FF: Memories of a Lifetime- Mayur; Chp14-p65-NEW!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#221

you updated rach..!!

hehe

well...this one's becoming my fav of all of your FFs now....leaving apart destiny of course.!! hehe

Awesome part..!

Mayur scene was great....so much of unsaid words and tension between them..!

The flashback was soo sweet one....he wanted to fill up the slambook first...LOL awwwwwww

anyway....best part is that he's moving to Delhi..!! yayy

and Nupur is teh one he'll meet there...hehe Haina..?

I'm looking forward to it...

and i think Nupur will have a hand in changing him a bit na...since he well was thinking about how he is with everyone...

Great part..!!

do continue soon..!!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#222

wow.........
mayank got lost in her eyes.....
how lovely......
and he knew that she can't lie......
how beautiful.......
why did nupur cried?????
what happened??????
mayank was stunned??????
but why?????

why did nupur cried?????
nothing happened in the flashback........then why?????

hurray mayank bhi delhi mein........
ab to mayank aur nupur milenge hi.......
yippeeee!!!!!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#223

hey Rachna,
Mind blowing, fantastic update.
i loved the emotion of nupur and confused mayank.
So mayank does not like Samrat.. But why????????
And plz reveal the mayur past soon.
Just eagerly waiting to know nups past.
i m little bit sad u didn't PM me.
plz try to Pm me ur next update.
Take Care
Faria---------------------------------------------

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399703

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#224

Hey hun

rocking update as always

I guess we will get to read more mayur meetings in next parts, hope so!

Loved the update

cont soon

x x

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#225

awwwwwwww rachna how can you think so beautifully and so deep, each and everytime you connect a chord with my heart and make me wanting to just keep on blessing this little girl with immense talent.

i loveeeeeeee the way you write with simplicity but depth and its all so genuine that i just can;t help it but read it again and again.

i am soooooo excited to see what happens ahead, yayyyyyyyyyyyy MN will be together in delihi, lets see if they meet or not though.

M i l feel the same, like everyone hates me, i can understand his feelings so well and even nups who is all broken from inside.

Keep it uppppppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Rabi

@rose.mn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#226

hey rachna just tell me how could u?
just tell me how could u yaar?
how could u write an awesome ff like this😉
i just read all parts
they all r just awesome, mindblowing, fantastic, fabulous, fantabulous etc etc👏
i just love this. story line is so lovely. nupur's unconditional love 4 mayank n mayank don't know anything abt this...... simply brilliant story
plzzzzzz add me to ur pm list
plz plz plz
n plz do pm me when u update

n u said this is ur 4th ff so plz can u give me links of ur other ones
i would love to read them
i m sure they all will be great as this one is😊

plz do cont soon
i want to know how mayank n nupur will meet once again

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#227

mayank is moving to delhi!
that is jst great!
i missed this ff
im soo glad u updted
i loved it!
the flashback esp!
anyways continue soon

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#228

wow mayu will b going to delhi

gr888 prt

update sooon plez

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#229

Rach!

awesome part.. the flashback.. and the way u described Nupz sadness.. and M's transfering well.. this will "arouse" so many new "problems"

sorry for short comment.. im sick and i can't type

: (

xSonii

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shinz

@shinz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#230

oye hoye....u updated...ahem.....THANK GODDD!!!!! 😆
now...the update was as always fantastic...!!....and i know whats gonna happen now...!...tada....mayur meet in delhi..! 😳 😳
now iske baad do not take a lot of time to update..and i m really liking these flashback things...!