~ DharkanHoTum(AR FF)Last Part updated Pg61 - Page 28

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

chal i am happy ki tune ise update kar hi diya.......

main toh ise bahut pasand karti hon..........

aur main pehle hi bata deti hoon........ki agar mujhe is pat mein mayank nahi mila toh main tujhse turant new update karvaaooongi.......

i wont be able to see nupur with sam now......

rv and nupur for a coffee???????

i do believe on this line- it's all God's games and there is always a reason behind us meeting everyone

i hated sam's behaviour.......

i know he has hs own problems......

but he cant shout at nupur..........

tune kya nupur ko emri thinkng dii hai?

i mean i too believe in love after marriage.......like i told u......i think its pure and stronger.......

why isnt sam telling her abt gunjan?

waah!

nupur ke peeche rv!!!!!!

i knew that!

yipee!

aakhi mayank ne entry maar hi li!

aur mayur ek doosre ke frds bhi hain!

and mayank is drooling over nupur........

bahut acha hua rv ke saath!

lekin ab woh badla lega!

i loved mayank's words........

but i simply loved the fact that now mayank knows abt sam and gun

maybe he will save nupur!

loved this part to bits!

ab tu jaldi to update karne waali hai nahi, toh phir kya fayda kehkar ki - do update soon......

but this part was brilliant........

and i will be waiting for the next one..........

love,
Mahak

P.S.- i am the first one to comment! 🥳

thanxz mahi jaanu!!!!!!!!!!

yepp ur hte first one to comment!

luv yaa!!

-sanam-

Originally posted by: MJHTFANMAHIMA

sorry but hate samrat here.......

can't wait for the next update..........

wat is mayur story........

no probz i hate samm too

will updt soon!

mayur story is yet to cum!😉

-sanam-

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

awesome part yaar!!!please update soon.pm me😳

thanxz hun

yes i iwll pm u!

-sanam-

Originally posted by: Senny

hey sanam, awesomeeeeeee update, i feel sad sad for MN, i hope they would be able to find and understand love soon, Keep writing. Great work.

hey sennyy dun't feel sad yaar everything will be kk!!>..............i dun kno we will see!!

thanxzz

-sanam-

Originally posted by: bhavana2692

Thanx 4 the PM Sanam!Jus caught up with ur ff.....itz beautiful hun!👏
i feel sad 4 all the 3 gals in this ff-Ridz, Nupur & Gunjan.....Armaan is so sweet, glad that Ridzy accepted his love 4 her!😊
Sam's character somehow doesn't feel right 2 me.....agreed that he loves Gunjan, but by juggling b/w his parents, Gunjan & Nupur, telling each one diff. lies, doesn't he realize how many lives hez spoiling?😒but well, he can't be blamed 2 much, coz hez in a very big mess himself.....hope he realizes his mistakes soon.....[plz don't feel bad, these r jus my opinions]
at last, mayank aa gaya, hope everything turns out alright & nupur finds solace in him.....but this RV, he totally seems like a psycho!😡
y do i feel that the mystery man in Sanaya's life is Ajay?😉

Continue soon,
Bhavana

thanxz bhavana hunii......................no probzz i actualli loved reading ur opinions!!! ......

hmmm sanaya's ife is a mystery which will reveal soon!😉

-sanam-

Originally posted by: myownarea

hey Sanam
I was just going thru some earlier comments
I m soo sorry I ve harassed u for Mayank ki entry quite a lot
dil se sorry :D

ah yes this update I loved.absolutely n u know y:)

hey divzz yaar

no probzzz!!!............every1 has been harrasing me😆😆

................yepp i kno y?

-sanam-

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

hey Sanam, I am somewhat busy right now so tomorrow, I'm going to go through the whole ff and read it

Okay?

Sorry!

no probzz nikky

i understand

i'm going through the same phase hun!

i have exam going on!

-sanam-

Originally posted by: princess14

hey great part...what a ending though..can't wait to read about what mayank has to say....

update soon!!! thanks

yeppp ...............thanxzz hunii

i can't wait to write wat mayu has to say!😳

i will updt soon!

-sanam-