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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hey sir
that part was gr8 absolutly loved it
the last part of abhi n armaan dostana was fabuluse
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i just loved it very much
but nice idea to get jiya away from abhi
nruti
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: arluver15

<FONT color=#ff0000>hey sir </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000>that part was gr8 absolutly loved it </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000>the last part of abhi n armaan dostana was fabuluse</FONT>

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<FONT color=#ff0000>🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣</FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000>i just loved it very much </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000>but nice idea to get jiya away from abhi </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff0000>nruti</FONT>




thnks dear nruthi(nice name..) for liking and commenting..
keep reading..
sri 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
ok sri
finally maine saare pars padd liye , gosh i m tired now
to jyada badda comment expect mat karna
waise all the parts were great , ye armaan kabhi cupid and kabhi devil bankar sabki problems solve kiye jaa raha hai , i loved that soo much ,
great parts 2 new love stories of sid tammana and yuvi and naina , and uske saath armaan ka charm and solving each and every problem was perfect
loved all that a lot
armaan and riddhima all parts were like the best
oh yaar riddhima kab theek honge
ye shashank kuch secret rakh rahha hai kya , vo riddhima ki case file ko kyon itana chupa rahha hai , i m getting suspecious over that
wanna read ahead for that
and yaa last part mein armaan and abhi part was very nice , hmm yaar i was laughing like hell
really liked all that a lot
finally atul thoda bahut normal hua and anjali bhi hasse , i mean what you say hasse to fasse , loved that
great going sweety
keep the good work up
will wait for more of the parts from you ,
gosh likhte likhte kaafe badda part ho gayya
till then take care
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: simi2

ok sri

finally maine saare pars padd liye , gosh i m tired now
to jyada badda comment expect mat karna
waise all the parts were great , ye armaan kabhi cupid and kabhi devil bankar sabki problems solve kiye jaa raha hai , i loved that soo much ,
great parts 2 new love stories of sid tammana and yuvi and naina , and uske saath armaan ka charm and solving each and every problem was perfect
loved all that a lot
armaan and riddhima all parts were like the best
oh yaar riddhima kab theek honge
ye shashank kuch secret rakh rahha hai kya , vo riddhima ki case file ko kyon itana chupa rahha hai , i m getting suspecious over that
wanna read ahead for that
and yaa last part mein armaan and abhi part was very nice , hmm yaar i was laughing like hell
really liked all that a lot
finally atul thoda bahut normal hua and anjali bhi hasse , i mean what you say hasse to fasse , loved that
great going sweety
keep the good work up
will wait for more of the parts from you ,
gosh likhte likhte kaafe badda part ho gayya
till then take care
lots of love
simi

thanks simi...
thnk u so so much..
that was a nice comment ...
u commented on all parts ,,thats so sweet..
the way u analysed is so good..and yes abt shashank...u r ......wait and read😉
and yes armaan is an "angel in disguise" here.....
i agree..but wait and watch..
will be updating after 2 days..
ok.... exams as i said...
i have commnted on u r fanfic..c it!!!
thnks bye
sri😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Sorry guys…
I know I am posting it lately….a bit busy with my studies and also the atmosphere was out of mood…
I too wrote it with a bit off mood, Yes I was feeling sad to see karan in sbs today..
so sorry if its not up to mark…,but I tried to put in my best….
And it's a long one(hope it will not make u bore),
Please do read it and review..appreciation/criticism both are welcomed….
Even a sentence or a word…please do comment…feedback is necessary for any writer..especially for a not so good writer like me and this being my first attempt…
Thanks to each and everyone who have been liking my prediction and appreciated it…
Thanks to all who read it,commented, "like"d it ,also to the silent readers…
Really appreciated…
Sri..


ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 6

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"


In evening…at canteen..
The party is yet to be started in sometime.. Armaan was busy doing all arrangement….

He calls nikki..

ARMAAN:Nikki kahan ho tum…?
NIKKI:Armaan wooh mein ghar mein hoon…kuch kaam…
ARMAAN:Kya kaam??aur party..
NIKKI:Main nehi aa paungi..
ARMAAN:Par kyun…
NIKKI:Meri baat suno..
ARMAAN:Mujhe kuch nehi sun na..agar tum nehi aa rahe ho toh main bhi tumahre paas aa raha hoon..party chod ke…bye..
NIKKI:Armaan….
ARMAAN:Tum aa rahi ho ya nehi..
NIKKI:Achcha babaa aa rahi hoon..
ARMAAN:Abhi isi waqt…
NIKKI:Theek hain..
ARMAAN:That's good…..dekho waisi bhi mujhe help chahiye yahan,,jaldi aa na please..(pleading)
NIKKI:Toh help chahiye,,isi liye phone kiya..hain na..
ARMAAN:Nehi main toh tumhe miss kar raha tha..(sweetly)
NIKKI:Armaan…..
ARMAAN:Nikki..tum aao na..
NIKKI:Haan haan..aa rahi hoon,,tum phone toh rakho..(he cuts phone)
ARMAAN: (to himself) Ab abhi aur nikki ko ek baar pass lana hain…
NIKKI: (to herself)Yeh armaan bhi na bahut ziddi hain..

J.P and naina were going to locker room for changing…they see yuvi outside who was leaving..

J.P:Arre yuviji…aap kahan ja rahe hain….
YUVRAAJ:Ghar..
J.P:Aap party mein nehi aa rahe….
YUVRAAJ:Nehi..mujhe in sab mein interest nehi hain..
NAINA:Chodo na.. …waise isse sirf Dr.Shashank mein interest hain…aur kissi mein nehi………
waise bhi yeh party mein aake bhi kya karega..kuch nehi na….
J.P:Par flowerji,bade bhaiye toh....
NAINA:Chalo mein ja rahi hoon kapde badlne…(she leaves)
J.P:Mein bhi aa raha hoon naina ji…sorry yuviji.(following her)

Yuvi sees seriously….and leaves…

In locker room…

Yuvi already left and atul was helping armaan in canteen..

SIDDANTH:Hye naina…
NAINA:Hye sid…
SIDDANTH:Yeh miss gayab kahan hain….
NAINA:Wooh aaj jaldi chali gayi hain,shayad ghar se hi direct aa jayegi..

After sometime…naina changes her dress and is about to leave…she wore a nice red short dress till
her knees…
J.P:Naina ji aap bahut bahut beautiful lag rahe ho…rose flower ki tarah…
NAINA:Thanks!!So guys main ja rahi hoon..tum aa rahe hoo..
J.P:Haan mein abhi aata hoon…

He goes inside the changing room and gets ready fastly..and is about to leave when..sid who is also there changing his clothes stops him..

SIDDANTH:Arre yeh tum kya pehene hue hoo..(he was wearing a red shirt and red pant)
J.P:Kyun yeh achcha nehi hain….mugal saraye mein ladkiya isse dekh kar mere peeche padthi thi..haan!!
SIDDANTH:No..its good..but u knw aaj ka party ka theme kya hain..
J.P:Theme…

There wasn't any theme of the party,but yes the dress code was red and black which was decided by armaan (like the day of their first valentines day party)..…

Sid was planning something mischievous….

SIDDANTH:Haan theme…aaj ka party ka theme hain……………(he was showing his back to J.P and he got an idea)….superheros ..(he turns around)
J.P:Superheros…
SIDDANTH:Haan ..toh tumhe wohi costume pehnana hoga…
J.P:Achcha……. par mere paas toh nehi hain..
SIDDANTH:Main hoona..main tumhara help kar doonga..…

He helped J.P with his costume ………and it was none other than SUPERMAN..

His shirt was tucked inside and he was tied around his neck a dupatta flowing at back,..he sticked "J" on his shirt,last but not least he was wearing his underwear on it..

J.P:Yeh kis liye….
SIDDANTH:Yeh superman ka style hain….

After getting ready,J.P posed him and asked..

J.P:Main kaisa hoon sidhantji..
SIDDANTH:Superhero ke bhi hero lag rahe hoo…(he was trying hard to control his laughter)
J.P:Aap kya banne hoo..
SIDDANTH:Main…….main ..spiderman..spiderman..
J.P:Makad manush..maine yeh film mugal saraye mein dekhi hain..bhojpuri mein..apne ravi bhaiya ki awaaz thi..bahut achcha tha….
SIDDANTH:Ravi bhaiya..
J.P:Ravi bhaiya,,ravi kissen bhai,,hamare bhojpuri ke top hero hain….hamare guru hain,,,hum bhi ek na ek din unke tarah banenge..jai ho ravi bhaiya ki..
SIDDANTH:Good…good,,
J.P:Aap bahut achche hain sidhant ji..par aap kab ready honge..main kuch madad kar doo..
SIDDANTH:Noo…mein baad mein…ready ho jaunnga…
NAINA:J.P tum aa rahe hoo..(from outside)
J.P:Mein party mein ja raha hoon….flower ji bula rahi hain..(hes about to go when sid stops)
SIDDANTH:Nehi abhi nehi..tum baad me..
J.P:Baad mein kyun..
SIDDANTH:Wooh !!!!!!!!! sabko surprise milega tumhe dekh kar…
J.P:Haan…surprise..
SIDDANTH:Achcha tum yahan raho…baad mein aa joau…mein chaltha hoon..ok..baad mein aa jana……(going out and talking)warna surprise nehi rahega..!!!

He was left wondering and didn't realise sid didn't changed clothes..

Outside changing room..

NAINA:J.P nehi ayega..
SIDDANTH:Wooh…baad mein aa jayega..haina..
J.P: (Talking from inside)Haan haan flowerji aap dono jayiye mein baad mein aajaunga..

Naina is a bit confused but she was involved in her dress and admiring her beauty that she ignored and sid was thinking how much fun it would be in party when J.P enters…they leave..

Inside…

J.P:Flowerji toh dekh kar mujh par "latoo" ho jayegi…

IMAGINATION…

J.P is in center of the canteen,all are staring at him and cheering…
Naina comes to him and starts singing…


Naina coming near him and roaming around him and dancing…
Latoo Latoo Latoo Main,Us Pe Latoo
Latoo Latoo Latoo Mein,Us Pe Latoo


J.P is acting like he is flying like superman with in his hand,,sometimes rightside and sometimes left side…naina is dancing..
Palak Kyun Phadke Re, Dil Kyun Dhadke Re
Thirak Si Jaoon Re, Kyun Mein Sharamaan Re

Someguys come and try to take naina forcefully,J.P comes and releases her..naina is singing and dancing..
Aaj Ye Kaun Aaya, Khushbuwon Sa Chaaya
Chal Mein Ghungroo Hai Mausam Hai

All surrounds J.P,with one punch with his hand,they are fallen on ground.. naina comes near him and kisses on cheek…
Latoo Latoo Latoo Main, Us Pe Latoo
Latoo Latoo Latoo Mein, Us Pe Latoo

J.P seeing naina kissing faints,,,,naina is worried and tries to wake him up..

IMAGINATION END..

Out of dream..

J.P:Hayye….naina ji hum aa rahe hain..


At canteen….

Sid and naina enters…

SIDDANTH:Hai armaan..(sid was wearing a casual red t-shirt and black trousers)
ARMAAN:Hye sid ,hye naina..welcome..

The canteen was decorated nicely with white and red ballons here and there,a small banner "welcome Dr.armaan" was being fixed by atul,all tables and chairs were kept side providing lots of space ..

NAINA:Wow!!its nice..(looking around)
ARMAAN:Baaki sab kahan hain…
SIDDANTH:Just coming…

They go and have a seat..

ATUL:Armaan.kaisa hain..(asking about banner)
Atul was wearing his trademark dress which is red full hand t-shirt,black collar coming out and black trousers..but still was looking really cute.
ARMAAN:Iski kya zaroorat hain..
ATUL:Arre mera bhai..tere liye toh main kuch bhi karoonga,,
ARMAAN:Thanks champ….waise anjy kahan hain..
ATUL:Pata nehi yaar mein bhi uske liye hi wait kar raha hoon….mujhe bulake wooh khud late ho gayi…pata nehi kuch problem toh nehi hain na….main ja kar dekh aau…
Armaan was seeing at atul with a mischevious look…atul saw him..
ATUL:Mera..mera.. matlab…
ARMAAN:Champ.!!!!!!!!!! (he tried to tickle him playfully)

Jiah and abhi enters,,,

JIAH:Hye Dr.Armaan….(giving hand to armaan)
But armaan avoids her and hugs abhi..
ARMAAN:Hye………abhi,..tum mere liye thoda jaldi nehi aa sakthe.. (in girly style)
Jiah was a bit shocked….
ABHI: (abhi answeres casually)Wooh jiah ko kuch shopping karna tha..
ARMAAN: (Facing jiah)Oh hyeee…jiah,u r dress is just awesome dear….(she was wearing a red western dress–same like what she wore on her anniversary party in DMG and abhi was wearing a red shirt and black trousers)
JIAH:Thanks…. (a bit uncomfortably)
Jiah sees someone and goes to meet her..seeing once back at armaan and abhi..

Atul was standing a bit side till now and joins abhi and armaan..who were busy talking/say whispering..

ABHI:Tum kya kar rahe the…
ARMAAN:Maine kya kiya….(facing atul)champ maina kuch kiya..(atul was confused and noded head in "no")
ARMAAN (Talking again to abhi who was staring angrily at him)Arree..cool…waise tumne nikki se baat kiya…
ABHI:Nehi yaar..mauka hi nehi mila,,,waise wooh abhi tak kyun nehi aayi….
ARMAAN:Phone toh kiya tha..pata nehi…achcha tum apna phone number do mujhe..
ABHI:Kyun..
ARMAAN:Chup chap do…(he gives him and he feeds in his mobile)
ABHI:Par tum mujhse aake baat karsakthe hona..
ARMAAN:Agar nikki ko pata chal gaya toh wooh mujhe maar dalegi..waise wooh tumse naraz hain..mujhse bhi ho jayegi,,phir mat kehna,,..(imitating him) "armaan ab main kya karoo.".
ABHI:Theek hain …theek hain..chillao mat..koi sunlega..

Yes someone indeed was trying to listen to their conversation..but couldn't hear it,he was roaming around both,,and they were ignoring him and also unknowing pushing and punching him..hes ATUL..

ATUL:Yeh armaan abhi se kya baat kar raha hain..mujhe kuch sunayi nehi de raha…

ABHI:Kya isse nikki wapas aajayegi..
ARMAAN: (keeping hand on his shoulder)Sure yaar..in ladkiyon ke mamle mein ,mein expert hoon..wooh "hum" jaise ladkon ke peeche peeche aayegi ..dekhlena..
ABHI: "Hum" jaise,,,,
ARMAAN:Matlab "tumhare" peeche ..o.k…..Dekho main tumhe phone kartha rahoonga …bluetooth pe rahon,,jaise mein kahunga tum waise hi karoo..theek hain na..
ABHI:Ok...
ARMAAN:Waise tumne yeh suna toh hoga "6 din,ladki in",par mera concept thoda alag hain… "1 din,6 ladki in"..wow!!!!!!!! kitna mazaa aayega..hain na!!!
Abhi stares at him…and armaan gives him a look saying "what?"

Atul with great difficulty heard the last line…
ATUL:Maine yeh line kahin suna hua hain…..nehi nehi..maine toh isse dekha hua bhi hain..armaan…

ARMAAN: (listening to his voice,a bit shocked and he jumps)Champ!!!!!!!Tu yahan kya kar raha hain..
ATUL:(coming near)Kuch nehi..waise yeh tum Dr.Modi se kya khusur-phusur kar rahe the..
ARMAAN:Hum… kuch…kuch bhi toh nehi…
ABHI:Main chaltha hoon….bye Dr.Joshi…
Arman signals him to be on phone….atul sees it…
ATUL:Yeh tum kya kar rahe hoon..
ARMAAN:Kuch nehi …………vo dekho anjy aa gayi…

Atuls who was suspicious till now about armaan and abhi,forgot everything and was seeing anjali who was wearing a gorgeous red starpless evening gown..coming from door ..he was seeing her without blinking….armaan silently left him so that he again doesnt ask about him and abhi..

ANJALI:Atul!!!!!!!! Atul!!!!!!!!(waving her hand infront of his eyes)
He saw anjali and came back to senses,he saw the door again to know if this is true..
ANJALI:Aise kya dekh rahe hoo..
ATUL: (He storked his hair.).wooh..tum bahut bahut sundar lag rahi hoon anjali…
ANJALI:Thanks atul(blushing)


Sid and naina were sitting..

NAINA:Sid…wooh J.P abhi tak kyun nehi aaya….tum uske saath the na?
SIDDANTH:Wooh……….(trying to avoid her and divert the topic)dekho yuvi aaya hain..
SIDDANTH:Hye yuvi…aao na ..baitho..(he makes him sit with naina and he leaves to avoid naina and her questioning again)
NAINA:Tumne toh kaha tumhe party mein interest nehi hain..toh kyun aaye ho….
YUVRAAJ:Tumhare liye……..
Naina who was having a drink spills it out..and sees at yuvi with wide eyes..
YUVRAAJ: (yuvi smiles)Mazak tha..
NAINA:Tum mazak bhi karthe ho..mujhe toh laag tumhe sirf ek hi kaam aata hain-(shouting in his ears) ghoorna.!!!!(she goes leaving him alone making yuvi shocked)

Nikki enters…

NIKKI:Hye armaan..someone is looking handsome..(nikki was wearing a red and black dress)
Armaan was looking handsome in his red shirt,black trousers and black overcoat(same like valentines day party dress),he turned away from her,,
NIKKI:Kya hua ..
ARMAAN:Tum itna late kyun aayi ho..main tumse naraz hoon…
NIKKI:Tarffic jam tha..sorry…sorry…sorry..please sorry…(armaan tries to avoid her ..but)
ARMAAN:Achcha chodo chalo aao…

He takes her to table where atul-anjali and abhi-jiah were sitting already,he asks her to sit beside abhi..
But she avoids….armaan tries to sit beside abhi….jiah sees it……..

JIAH:Nikki….please tum baitho na..please(drags her and makes her sit so that armaan cant sit)
ARMAAN:Main "abhi" aata hoon.(he stresses on word "abhi" and signals him to be on phone,atul sees it and whispers something)
ANJALI:Kya hua atul..
ATUL:Kuch..kuch nehi anjali…..
Abhi was seeing nikki and trying to talk to her,jiah was busy with her phone and she left as there was no signal…abhi tries to talk to nikki..while atul-anjali were busy..
ABHI:Nikki..
Nikki turns around..
Just then Armaan calls abhi and he lifts it….

ARMAAN:Hello charlie..tango here..1..2..3..can u hear me..
ABHI:Hmm.. (whispering)
NIKKI:Aapne kuch kaha Dr.Modi..(sarcastically)
ABHI:Nikki wooh…..(armaan says on phone-"kuch nehi",abhi without thinking says the same)
kuch nehi..(nikki sees away from him)
ABHI: (abhi talking to armaan on phone)kya..par mujhe usse baat karna hain
ARMAAN:Nehi tum usse baat nehi karoge..
ABHI:Par kyun..
ARMAAN:Kyunki mein keh raha hoo..
ABHI:Nehi..main usse baat karoonga..(facing nikki and talking to her)nikki mujhe tumse baat karni hain..
NIKKI:Kya??
(on phone)
ARMAAN:Mat karo..
ABHI:Main karunga..
ARMAAN:Nehi,,
ABHI:Haan..
ARMAAN:Nehi..
ABHI:Haan …
ARMAAN:Jiah ..(he sees jiah coming again)
ABHI: Nehi
ARMAAN:Haan .
ABHI:Nehi ..
ARMAAN:Haan ..
NIKKI:Dr.modi aap theek toh hai na?
ABHI:Main haan..nehi..nehi..haan..jiah…
NIKKI:Jiah..
ABHI:Mera matlab…
NIKKI:whatever..(she ignore him)
(on phone)
ARMAAN:Maine kahan na..usse baat mat karo..toh kyun kiya tumne…
ABHI:Arre yaar..sorry..ab se jo tum kahoge main wahin karoonga…promise..
ARMAAN:Toh chalo dekhthe hain…Seedhe baito….(abhi sits straight)..left dekho(he sees left)….right dekho(he sees right)..upar dekho..(he sees up)…naak mein ungli daloo..(and poor abhi,he is not as intelligent as saif ali khan and keeps his hand in his nose) ….(armaan whos seeing is laughing like hell…………….hahahahha!!!!!!!!! )
JIAH: (coming to table and seeing abhi)Baby…are u o.k..
ABHI: (he removes his hand quickly)Ya..i am fine………..(talking back to armaan)…armaan…..main toh tumhe..
ARMAAN:Just checking…charlie…over and out..(he cuts call and is laughing)

J.P enters..
All are seeing at him and laughing …..and he is confused but still is feeling he is best dressed and showing off!!!

J.P:Hello ji..(wishing all)

All are looking weirdly at him..

J.P:Hye ji…arre sab mujhe hi dekh rahe hain..shayad mein bahut handsome lag raha hoon..hehehe!!

NAINA:Yeh J.P ne kya pehna hua hain….
SIDDANTH:Mujhe kya pata..(trying to avoid)


ANJALI:Yeh Mr.prasad ne kya pehna hain…
Atul,nikki,armaan and jiah looks at him strangely…
ABHI:Yeh zaroor sid ki shaitani hogi..i know him…main aaj usse chodunga nehi..
JIAH:Its o.k jannu,..leave him…..


J.P:Hello nainaji …
NAINA:J.P yeh tum ne jo pehna hain..
J.P:Bahut achche hain na..humko pata tha aapko zaroor pasand aayega..
SIDDANTH:Haan ,tum bahut achche lag rahe ho..(trying to handle)
J.P:Thank u sidhantji (looking at him,sid tries to turn his face) aap nehi hote toh mujhe yeh sab kaun batata…..
Naina understood sid did all this and give him a killing look..and sid asks her to take it litely and naina smiles at J.P artificially…..J.P feels happy and tries to impress her more..

J.P:Main aapke liye kuch lata hoon nainaji..(he goes towards counter to get drink)..
All are laughing at him,and he is confused…
J.P:Yeh sab log mujhe dekh kar has kyun rahe hain..

He realises that no one apart from him is wearing such costume and is embarrassed and tries to cover him self,,but many staff..ward boys were around him and teasing along with sid,,,all were laughing …and sid was making more and more fun of him,,trying to pull his dress ….and J.P was feeling very embarrassed and was trying to avoid……

Hahaahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Suddenly sid sees someone coming from door and stares at her…it was tamanna..she was wearing a red salwar and was looking simple yet beautiful…her hair flowing ,,,,on other hand she was a bit nervous…remembering her conversation with his father in home…

TAMANNA:Mujhe nehi jana hain party mein baaba..
UMAR BHAI:Tammu tum kyun nehi jana chahthi..akhir wooh tumhare liye bhi toh hain….
TAMANNA:Par baaba…
UMAR BHAI:Tammu maine hamesha chaha ki tum sabse achchi doctor banoo,sab tumhari tareef kare aur jab Dr.armaan ne tumhare liye party rakhi toh tum nehi jaogi….nehi tammu tumhe jana hoga……………mere liye…
TAMANNA:Theek hain baaba…

Sid left J.P and moved towards tamanna and was near to her and about to talk when……..

ABHI: (flaring up) Yeh sab tumne kiya na..?
SIDDANTH:Haan……….(without realsing what abhi was asking)
ABHI:Mujhe pata tha…u stupid..idiot…sanjeevni mein aake kuch din bhi nehi hue….tumne apni kartoothe shuru kar di..tum kabhi nehi shudroge….kitni baar kahan maine..par tum(seeing sid,he wasn't listening to him)…….sid…sid…….
SIDDANTH:Kya….bhai…..(he was seeing tamanna and was smiling)
ABHI:Mein yahan tumhe galiya de raha hoon aur tum has rahe ho..
SIDDANTH:Kya…
ABHI:J.P. ka dress ka idea tumhara tha…
SIDDANTH: (realising)Wooh..bhai…..sorry…main toh bas mazak,,,,,…..
ABHI:Agar tumne yeh sab jaldi se theek nehi kiya toh………. tumhe kal se auto se nehi……..
chalkar jana hoga……do u understand………..(he leaves)
Tamanna who was already tensed,listening to this conversation and seeing J.P was a bit afraid of sid thinking what he will do with her…
ABHI:Hye..miss gayab……….waise tum aaj sundar lag rahi ho is dress mein…..
TAMANNA:Haan..thanks..(moving away from him)mein jati hoon ..bye…
SIDDANTH: Isse kya ho gaya…….oh no J.P ….nehi toh bhai toh mujhe chodenge nehi..

He goes near J.P who was almost crying,he made all others to go and made him sit…

SIDDANTH: Dekho dude..sorry…main toh bas mazak …
J.P:Aap bade shehron ke log toh hum jaise gaav ke logon ke saath hamesha hi mazak karthe hain…
SIDDANTH: Nehi dude……..really,,,
J.P:Sidhantji…its o.k , aap ne mazak kiya,hum mazak bane,,,aur kuch toh baaki nehi hain na…
He goes away sadly..
NAINA:Tumhe aisa nehi karna chahiye tha sid…
SIDDANTH:Arre yaar gadbad ho gayi…
TAMANNA: (tamanna saw this and talks)Tum toh hamesha se aise karthe hoo,,tumne ek baar bhi soche uske dil par kya beethi hogi…kabhi socha tumhari stupid si mazak ki wajah se usse kitni takleef hui hogi…tumne kaise pata chalega…..jab koi tumpe ungli uthaye toh bahut takleef hota hain….par tumhe toh bas….(she actually showed her frustation on sid)
SIDDANTH: (sid left wondering)Ab maine kya kiya,,,
NAINA:Its ok.sid…shayad wooh khud pareshan hain aur kissi aur ki bhadas tum pe nikaal diya…relax…sab theek ho jayega..

Party time..!!!!!

Armaan goes to center and spotlight is on him….he starts talking..

ARMAAN:Hye guys thanks to everyone who came here….so now lets start the party!!!!!!!!! MUSIC…….!!!!

Everyone starts dancing and enjoying,,,,jiah pulled abhi and was dancing with him,,nikki was sitting alone as atul-anjali too were dancing…so were sid and naina..yuvi was sitting calmly and enjoying his drink and tamanna was with J.P and was trying to console him,,


ARMAAN:Ok guys…now lets do something different.…..abhi lights off ho jayenge aur sab log apni jagah se jayenge apne partner ko doondne..…jab lights wapas aayenge toh jo bhi aapke saamne hain..wooh hi aapke partner hain….now lets start…

Armaan takes nikki with him and also tamanna,J.P wasnot in mood and he didn't come,yuvi wasn't interested so he decides to go,gets up ..but..

ARMAAN:Now…….Lights off………


Lights go off…

Everyone are scattered trying to find there partner,its dark and one could hardly see..
Armaan gets an idea and he spills the drink on jiah..

JIAH: Idiot,,.,,dekh ke nehi chal sakthe..
ARMAAN:Sorry..!!(changing voice)
JIAH: Stupid!!!!(she goes to washroom to clean her stain)

Lights come……………..

Atul was with anjali,sid was with tamanna,yuvi who was going stood still when lights went off and naina was catching him due to fear..,seeing lights leaves him and they both are staring at eachother..,nikki was alone and so was abhi,,others who didn't got partners were trying to ask others …armaan sees it and calls abhi..

ARMAAN:Idiot,,kya dekh rahe ho,,jao nikki ke paas aur dance ke liye poocho…
ABHI:Par jiah,,,
ARMAAN:Wooh yahan nehi hain…jao ……..now..
ABHI:Ok..

Abhi goes near nikki and asks for dance,she tries to avoid but all were already with their partners and ready to dance and she couldn't find armaan nor jiah..so she had no option and accepts unwantedly…

ARMAAN:Now everyone………….enjoy……………………

The lights get dimmed and all are dancing….the song starts playing..


The four couples were deeply lost in each other…

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Atul-anjali dancing

Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan
Nikki-abhi dancing

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Yuvi-naina dancing

Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Sid-tamanna dancing

Everyone remembered all those lovely moments in their life…


Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Their first meeting near busstop,how they both fought …(sid)

Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
When he saved her on first day falling from terrace…(yuvi)

Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
How sid consoled her in fire escape…(tamanna)


Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
How he rescued her,fought and also got hurt his arm,,
She was keeping her hand on his armm slides side remembering that it might be painful to him…(naina)

Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Their fightings,how he catched her from falling everytime…(yuvi)

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
The day he saw her in saree in ramleela…(sid)

Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
How he helped her taking out her dupatta,,,(tamanna)

Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
How he dropped her back home…(naina)



Kehna Hi Kya.., Tera Dakhal Na Koyi
How many things he did for anjali,but she ignored him,,,(atul)

Dil Ko Dikha.., Dil Ki Shakal Ka Koyi
When they went to camp..how they fought,teased each other ,,but still loved.…(abhi)

Dil Se Bhi Meri, Ik Shart Yeh Aisi..
Atul had sold cycle for her karvachaut gift.,,,but she never gave him chance and kept him away from her..(anjali)

Laage Jeet Si Mujhako, Yeh Haar Hai Kaisi..
How they both confessed their love in barn..but abhi said about his marriage…(nikki)

Everyone was engrossed in each other and dancing…
They were singing and actually feeling those words too…….

Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, (sid)
Kyun Bekaraar Hai (yuvi)
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, (anjali-naina)
Pyaar Hai Shaayad… (Nikki-tamanna)
Jaadu Sawaar Hai, Na Ikhtiyaar Hai(Atul)
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad(Abhi)



Armaan was happy seeing atul-anjali and nikki-abhi dancing ,he was on cloud nine and he felt that the promise he made to ridhima will come true soon….

He was seeing around suddenly,,he saw in the crowd ,a girl who was wearing a red flowy dress(yes the same dress ridhima wore on valenines day party),he searched for her here and there and she came near him and gave her hand…it was RIDHIMAA..
As soon as he touched her hand..,,they were in a empty canteen,,,no one around him and they started dancing …spotlight on both of them and song started playing again..

ARMAAN:Pyaar Hai Shaayad…..

RIDHIMAA:Kuchh Khaas Hai…….. Kuchh Paas Hai,……..Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai…….

ARMAAN:Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi..

They both were looking like made for each other ..lost in their eyes,,,never want to get separate…..
Armaan hugged her tightly never wanted to get apart again,ridhima too hugged him tightly,,,,,,,

Precap:
NIKKI:Anjy……….(in serious tone)hume armaan ko sach bata dena chahiye…..
ANJALI:Nikki,,yeh tum kya keh rah ho..(shocked)
ATUL:Anjali shayad nikki sahi keh rahi hain.. ab usse sachayi bata deni chahiye…


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also see my new title song and sad version of asmani rang,,heres link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1263364&TPN=4
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i loved it yaar................
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Hye guys……..thanks yogitha...s
Thanks to each and everyone who commented..
Heres my next part………hope u like it………..
Please do read it and review..appreciation/criticism both are welcomed….
Even a sentence or a word…please do comment…
Thanks to all who read it,commented, "like"d it ,also to the silent readers…
Really appreciated…
Sri..

ARMAAN-RIDHIMAA : PART 7

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"

At canteen……

The song ended,everyone clapped….all came back to senses ,
Yuvi left naina,also the party in hurry not looking back as though he remembered something,naina was confused looking at him,,,
Sid and tamanna too parted….tamanna was a bit uncomfortable…
Anjali was happy,but atul left her and went away thinking she might feel bad ,anjali was left confused…

Armaan too came back to senses and looked for ridhima but couldn't find her ,it was his imagination,
was sad and a tear escaped his eyes..but he was happy seeing his friends,,,..

ARMAAN:Yeh party toh bas ek bahana tha tum logon ko milane ka,paas le aane ka…lagtha hain ab jaldi hi sab theek ho jayega…

Abhi-nikki were still lost in eachother,,,it was after a long time they came together and spent time with eachother,though they didn't talk ,one could feel the other…they didn't move from their positions..
Armaan was happy for both of them but he sees jiah coming,,he signed abhi and tried to call but he was lost in nikki,,,,so he needed to be quick.. and goes to them….

ARMAAN:Abhi…Ek minute yahan aao....mujhe kuch case discuss karna hain..(they both come back to senses and leave eachother,nikki was feeling uncomfortable)
ABHI:Kya hain…
Armaan drags him to a side…
ABHI:Kya kar rahe ho tum..tumne hi kaha tha uske pass jao..aur ab..
ARMAAN:Wohh..
Before he could say…..
ABHI:Main jaa raha hoon,,(he turns around)
ARMAAN:Meri baat suno..
He catches from back and is pulling towards him…
ARMAAN:Dekho meri baat suno..wooh ……………jia..

Jiah comes near nikki and asks..

JIAH:Abhi kahan hain,,??
NIKKI:Wooh shayad armaan ke saath hain…
JIAH:Armaan….!!

She sees both of them and is shocked again..
JIAH:Abhi…….armaan,,,,,,,,,,,(armaan leaves and both are standing a bit far now)
ABHI:Wooh jiah …hum bas case discuss kar rahe the…ek Saath ….
ARMAAN:I mean saath saath ,,hain na abhi,,,,
ABHI:Haan bas saath saath,,,(realising what armaan and he said just now)what???????
ARMAAN:Main abhi aati hoon……..how silly of me,,… I mean aata hoon,,,bye.. (armaan leaves)
JIAH: (jiah is angry and frustated)Abhi…..main ghar jaa rahi hoon,,,
ABHI:Jiah ..wooh armaan toh…
JIAH:Tum aa rahe ho ya nehi…ok fine……….Main jaa rahi hoon..bye…

Armaan comes back..
ABHI:Armaan yeh sab……..
ARMAAN:Chillax dude..enjoy the party,,,
ABHI: (to himself)Tumhe nehi pata,jiah agar hyper ho gayi toh..usi tabiyat phir se kharab ho jayegi.. aur mein yeh nehi chahtha jo pehle hua hain………………woh doobara ho..

All friends were sitting and chatting and armaan was busy talking and laughing with abhi….

NIKKI:Anjali,,armaan ko yahan wapas dekhkar bahut achcha laga..
ANJALI:Haan nikki,,,aisa lag raha hain ki ab sab kuch pehle jaisa ho jayega…
ATUL:Wooh humse itna pyaar jo kartha hain…aur hum bhi toh usse karthe hain…wooh humse door kabhi nehi reh payega..
ANJALI:Haan,,,(feeling happy atul talked to him atleast,she was worried when he left her after dance)
NIKKI:Anjy……….(in serious tone)hume armaan ko sach bata dena chahiye…..
ANJALI:Nikki,,yeh tum kya keh rah ho..(shocked)
ATUL:Anjali shayad nikki sahi keh rahi hain.. ab usse sachayi bata deni chahiye…
ANJALI:Tum log pagal ho gaye ho kya?? Dekho usse ,ek baar uske taraf dekho..wooh khush hain yahan..sanjeevni mein..hum sabke saath…tum dono chahthe ho kya wooh kuch aisa kare ki hum usse dobara kho de…
NIKKI:Par anjy…hum kab tak usse sach chupayenge..usse ek na ek din toh…
ANJALI:No…usse kabhi bhi nehi pata chalna chahiye….kabhi nehi…..agar usne kuch kardiya toh ..nehi main aise nehi hone dongi,,(getting tensed)atul-nikki tumne mujhse vaada kiya tha..ki tum usse kabhi nehi bataoge…hain na..nehi bataoge na..please,,warna papa……….aur ridhima……….nehi..(more tensed and crying a bit)
ATUL:Anjali ..relax.. hum nehi batayenge,,,
NIKKI:Haan anjy..nehi batayenge…cool,,,
ANJALI:Promise..(cooling now)
NIKKI:Haan promise…
ATUL:Meri sheena ki kasam anjali …please……….. ab toh hason..
ANJALI:Atul……..(she smiles a bit)
ATUL:Tum hasthi hui bahut achchi lagthi hoon…..
NIKKI:Ahem..ahem,,aur main..
ATUL:Tum bhi..bahut…achchi lagthi ho..(blushing)

Anjali excuses herself to get a drink…

ANJALI: (to herself)Kash armaan ko kabhi sachayi ka pata na chale…


All were enjoying the party and dancing…

Sid was feeling guilty,o.k just a little bit,,also he was afraid that abhi will take his car.. and he hated the idea of going by INDIAN auto,imagining it how it would be going in auto with driver in slums etc.…
SIDDANTH: No ways…main nehi jaounga….comeone sid,,do something…
So thought to cheer J.P…he went near him..

SIDDANTH: J.P I am really sorry…(he kept his hands to ears and was asking genuinely)
Tamanna was watching it and she felt funny and happy seeing that he realised his mistake…
SIDDANTH:Really really sorry..tum agar chaho toh mein bhi super man ban jau..(he acts like superman and flys here and there)
(J.P had forgiven him as he himself was naughty and did lots of pranks ,but first time he was the one to fall for his own prank,he was sad,but now he was back to normal,smiling silently and was trying to pull sid's leg and to give it back to him in his own style..)
J.P:Par aap toh makad maanush the na….aap toh ek bulding se doosre bulding ko rassi se chadthe hain…udthe thodi na hain..
SIDDANTH:Haan yaar spiderman toh fly nehi kartha…main bhi na,,....(he didn't realise he was being fooled )
He acts like spiderman to cheer J.P..but all were laughing at him and so was J.P that too loudly..
Sid was busy doing stuff,but then realised that hes being watched by all,came to senses and also laughs but artficially to cover his embarrasment..,,but he was happy that J.P had forgiven him and now he didn't need to go by auto atleast..….
SIDDANTH:Uff!!!bach gaya…(seeing J.P smile)
Tamanna was happy seeing it,,,she herself didn't know why she was being attracted to sid who was sometimes stupid,mischevious,flirty….. yet so sweet and caring….

Sid-naina-J.P

Sid and J.P patched up and were sitting with naina..
J.P:Yeh yuvi bhaiya chale gaya kya?
NAINA:Mujhe yeh pata nehi chala ki wooh dafod party mein aaya kaise..
SIDDANTH:Par tum toh uske saath dance kar rahi thi wooh bhi chipak ke..(sid and J.P were laughing)
NAINA:Dance my foot ..wooh toh bas main us par taras kha gayi thi…
J.P:Yeh A.J ji kahan hain…lagtha hain unki dosti bahut jamm gayi senior doctors ke saath..
SIDDANTH: Yeh uncle ,wooh log bhi uncle,,,,,,,,,haaha!!! (to himself)par yeh miss gayab kahan hain..

Outside sanjeevni………

We see a person's back and he is talking on phone…
VOICE:Aap sanjeevni jaldi aayiye…..abhi isi waqt…
He cuts the call and smiles to himself..


Anjali-armaan…
Anjali goes to get a drink……..

ARMAAN:Anjy….
ANJALI:Haan armaan…..(she was a bit tensed remembering about what they just talked and was avoiding armaan's gaze )
ARMAAN:Tum aaj bahut sundar lag rahi hoo…
ANJALI:Thanks ..ab kya baat hain..bolo..
ARMAAN:Nehi aur kuch nehi…
ANJALI:Armaan….dekho bato kya baat hain…
ARMAAN:Kahan na kuch nehi..
ANJALI:Armaan…dekho mein apne friends ke baare mein janthi hoon..ab bolo..
ARMAAN:Tum sach mein sabke baare main janthi ho…
ANJALI:Haan..kyun..sab friends ke baare mein toh janthi hoon tum,rahul,muski,nikki..sabke baare mein..
ARMAAN: (slowly)Aur atul…
ANJALI: (in flow not realising)Haan atul ke baare mein mere alawa kaun itni achchi tarah se jaan saktha hain….wooh toh mujhse itna pyaar….(stopping realising what she said)
ARMAAN:Aur tum……….anjy…….tum atul se pyaar karthi ho??
ANJALI: (avoiding)Armaan,…please main is baare mein baat nehi karna chahthi hoon…
ARMAAN:Par kyun…..tum usse pyaar nehi karthi….
ANJALI:Armaan…please
ARMAAN:Ok..Mujhe pata chala gaya hain….
ANJALI:Kya??
ARMAAN:Tum usse pyaar nehi karthi..
ANJALI:Nehi..
ARMAAN:Tum usse pyaar nehi karthi..
ANJALI:Nehi…armaan..
ARMAAN:Toh tum usse pyaar karthi ho..
ANJALI: (a bit loudly)Haan ,,,,haan ,,,,mein usse pyaar karthi hoon bahut pyaar karthi hoon..
ARMAAN:I know that…..(cooling enjoying his drink)
ANJALI:Armaan ..wooh…..
ARMAAN:Maine kisise kahan tha ki pyaar chuapaya nehi chupatha aur tum mujhse please chupane ki koshish mat karo…ab kaho tumne usse kyun nehi keha..
ANJALI:Kaise kahu……….usne hamesha mere liye itna kiya aur maine kya kiya usse ignore kiya,,usse sataya..usse itna dukh diya,,..i just took him for granted …pata nehi wooh mujhe abhi bhi pyaar kartha hain ya nehi..main uske layak hi nehi hoon….
ARMAAN:Same dialogue.…
ANJALI:Kya..
ARMAAN:Tum donoo na ..ekk number ke bewakoof hooo,,,,
ANJALI:Matlab…
ARMAAN:Wahan wooh aur yahan tum..dono pyaar toh karthe hain,,par batana nehi chahthe..
ANJALI:Main kuch nehi samjhi…..
ARMAAN:Arre wooh tumse bahut pyaar kartha hain…
ANJALI: (excitedly) Usne kahan hain tumse..
ARMAAN:Agar nehi kahega toh tum nehi manogi…….
ANJALI:Armaan please..
ARMAAN:Haann….. usne kahan…
ANJALI:Sach..
ARMAAN:Wooh tumse aaj bhi utna hi pyaar kartha hain jitna pehle kartha tha….par shayad tumhari tarah hi batane se darr raha hain…apne feelings ko chupa raha hain…..
She smiles..
ARMAAN:Anjy tum atul ko janthi ho na wooh pehle kadam badane se dartha hain…….aur shayad iss liye bhi ki wooh tumhare feelings ke baare main abhi bhi nehi jaantha….tumne usse hamesha ignore kiya hain…usse khul kar baat nehi kiya hain..
ANJALI:Main kya karoon armaan..main jab bhi koshish karthi hoon tho..wooh mujhse door jata hain...aaj bhi dance ke baad wooh chala gaya….
ARMAAN:Kyunki wooh tumhe pareshan nehi karna chahtha, …usse laga hoga ki agar wooh tumhare paas aane ki koshish karega toh tum phir se usse door ho jaogi..
ANJALI:Toh ab main kya karoon….
ARMAAN:Kya karoon matlab……..Jaake usse batao aur kya..
ANJALI:Wooh manega…….
ARMAAN:Wooh itna bhi bewakoof nehi hain..haan diktha thoda bahut hain……..
ANJALI:Armaan……..(angrily)
ARMAAN:Ohoh…possessive…
She gives him a killing look..
ARMAAN:Achcha baba …usse batado…aaj hi…
ANJALI:Par kaise batao…
ARMAAN:Muh se aur kis se,haan……..agar tum "kiss"…….i….. aur tareeke se kehna chachthi ho toh..no problem at all..bas atul ko thoda sambhal lena…..ok.
ANJALI:Armaan…tum na bahut shaitan ho gaye hoo..ridzy ko pata chal gaya na toh tumhari toh kair nehi…(in flow not knowing)
ARMAAN:Haan haan batao bato apni behen ko main dartha thodi hoon,,,mein bhi armaan mallik hoon….bulao usse ,,
ANJALI: (funnily to tease armaan )Dekho wahan ridzy,,,
ARMAAN: (not realising and not looking back) Basket dekho maine kuch nehi kahan ..promise,,yeh anjy ne sab…
ANJALI: Maine ..maine kya kiya…armaan…….. ridzy tum na iski baat mat sun….isse bahut maroo..
ARMAAN:Nehi basket…
They were fighting childishly not realising what they were doing…armaan looked back and to anjali..they both felt extremely sad and anjali mainly as she started it..
ANJALI: Sorry armaan..woh mein bas…
ARMAAN:Nehi anjy..its o.k……….(coming back to form)par haan tum atul ko zaroor kaho warna pata nehi tumhe apna pyaar kabhi milega ya nehi…..bahut logon ko toh pyaar milke bhi……..anyways…all the best anjy aur haan mujhe batao kya hua hain..ok..…..(he hugs her and goes )
ANJALI: Main apne pyaar ko ek baar kho chuki hoon apni wajah se,fir se nehi khoungi..
armaan,,promise…aur haan..tumhara pyaar tumhe jaldi hi wapas milega….shayad nikki aur atul sach kehrahe the….main armaan ko aise ghuthe nehi dekh sakthi…mujhe usse sach bata deni chahiye……..


Armaan was a bit sad and was standing alone,abhi saw him,came near him…

ABHI:Armaan kya hua..
ARMAAN:Nehi kuch nehi… .
ABHI: (knowing what hes thinking)Ridhima ki yaad aa rahi hain..
He noded…
ABHI:Armaan…….tum aur ridhima ek doosre se sacha pyaar karthe ho na….
He gave him a questioning look and then noded again..
ABHI:Toh…kya tum yeh chahthe ho ki wooh dukhi ho..
ARMAAN:Nehi..kabhi nehi..main uske ankhon mein ek aanson bhi nehi dekh saktha….kabhi nehi..
ABHI:Tumhara pyaar tumhara takat hain,bharosa hain,vishwaas hain,,,….kamjori nehi…. wooh yahi hain tumhare saath …..hain na …….agar tum hi himaat har jaouge toh wooh toh akeli ho jayegi aur aisi halat mein uska saath kaun dega…
ARMAAN:Hmm…
ABHI:Tum apne upar bharosa rakho aur dekho sab theek ho jayega….aur ridhima bhi..
ARMAAN:Thanks abhi……….
ABHI:Its ok….
ARMAAN: (armaan was back to normal)Waise charlie..lagtha hain tum mujhse bhi expert hoo…… tumhe meri help ki kya zaroorat?(abhi gave him a "why"look)haan bhai hum toh bas ek ladki se hi khush hain aur aap toh do-do ko handle karthe karthe experienced ho gaye honege..hain na…
Now abhi was angry and his face was red..
ARMAAN: (keeping hand and controlling him)Relax….its joke…maarne ka irada hain kya…….
Achcha agar tum itna janthe ho toh ….. abhi tak yahin atke hue kyun ho..jau nikki se baat karo,usko manao, apne pyaar ka ehsaas jatao.…tum bhi toh usse sacha pyaar karthe hona and I know she will be urs…forever…
ABHI:Par agar usne baat nehi kiya toh…
ARMAAN: Koshish ..agar koshish hi nehi karoge toh kaise pata chalega..try try till u suceed..aur waise ladkiya bahut sensitive aur emotional hoti hain..agar hum unke saamne thodha rooke ,thoda emotional hokee ….
Abhi saw him again with a look..
ARMAAN: I mean sachche dil se kaha toh wooh zaroor maan jayegi….cry cry till u suceed….waise yeh hamare liye ek advantage hain…. (smiling)
Abhi saw him and thought for something…..armaan was thinking that this time abhi will not leave him for sure and he was in a position to run…but..
ABHI:Shayad tum theek keh rahe ho..agar maine koshish hi nehi kee toh…kaise pata chalega..ok done tango…main aaj hi usse baat karne ki koshish karoonga….lets go..
ARMAAN: (feeling relaxed)Good…

Armaan and abhi joins others…anjali too was back..

ARMAAN:So guys kaisa hain party…
ANJALI:Great yaar..
NIKKI:Superb!!!!
ARMAAN:Thank u ..thank u ..(he sits)
ANJALI:Waise bahut dino ke baad hum sabne itna mazaa kiya…
ATUL:Yaad hain jab humne last time party kee thi,,,..rahul aur muskaan ki breakup party,,,
ANJALI:Uff!!!kya hungama hua tha…
ATUL:Tab toh,,hamare armaan ki yaaddash bhi nehi thi…
ARMAAN:Ab toh aa gayi na…
NIKKI:Haan ussi ki toh hame bahut afssos hain..
ARMAAN:Nikki…(hitting her playfully)
NIKKI:Oops sorry!!(abhi was happy seeing her) Achcha mein toh nehi thi na,main toh rajasthan gayi thi,,,
ABHI:Mere saath…. (joins them,nikki looked away)
ANJALI: (trying to divert)Aur muski toh poori pagal thi,,,
ARMAAN:Haan usne saare gifts bhi jala diya…
ATUL:Pagal toh wooh nehi,ridhima ho gayi thi,,,usne sharab jo pee liya tha aur….
Pata nehi kya kya kaha… hum toh usse rokne ki koshish kar rahe the..par wooh toh ruk hi nehi rahi thi…hain na anjali…(not realising he might hurt armaan)
ANJALI:Atul…!!!!!(she was already feeling bad what she did a bit earlier and now)
ATUL:Armaan..main toh bas aise hi…
ARMAAN:Nehi champ!!its o.k ,,,main bas abhi aata hoon,(he goes away,feeling again sad hearing ridhimas name)
NIKKI:Atul..ek baar soch ke toh baat karthe..
ABHI: Nikki..ismein atul ki kya galthi hain…..ridhima armaan ki takat hain,kamjori nehi,(repeating his words)hum sab usse aur kamjor nehi karna chahiye,balki hume uske saath dena chahiye..tabhi armaan phir se normal hoga….
ANJALI:Haan Mr.Modi ,I think so..(a bit sad thinking of armaan,ridhima and now what shud she do)
ABHI:Lagtha hain aap logon ne mujhe abhi tak accept nehi kiya….
ANJALI:Nehi Mr.Modi aisi koi baat nehi hain….sach…haina atul..
ATUL:Haan ..hume khushi hui yeh jankar ki aapko armaan ki fikr hain….(sirf armaan ki-that's what he was thinking)
ABHI:So ………friends….(he gives his hand)
ANJALI:Friends…………………(anjy shakes hand and also atul but still he was suspicious about whats going between abhi-armaan)nikki.. (asking nikki)
NIKKI:Kuch ristey itni aasani se nehi judte anjy…
ABHI:Agar tum koshish hi nehi karoge toh kaise pata chalega ki yeh risthey judenge ya nehi…(repeating armaans words,nikki was a bit shocked listening to those words that too from abhi)
ANJALI:Mr.modi …humne aapke saath bahut galat kiya..we are very sorry..(swimming pool incident,posters etc,,,)
ATUL:Haan Mr.modi..sorry…
ABHI:Abhimanyu…sirf abhimanyu…aur haan galti insaan se hi hoti hain,, (seeing nikki)aur main bhi insaan hoon aur mujhse bhi bahut saari galtiya hui hogi….aapne maafi manga wahin kaafi hain..bahut log toh maafi mangne par bhi maaf nehi karthe,,,,…(facing them again) khair chodo..mujhe aapse koi shikayat nehi..
Nikki was startled by what abhi said just now,,was this a sign that he still loved her and wanted to be with her…but why did he do all that to her..why didn't he left jiah??all these questions ran around her mind disturbing her….
ANJALI:Thanks..
ABHI:U r welcome…
ANJALI:So abhimanyu tumhare aur jiah ke beech sab kaisa chal raha hain…
Hearing jiahs name..nikki came back to sense,,
ABHI:Fine…(to himself)yeh armaan kahan chala gaya..

Armaan was sad and was in corridor thinking of ridhima and it striked him suddenly that this is the correct time and made his way to shashanks cabin….

Sid was searching for tamanna…
He sees her sitting alone….he tries go near her,,but a little girl comes to her,,
She was the same girl-daughter of Mr.Avinash who was operated,their family too was invited,but her mother was taking care of her father,so she came here to say thanks to all…

GIRL:Aap ne bhi mere papa ko bachaya hain na..thank u (gives flower)
Tamanna was again feeling guilty ..
TAMANNA:Nehi ..maine ….
SIDDANTH: (cutting her words)Haan…miss gayab ne bhi ki hain aur maine bhi..(she also gives him flower and kisses him on cheek and goes away saying. thank u.)
SIDDANTH:kya hua…miss gayab..kahan kho gayi hain aap??(asking funnily)
TAMANNA:Sidhant…. thanks ……..and sorry..
SIDDANTH:Thanks…sorry……….kis liye..
TAMANNA:Sorry iss liye ki maine tumpe bina soche samjhe chillaya…
SIDDANTH: wow!!!!!its o.k(sitting on chair)Aur thanks kyun..
TAMANNA:Kyunki ..tumne mera saath diya hamesha……..Tum bahut achche ho sidhant..
SIDDANTH:Oh my god!!!tum aur meri bare mein nicely bol rahi..ho..waise kyun…
TAMANNA:Tumne J.P ko itna satane ke baad bhi usse maafi manga,usse manaya aur wooh bhi sab ke saamne..
SIDDANTH:Toh…
TAMANNA:Par maine itni badi galthi karne ke bawjood kissi se kuch neh kahan,,,main bahut buri hoon…(she was feeling guilty)
SIDDANTH:Please please..ab phir se apne naigara falls shuru mat kar dena…….tum apne aap ko itna underestimate kyun karthe hoo.. [Thanks arushi,this ones for u…for boosting me..] maine kahan na tumhari koi galti nehi hain…..
TAMANNA:Agar kisi ko pata chal gaya …..aur ……aur….mujhe sanjeevni se nikal diya toh..(she started crying)
SIDDANTH:Tum aise hi roti tahogi toh sab ko pata chal jayega…
She was seeing him with tearful eyes..
SIDDANTH:Okok..agar kisi ne kuch kaha toh ..main keh donga…..ki ….ki…maine kiya hain..waise bhi mujhe yahan rehne ka koi shauk nehi hain..mujhe toh america jana hain….wow!!!!kya idea hain..maine kabhi socha hi nehi,,,
TAMANNA:Sidhant,,nehi tum aisa kuch mat karo…
SIDDANTH:Toh………………tum rona band karo..
She smiles..
TAMANNA:That's good…ab kuch actual party ho jaye…..
TAMANNA:Matlab…

The scene changes………..

All staff and others are around sid and sid is in center..all singing..and dancing..
(All)
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright

Sid-Dance with me baby, wont you dance with me all night
Won't you party party party, wont you burn the floor all night

(All)
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright
Wanna naach all night

Naina,J.P,atul,anjali joins….and all are dancing around…tamanna is sitting and watching..

Sid-Pyaare pyaare lamhe, pyaari pyaari baatein
Atul-Sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
Naina-Ho goonjen hai dil ke taraane
Anjali-Machle hain geet suhaaneh

All-Behke hai saare deewane
Toh nach le nach le all night

Atul-Where's the party tonight
J.P-Somewhere down the road
Sid -Where's the party tonight
J.P-On the dance floor

All-Oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
Where's the party tonight


Armaan searching for file in shashanks cabin but couldn't find it …

Oh……… sajna, oh ……………sajna ……………………….
Tere bina main……………… nahin……………….


Sid-I Wanna go dancing ,all-where's the
Atul -take you out ,all-party tonight
Naina-I Wanna go dancing, all-where's the
Anajli-let's scream and shout ,all-party tonight


Naina-Jo meri manzil tha pagal jispe dil tha
Haan woh mujhe mil gaya
Sid-Phool jo mehka tha, jispe dil behka tha
Bahon mein woh khil gaya (going near tamanna)
Anjy-Mehki hain pyaar ki raahen
Behki hain saari nigahen
Atul-Phaili hain khwabon ki baahen
(All)
Toh nachle nachle all night

Sid goes near abhi and nikki and pulls them to join in dance....

Abhi-Where's the party tonight
J.P-Somewhere down the road
Abhi-Where's the party tonight
J.P-On the dance floor

All-Oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
Where's the party tonight

Sid-atul-abhi
Nacch, naach all night
Get it right….

Anjali-Meri yeh kahani, jiski hoon diwani
Woh hai diwana mera
Atul-Jo hai dil ki rani usko bhi zabaani
Yaad hai fasana mera
Nikki-Woh poori hui koi kahani (Thinking of abhi-jiah )
Mil gayi dil ki nishaani (seeing abhi,he sees her and feels sad)
Sid-Jhoom uthi yeh zindagani
All -Toh nachle nachle all night

Naina-where's the party tonight
J.p-somewhere down the road
Sid-where's the party tonight
Atul-on the dance floor
Anjali-oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein
All-where's the party tonight

Abhi-nikki were seeing at eachother,tamanna was sitting silently and seeing…..

Armaan is still searching for file,he sees locker,but its locked,he remembers about key and searches for it………

Ahh ………………Ahhh……(tune)

Armaan didn't got the keys and was in frustation throwed the files..
He saw ridhimas photo and went near it….he tried to take it and saw keys kept behind it…he smiled at photo thinking as ridhima helped him and fastly opened the locker and searched for ridhimas file and yes he got it..he kept all back in its place and moved out of cabin to find a safe place to see it……..
locker room!!!

He was really happy seeing the file and is walking fast so that no one can see him……….

Back at canteen…

Sid-I Wanna go dancing ,all-where's the
Atul -take you out ,all-party tonight
Naina-I Wanna go dancing, all-where's the
Anajli-let's scream and shout ,all-party tonight

Naina-Nach with me…….

All are dancing and shouting and enjoying…the sound was at its peak and no one cared….

VOICE:Band kariye yeh sab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Precap:
ARMAAN:Kya chahthe hain aap??
SHASHANK:Wahi jo maine kahan….main aapko nehi nikal saktha…toh apko khud sanjeevni chod kar jana hoga…..

Please do comment
sri

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do comment guys...
please...
need u r support.....
sri!!!!
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Originally posted by: yogithasingh

Again...Dear.............It was too...gud...<br>Loved it................<br>


thanks dear a lot..........
keep commenting ....
will update very soon.....
sri....

hey simi...where r u dear,why didnt u comment ....
waiting...???
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hey nruthi???all u guys...
where are u ??...
guys please comment....
waiting...
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