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Posted: 15 years ago

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EPISODE -6

NOTE :- hii readers.. me and sanna wanted to disclose that this fic has two female leads.. yup open ur eyes wide guys........ coz here comes new twist ........ we know many questions must be arising haina ......so for more infos stay tuned........... aur ek aur baat abse main UD nahi kar paungi coz am going back to hostel😃 par par par chinta ki koi zarurat nahi hai kyunki sanna UD karti rahegi..😃 plz pm ka wait mat karna aur fic check karte rehne kyunki hoo sakta hai woh sabko pm na kar paye koi chutt jaye..😃 fic ka title bhi update nahi hoo payega.. sorry dears😭.. yeh part jumbo size hai and i hope iske baad aapko meri kami mehsus nahi hogi.. bye everybody..😃 love ya all..😃

Raj ki b'day party khatam hui..

17 October...

Ek naya din... nayi umeedo ke saath... apne saath bahut kuch khaas pal laya hai.. suraj ki nayi aashaoo ki kirno ke saath.. apne saath bahut saari baatein yaadein laati hui yeh kirne dekhte hain najaane kya kya dejaati hain...

Ab dekhte hai Garewal House mai kya ho raha hai

Garewal House..

Tulsi - Raaaammmmmuuu......... yeh kya kar rahe ho.. yeh mithaiyaan yaha table pe kya kar rahi hai inhe wahaa waha murti ke paas rakho.. aur yeh lakshmi ji ki murti yaha kya kar rahi hai... ise ise apne sthaan par rakhwao.....Are shaam yeh kya baghwaan ji ka bogh abhi tak shuru nahi kia banana.. ........shuru karo nahi to raat tak nahi banpayega.. Jaldi karoo........... tumlog chahte ho na ki aaj diwali ki pooja samay anusaar hojaaye.. Chalo sab jaldi jaldi karo..... hai raam pata nahi yeh log kya kar rahe hai sab mujhe hi karna pad raha hai ...........kisis kaam ke nahi ho tum log chalo ab jaldi karoo ...........

raj was sitting in his room ...... in his own dream world

raj(to himself) - pehli baar itni besabri se kisi se milne ka intezaar karr raha hu yeh jante hue bhi ki shayad usse mil nahi paungi.. woh zaina ke saath ayegi ya nahi main nahi janta magar mera dil keh raha hai woh zarur ayegi.. raj grewal ne aajtak kabhi aisa kuch nahi kiya jismein 100% surity na hoo.. maine hamesha 100% risk wale kaam kiye hai magar yaha to mamla 50-50 hai.. woh aa bhi sakti hi aur nahi bhi.. jo main feel karta hoon woh bhi feel karti hogi ya phir nahi bhi.. ufff yeh ho bhi sakta hai ya nahi bhi ki uljhan aaj meri jaan leke rahegi.. uff sanna tumhara bahut hi besabri se intezaar hai... (he placed his hand on his heart and smiled..)

at mehra house --

Vasundhra - hame lagta hai ki kuch bhi kadam uthane se pehle ek baar nandini se baat kar leni chahiye..

indrajeet - aur tumhe lagta hai woh haan kar degi.. usne aapni alag duniya bana li hai jismein hamari koi jagah nahi hai..

vasu - galati bhi to hamari hi hai agar hamne businees ke bajaye beti pe dhyaan diya hota to aaj uski duniya hum hi hote.. hamne use kabhi apni duniya main nahi rakha isi wajah se shayad aaj usne apni alag duniya bana li hai..

indrajeet - kal raj ka bday tha mihir aur tulsi ji ne kitna agrah kiya tha ane ke liye.. khaskar nandini ko lane ke liye..

vasu aur indrajeet ki aankho main aansu the..

vasu - kaise jate hum nandini ne to ane se saaf mana kar diya tha.. hum nandini ke mamle main khud ko kitna bebas pate hai yeh hum aapko bata nahi sakte..

indrajeet - abb to hum log jo bhi karte hai usmein nandini ko hamara swarth hi nazar ata hai.. hum to uska acha bhavishya chahte hai.. agar raj se shadi hoo jayegi uski to khush rahegi woh hamesha..

someone was standing at the door.. vasu aur indrajeet ki nazar darwaze pe gayi aur woh chup hoo gaye.. nandini ne unki sari baatein sunn li thi..

apne parents ki aankho main aansu dekh nandini ki aankh bhi bhar ayi thi..

par itne saalo main nandini ne khud ko pathar sa bana liya hai..

nandini - main aise bhi bahot khush hoon.. sach kaha aapne maine apni alag duniya bana li hai hai par ek jagah aap galat padh gaye papa.. duniya aap dono ki alag thi.. meri duniya main aap logo ki jagah hamesha thi aur hamesha rahegi.. aapne mujhe janam diya hai mom main sabko bhul sakti hoon par iss karz ko nahi bhul sakti.. khair aap dono kabhi mujhe samajh nahi paye shayad aur shayad koshish bhi nahi karte.. main aap logo se durr jati rahi aur aap ise kismat samajh kar mujhe durr jane dete rahe.. koi baat nahi raat gayi baat gayi.. aur haan aapne ek baat sach kahi app dono jo bhi karte hoo usmein mujhe aapka swarth hi nazar ata hai.. bilkul sach hai yeh.. mana aap meri shadi isliye karwana chahte hai kyunki main khush rahu aur ismein aap meri bhalai dekh rahe hai par agar aap wakai meri khushi chahte hai to agar main kisi aise insaan se shadi karne ki baat kahu jo aapke status ka nahi hai.. jiska ghar itna bada nahi hai jiska bank balance karodo main nahi hai to kya aap shadi ke liye haan kar denge?? well i know aap kabhi haan nahi karenge..

nandini jane lagi..

vasu - har insaan swarthi hota hai.. tum swarthi nahi hoo??

nandini - hoon bilkul hoon.. balki main to yeh manti hoon ki iss duniya main sabse jyada selfish main hi hoon.. main hamesha wahi karti hoon jisse mujhe khushi mile.. dikhawa karke main kabhi khush nahi reh sakti.. na hi apne ya kisi aur ke saath galat hone de sakti hoon isliye nahi ki galat hote dekhna galat hai balki isliye kyunki phir main khud se nazre nahi mila sakti.. yahi swarth hai mera.. duniya jaye bhaad main i dont care.. aise bahot kam insaan hai meri zindagi main jinki main parwaah karti hoon jaha mera swarth mujh par hawi nahi hota..

vasu - kya unn kam logo mein tumhare maa baap ate hai??

nandini - nahi.. kyunki aap sirf mere bare main sochenge aur main nahi chahti meri wajah se koi aur bhugte..

nandini chali gayi apne room main..

vasu - hame lagta hai woh nahi manegi.. hame mihir ji se iss rishte ke liye mana kar dena chahiye..

indrajeet - bacchi hai nandini abhi.. iske bhale bure ke bare main hume sochna hai.. gusse main aur nafrat main woh khud ka hi nuksaan kar rahi hai..

vasu - lekin woh hamari baat kabhi nahi manegi.. hum kahenge east chalo to woh definately west jayegi.. bahot ziddi hai hamari beti..

indrajeet - janta hoon.. aur yeh bhi janta hoon raj uske liye best hai.. aur yeh baat tum bhi janti hoon..

vasu - par woh kabhi nahi manegi.. aur aise mamlo main zabardasti nahi ki ja sakti..

indrajeet - try to understand vasu.. abhi woh iss rishte se inkaar kar rahi hai magar jab uski raj se shadi hoo jayegi tab woh iss rishte ki ehmiyat samjhegi aur use yakeen hoga hum kitne sahi hai.. maine soch liya ahi abb use uske tarike se hi haan karwani hogi..

vasu - matlab??

indrajeet - chalo mere saath..

indrajeet aur vasu nandini ke room main gaye.. she was writing something..

Indrajeet - aaj grewals ke yaha diwali puja hai hamare saath chalo..

nandini - asli wajah jaan sakti hoon??

indrajeet - mihir grewal ke bade bete raj grewal se tumhari shadi karwana chahte hai hum bhi aur raj ke parents bhi..

nandini - agar inkaar karu to??

indrajeet - to yeh swarthi maa baap tumhara account freeze karwa denge.. aasra ke owner ko har saal jo donation mehras ki taraf se milta hai woh bhi band hoo jayega.. aur iska anzaam tum janti hona kya hoga?? aur haan tumhe mehra industries se bhi nikal diya jayega.. that means noo payment no wages..

nandini - i know aisa karne pe aasra ka owner aasara ki zameen kisi aur ko bech dega.. fine.. kar lijiye aisa bhi.. aap jante hai main kis hadtak jud chuki hoon unn logo se iske bawjud aap aisa kar payenge yahi dekhna chahti hoon..

indrajeet - lagta hai tumhe meri baat pe yakeen nahi ho raha.. main abhi phone karke apni baat sabit kar deta hoon..

nandini (to herself) - i know aap aisa nahi kar paoge.. mujhe blackmail karna itna aasan nahi hai..

indrajeet ne wakayi nandini ki aankho ke saamne manager ko phone laga diya..

nandini bahot darr gayi.. usne indrajeet ko rok diya..

nandini - am ready for everything but plss aisa kuch mat karna..

indrajeet - jaldi se taiyaar ho jaoo.. hame thodi der main nikalna hai..

nandini - papa main shadi ke liye taiyaar hoo magar sirf tabb agar mihir uncle ke bete ko mujhse shadi karne main koi prob na hoo.. aur haan woh mujhe mere hisaab se jine dega.. mujhe aasara jane se rokega nahi..aur na hi kaam karne se..

indrajeet - yeh baatein main mihir ko bata dunga.. waise behtar hoga agar tum khud raj se baat karlo..

nandini - ek request kar sakti hoon aapse??

indrajeet - haan..

nandini - main usse nahi milna chahti.. maine shadi ke liye haan kehdi hai aur abb jo karna hai aapko karna hai.. aapki har haan main meri haan hai.. agar meri shart puri na bhi hoo to koi baat nahi.. main shadi karungi.. bass meri yeh akhri request maan lijiye.. main nahi milna chahti usse.. aur aaj aasra main bhi puja hai.. yeh shadi meri akhri puja hai unn logo ke saath.. shadi ke baad main khud unn logo se nahi milungi kyunki aajtak main sabse kehti ayi wahi karo jo tumhe sahi lage par shadi ke baad jo sawal unn logo ke mann main uthenge unka mere paas koi jawab nahi hoga..

nandini's eyes were teary.. indrajeet and vasu were also feeling bad magar woh sirf nandini ki bhalai chahte the..

Sharma house'

Jai ganesh jai ganesh jai ganesh deva'''..

Koi apni meethi meethi aawaaz se din ki shuraat kar raha hai'.

JAI GANESHA JAI GANESHA JAI GANESHA DEVAA
MAATAA JAAKII PAARVATII, PITAA MAHAADEVAA
EKA DANTA DAYAAVANTA, CAARA BHUJAA DHAARII
MAATHE SINDUURA SOHAI, MUUSE KII SAVAARI
JAI GANESHAA...

ANDHANA KO AANKHA DETA
KORHINA KO KAAYAA
BAANJHANA KO PUTRA DETA
NIRDHANA KO MAAYAA
JAI GANESHAA...

PAANA CARHE, PHUULA CARHE
AURA CARHE MEVAA
LADDUANA KO BHOGA LAGE
SAMITA KAREN SEVAA
JAI GANESHA...

Sanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ji haan woh sanna hai....... jiski din ki shuruat kuch aisa hoti hai........

sannnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaa

sanna - Aayi papa.. Sanna sharma ji ke kamre mai jaati hai..

sanna - Ji papa..

Sharma ji - sanna beta meri kitaab mujhe mill nahi rahi kal raat ko padhte padhte yahi kahi rakhi thi.. beta tum hi kuch madad kardo..

Sanna - papa yeh rahi apki kitaab yaha shelf par to rakhi hui hai..

Sanna sharma ji ko unki kitaab deti hai..

Sharma ji - arre haan yeh rahi.. sanna beta agar tum nahi ho to mera kya hoga..

Sanna - papa aisa mat boliye main to humesha aap hi ke saath rahoongi..

Itne main awaaz ayi - sannnnnnnaaaaaaa diiiiiiiiiii.. Sannnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaa diiiiiiiii

Sharma ji - jaa lagta hai mere saath saath aur bhi kai logo ka jina tere bina adhura hai......

Sanna smile karti hai apne papa ka aashirwaad lekar aur unhe prasad dekar.. us aawaz ki aur daudti hai..........

arohi - Kripa sun mujhe meri yeh earrings dede tu koi aur pehenle.. Samji.......

kripa - Aarohi nahi yeh earings meri dress ke saath match karrahi hai.. yeh to mai hi pehnugi samjhi'''

arohi - Kripa chup chap karkar inhe mujhe dede '''. Inhe maine kharida hai'''

kripa - Bola na aarohi main nahi dungi'''.

arohi - Dekh kripa dede mujhe

Sanna - are are tumlog lad kyun rahe ho..

Aarohi - di dekho na mujhe yeh kripa meri earings waapis nahi de rahi'

Sanna - kripa do usko earings ussse waapis'''.

Kripa - di ye hearings meri dress ke saath match karrahe hai''.

Sanna - ruk kripa tujhe mai apni earings deti hoon.. wo teri dress ko bilkul match karegi'''. & sanna give her tht earings '''.

Kripa - awwwwww di u r such a darling ' she hugs sanna & gives aarohi back her earings & go to work''' while aarohi gets happy & also sanna gives both of them prasad ........

Chotttiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sanna'uff isse mai kaisa bhul sakti hoon'''. & then sanna goes towards zaina

Shilpa - sanna dekho zara zaina school akele ja rahi hai diwali ke din'. Isse tum chod aao.. plzz

Sanna - plzz kyun di afcorse mai isse chod dungi

Sanna - lekin di diwali ke din school??

Shilpa - haan woh ek chota sa diwali cultural program hai..

Sanna - okk mai chod deti hoon

Zaina - yesssssssssssss!!

Zaina & sanna both leave for da school

On da way'.

Zaina-choti maa maine mumma se keh diya hai ki hum aaj sara din ghumenge..

Sanna-arre haan jaisa aap kaho my angel'''..okk

They both reach school'''

After 1 hr

Okk betu chalo ab aapka program to khatam hogaya par aapke boyfriend ji to abhi tak nahi aaye

Raj-mai yaha hoon

Zaina--- boyfriend tum aa gaye'''

Raj-haan girlfriend kabhi ho sakta hai ki main apni girl friend ke bulane par naa aaoo

at aasra -

sabhi elders ne puja ki taiyaari ki.. sabhi baccho ne aasara ko decorate kiya.. sabke saath hote hue bhi nandini akeli thi kahin khoyi hui..

2 elders are talking - bhale hi nandini aasra aakar bahot pyaar banti hai aur khush bhi rehti hai magar woh kabhi apne dil ki baat kisi se kehti nahi chahe phir woh uske dil ke kitna hi karib kyu na hoo.. aaj nandini ki muskurahat main woh baat nahi hai..

nandini(to herself) - koi kaise apni hi beti ko itna mazbur kar sakta hai?? ya shayad abb bhi baat karne ki gunjaish hai.. he is my father afterall meri baat zarur man lenge.. lekin baat agar unke profit ki hoti aur main iske khilaf hoti to woh pakka maan jate magar iss waqt papa ko bass meri khushi chahiye he will never listen to me..

elder - beta koi baat ko lekar pareshan hai tu??

nandini - aunty ji aapse kuch puchu?? par plss sirf mere sawalo ka jawab dijiyega badle main kuch mat puchiyega..

aunty - thik hai beta..

nandini - kya shadi karke hi beti khush reh sakti hai?? kya shadi ke alawa aur kuch nahi hoo sakta jo beti ko khushi de?? jaise hi beti thodi badi hoti hai uski shadi ki baat ki jane lagti hai yaha tak ki kayi ladkiyon ko to bachpan se hi shadi ke sapne dikha diye jate hai.. kya hum isiliye duniya main ate hai ki hamari shadi hogi bacche honge aur hum khush rahenge?? jis ladki ki shadi nahi hoti uske parivar ko tane diye jane lagte hai bhale hi woh ladki apne peiro pe khadi hoo aur bahot kabil hi kyu na hoo.. kya wakai shadi karna itna zaruri hota hai??

the old lady smiled..

aunty - tere har ek sawal ke 2 jawab hai.. dono hi sahi hai aur dono hi jawab tu bhi janti hai..

nandini - haan aunty ji.. janti hoon dono jawab ek suna sunaya aur ek apne dil ka.. (to herself - suna sunaya to har koi daura dega magar kya kabhi koi mujhe woh jawab dega jo mera dil janta hai aur manta hai..)

puja ki taiyaari hoo gayi thi.. ek cute si ladki daud kar ayi aur nandini aur aunty ko lekar gayi..

raj sanna aur zaina tino ek saath the.. tino hi bahot khush the.. zaina khush thi kyunki aaj tak usne jo manga woh use milta gaya aur aaj bhi uski yeh khwaish bhi puri hui.. raj aur sanna ek hi wajah se khush the aur dono hi shayad uss wajah se anjaan the..

aaj zaina was in heaven seven...... aaj usne apne boyfriend aur apni choti maa ke saath poora din masti ki... usne movie dekhi, apni fav dresss kharidi, toys kharide,...... aur to aur usne apna fav food aur apni fav ice cream bhi khaayi...... sanna ko bhi icecream bahot pasand hai.. par raj ko icecream pasand nahi lekin phir bhi zaina ya shayd sanna ke khatir usne icecream khayi.. raj ka chehra dekh sanna ko saaf pata chal raha tha ki raj ko icecream pasand nahi..

sanna - icecream kaisi lagi raj??

raj - umm.. haan.. bahot achi hai bahot hi achi hai..

sanna raj ki taraf dekh rahi thi aur raj ko ehsaas ho raha tha ki uska jhooth pakda gaya..

zaina - haan boyfriend icecream bahot achi hai.. chalo hum ek aur khate hai..

raj ka muh dekhne layak tha usne jaise taise ek to khali thi magar EK AUR??????????

sanna understood..

sanna - nahi beta.. jyada icecream khane se aapko sardi hoo jayegi aur aapke boyfriend ko bhi..

ab zaina ne kuch bachoo ko dekha crackers jalate hue...... to zaina kaise reh sakti hai piche.......

zaina-- choti maa, boy friend chalo crackers jalate hain...... chaloooooo

sanna- no zaina crackers are very dangerous....... aur crackers burst karne se bahot pollution hota hai.. aur aapko pata bhi hai ki aapki choti maa ko crackers se kitna dar lagta hai..

zaina- umm boyfriend plzz chotii maa ko kaho naa ....... kucch nahi hogaa.....

sanna- nahi zaina beta zidd nahi karte

raj- chalo naa sanna kuch nahi hoga......

ab sanna mana kaisa kar sakti thi....... aakhir raj ke kehne par woh maan gayi...... aur phir woh saare crackers jaalane gaye........

though sanna had a huge fear...... lekin raj took proper care of bth.... & didnt gave them more harmful crackers to fire......

raj ek cracker jala raha tha tabhi usse kuch pata nahi chal ki cracker pe aag lag gayi........ sanna ne yeh sab notice karliya tha...... raj ka haath jalne hi waala tha.... ki thik time par aakar sanna ne raj ko piche kar diya magar uska khudka haath jal gaya..

sanna-- aahhhhhhhh

zaina-- choti maaaa

raj- sannaaa

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grewal house main puja ki taiyaari puri hoo gayi thi..

mehras aur sharmas bhi pahuch gaye the.. par sanna, raj aur nandini gayab the waha se..

grewal house main puja khatam hui..

mihir-- indrajeet nandini kaha hai dikhaayi nahi de rahi

indrajeet- (himself)- kya karoo iss ladki ka naa jane kaha chali gayi

indrajeet- woh usse kuch zaroori kaam aagaya tha. .isliye

mihir - oh koi baat nahi...kya tumne nandini se baat ki.. kya kaha usne??

indrajeet - haan.. woh shadi ke liye taiyaar hai bass woh..

mihir - woh kya?? kuch problem hai to batao mujhe.. nandini meri beti jaisi hai..

indrajeet - haan woh chahti hai ki agar zaruri na ho to wo raj se milna nahi chahti....

mihir-- arre jaisa woh chahe... isse hume koi problem nahi

indrajeet -- waise raj kaha hai...

mihir-- ( himself) uff kina laparvah hai yeh ladka kaha tha ghar par rehna phir bhi nahi aaya

mihir-- woh tumhe to pata hai aajkal buisness mein itna busy rehta hai kaam aagaya hoga...

indrajeet- chalo koi baat nahi .. chalta rehta hai phir kabhi baat karlunga

ab hum chalte hai....

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dadaji-- sharma ji are aapki beti sanna kaha hai...

sharma ji-- shilpa beta sanna kaha hai

shilpa- papa woh sanna zaina ke saath gayi hai keh rahe the zara late ho jaayenge....... shayad tabhi late hai........

dadaji-- are koi baat nahi .......phir kabhi mill lenge........

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raj - sanna yeh kya tumne.. kitni buri tarah haath jal gaya hai tumhara..

sanna - relax raj main khud doctor hoon aur yeh to chota sa zakhm hai..

raj - doctor hoo to kya?? kya doctors ko dard nahi hota??

sanna(she was looking in his eyes) - mujhe to bilkul nahi hoo raha.. sach..

sanna ne raj ko medical shop se ointment lane ko kaha.. raj ne woh ointment sanna ko laga diya..

waise to sanna bahot nazuk hai zara bhi lagg jati hai to sara ghar sar pe utha leti hai magar aaj sanna ne uff tak nahi ki..

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nandini ghar laut rahi thi.. raj bhi ghar laut raha tha sanna aur zaina ko ghar drop karke.... sanna apne room main khidki mein khadi thi..

sanna - shayad yeh wahi hai jiski kami main apni zindagi main hamesha mehsus karti thi.. kehno ko sabb pa liya tha magar khalipan tha zindagi main aur aaj raj se milkar laga woh khalipan bhar gaya hai.. aaj se raj hi mera sabkuch hai.. mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai usse aur yeh ehsaas dil ko sukun deta hai bahot..

Raj - usse milne se pehle darr tha mann main.. par usse milne ke baad 50-50 100% main badal gaya hai.. abb sanna hi meri manzil hai.. woh meri zindagi main aakar har kami ko pura kar degi.. abb lagta hai sanna hi meri jeevan saathi hai.. sach kehte hai log ki jinhe milna hota hai woh kahin bhi kabhi bhi mil hi jati hai.. woh anjaan hokar bhi sabse jyada jaani pehchani hai..

Nandini -socha tha yeh faisla soch samajhkar karungi.. use chunugi jo mujhe samjhe.. ek umeed thi ki ki mera jeevan saathi ke paas paisa ho ya na hoo magar khuli soch zarur hogi.. par aaj sari umeedein hamesha ke liye tut gayi.. meri zindagi hamesha se registaan ki tarah thi jiska na koi aur tha na chor..aur shayad abb bhi waisi hi rahegi..

(screen splits into three.. left main nandini hai right main sanna hai aur bich main raj..)

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issi tarah kuch yun gayi diwali kahi unkahi baatein piche chodkar

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heres da part buddies........... waiting for ur comments as well as criticism.........😃

love

sanna & nandini😊

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

Awesum part tha. I definitely luved Raj n Sanna's outing. N Sanna didnt feel like shouting when she got hurt.....Raj k hote usse shout karne ka bhi kaise sujhta....hehe....Raj ko nihaar ne se fursat kisse hai?

Zaina is really cute....but ye kya Raj ko ice-cream nahi pasand??? Tu to iss baat pe main bawal macha deti but pata nahi kyun Raj ki ye baat bhi mujhe achhi lag rahi hai....it seems it gives him uniqueness...hehe. Jaha bhi Raj hota hai...meri khopri ghum jati hai....aur dekho na mujhe bikul bhi ajeeb nahi lag raha....I feel as if anything is justifies when its concerned wid Raj.☺️

Ok now cuming out of my Raj ragh☺️....I dont understand Nandini's parents. And I wud not try either....wud w8 for u guys to do that to me...hehe.

Btw, after this UD I cant guess anything yaar!! Ab mujhe jaldi se next part chahiye Sanna....mujhse w8 hi nahi ho raha. Waise Nandini ki entry hi kaafi thi ye batane k liye ki wo bhi ek lead hai...hehe.

But now, I'll miss my Nandu....no long UD can make up for u dear.....but no probs...will keep PMing u.

Sanna pls continue wid the next part soon....I just cant w8 to knw wat happens next.

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#123

awsome update

superb

mindblowing

dekhte hai ki teeno ki zindagi kaun si raah paqkarti hai

very interesting

great going

plz continue soon

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#124

awesome update!!

Raj is restless to meet sana😳...

par yeh kya ? Raj ko ice cream nahi pasand????😲

chalo koi baat nahi....raj toh hai hi unique😛

and the second lead is nandini ...i guess.

and what sort of parents she has?😡meri samajh bahar hai unka logic...

Ab plz...inke wajehse raj aur sannaa mein koi problem na hojaye...

wat yaar Nandini..u r goin????

will pm u and will miss u a lot! jaldise aana aur apni doosri fic bhi complete karna...(me & my...)

sanaa...plz update soon dear..😊

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#125

Hi Nandini n Sana

How r u both ????😊😊

So Nandini u r going back to your hostel but we'll miss u..Comeback soon😊🤗

Update was beautiful...😊

Nandini's parents r really 1 of their kind..Why do they always force her to do something she is not ready for..

Her father blackmailed her so she agree to marry Raj..This is not done..Wat kind of parents they r!!!

They dont even know how to win their daughter's love..

Sana is so caring nevery1 in her family is so dependent on her..

Raj,Sana n Zainab met n they had a blast..They really enjoyed the day.

Raj n Sana r feeling something special for each other but they cudn't name it...

Who will Raj get married to???

I hope dis time he get watever he wants..

Do update soon

Bye

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#126

Hi Sana and Nandini

I m so sorry is fic k 2 part ud ho gaye aur mujhe pata bhi nai chala! ab har part pe comment krti hu starting frm epi 14

Raj and arjun ki bonding bahut achi hai

Too bad Raj's mom couldnt come wid him...he was left alone...yaar mihir ko chod k apne bete k sath jana tha na...par so sweet of Raj k wo bina kahe samjhauta kar saka

Arjun to gaya Arohi k peeche...Sahi hai lgta hai iski love story track pe chal rahi hai...

nice and sweet part

sry again fr commenting late

love

sur

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#127

Hi Nandini and Sanna

Epi 5

Hmm to akhirkar Raj ki Sanna se mulakat ho hi gai...cool thi

Raj ka bday celebration was sweet..par uske pitashri yani k Mihir ji ke pair tut jate agar wo bhi a gaye hote? I mean I think k wo nahi aye par shayad a bhi gaye ho...u never know

Neways ye beach ki kya mystery hai? unveil it soon...aur Raj itna sad sad? not done ha...usko jaldi se khush kardo

nd ye Raj ki shadi karwane ka soch rahe hai? hehe phir ladai hogi!

aur Raj ka happy bday bade ache se man gaya, nai gf jo mil gai usey

nice prt

love

sur

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The Tilde Girl

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Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Awesum part tha. thanks sweetie..😃I definitely luved Raj n Sanna's outing. tune sanna ka naam bhi liya??😲😆😆N Sanna didnt feel like shouting when she got hurt.....Raj k hote usse shout karne ka bhi kaise sujhta....hehe....Raj ko nihaar ne se fursat kisse hai? haan haan.. vaise tune vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ke bare main kya socha hai pm me okk..😆

Zaina is really cute....she is my sweetheart..😃but ye kya Raj ko ice-cream nahi pasand???abb har fic main icecream khayega to daant sadd jayege na..😆😆 Tu to iss baat pe main bawal macha deti but pata nahi kyun Raj ki ye baat bhi mujhe achhi lag rahi hai....i can understand.. jaha raj hai waha har gunah maaf hai..😉😆😆it seems it gives him uniqueness...hehe. Jaha bhi Raj hota hai...meri khopri ghum jati hai....aur nahi to kya.. teri khopri aise ghumti hai ki bass mere cutu sweetu pe line maarne lagti hai..😆😆aur dekho na mujhe bikul bhi ajeeb nahi lag raha....I feel as if anything is justifies when its concerned wid Raj.☺️aaj to mere hi aas paas kuch jal raha hai..😆

Ok now cuming out of my Raj ragh☺️....thank god!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆I dont understand Nandini's parents. And I wud not try either....wud w8 for u guys to do that to me...hehe. u know nandini ke parents jo kar rahe hai woh kuch naya to nahi haina.. har parents apne baccho ki khushi chahte hai.. safe future chahte hai.. aur jabb bacche ziddi hoo aur unki sahi baat bhi na maan rahe hoo to phir unko blackmail to karna padega na..😆😆 ek uncle hai meri pehchan ke unke bete ne unse bike mangi to unhone kaha ja pehle 20KM paidal jake aa tab dila dunga..🤣waise nandini ke parents bahot ache hai/ho gaye hai yeh main batana chahti thi fic main par abb mujhe mauka hi nahi milega..

Btw, after this UD I cant guess anything yaar!! even i cant.. i dunno wats gonna happen..😆Ab mujhe jaldi se next part chahiye Sanna....mujhe bhiii😆😆mujhse w8 hi nahi ho raha.mujhse bhi...😆😆 Waise Nandini ki entry hi kaafi thi ye batane k liye ki wo bhi ek lead hai...hehe.waise mera kuch soch lena hi kafi hai tere jaan lene ke liye..😉

But now, I'll miss my Nandu....i'll miss ur comments.. tera rajeev pe line marna.. hamara baat baat pe same hona.. aur sabse jyada hamara naya fic.. 😭😭aur usse bhi jyada main tujhe miss karti agar main pms ke through bhi tujhse contact main na reh pati😆😆 main pehle baat baat pe hasti thi.. dukhi aur senti hona to main janti bhi nahi thi magar kuch aisa ho gaya ki main cry baby bann gayi thi baat baat pe roti thi par seriously tune mujhe phir se pehle jaisa bana diya.. thanks a lot sweetie..😊 no long UD can make up for u dear.....but no probs...will keep PMing u.wen i'll reach hostel i'll pm u sweetie..😃

Sanna pls continue wid the next part soon....I just cant w8 to knw wat happens next. me too..😆😆

love
nandini (no sanna coz sabkuch personal tha na..😆😆)

thanks for reading and commenting summi..

love
sanna and nandini..😃

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#129

Hi Sanna and Nandini

Finally I caught up...hmmm to ye hai humari 2 heroines, Sanna and Nandini...acha kia jo apne hi naam rakh liye. Raj k sath khud ko imagine karne me bada maza ata hai

Raj ko to Sanna se pyar ho gaya to ab Nandini se shadi kese karega? ye to gadbad ho gai. Nandini jaisa insaan chahti hai Raj hai to vesa hi par he doesnt love her...

so sad

lets c ab kya hota hai

Nandini dear we wil miss u, gud luck fr hostel

Sanna u ud regularly ab comments tym pe honge i promise u

gr8 ff

love

sur

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The Tilde Girl

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: sania_58
awsome update thanks sania..
superb

mindblowing

dekhte hai ki teeno ki zindagi kaun si raah paqkarti hai

very interesting

great going

plz continue soon

thanks for reading and commenting sania..😃

love
sanna and nandini😃