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Posted: 15 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i too know that!
i guess that what i am worried abt
but now no worries......
coz i am gonna stay away from his sight as much as possible........
that's it!

did i told u abt his letter?

awww jaani!!

i know its hard for u!!

but y torture him...he actualli maybe likes u!!

no wat letter???

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Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#372

i know.......its hard for me too.......but i have no other option.....
actually he gave me a letter telling me his reviews abt my story "for ur happiness"
i mean yeh story sirf simmi aur usne padhi hai.........and this was the first story i wrote abt mayur.....
infact the first story i wrote when i became 16......
and he read that and gave me his reviews in the form of a letter.....and that letter told me how much he knows me.....
his comments + his words touched me a lot!
i wonder if only i am the onw whom he praises so much!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
i know.......its hard for me too.......but i have no other option.....
actually he gave me a letter telling me his reviews abt my story "for ur happiness"
i mean yeh story sirf simmi aur usne padhi hai.........and this was the first story i wrote abt mayur.....
infact the first story i wrote when i became 16......
and he read that and gave me his reviews in the form of a letter.....and that letter told me how much he knows me.....
his comments + his words touched me a lot!
i wonder if only i am the onw whom he praises so much!

awwwww how sweet of him!!

realli i neva knew that

that is sooo sweet/cute that he wrote a letter

mahi i think ur the onli one...

cuz th time and effort he takes to write and tell u this

stuff

i think he is serious about u!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

awwwww how sweet of him!!
realli i neva knew that
that is sooo sweet/cute that he wrote a letter
mahi i think ur the onli one...
cuz th time and effort he takes to write and tell u this
stuff
i think he is serious about u!

i guess that too
coz when simmi read the letter (i showed her)......she said that he never wrote a letter to me! they r frds since 4 yrs.......best frds......that's why i too think that i am the only one......
sim and he are so close that they even hug.....but he never wrote to her!
but i did wrote a reply back letter.........and guess what? he read that letter within the lecturers.......risking everything.....and then had a talk with me after school....
i am gonna go insane!
that's why i haven't met him since 6 days........

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Tasnim

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Posted: 15 years ago

#375

v nice ff...
plz add me 2 ur pm list..

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Niky

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Posted: 15 years ago

#376

Awww...really nice part!!!👏👏👏

Love,

Niky😊

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surbhi tyagi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#377

nice update dear.........

continue soon...............

thanks for the pm.................

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Posted: 15 years ago

#378

PART 10

Ajay instantly got up, " jatin yeh tu kya bol raha??" while jatin shamefully bows his head down not wanting to look up. " yaar mayank ka phone ahabi ahbi aya hai!", Ajay becomes furious , " muhje ahbi mayank ke pass le chal!" to which jatin nodds and they head towards the car.

RV is looking at nupur as she is unconcious on the bed, " tum bas meri ho" he thinks as he goes closer and touches her face. He smiles and carreses her hair, " jab se tumhe maine dehka hai mein pagal hogaya hoon, aur ab tum us samrat ki nahi ban sakti!". He gets up an dwalks towards the wall, where he has tons of pictures of nupur posted on the wall and he touches each one slyly and smiles.He gets a phone call, " hello yes ma okay main araha hoon!". He looks over and sees that she is still sleeping , he goes out and locks the door from the outside and leaves. WHile nupur stirs and wakes up, she looks around and remebers Rv calling her, and she walks to the door and realizes its locked. She screams but no one is there to listen to her.

While mayank and samrat are worried they try calling everyone they know but no one seems available, and then jatin and ajay walk in hurriedly.
" kuch pata chala?" jatin asks mayank who nodds no
" meri beti muhje chahiye, kahan hai woh?" samrat tries to calm down ajay who is angry and worried.
" dad...."mayank starts to say but his cell rings, " nupur?", he quickly connect to the call
" hello.....nupur,!!" everyone gets up and look towards him, " kahan ho tum kya....don't worry tum shant raho, mein kuch karta hoon!". He turns off the cell and looks at his
" dad i have to do this alone!" his dad nodds while ajay is just worried about his daughter

RV comes back and opens the door, only to be hit in the head with a vase, He falls to the ground and faints. Nupur gets her cell and runs out. She is running around widly since she doesn't know the place very well and is scared. She is about to be hit by a car, but gets pulled away and lands safely into mayanks arms.She looks up and sees him, " mayank tum!" she hugs him tightly and starts to cry. While mayank just consoles her and lets her cry. He feels really bad for her, they both walk towards the car and he helps her sit in.
" can we somewhere else!, i don't want to go home!" she says queitly while mayank is not sure, as thinks of ajay, " par nupur ajay uncle..."
" mayank please?" she looks at him sadly and he nodds okay.
" kahan jana hai?"
" kahin bhi, bas is dokhe baari duniya se durr" she says as she looks out the window as they drive away.

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Dubai
Riddhima and arman are at a restaurant having lunch. Riddhima is still in the wheelchair because of the operation. Arman helps her pour her food and sits down, " ammy you know main kahbi soch nahi tha ke...." arman cuts her, " ke tum duniya ke sabse handsome larke ke saath luch kar rahi hogi! right" riddhima giggles, " i don't know about that, par i know i'm sitting with the most handsome boy in my life!" arman smiles and motions her to eat riddhima starts to eat but her hand hurts, arman sees this so he moves his chair next to her and starts to feed her, " you know ......"
" i know i know .....tum khud kar sakti ho!" arman says completing her sentence
But riddhima nodss no, " nahi ammy i 'm trying to say that you know i could get used to this, i feel special!" she says cutely as arman helps her eat, " well good, because you are special!" riddhima leans her head on his shoulder and smiles

"goodmorning ladies and gentle today we have a special guest for couples night she will sharing with us her first ever hit song, please welcome to the stage ZOYA KAPOOR!!"

Everyone clapps and on the stage comes zoya with her guitar.....

"i have a question and

i'm searching for an answer

all i get is more confusion

is this love or just infatuation

i wanna know what i really feel about you

i try real hard to keep you out of my mind

but all i do is miss you more

i wish i could get a way out of this problem

i wanna know what i really feel about you

when i sit alone i realise how much you meant to me

i was stupid and blind

to not see what was before me

i wanna know what i really feel about you

i guess i will never know now

what you felt and what i did

i will just think of it as

we were not meant to be

i had a question

i know now theres no answer for

all i ever wanted was

to know what i really felt for you"
( guys this song is written by zoya herself and do tell if you liked the song, she would like to know)

Arman and riddhima continously stare at each other throughout the song.

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The car halts to a stop at the beach and out comes mayank and nupur. They both walk forward to the beach and take a seat.
" mayank!"
" hmmmm" mayank turns and looks at her , he sees her smiling and looking at the couple playing in the water,
" zindagi kahbi socha hi nahi tha ke yeh sab hoga!" she says queitly looking ahead

" kya matlab?" mayank said looking at her depressed face

" mayank tumhe pata hai bachpan se hi mein samrat aur apni zindagi ke sapne dehke aur yahan ake pata chala ke woh mera kahbi tha hi nahi"

" shayad yeh khuda ka koi ishara ho!" nupur at mayank in suprise, " matlab?"

" matlab yeh ke samrat bas ek rasta, shayad tumhari manzil koi aur ho?" he said as he got and helped her get too. They both walked along the beach silently of the little convo they just had.

" manzil thi, par ab woh dhoondli hogayi hai, ab bas durr durr tak andhera hai!" nupur said looking down

" aur agar us andhera ko roshini dena wala miljaye toh!"

" mila tha, par ab woh kisi aur ka hogaya hai!" mayank turned to look at nupur and stopped,

" Nupur agar main tumse ahbi aur isi waqt muhje se shaadi karne ke liye kahoon toh tum kya kahogi?"

Nupur froze in her spot and didn't have any words to, and something came in her mind. This was all sympathy for his brothers doing. He wants to repay for what samrat did, doens't he?

" mayank tum hosh mein kya? pagal mat bano. Yeh meri zindagi hai koi mazak nahi" mayank got up and looked into her eyes to see her afraid and sad. He knew he had to do something before he lost her forever.

" par nupur" before he could say anything she stopped him

" i want to go home!" and i saw her run to the car.

They reach home and everyone is waiting for them at the door. Nupur runs to ajay and hugs him, " papa....." ajay embraces her comfort her while everyone else watches in awe.

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Shefali and Sanaya are talking and sanaya says, " shefali just to confirmest ajay is only Shefali's" to which shefali smiles and says, " i always found a great friend in you" Imrana replies, " and same here, okay i have to go now!".

Kripa and Nupur are talking and Nupur is sad over her broken engagement with samrat. She says, "I will say no to mayank", but kripa smacks her forehead, " are you crazy yaar mayank is such a good guy!" Nupur is still not sure she looks at his picture, ' yaar remeber you use to tell me about this perfect guy who will be your perfect husband!" Nupur looks at her and nods, " haan toh"

" toh kya idiot, mayank hi wohi larka hai!" kripa says annoyed by nupurs constant downcast behaviour,

" nahi yarr yeh sahi nahi hai!" nupur says thinking about it again and again

" forget it , its impossible to convince, bhard mein joa tum!" kripa leaves agrily from there leaving nupur to her thinking.

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Riddhima is talking to nupur on the phone and is angry, " di what is wrong with you your rajecting mayank....let me get this straight mayank??" Nupur on the other side is annoyed by this constant push by everyone to accept mayank.Nupur after awhile says, " ridzy i ave decided i will never get married". Riddhima doesn't say anything because she realizes that nupur is under alot of pressure , " and i also think mayank is sacrificing only because of his younger brother" To which riddhima stays silent.

Shefali is happy after her talk with sanaya and she calls ajay. She asks" are you mad" to which he says. " I can never be mad at you and we are coming back". Shefali says" I am very eager to meet my 3rd daughter and also armanr's father came over to talk to ajay" He says, " don't worry when i come back, i will talk to him".They say goodbyes and hang up.

Nupur comes to ajay and he's thinking about something. He says" nupur I want your happiness and that same laughter I used to see when you were young". Nupur hugs her dad and cries as she going through alot of emotional turmoil and doesn't know what to do.

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Sanaya sits by gunjan when she wakes up in the morning. She looks at her and her eyes become moist." mama kya hua?"

" beta tu apni mama ko chorke ja rahi hai, apne ghar!" Gunjan starts to realize this and becomes sad at this thought and she quickly hugs sanaya.They both hug and cry

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Nupur is coming down the stairs when she comes face to face with Mayank.

They stare at each other and song starts playing

Sapne in ankhon mein kiske basey hain
Sanson ki khamoshi mein kyun kangan bajey hain
Sanson ki sun lo tum pukar ye hai dil ki dharkan
Ankhon mein bhar lo mera pyar ye hai dil ki dharkan
Dharkan kyun muskuraye
Dharkan mujhe kya bataye

Nupur is in the lawn thinking of whenMayank proposed to her. She doesn't know what to do, one point she has mayank and then other she feels as if he is just doing this out of guilt. SHe feels like her life at this point where if she doesn't choose where she wants to go then she'll end up loosing everything she has.

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Arman and riddhima are in a park , by a fountain., " riddhima thank you!" arman whipers to her while riddhima looks up, " kis liye?"

" meri zindagi mein ane ke liye!" he says to her as he kisses her forhead. Riddhima becomes she and looks down,

" i love you arman"

" i love you too riddhima!"

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Jatin tells Ajay that Nupur said no to Mayank.Ajay says" nupur can't hide her emotions..she's deeply hurt and I'm responsible for it". Ajay looks at jatin and ask, " tune gunjan ko toh apna liya haina?" to which jatin nodds.Then he says, " Kal gunjan ki bidaai hai, ter aur nupur ke dubai jane se pehle!". Ajay tentatively agrees for it saying" agar nupur ki nahi toh gunjan ki bidaai toh kar sakta hoon !" .

Jatin comes to Samrat and tells, " samrat you've taken a big step without my permission...if gunjan wasn't ajay's daughter, then I'd never have forgiven you". He tells samrat " ho and say sorry to nupur!". to which samrat agrees and nodds his head. Then his dad goes away saying, " gunjan is coming to this house tommorrow so go and fix your room!" samrat is confused, but happy.

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Okay guys here is part 9 and then some shocking news next part is the last part!!!!!!!!.I know I know par kya karein the story is coming to an end soon like in the next part.Also forgive me for nay mistakes guys i wrote this part in a hurry. Please do comment, they mean alott to mee.

-Sanam-

Edited by PheliNazar - 15 years ago