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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

well i got back with my this time short comments........

meri observations ke liye tyaar ho jao........

pata nahi kyun but i feel like killing ajay......itna kuch karne ke baad bhi he wants to see nupur? and that too she is kidnapped!

did i told u that i hate rv? love doesn't mean that the person shud be urs.....love means to simply let it be free.....u cant keep the person trapped........then its not love! its only attraction......i hate rv......how dare he touched her? i am feeling so sad for nupur......aaj hi use itne dukh dene the? well but mayank tumhe bacha lega nupur..........and rv is a psycho.......

so nupur called mayank.......thank god! everyone else was so worried......nupur hits rv??? he deserved that! thank god mayank saved her........actually she saved her herself.....but mayank rescued her......she wanted a space change........she needed that.....

awesome AR scenes.....SANAM!!!!!!! i am gonna kill u! yeh song maine decide kiya tha use karne ke liye......but u used it! chalo phir bhi main ise use karoongi......... 😃 but do i need to tell that i LOVE this song? hamari frd ne itna aacha song jo likha hia........who wont love it?and besides it perfectly suits the situation......

i am happy that now mayur are talking......nupur tumhari manzil toh mayank hai......what? mayank did proposed her! i loved that! but i know that situations are making her think else wise......i knew that why she refused! but mayank has to do something.....and she hugged her father?? that's really love......

dont say no nupur...........dont......he really loves u.......shefali has no problem with sanaya and gunjan? is she mad? i cant understand! she is like a devi in shows........gunjan ki bidai ho gayi? comeon! nupur ki problem bhi sahi hai......she thinks that he only is sympathetic towards her.....while he really loves her!

AR ek ho gaye........what abt my mayur? awesome part! loved it to bits......but i really am waiting for the next part......and i hope that its not the end of it.....


tremendously excellent update.......

do continue soon....

and can i ask for a favour? yaar i too wannabe a character in this ff.....i wud miss this ff.......

but i guess that not's possible.....

but do continue soon........

again mahi this is not short😆😆

par its okayy!!

tu na seriously mere bhahi ki magazine forum mein critic banja

she would someone like you

who critques everthing because

she is xactly like u abt everything she has a comment!

yes dear next part is the end of ot it

dun wrry don't u knwo the saying

every end is a start of something new😉

-sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
heya sanam...!!
jus read d recent part only...!!
will read d rest later...!!
wow...!! wat a part...!!
mayu's propsal was cho gud n nice...!!
aur haan samrat n nupur ke frnship karagi ya nahi....!!
jaldi kara de...!! :))
n d rest was luvely...!!
n ya do cont soon...!!
n thanxx for d pm...!!

wid loads of luv
radz
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sanam..nice part..
Nupur is kindapped by RV..n Ajay is really worried about her..
RV locks the door n goes out..but Nupur wakes up n calls Mayank..he rushes to come find her..n when RV comes she takes a vase n hits him..so that he faints!..
Mayank comes at the right moment n saves her..yay..n she does'nt wanna go home but walk on the beach..
AR are in a restuarant..n he feeds her..hw sweet..n a song plays which suits them perfectly..aww..n they confess to each other too..btw zoya, that song was awesome..
Armaan's dad also came to their house, nice..i hope AR get married too..
Mayank proposes to Nupur..but she feels its out of sympathy..Kripa n Ridz tell her to accept him..but she does'nt wanna..
Gunjan is getting married..n coming to Samrat's house..nice..n finally!..
aww the fic is ending?..thats sad bt i'll never 4get it cuz through this i met such an awesome person like u..🤗
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
you know what I just loved this song And of course your part Sanu

well I am speechless every time you end up passing the limit of expectation Bravo!!!!

Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sanam sweetheart loved this part specially for mayank's proposal do continue soon and ya thanks for your pm 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Goodie..this was fun!
Me enjoyed this part Sanuu..."))
Thanks for the PM
Love
Aranya
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry for the late comment
it was really good
contd soon
thanx for the pm
so sweet part


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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow di lovely update . Loved zoya di's song really nice . So eager to see wht happens to mayur . Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr888 prt
update next prt soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
im eagerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy waiting
thanxx 4 d pm

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