FF: LNMDJ Gyaaneer-PriDa! NEW UPDATE-pg33

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Diana Lydia

@angelz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

this seems interesting continue soon

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Awesome stuff there Nadz!!

I can't wait to see Gyaan & Heer's relationship to unfold.
I hope it's funny, cuz in KDMHMD they were like mortal enemies.

I'm just confused about all the characters there, but it just might be because I'm so tired right now. I'll read it again tomorrow, & hopefully understand it more better.

But I like the concept.

It's very interesting.

Sorry, I'm finding faults here, but I'm confused as to how many couples is the ff on?

Is it on Prithvi-Damini, Gyaan-Heer, Bhaskar-Payal, Sameer-Avni, Varun-Roshini?

& why did Dadi leave out Avni when she was talking about getting Damini & Roshini married in the future?

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leaves45

@leaves45

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

thanks for the PM.........even though I can't see heer with anyone other then Prem, it still has my Prida.😃

Good work so far.👍🏼

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nadz_J

Heya
Thanks shooo much for reading and commenting🤗
Glad u like it😳😳Hmm it is😳😳
Hmm there will be happiness but pehle milke jhagar to le😆😆😆
Yups dono hain😉 i'm glad u liked it! check out part 1😉
Will update part 2 hopefully tomorrow😉
uh😕😕 sorry will try to update that one aswell😆😆
Luv
Nadz😳

Ha ha jitna chahe jhagar le!!😉 we are waiting.😛
The VM was lovely Nadz,👏
Yes, I am going to read the first part today.

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

well done Nadz👏
It was too good😛
So two cities? Mumbai and Amritsar? cooool😉

"the owner of the jeep and phone was doing pushups on the sand' shirtless [oooh hot] after some time he gets up and you see a guy, hot, handsome and cute", so this is Gyan. I am loving it Nadz. wow!!

I loved the Bhaskar-Gyan friendship. wow! Bhaskar is getting engaged!😃

So Gyan and Heer are quite different, I just can't wait to see what happens in their life. I would love to see their larna jhagarna, the scene in the VM was to cool. Viny darling kya karegi, yeh bhi dekhna chahti hun.😉

I loved the father-daughter, sister-sister relationships in Amritsa😊r. and Dadi is a typical dadi.😆

I don't know anything about Prida but I think soon I will start loving them as well.😉

Missing Armaan😔

continue soon dear

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

wonderful dear.. what an start..i think you have incorporated all the characters of all the channels wonderful.... keep going and do ppm me when you update...

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Nadz_YuNalover

@Nadz_YuNalover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
Hey Nadz... Rocking just rocking..👏

Wow...wat an intro of characters...specially Gyan...saw him as a comic & negative role ...now would luv 2 see his romantic side... 😉

Woohooo.. I m happy ..my other fav.. Prida & Savni r also here...😉... & i guess we gonna get sum comic scenes too as AJ is also here..😆

Read part 1...it waz really gud...👏...very well written & no confusion over lots of characters ...got all of them this time..😆
Really luking 4wrd to c how they met & their lots of pyar bhari nok jhok..& I really mean lots of pyar bhari nol jhok....😳..pehle inkaar phir takraar & finally ikraar..😉

Plzz update soon...just cant w8.. 😉

Heya

Thanks shooo much for reading and commenting🤗

Awww i'm just Glad u like it😳😳

Hmmm humaara gyaan😳😳 romantic par abhi he'll be the bad boy😆😆 yups they are they😉 and AJ ke hote hue no comedy😆😆

I'm just glad u liked part one and didnt find it confusing😆😆 hmmm hone waali hai, bohot si pyaar bhari no jhok😉

will do😃

Luv
Nadz😳