I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 106

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ye raha us part ka comment jo tum ne pg. 118 pe kiya hai.
Nice part dear.
Kitna drama karta hai na Ayaan, as usual us ka light mod vapas aa chuka hai. Yahan Mauli ka tape recorder din bhar chaloo rehta hai. Kitna bolti hai yaar ye, Nishant bhi sochta hoga ki Ayaan kaise jhelta hai is ko. Vow Nishant ka sochna sahi tha, he was ready before time. Liked the dresses of all four. Ayaan ka sadness and loneliness shayad Asmi se accha koi nahi samajh sakta hai na. She really loves him a lot.
Liked specially the moon light scene and their romantic dance. Mauli was doing her best by teasing them so much. I liked the convo b/w NS and AS because of Ayaan. Ek maa baap k liye un k bacchon ki khushi hi sab se jyada important hoti hai. That's y they approoved for Asmi's happiness. First time he said those magical words to Asmi and he said how much he need her in his life.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sumaiya Hey Dii....😃

How r u?? I'm gud Dii....hope u r fine as well....😃
Update was brilliant...👏👏 Thank u Dii....😃
Ayaan is mastermind..Sab log jab usse bevkoof bana kar chhpe hue the tab usne un sab ko dekh liya aur ulta unhe hi bewkoof bana diya..😆😆 Yeah...he has to be a mastermind....specially jab main fic likh rahi hu....ye sab to aam partiality hogi....😆😆
Samay is a fool..Asmi was teasing him n he didn't even understand it..Boys!!! Yeah Dii....Boys just dont understand wat a fool they hav made of themselves....just being BOYS!!😆😆 However exception applies....😉😉😳
Ayaan har cheez der tak kyun karta rehta hai??Shopping mein bahut time leta hai n ab sota bhi der tak hai..Hmm...ye sochne wali baat hai....actually mujhe lagta hai....agar wo sab cheez sahi karega....to shaadi k baad Asmi usme kya badlav layegi?? Yehi soch kar ye sab bachpana karta hoga....😆😆
Asmi ka gussa hona theek hai but agar manane wala Ayaan ho to gussa jaldi hi melt ho jaata hai..😉bechare kitna saare gifts laaya hai..Saare husbands ko usse inspiration leni chahiye😊No wonder Dii....its an obvious wish....😆😆...itne saare gifts n chocolates....😳😳
Asmi has drawn his eyes n I too think that his eyes r his best asset..his eyes so intense n they have so much depth in dem any girl can drown in dem for her entire life..😛We so match in these thoughts Dii....I too think the same....😳😳...I love his EYES!!!😉
Ayaan ne kitni sahi logic lagayi..wedding cards aache ho ya na ho kaya farq padta hai,woh khud ke paas to rahenge nahin😆😆Guess...this has been one of the best logics of Ayaan....I'm glad u all liked Ayaan's urf my logic...😆😆
Madam Asmi ne Ayaan ke "bechare gifts" ko kitni der baad khola but uske andar jo pendant tha woh bahut hi khubsoorat tha..Mujhe bhi chaiye😍Agar sacchi me waisa hota to bhej deti....😆😆...mere paas bhi nahi hai kya karu?😆😆 Waise agar hota to shayad meri khud ki bhi niyat kharab ho jati....😆😆
Asmi ne jab Ayaan ko phone par kiss di to woh kitna shocked reh gaya but woh usse tease karne laga..He wants her to repeat that kiss when he is infront of her..naughty Ayaan!!!But he is really so cute.😛I'm glad u liked this naughty side in him....he is always CUTE!!!😳😳
Dey both were sleeping so cutely dreaming abt each other...
"Dreams take me to another place and time
where my life has reason and rhyme.
I am so happy and in love...
God sent me a gentle 'dove'
He loved me so, more than anyone
I will ever again know.
The talks we had while sitting in bed...
he gently caressed my face and head.
I could 'feel' the love without
a word being said...
I miss him always, want to b with him all time
I can never love anybody more dan him
'My Love' he will always be...
from now until eternity..."
Another lovely poem Dii....iska stock kaha hai bata do na....😆

Continue soon
Bye



Thanks for the lovely comment Dii....BELATED HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!! And guess....am so stuck up that I missed on everything!! However....I'll try to continue soon.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Sumi!
How are you???Hey Sur I'm just ok without my laptop!!
Dekho is baar mai tumhare replies se pehle comment kar rahi hu! I know k its not something to boast of, but aj mai soch ke baithi hu ke sab fics pe reply karungi.Nek khyal tha.....I hope ye khyal ab mujhe bhi aa jaye....though I seriously need my laptop for that!!
Fantastic part
Really loved it.Thank u dear!!
Ayaan ji shopping ke liye aye hai- ab dukan daro ki khair nahi!kyuki vo to vahi dikhayenge jo general logo ko pasand ata hai...Ayaan jaise bande ke liye unke paas thodi na stock hoga!Yeah....Ayaan k liye to special stock chahiye...aur ye baat unhe zara der se samajh ayi...😆
Aur inke tewar to dekho,apni shopping karke, lets go! I know k vo ye sirf Asmi ko chidane ke liye bol raha tha, aur wo bhi kafi smart hai. Uski policy achchi thi, mai thak gai hu, to tumhe bhi thaka ke lautungi. Vaise Ayaan ki baat me bhi dum hai- hai to vo IB officer, uska stamina Asmi se kafi zyada hoga...But still, you never know!Guess....U liked this whole scene....and if yes....then I am extremely happy dear!!😆
Ayaan ke nakhre sach me too much hai- par sweet hai(loyal fans againU better be😉😆😳). Uski vo line, tum ye sab pehen ke mujhse shadi nahi kar sakti mujhe kafi achchi lagi. Actually uske saare dialogues mujhe achche lagte hai (credit goes to u though).I'm so glad u liked this dialogue as well as all his dialogues....and the credit is completely not mine....the very thought that Ayaan is saying this...makes it all the more special....am I not ryt??😉 Thanks anyways...😳😆
Everybody else was very right in hiding. After all unhko kitna wait karwaya Ayaan ne! But mirror k piche nahi chupna chaiye tha...Ayaan is too smart you see.Yeah...Ayaan is too smart for them....he has to be ryt?😉
And the way he avoids that topic- relating to ice cream- sahi hai yaar!Is he ever wrong??😉😆
Samay kafi stupid hai honestly. Mujhe to lagta tha vo in sab baato me smart hoga but....guys are guys...they are never smart when you want them to be. Very true....but every category has sum exceptions ryt?😆 (loyal fan)😉
Ab lagi Ayaan ki watt- phone silent pe karke so gaya...ise zara bhi andaaza hai ke ye kitna dangerous kaam hai? 20 missed calls is something man...
Ab galti kari hai to saza to milegi hi na...And he calls jaan- how cute is that...Asmi surely loved it. But she had more pressing matters to handle you see...Even I think 'jaan' was a gr8 idea........howeverAsmi was way too angry....
Ayaan kitni taiyari k sath aya tha- with gifts and all...nice of him. Akhir usey apni jaan pyari hai na
Aur ye kya- Ayaan mafi mangne aya aur Asmi sorry sorry shuru ho gai! kamal hai!Yeah...thats Ayaan ka kamaal....😉
That painting was soooooooooo beautiful- I cud imagine Ayaan's eyes...intense and soooo lovely, that you could stare into them forever!!!When I think of it I simply get lost.....so even I better move on...😆
Now coming back- ahem ahem...Painting ka fayda ye hua ke Asmi maan gai.Vese bhi kabtak naraz reh legi ha? Ayaan itnaaaa cute jo hai!Exactly...who can be angry wid him yaar??😳
Lagta hai ab Ayaan ko samajh aney laga hai ke Nishant aur Mauli kis taraf badh rahe hai. I cant wait to see what happens to Mauli when he starts teasing her about it!!!Well....the thoughts seem interesting yaar!!😉
It was nice to see ayaan talking about the past from his point of view- kya gazab dhaya tumne! mujhe ye line bhi bahut achchi lagi yaar. This part surely had good dialogues.I am glad u liked this dialogue....warna mujhe to lag raha zyada cheezy ho gaya...😆
Par baat karte karte firse vo sad ho gaya...But asmi hai na usey sambhalne ke liye!Yeah...she is always there to do that....
Ab baat ati hai shadi ke card choose karne ki, to....ye sir ko to koi interest hai nahi- I think usey Asmi ke alawa is hisab se kisi cheez me interest nahi hona chahiye- kyuki ultimately uske paas usi ko rehna hai na!Hmm....ye to sahi....and it cant be denied he is most interested in Asmi only...😉
Gifts to sach me kafi achche the...spl the pendant.Thanks....guess every1 liked it....and when I saw it again....I realize even I like it yaar!! Lagta hai Asmi ko ye 1 baje wala figure hi suit karta hai...Aur achcha hua Ayaan ne is baar phn utha liya, varna pata nahi uska kya hota. Yeah....isiliye jaag raha tha na....😆
Ayaan actually din ba din bigadta ja raha hai...mujhe to shak hai ke shadi se pehle hi pagal ho jayega...hehe, ab jaldi se inki shadi karwa do, bhagwan tumhe duaye dega(mai kahungi unse)Awe....ye to achhi baat hai....main to waise bhi inki shaadi karaungi....and duayein bhi milegi....So sweet of u yaar!!
Aur ha ye zarur bata dena xtra card kiska haiHmm...lagta hai ab maine finally decide kar liya....so I'll tell u soon....😉
Ud asap
Love
Sur



Thanks for the lovely comment Sur.....I loved replying to it...though I had sum very hard hurdles!!😆 Will try to continue soon.😛
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oye......Continue soon !!
Before I forget ki aisa koi fic tha !! :P:P
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Posted: 15 years ago
sumaiya continue soon please..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
AB kahan ho tum?????????????????????cont soon dear................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

😡😡😡 Sumi... tumhari kismat me chote comments hi hai... mai kuch nahi kar sakti... kitni mehnat se maine pura comment type kiya tha... aur post kiya to saara comment hi udd gaya.......... Ab mai kuch nahi jaanti... mera pura dimag garam ho gaya hai... Abki baar bhi aisa hi hua to tumhe comments hi nahi milenge... ye to pakka hai...😡😡😡
😡 Arre Guglu....tumne to phir bhi comment karne ki zehmat uthayi.....main to uss din ke liye....chhor deti....😆😆....and haan....phir bhi tumne bahut bada reply kiya...mera dimag jab garam hota hai main to ye bhi nahi kar pati....
To finally humare mr. Choosy ki shopping khatam ho hi gayi aur unhe apni pasand ke 2 dress mil bhi gaye... Thank God... Warna mujhe to laga ki puri Darjeeling bhi dundh le, par inko apni pasand ke kapde nahi milenge...😛😛😛Yeah...unhe dress to mil gaye....though from Dehradun...😆 Aur ab ye sahab Asmi ki shopping me tang ada rahe hain...😆😆😆.But still yaar I loveeee Ayaan... Aur bada development hua hai inme... MERI FIANCEE😆😆😆Yeah....improvement is gud na....and we all cant help LOVING AYAAN!! And I'm glad u liked the meri fiancee thing!!

Mauli chahe kitni bhi chalaki kyun na kar le par Ayaan se nahi jeet sakti... Dekha na... pakad liya usse...Aur kitni tactfully baat ko mad bhi diya... Yaar ye Samay uski ice cream ko kyun nazar laga raha tha...😆😆😆Yeah...ice-cream ko nazar lagana sabse buri baat hai!!

To Jahanpanah din ke 1:00 baje tak sote hi rahe aur Asmi bechari phone try karti rahi... Ab Ayaan ko pata nahi aakhri baar itni chain ki need kab nasib hui hogi... to oversleeping was natural... u see...😆😆😆 Exactly....oversleeping was natural and guess....its always natural to defend Ayaan.😳Aur unhe asmi ko manane ke liye gifts ke saath aana pada... and he stumbled on to the painting of his eyes... That scene was very beautiful Sumi...😆😆😆 Oh thank u sweetie....I am glad u liked that scene!!Aur Asmi ko madam ko dekho... wo "bechare gifts" ko kamre me hi chod aayi... Aur to aur ye dono Mauli aur Nishant ko dekhkar apni love story yaad kar rahe the...😆😆😆 And the way Asmi teased Ayaan about Nishant's comments regarding his CR was hilarious.Whoa....I'm glad u found that hilarious kyunki pata nahi kyun....mujhe hassi nahi aa rahi thi....may be becoz I had already thought of that scene several tyms....however u liked it...and I am done!!

Ab Ayaan ko ek extra card kyun chahiye...??? 😕 Khair mai puchungi hi nahi... kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tum itni aasani se nahi bataogi... to mai wait karti hun jab tum reveal karo iss baat ko...Sab Ayaan k ek card ke pichhe kyun padhe hai?? Waise ek din pehle hi maine decide kiya usse wo card kyun chahiye....tumhe bhi jald pata chalega!!

Itni raat ko jakar Asmi ko "bechare gifts" dekhne ki yaad aayi... Aur Ayaan jo ki naraz hone ki koshish kar raha tha wo uske BOLD act se naraaz hona hi bhul gaya... 😆😆😆 Hey Guglu....I loved u saying...BOLD ACT!!Ayaan sach me naughty hota ja raha hai... Flying Kiss ko saamne dohraane ko keh raha hai...😆😆😆 Aur zara inn dono ke sone ka tarika to dekho... ek gift pakad ke to dusra apna phone pakad ke...😆😆😆I'm glad u found it all nice....sab sahi sahi ho gaya...phew!!

An awesome part Sumi... Mazaa aa gaya padhke...👏 Aur tumne apne pracs ke bich update kiye hain... to this is for you...🤗Oh thank u Guglu....actually main fics ke bina reh hi nahi pati....mera to Laptop kharab hai....warna main zams k bich bhi UD kar deti...however I'm sooooooooooooo glad u liked this part!!

Continue when your time permits... (See how considerate I am...😉)So true yaar!!😆

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

hiiiiiiiii dear,

how are u?????Hey Madhu....I'm gud!!
vaise shuru main hi ek baat bata deti hu tum bohut acchi tarah se progress kar rahi ho.
yeh fic aur bhi cute hota jaa raha hai & romantic alsoAwe...I'm glad u think so yaar!!
saare problems se dur,just bindaasKyunki problems se mujhe sakht allergy...I just cant handle them...isiliye jaldi jaldi dur karti hu....😆
vaise Ayaan jaisa saathi agar ho to sab kuch sapna hi lagta hai
i am in love with Ayaan EVEN ME!!!
smart,cute, sweet,romantic,kisi ka bhi dream manSo true...and its ironical that he is just a dream!!
now coming to the update,
wonderful part
superbThanks...
Ayaan ka shaadi ki card ka theory bohut accha laga
yaa he is right, cards distribute ho jayenge,uske saath kya karna hai log jaane, lekin costume to aapne paas hi rahega naa, so uske peeche engry barbad karna chayiyeHehe....ye theory to hit ho gayi...thanks yaar!!
Ayaan abhi soch main hai Nishant & Mauli ke baare main,
but mujhe pata hai unn logo ki jodi bhi bohut acchi hogiHmm...even I think so...hehe
extra kore pratita scene e kichu bolar nei
Fantastic update
awsome
just wow
beautifully written
great going
plz continue soonThanks a lot dear...I'll try my best to continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
superb
awesome
i read all part
its superb
update soon



Hey Ritu....gr8 to hav u bak...(though as of now...its I who am bak) I am glad u read all the parts n liked it all!! Thank u for the sweet comment dear....will try to UD soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very good. 👏👏

Finally Ayaan ne apni shopping kar hi li.😉 Par phir jab usne kaha ki who Asmi ki dresses choose karega...toh laga ki this could take ages..but luckly he did find the perfect out-fits for His Fiance'😉 Hey Nisha....I'm glad u liked the part...and yeah...FINALLY jahapana ko apni pasand ki outfit mil gayi!!
Ayaan ko boodhu banana impossible hai. Mauli ka idea achha tha...par Ayaan he too smart for her. 😆So true...Ayaan is way too smart!!
Preparation for the wedding are in full force...and everyone is busy. Par Ayaanji toh 1.00 baje tak soo rahe the😃...Aur iss galti ke liye unhe kitni mehnat karni padi Asmi ko manane ki.
Ayaan is completely surprised to see Asmi's painting😲. It was the best gift that she could have given him...except for herself.😳How truly said....except for herslef!!
Asmi is right, Mauli and Nishant make a cute pair. Hope the two of them realise this soon. 😊Dont worry...main hoon na!!
Talking about the past reminds Ayaan about Pari's accident and this troubles him deeply😭. But Asmi distracts him quickly....she will never let him be sad.Yeah....thats for sure!!
His gift for Asmi was very very beautiful 👏(Where did you find such a cute pendant?On the net....😆...I'm glad u liked it dear!!) It is perfect for them.And after hearing how much Asmi has liked his gift, Ayaan becomes speechless for some time. He would buy her a gift everyday..just to see her so happy and to hear these magical words from her.😉😳Yeah...he wud do that...as long as his bank balance permits him!!
please continue soon.
And wish you all the best for your exams. 👍🏼Thank u dear!!

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