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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Durga A.

Awesome stuff there Nadz!!

I can't wait to see Gyaan & Heer's relationship to unfold.
I hope it's funny, cuz in KDMHMD they were like mortal enemies.
I'm just confused about all the characters there, but it just might be because I'm so tired right now. I'll read it again tomorrow, & hopefully understand it more better.
But I like the concept.
It's very interesting.
Sorry, I'm finding faults here, but I'm confused as to how many couples is the ff on?
Is it on Prithvi-Damini, Gyaan-Heer, Bhaskar-Payal, Sameer-Avni, Varun-Roshini?
& why did Dadi leave out Avni when she was talking about getting Damini & Roshini married in the future?



Heya

Thanks shooo much for reading and commenting🤗

Awwww i'm just Glad u like it😳😳
Hmmm GyaanEer😆😆 i'll try to make it funny😆😆 i've neva seen the show so not sure about there relationship there😆😆
Sorry to confuse u there😳 do read it again... I'm jus glad u like the concept and find it interesting... no thats the thing i need, i always need someone to criticise so i can better myself😉
okay theres only two main characters PriDa and GyaanEer the rest are fillers😉
You'll find out that really soon😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: leaves45

thanks for the PM.........even though I can't see heer with anyone other then Prem, it still has my Prida.😃

Good work so far.👍🏼



Heya

Thanks shooo much for reading and commenting🤗

You're welcome😉 sorry actually i've neva seen the couple so dont actually know there chemistry😳 one of my chat mate suggested heer with gyaan so i made it😉 Glad u like PriDa😳😳and my work😳😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray



Ha ha jitna chahe jhagar le!!😉 we are waiting.😛
The VM was lovely Nadz,👏
Yes, I am going to read the first part today.




Heya

Hehe😆 i'm glad u liked the VM😉 do read it😉
😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

well done Nadz👏
It was too good😛
So two cities? Mumbai and Amritsar? cooool
😉

"the owner of the jeep and phone was doing pushups on the sand' shirtless [oooh hot] after some time he gets up and you see a guy, hot, handsome and cute", so this is Gyan. I am loving it Nadz. wow!!

I loved the Bhaskar-Gyan friendship. wow! Bhaskar is getting engaged!😃


So Gyan and Heer are quite different, I just can't wait to see what happens in their life. I would love to see their larna jhagarna, the scene in the VM was to cool. Viny darling kya karegi, yeh bhi dekhna chahti hun.😉

I loved the father-daughter, sister-sister relationships in Amritsa😊r. and Dadi is a typical dadi.😆

I don't know anything about Prida but I think soon I will start loving them as well.😉

Missing Armaan😔

continue soon dear



Heya

Thanks shooo much for reading and commenting🤗

Awww i'm just Glad u like it😳😳 hmmm soon it will be one😉
yups that was gyaan😳 im glad u liked the GB dosti and BhaPa engagement😆
ahan they are poles apart😆😆 vinny darling kya karegi😆

I'm glad u liked the relationships... hmmm u will like i did when i read about them and watched there scenes😳😳 dunno why they dont give us star one 😡😡

next part ke baad armaan aayega😆😆 he's side character to thori der se aayega😆😆

Will do😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethis

wonderful dear.. what an start..i think you have incorporated all the characters of all the channels wonderful.... keep going and do ppm me when you update...



Heya

Thanks shooo much for reading and commenting🤗

Awww i'm just Glad u like it😳😳awww thanks for saying that😳

WILL DO😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone😛

Thank you very very much for readin my FF and liking it🤗

sorry for confusing some of you... The story is about two main couples GyaanEer and PriDa, the rest of the cast is just fillers😊 I hope its clear to all of you... and sorry to the PremEer lovers, this was a suggestion by my chat mate and i took it since i've never seen the show so im not sure how there story was😕 please dont hate me for that😳

Okay ab enuf bakbak and back to the update, here goes... Hope u like it😉 Its mainly showing how they are... what type of lives they live...

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Love ne mila di Jodi:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnMz0sYXVS8[/YOUTUBE]


Recap: Heer's dadi wants heer to get married, damini argues with her and heer is hurt... gyaan forgets about bhaskars engagement and he was supposed to get the suit and ring😆😆 he finally gets it and reaches to the venue:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1252393&PID=24455400&#24455400



Part 2

Heer runs out to her favourite place' next to the river, she sits and cries her heart out'

"kyun maa? Kyun? Kyun chordiya aapne hume? Kyun daadi mujhse itni nafrat karti hain? Kya raaz hai?" she cries and avni looks at her back with tears in her eyes.

"di'" she calls and heer tries to rub her tears "nahi di' its okay" she says and hugs her, they cry for a while.

"Phirse wohi story thin a aaj ghar me?" she asks annoyed.

"haan dadz ki to aadat hai you know na" rosh adds as damini and her come there.

"Di aap worry matt karo' aap iss ladke ko dekhlo, naa pasand aaye to koi ki majaal nahi ke aapki shaadi usse karaye, okay" damini says and heer laughs, the other two also laugh.

"haan meri maa' jaisa aap kahen" she says and they all hug with tears in there eyes.

After a while damini sees a hose pipe and takes it' she starts splashing water on the other three' they all laugh and play in the water.

Scene shifts to Mumbai'

Gyaan goes out with bhaskar.. they were both looking damn hot' bhaskar wearing a blue sherwani with white scarf and gyaan wearing a black sherwani with a silver scarf.

"wow gyaan aaj kitna handsome lag raha hai" vineeta says and bharti nodds her head with a smile.

"yeh to gayi" she thinks "hmmm lag to kaafi accha raha hai lekin tumhaara koi chance nahi vine darling" she says and vineeta looks sad.

"bharti' mujhme kya kami hai?? Kyun gyaan mujhse pyar nahi karta?' she asks and bharti looks at her and smiles.

"because jodiyan upar se ban ke aati hain, and shayad gyaan ki jodi tumhaare saath bani hi naa ho, isliye wo kabi tumhe ghas nahi dalta" she says and vineeta makes a face.

"haan I guess you're right warna mujh jaisi khooobsurat ladki saamne ho to kaun usse ignore karega?" she says and bharti smiles.

Gyaan and bhaskar reach the stage.. payal blushes seeing bhaskar and so does he, he tells her that she's looking beautiful.

"hey payal" gyaan says and breaks there ishaara talks "Congrats" he says and payal just gives him a stern look.

"ab aaye ho? Mujhe pata tha tumhi delay kar waa rahe hoge" she says and he looks at her guilty then smiles.

"sorry kaha na" he holds his ears and makes a cute face, she smiles and bhaskar comes.

"oh boss, kya ho raha hai yahan?" he asks and gyaayal look at him surprised.

"Aaj meri engagement hai dude, please meri mangetar ko to woo mat kar" bhaskar says and they all laugh "tera to track record hai meri har girlfriend ko patane ka" he says and gyaan grins.

"because I am the man" he says and they smile.

The engagement ceremony is completed and at night all are sitting at the terrace in bhaskars house'

Payal, bharti, bhaskar, gyaan, and vineeta.

Bhaskar gets a cal, he answers it and moves away from payal who was holding his hand and sitting, she looks at him confused' he comes back.

"kaun tha?" she asks angrily "Ya thi" she says annoyed.

"kya payal?" he looks confused.

"Kaun thi wo churail jisne abhi tumhe phone kiya" she says and they all share a grin while bhaskar look worried' they argue for a bit since it was geeta.LOL bhaskar's secretary.

"sirf wish karne ke liye phone kiya tha usne" he says and she still looks annoyed.

"ya right to yahan kya jhak maarne aayi thi?? Aur iss time pe tumhe phone karne ki kya zaroorat hai usse?' she keeps arguing and gyaan nodds his head with a smirk.

"isliye kehta hoon guys, pyaar ke maamlo me matt paro" he says and they all look at him.

"iss baat se to I agree with you dude" bharti says and they hi5.

Payal and bhaskar look embarrassed.

"iss engagement se pehle kitne acche dost the tum dono?? Aaj engagement hui aur jhagra shuru? I told you jab pyar bichme aa jaata hai to problems create karta hai" he says and bhaskar looks at payal and smiles' she smiles back.

"aisa kuch nahi hai' pyar problems nahi solutions laata hai" he says and payal hugs him, they sit down.

"aaj patch up hogaya kal phir laro ge" gyaan says.

"haan issi se to pyaar barta hai" payal adds and BhaPa share an eyelock.

"please guys' pyar is the biggest problem, kehte hai na, kambakt ishq cheez hai hi aisi, kar jaaye aisi ki taisi" he says singing.

"right that's the biggest example, end mein pyar ho hi gaya right?" bhaskar says with a grin and gyaan looks speechless.

"wo to film thi na' real life mein thori aisa hota hai" he says.

"gyaan im telling you love is the best thing to happen to a person" bhaskar says.

The scene shifts to amritsar.

Then finally settle down in the garden' heer sits avni and roshni rest there heads on her lap and damini sits and throws rocks in a small puddle'

"di agar maa hoti to daadi aapke saath aise nahi baat karti na?" roshni starts.

Heer looks at her and smiles "wo daadi hain, bari hain unhe haqq hai hume daatne ka" she says moving her hand in rosh's hair.

"haan bari hain' lekin unhe aapse aise baat karne ki zaroorat nahi hai" damini says.

"didz, kya kar rahe ho aap?" she asks damini as she keeps throwing rock.

"Boxing match ki practice" rosh laughs.

"haan whatever"

"Waise di, aaj to aap unse milne jaane waali ho kyun?" avni hits her shoulder on heers and asks, heer gets a little lost.

"waise di aapko kaisa ladka chahiye??/ I mean rajkumar?" rosh asks and avni laughs whil damz just looks irritated.

"mere sapne hote to ek raj kumar bhi hota, but nahi hai to kya bataoon?" she lies and damini looks at her, damini and heer were very close and being the eldest in sisters they shared everything with eachother, damini knew how sad heer was from the inside and heer knew how much damini needed to fall in love so she can realize how beautiful it is.

"waise maine to soch liya hai mera lucky boy kaisa hoga" rosh starts and they all laugh and tease her then they talk about love.

"waise di pyar me log apni jaan dedete hain kya yeh sach hai??" rosh asks innocently.

Damini

"Bullshit hai' okay tumhaari kitaabi baatein, na pyar sachha hota hai aur na koi apni jaan deta hai" damini interrupts but heer gets lost and starts talking.

Prithvi

"hey guys, kya horaha hai?" prithvi asks as he enters.

"Pyar ki baatein" bharti says and he laughs.

"you guys are bored hun?" he says nodding his head

Heer

'Roshni pyar bohot khoobsurat hota hai, iss duniya ki sabse haseen cheez hoti hai pyar." She starts.

Gyaan

"pyar iss duniya ki sabse bari problem hai" he says.

Heer

"pyar me insaan bilkul badal jaata hai, aur bhi accha ho jaata hai" she says.

Gyaan

"pyar me insaan badal jaata hai, relationship badal jaata hai, dosti toot jaati hai" he says

Damini

"pyar is all krap' kuch nahi hota pyar siwaaye dard ke" she says

Prithvi

"love'" he smiles "its passion' jaise mujhe hai horses ke liye" he says and they all laugh.

Gyaan

"Ya passion for all the wrong things" he says annoyed.

Heer

"pyar mein dil jo kehta hai wo sach hota hai, bas ek insaan ke liye dharakta hai"

Damini

"haan aur phir toot jaata hai jab wohi insaan aapko chorkar chala jaaye" damini says

Gyaan

"itna alag dharakta hai dil ke akele reh kar toot jaata hai" he makes fun.

Prithvi

"lekin pyar kuch to hota hai bhai'. Its simply amazing I guess"

Heer

"jisse pyar hojaaye aur pyar mil jaaye, iss duniya ko chorne ka bhi gham nahi hota usse"

Damini

"haan aur apno ko chorne ka bhi nahi" she says heartbroken, the other three look at her and go to her.

"kabhi kabhi happy ending ke liye kuch sad pal hone zaroori hote hai" heer says to her hugging her, damini cries, she was really close to her mother' and felt really hurt about being abandoned by her own mother.

"di mom ne aisa kyun kiya? Kya unhe humse pyar nahi tha?" she cries, avni and rosh are surprised to see there tough sis crying, they hardly saw her cry' but heer knew how soft she was from the inside.

"pyar to bohot tha damini, par kabhi kabhi haalat insaan se bohot kuch karwaatein hain.

"aise kaunse haalat the jis ki wajah se ek maa apne bachon ko chor ke bhag jaati hai??/ pyar ke liye?? Uss'" she gets angry thinking about it.

"damini pyar bale paas ho ya door, wo hamesha zinda rehta hai' aur humaare liye unke dil mein pyaar aaj bhi zinda hai" she says

Scene shifts Gyaan

"pyar ka end result moth hi hota hai" he ends the topic

"that's not true" payal says.

"haan pyar agar saccha ho to wo mil hi jaata hai" vineeta says.

"ya right' ek example do" he says with a grin and they look around for words.

"haan hai na' mere cousin ke mom and dad' aaj bhi ek doosre se bohot pyar karte hain" payal says and they all laugh.

***********

Next day;

Prithvi was in a helicopter' he smiles and jumps down with a string' happily bungi jumping he had no fear at all' after that he goes to the stables and calls badal'

"mohit' mohit" he's stable manager.

"aaj badal ko jockey me bhejo" he says.

"par sir uske per mein chot aayi hai" mohit informs.

"So what, wo insaan nahi jaanwar hai aur jaanwar ko dard nahi hota, send him" he says and gyaan enters.

"maine to suna tha mard ko dard nahi hota" he says and they laugh.

"kya baat hai bhai? Kuch kaam tha?" he asks.

"haan chal tujhse kuch zaroori baat karni thi" he says and they both go and settle down on a table there.

"hmm boliye?" he says giving him a cup of black coffee and taking a milk one for himself.

"kal mom-dad aarahe hain" he says and prithvi's mood is off.

"to?"

"to wo chahte hain ke hum dono unhe receive karne jaayein" he says and prithvi looks confused "mujhe bohot kaam tha to maine socha tu chala jaa" gyaan tells him and prithvi looks annopyed.

"mujhe bhi bohot kaam hai, kiss driver ko bhej dena" he says.

"Prithvi please, chala jaa na" gyaan insists, but prithvi was in no mood of compensating' they both cant decide and decide to send the driver.

************

You see damini sitting on a white horse'

"so toofan' kaise ho aaj?? Wo moti ne tujhe sataaya to nahi na?' she asks and the horse makes a noise "accha?? Don't worry jaldhi main tujhe iss tabele se nikalke mere saath le jaaoongi' bas thore aur paison ki zaroorat hai' tu thora time wait karle na" she says and the horse makes a noise like refusing.

"Kya ho raha hai??" a fat aunty comes there' damini looks at her.

"wo' kuch nahi" she says.

"maine suna, kuch baatein ho rahi thi" she says in a stern voice.

"haan wo toofan keh raha tha ke aap uski bohot acche se dihaan rakhte ho" she lies and flatters the woman.

"waise aunty aaj aap bohot patli lag rahi hain" she says and she gets excited, starts dreaming of photoshoot.

"sachme? Haan sach hi hoga waise bhi main diet pe jo hoon" she lies eating a chocolate and damz controls her laughter.

"anyways aunty mujhe der ho rahi hai' school shuru hone waali hogi" she says "and aunty main toofan ko kharidne keliye paise jamaa kar rahi hoon, almost done bas isse bechiyega matt" she says and the aunty smirks.

"nahi bechoongi beta bas jaldi se intezaam kardo warna kharidaar aaya to bechna ti parega" she says making damini get annoyed' she leaves.

She enters the school "hi mrs. Gupta, kaisi hain aap?" she asks as she enters the staff room.

"main to A1 hoon lekin aaj tumhaari class lagne waali hai, aaj naye shetaan aaye hain tumhaari class me" she informs and damz laughs.

"meri class me koi shetaani kar sakhta hai kya?" she smirks and leaves.

***********

Okay guys that's it for now' next part I'll try to update on Friday! Hope u like it! If you did please hit the LIKE button!

Check out the Promo on the next post😉

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Nadz 😳

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was lovely Nadz,👏

I specially liked the part where Heer-Gyan and Prithvi-Damini were talking opposite things at the same time. I just loved it. It was really romantic.😛

So opposite attracts?right?😉

I am really loving Gyaan (its not new, phir bhi bolna achcha lagta hai😆)

I loved the friendship between the Mumbaiaans.👏

I loved the sweet relationship between Bhaskar and Payal.😛

I loved the sister-sister relationships in Amritsar, you know we are three sisters (27, 24, 23), and we are our best friends. Heer-Damini-Avni-Roshni they remind me our friendship. (They reminds me about Gyan-Krazzians as well🤗).

Continue soon

Kanu


Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Promo:

Heer working at a bakery and a very silly kind of boy comes to see her, she gets annoyed.

Gyaan is enjoying his life blasting his fathers money, he gets drunk and comes home.

Damini is really irritated by the two new children' she feels like slapping them, she asks principle for advance salary so she can buy toofan but he refuses.

Prithvi is super excited as badal won the jockey race' he sends him in another and badal gets injured.

They all go to amritsar for BhaPa's wedding and GyaanEer meet at a cliff and he saves her from falling' eye locking session.

Damini is at the stable and prithvi comes there, he see toofan and wants to buy him, damz gets upset and goes to fight with him.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice part
Continue soon
Thanx for the PM
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nadz_J

Promo:

Heer working at a bakery and a very silly kind of boy comes to see her, she gets annoyed.

Gyaan is enjoying his life blasting his fathers money, he gets drunk and comes home.

Damini is really irritated by the two new children' she feels like slapping them, she asks principle for advance salary so she can buy toofan but he refuses.

Prithvi is super excited as badal won the jockey race' he sends him in another and badal gets injured.

They all go to amritsar for BhaPa's wedding and GyaanEer meet at a cliff and he saves her from falling' eye locking session.

Damini is at the stable and prithvi comes there, he see toofan and wants to buy him, damz gets upset and goes to fight with him.



wow! that's great😃

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