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@maloo19

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#461

it was really a heart touching ff

will miss it alot

luv Marium

Edited by maloo19 - 15 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#462

tera pic kafi acha tha.......agli baar bhi kabhi bhi tum log kuch bhoologe toh i am there 😃 😃

but tu seriously ise bhool gayi thi? i cant believe that u forgot such a beautiful ff?

but i am really very sad for its end.........har achi cheez ka end kyun hota hai?

and at this end........i wont observe too much.........

thank god nupur ne mayank ke baare mein socha toh sahi! and this is a wonder that he came and gave her his diary......though i knew this.....

and she had read that?

that means she is agreeing?

oho! to ridhima ki bhi engagement ho rahi hai! congrats ridzy!

how cute! mayank and nupur had such a cute convo........abhi shaadi hui nahi aur apne begaane ho gaye! and mayank kissed her!

but i really loved the gunur convo........the way gunjan changed the topic......the way nupur blushed.....the way sam came and touched his face fo the slap when nupur asked......u write brilliantly.....

and then nupur wearing a saree........and mayank shocked! and sam asking to close his mouth.....and then interlocking hands......i loved everything......

and i loved ridzy and nupur' convo..........nupur made her smile.....and then its going to be her marriage.......

one month passed away......and its her wedding day.....and the convo of nupur and ridzy was awesome! and then they got married.......and the shayari part was awesome.....infact u never write anything on mayur that i dont like....

how did armaan died? i am feelign like crying......but how cud he die? oh my god! the way u descibed that sindoor scene made me cry buckets.......but how did he died? and then the scenes that followed only made me cry!

awesome ff!

i loved being a reader of this!

life stops for nothing!

and all the shayaris were awesome!

u really did an outstanding job!

i wud miss this ff!

good bye this ff........and i wish the new one to arrive!

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#463

nice ending.........
will miss ths ff..

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#464

such a fantastic ending... it was magical~

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Radhika

@Contradiction01

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#465

hey sanam...!!
y u ended dis ff...!!
i mean maine saare parts bhi nahi padhe n dere cumes a lst part to read..!!
sad....so sad...!!
but it's totally fine wid me as i'm too a writer...!! :))
now cumin to d part...!!
it was so senti man...!!
aise senti parts mat diya kar...!! ;P
luved d mayur bonding....it was d bst part of d whole...!!
jus luved d part to d core...!!
do updt d oder ffs...!!

wid loads of luv
radz

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#466

oh sanam!that was such a beautiful ending....poor Ridzy, in her case, itz true that kuch paane ke liye kuch khona padhta hai.....i was totally shocked when i read Armaan's sacrifice....that was so emotional[believe me, it brought tears 2 my eyes😭].....i'm sooooo gonna miss this ff.....

P.S: kya pata shayad "kaho na pyar hai" style mein armaan waapis aa jaye [bas main aise imagine karlungi!😃]

Bhavana