mai chalkar aaram se…."

he stopped and was surprised when saw her missing, he mumbled "riddhima" one worker told him about her, he made a bad face thinking "wo mere liye aayi thi aur mai theek se uss se baat bhi nahi kar paya, ye workers bhi na, khud sab gadbad karte hai aur inke kaaran hume suffer karna padta hai, kitna bura laga hoga riddhima ko…" he thought…

On other side, riddhima mumbling to herself " samajhta kya hai khud ko, jarur subah ka badla le raha hoga, sorry bola tha na, maana galti ki thi par itna bada ignore, kitne pyar se gayi thi uske pass, kya keh rahi thi usse, ek to uski help karna chahti thi, jaanti hun busy hai par 5 minute to de hi sakta tha na, waise kehta hai uska saara time mera hai par 5 minutes bhi nahi diye jaate, ek baar dekha bhi nahi mujhe, ab jaye bhaad mai, maine bhi baat nahi karni uss se agar wo busy hai to mai bhi free nahi hun, aarish ke bahut kaam hote hai mere paas"

she stopped when heard some sweet tune of sitar, then some chorus tune and found some people saying "aa gaye wo dono, jaldi challo kahi kuch chutt na jaye, riddhima first thought to neglect when some sugary voice touched her ears…

"yaara dildara ve aaja do gallan kariye"

she couldn't help but moved towards the direction and after few steps found 1 couple standing, looking like banjaras, riddhima gussed that they're husband and wife, she's surprised when saw every person of guest house present there, she moved towards them, and stood next to rucha, she passed a sweet smile and asked if she could take aarish, riddhima smiled and handled aarish to rucha…

Wife started singing

YAARA DILDARA VE AAJA DO GALLAN KARIYE..
YAARA DILDARA VE AAJA DO GALLAN KARIYE..
AA PIPPLAN DIYAN CHAWAN VE, BAHVAN VICH PA KE BAHVAN VE
TENU DIL DA HAAL SUNAVA VE, CHAL ISHQ DE PATRE PADIYE..

(armaan heard these words when coming out from hospital, don't know why he couldn't move though he wanna reach home soon and to meat riddhima, but his heart felt something different as if riddhima's saying these words to him, his feet itself turned towards the direction following voice and soon reached the place,

in that gathering his eyes're searching only one face coz his heart beat started raising so he's now damm sure that riddhima's here only and soon his eyes saw the beautiful gaze of her, while she's busy in making faces to aarish, he moved near her, riddhima looked him from rucha's back, she made a slight face and moved little back showing slight anger..)

husband started singing…

YAARA DILDARA VE AAJA DO GALLAN KARIYE..
YAARA DILDARA VE AAJA DO GALLAN KARIYE..
AA PIPPLAN DIYA CHAWAN VE,BAHVAN VICH PA KE BAHVAN VE
TENU DIL DA HAAL SUNAVA VE, CHAL ISHQ DE PATRE PADHIYE

(riddhima looked in armaan eyes, his eyes as if telling her the words, so pure only love and emotions for her were falling from his eyes, riddhima for a second loosened herself in that pool of emotions but then as he came close to aarish, she moved more back only to be stopped by tree, armaan kisses on aarish's head while looking at riddhima thoroughly and making her heart beat skipped for once

and then giving aarish back to rucha he moved near riddhima, but riddhima turned and started moving away, armaan smiled and shaked his head thinking "galti to mujhse hui hai, par saja phir kabhi le lenge aaj mann nahi hai, he turned to other side" where as after walking few steps riddhima turned only to find him missing, first she thought " armaan kahan gaya" then thought "mujhe kya lena jaaye jahan jaana hai"

YAARA DILDARA VE AAJA DO GALLAN KARIYE..
(suddenly she's surprised when her ear drum struck by these words "ohh really tumhe koi farak nahi padta)

TUNE..

(before she could react he pulled her at the back of one tree from her waist, that's far away from spot, riddhima slightly mumbled chodo mujhee, I wanna go, armaan shaked his head, riddhima very lightly pushed him but due to little stones armaan looses his balance and fell down, riddhima quickly holds his hand mumbling "armaannn" and pulled him back from his hand so that his head bumped hard on her tummy as he's on his knees, riddhima mumbled "tum theek to ho na armaan" but soon her wait for answer came to an end when his lips and hot breathes touched her tummy)

FEMALE- HAAL MERA MAI JAANU MERA RABB JAANE
MIL GAYA MUJHE SAKOON KAISE KAB JAANE

(she shivered badly down to her spine, he again and again gave wet kisses on her tummy, riddhima closed her eyes and presses his head little tightly so as to stop him where he's, but it didn't worked, riddhima slightly hitted her head on tree when felt his tongue writing AR on her tummy, her heart beats were like as if her heart is beating outside her body, getting uncontrollable gitters all over the body, she tried to detangle herself from him but he hold her hands..)

MALE- DIL MERA REH REH KAR TUJHSE KEHTA HAI
ROK NA DIL KI BAATEIN CHAHE SAB JAANE

(soon she clutched tree tightly when he bites near her belly button, and started peeling wood with her nails when he lightly sucked her belly button, her trembling lips kept on mumbling his name and one hand's caressing his nape of neck that's surely adding fuel in armaan and in return he kept on kissing her while moving his hands lightly on her skin that's making her lost, she closed her eyes and rested her head on tree, groaning deep inside with the pleasant pain she's feeling…)

female- mai teri ho gayi re sajna
tu mera ho gaya re sajna
male- ab muddke piche kya takna, dil kahe jo kyu na kariye.....
yaara dildaara ve aaja do gallan kariye....
(she opened her eyes slightly when felt his lips touching her neck, both looked each other, armaan removed flick that's falling on her face, then traced her lips with his thumb, riddhima again closed her eyes when their's an inch gap between their lips, trembling badly, waiting for him to touch her, but while tracing her neckline with fingure he mumbled in her ears "haan to tum kya keh rahi thi??? Tumhe koi farak nahi padta mai kahi bhi jaun"

riddhima opened her eyes and looked him first with confusion then remembering something she pushed him and mumbled "mujhe sach mai farak nahi padta, bhaad mai jao tum" in heart cursing him for spoiling such a lovely moment and thinking jaruri tha abhi uss topic ko beech mai laana and armaan's smiling over her fake anger, he knew very well about her emotions..)

riddhima started moving, armaan holds her hand and pulled her back mumbled "oyee hoyee itna gussaaa" riddhima trying to free herself "gussa kare meri jutti, mujhe kyu gussa aane laga, waise bhi mai hoti kaun hun gussa karne waali, aur by the way tum yaha kya kar rahe ho, tumhe to hospital mai hona chahiye tha apni files ke saath, aisi aisi jagah mai tumhe ghumna shobha nahi deta, ek ache doctor ki tarah tumhe har waqt hospital mai band rehna chahiye aur kissi ko ek najar uthakar bhi dekhna nahi chahiye

chahe wo kitne pyar se tumse milne aayi ho, aur iss mausam aur manjar ke kaaran to tumhe bilkul bhi behkna nahi chahiye, baaki mujh jaise log to paagal hai abnormal hai jo behak jaate hai par tum to samajhdaar ho, kaam karne aaye ho bas kaam hi karte rehna chahe koi tumhare liye kitna marji ache se taiyar hokar aaye par najar uthakar mat dekhna, chahe koi tumhare bina paagal ho raha ho phir bhi dhyan mat dena, chaheeee……

armaan placed his hand on her lips and mumbled "oee bass meri raajdhaani express" riddhima widened her eyes, armaan mumbled "ok sorry" riddhima again tried to detangle, armaan pulled her back and lifted her up, mumbled "ab bhaag ke dikhao" she hitted him on chest mumbling "choro mujheee, choro" armaan said "oe kaha na sorry, ab jayda akad dikhayi too…" riddhima said " jabardasti hai, jao mai nahi maanti karlo jo karna hai" armaan smiled a bit and started twirling fastly, riddhima kept on hitting him but his speed started increasing,

riddhima got lil scared and wrapped her arms around his neck, then after a minute locked her legs at his back that's in air and was making her tired, soon she placed her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes, armaan after a minute stopped and mumbled "kya hua ladna nahi hai" riddhima slightly hit him and then shaked her head, armaan mumbled "to kya karna hai???" (slightly loosing his grip) riddhima looked him naughtily, then moved her face near him, armaan started loosing a bit, when his grip around her was very light riddhima mumbled in his ear "gudd guddi" and did tickly in his tummy then after pushing him a bit she ran away towards fields..

(she kept on running, teasing armaan again and again, armaan's trying to catch her but unable to, riddhima kept on laughing, while looking at armaan her ankle got struck by small stone and she fell down on her back, before armaan could help her, his toe too hitted by that stone and he too fell down, later on realized that he's on riddhima, he winked and then nuzzled on her nose,

riddhima started looking down when he said " aapko shayad kuch galat fehmi hui thi hamare baare mai, hum to iss duniya ke sabse jayda bade abnormal logo mai se ek hai, jo mausam ke behakne se pehle hi behak jaate hai, then he clutched her hands tightly and tucked them near her thighs and then bends down, first sucked her upper lip for a second as if tasting it, then bites her lower lip making her smile a bit, and then both got involved in a long passionate kiss…

then they rested on each other silently, hearing the movements of blood, and heart beats of each other, after sometime they got up thinking to leave but in between riddhima pulled armaan's hand, armaan asked what happened, she said " abhi thodi daer mai challe pleaseeeee" armaan smiled and nodded, they settled under one tree with armaan on ground and riddhima in his lap, she kept on playing with his hair, in between kissing him on his shoulder and finally fell asleep,

armaan shaked his head and got up with difficulty thinking "moti ho gayi hai kha kha ke" she in sleep mumbled "to khud kaunsa seekh silaayi ho, ab to tumhare abs bhi najar nahi aate itne mote ho gaye ho" armaan first made a face then smiled and blew air to remove her flick, finally from shortcuts they reached near guest house, armaan asked riddhima to get down, but she shaked her head, but soon jumped when heard aarish's crying, both armaan riddhima rushed inside house only to find aarish in princess arms crying uncontrollably, neha, rucha was trying to handle him, riddhima quickly rushed to them and took him, caressed him with love, mumbling "mera baby, kya huaa betu ko…"

Ne: are yaar tum dono kaha challe gaye the waha se??? ek ghanta ho gaya tumhe gaye hue ko, ek baar inform bhi nahi kiya, aarish..

R: (cutting her) kya ye tab se hi ro raha hai???

Ru: nahi rona to 2 minute pehle hi shuru hua tha, princess ne koi horror movie laga di thi, uski cheenkh sunkar darr gaya aur tab se ro raha hai..

A: hey bhagwan… tum teeno ko horror picture dekhne ki jarurat hai kya, seeshe ke saamne khade ho jaana tha, mere bache ko itna dara diya, dekhna kaise ro raha hai…

Pi: aaa haa haa haa aaa, khud to dono bina bataye gayab ho gaye the, tab nahi apne bache ka khayal aaya..

A: tum kab kaam aaogi, future mai tum logo ke bhi bache honge to abhi se tum logo ko thoda bache sambhalne ka experience ho jaye isliye hum tumhe aarish ko de gaye the, par I'm sorry to say tum logo ko bache bilkul sambhalne nahi aate….

Ne: na sambhalne aate hote na to abhi tak tumhara laal gopal na ro roke laal ho chukka hota, shukar karo bhagwan ka ki hum jaise log mile hai tumhe…bahut kam logo ka aisa naseeb hota hai… huhhh… ab sambhalo apne laal gopal ko hum challe, already tumhare kaaran itna late ho gaye hai….(trio left with a winked smile, riddhima giggled a bit on armaan's bechara face then goes in room, calming aarish who's holding her tightly)

Around 10o'clock everyone's over with dinner and after that everyone retired to their rooms, armaan fell asleep quickly, riddhima after giving feed to aarish and changing his nappy, extended near armaan and soon was asleep, around 11:30 she opened her eyes when felt armaan's not on bed, she thought may be he's in washroom then turned and found aarish missing too, she again took it calmly, but after 20 minutes when they didn't return back,

she settled on bed thinking kahi aarish ko kuch problem to nahi hui na, mujhe dekhna chahiye and she moved out from room, searched first floor but found no one, after 5 minutes she's scared a bit when found one image forming on wall, she gulped then moved towards image mumbling "kaun hai, kaun hai wahan" then she found that image running on stairs, riddhima thought to follow that as she's not feeling good about the image, she too crossed stairs mumbling "kaun hai waha…"

she crossed terrace door when someone pulled her from her waist, before she could shout her lips were locked with someone's hands, she got scared when heard the locking of door, she slightly bites on his hand and turned and shouted "aaaaahhhhhhhhhh" when saw 2 scary hands and face in front of her eyes, in next minute she started sweating, one drop of sweat rolled down from her temples and before she starts crying she heard some music…

happy birthday to you… happy birthday to you, happy birthday happy birthday, happy birthday to you, she turned back only to find armaan removing his mask from his face, riddhima as an instant rushed to him and hitted him tightly, armaan laughed, then took her in his arms and plants kiss on her forehead mumbling "happy birthday baby"

R: aise bhi koi wish karta hai kya, jaan nikal di thi meri ek hi pal mai…

A: jhooti…(riddhima made a face) okk promish aaj pura din no shararat, only pyar and pyar and pyar….. okkk…

riddhima asked promise, he smiled and nodded, then he holds her hand and took her to other side of terrace which's decorated with rose flowers and with heart shape balloons "happy birthday jaan" was written, in centre one table having small heart shape cake was there, that table was decorated fully with candles, she moved near table, suddenly remembering aarish she turned to ask about him but stopped when her gaze fell on cot that was next to table,

and was surprised when saw cot fully decorated with ballons, she moved near cot and found "happy birthday mumma" written on top of its shed with balloons that's having cartoon pictures, her lips's covered with million dollar smile, then her gaze fell on small bowl that's in between the ballons, she looked it clearly and found one small almost of the size of aarish fist cake in that bowl and in that small cake one little banner kind of was hanging in which it's written " thish cake I fol you mumma, bash yehi kehna chahta hun ki aap world's best mumma hai, lub you"

before riddhima could react armaan placed his chin on her shoulder saying "copy cat kahin ka, mujhe dekhkar khud bhi cake le aaya, kabhi to khud kuch soch liya kar" aarish chuckled slightly seeing the expressions of armaan thinking if he's playing with him where as riddhima turned immediately and hugged armaan tightly, no words she's getting at present, she just said a plain thanks then mumbled "I love you armaan", armaan hugged her bach with a sweet smile and mumbled "thanks for coming in my life jaan…"

then handled her one knife and asked her to cut cake, and he himself took aarish in his arms and trying to teach him how to clap by hitting his one hand on other, but aarish rather than hitting on his own hands, everytime hits on armaan's hand, armaan kept on smiling seeing his angelic deeds and as soon as riddhima cut cake, she's on the verge of feeding armaan but he stopped her saying pehle copy cat ko khillao mai to aaram se aur pyar se khaunga,

riddhima shaked her head and then took lil cream on fingure and put it in aarish mouth which he gulped after making the sounds of pleasure, then armaan placed one flower in aarish's hand and forwards that to riddhima and in babyinh voice said "aapy bilday ummaa" riddhima smiled and took flower, then bends down and kisses on aarish's head mumbling thanku baby, on other hand aarish thought that again his mumma's going to feed him with sweet thing

so he holds riddhima's hair with his lil arms and started sucking her cheeks, riddhima giggled and somehow detangled herself only to find armaan waiting with open mouth, she smiled and took piece of cake, on the verge of feeding him when he asked him to eat with him, but as soon as they started eating aarish started throwing his legs loudly in his arms, somehow they gulped cake and then armaan looked down saying

A: ek din phat jayega jealousy kar karke, maine kuch kaha tha jab tune apni maa ki kissi li thi, meri baari mai tujhe itni mirchi kyu lag jaati hai, thodi si to sharam dikha diya kar, kabab mai haddi…(riddhima hitted him where as aarish chuckled, then trio laughed together, armaan again holds her hand)

R: armaan abhi thodi daer mai challeinge na niche…

A: to baby hum log niche thodi na jaa rahe hai…

R: kya matlab???

A: matlab aaj hum raat yaha terrace par hi spend karienge…

R: par aarish ko thandi lag jayegi…

A: don't worry, uska thandi-proof room already taiyar hai…(riddhima looked him with slight confusion when he again pulled her and took her to other end of terrace, riddhima eyes remained opened wide for few seconds with surprise when she saw one small hut that can be carried easily by a single person was there, all sides of hut was covered with small wall having cartoons and one side, wall was made of glass may be for her convenience so that she could easily see if aarish's awake or not, and a very small ventilation hole's there in glass,

next to hut one square shaped boundary's there almost of the size of bed and boundary's made of bangle shaped mirror curtains followed by warm quilts and on floor quiet thick bedding's there so as to prevent them from cold and quiet far from their bed aromatic candles were there making heart around their bed that to covered in outlet so that wind could not affect them, on their bed rose petals's scattered everywhere,

riddhima blushed for a minute when armaan asked " to kya aap taiyar hai sirf pyar pyar aur pyar ke saath apna pura din nikalne ke liye" riddhima nodded and covered her face in her hands when armaan winked naughtily, then took aarish and after giving him feed she started making him sleep, after placing him in his small hut, she came out from their so-called room only to be pulled unknowingly by armaan….

To be continued....

Precap:
panditji: riddhima bitiya apni mataji aur pitaji ka naam bataiye…(everyone exchanged looks, armaan looked at riddhima where as riddhima without looking armaan)

R: armaan malik...

Pa: beta pati ka nahi pitaji aur mataji ke naam..

R: armaan se hi mere saare rishte hai panditji, iss naam ko aap kahin bhi laga sakte hai mere naam ke aage, iss ke alava aur koi nahi…(she stopped and started looking down, everyone's shocked thinking in heart how much rude she's, maa-baap ke saamne hi unko mara hua keh rahi hai…….)

I'll pm you with next update, please inform me if anyones name's missing from pm list, i'll include his/her name…

Lots of love
Ankita…




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Posted: 15 years ago

HAAL MERA MAI JAANU MERA RABB JAANE
MIL GAYA MUJHE SAKOON KAISE KAB JAANE

yeh mujhe gaana chahiye...meli mamma aa gayi hai..mamma phir nai jana mujhe chod ke.... 😛🤗
phir bhi agar aap gaye naa toh main yeh gana gaa ke sunaunga aapko
TU JO HAAN KAHE TOH BAN JAAYE BAAT BHI
HO TERA ISHARA TOH CHAL DUN MAIN SAATH BHI (mamma aapka song hai naa yeh)🤣

acha chalo ab comments ki baari...

mere ko bhi paranthe chahiye...mela babu bhookha hai 😆

riddhima muttered " uske pitashree ki wajah se nahi so payi...oye hoyeeeeeeeee☺️

haan kal raat ko 3 baje inko bhuk to bahut tej lag rahi thi, aisa kuch mere kaano ne suna tha aa lai...yeh pittaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

tutututu....shonu ke papa piteeeeeeee....BELAN se....😆😆😆
R: to jaan khaao na, tumhare liye kitne pyar se maine ye pranthe banaye hai,...oye hoye...ab itne pyar se bolegi toh banda zehar bhi khane ko tyaar ho jaye😳

"pranthe sach mai bahut pyar se banaye the(with a wink) tasty the, but don't why my tongue's still burning, I tried water, I tried sugar but no affect, may be waiting for your treatment.... TREATMENT... mamma shonu ke papa ko roz chilli wale pranthe khila diya kalo🤣🤣

Ni: oe riddhima kya hua?? Aise kyu khadi hai, 10 minute se tere haath ni dhulle kya??? ...muft ka saabun mila tha...Kaunsa wala tha ??🤣 Lifeboy?🤣🤣🤣

aaja mere laal, mere pile, mere hare, mere nile, kaisa hai aur subah se kitni baar susu potti kiya' Kyun...?? race lagani thi kya ki kaun zyada karta hai🤣

mamma phil aapne rucha ko de diya mere shonu ko...mamma samdhan ki niyat achi nai hoying...😆

she shivered badly down to her spine, he again and again gave wet kisses on her tummy,....acha toh yeh kaaran tha capri pehanne ka🤣 mamma ghuma fira ke kyun batate ho...Seedha bata diya karo🤣
JUNGLE MEIN MANGAL😲..saah sukk gaye mere maa....kaisi baatein sikha rahe ho hum nanne munne bachon ko🤣

when felt his tongue writing AR on her tummy...achaaa😲!!!! mamma yeh kaise socha aapne🤣 itna kaise soch lete ho??🤣🤣

gussa kare meri jutti,...jutti ko kisses thodi milengi🤣

oe kaha na sorry, ab jayda akad dikhayi too...ek chaped maarunga🤣 aisa kyun ni bola🤣

before armaan could help her, his toe too hitted by that stone and he too fell down, later on realized that he's on riddhima, ...itne nakhre karke letne ki kya zaroorat thi...humne kaunsa inka khoon kar dena hai agar yeh bina girne ka drama kiye romance karna shuru ho jaate...🤣

"moti ho gayi hai kha kha ke"....🤣 matlab agla chance mera hai🤣

Laal gopal....mera lalla shonu😍

mamma shukar karo bhagwan ka ki aapko mere jaisi beti mili🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
BDAYYYYYYYYY AA GAYA HAPPY CUM LOMANSH WALA☺️
awwwwwww mela shonu...kitttta pyala hoying...mamma ji main bhi pyala hun naa...detho main bhi keh laha hun aapto...aap world's best mumma hai, lub you"🤗

he holds riddhima's hair with his lil arms and started sucking her cheeks...maaaaa itni space chod ke likha tha ....ek min k liye laga shonu ki nahin uske papa ki baat kar rahe ho....🤣

aarish started throwing his legs loudly in his arms,...maa belan leke peeche padi thi...aur beta taange chala raha hai...mere baare mein socho...bacha ke rakh lo mere liye thoda sa ammy ji ko🤣

TERRACE SCENE...mmmmmm superbbbb...mamma ek kishyyyyyyyy aapki pyali pyali romantic khopdi par😆😆

A: don't worry, uska thandi-proof room already taiyar hai'mamma papa ko bolke mere liye bhi aisa room ready karvana...phir main bhi aap logo ko 29th aug. ko tang ni karunga🤣

beech mein hi rok diya maa....aage toh bata dete ki hut ke ander kya hua🤣 aise hi finish kar diya...poora gyaan dena chahiye naa mamma....😆
chalo koi ni...next update mein bata dena...aur samdhan ki baaton ko ignore kar do...aap NEHU TYPE PARTS continue rakho☺️
mamma uth jao ab.....ho gayi finish meri bak bak😆
thanku nahi hai aapko.... KPABHSH aapki mamta samajh ke le raha hun...ismein thanku thodi na bolunga...
LOVE U ZYADA WALA MAAAAAA...
aapka betu
Nehu😳😛
Edited by Neha_luvPRB - 15 years ago

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