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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hie frnds thanks for replying..luv all u guys...Sorry couldn't reply to each one bt love your comments.
Here's Part 2...

Part 2

Juneja House Mumbai,
An old man talking on the phone comes down the stairs….
Man: ha voh deal kaise bhi pakki karni padegi….
Prem comes from behind….wearing a pair of denims and a cool Blue shirt…
Prem: Dad..Dad..Dad…aap kabhi toh office ki batton se break lo.. kamse kam ghar pe…
Dad: BTW office se yaad aya..tere new office ke interior ka kya hua….????
Prem: Dad phir se office…..nyways uska contract humne Gulmohor designing house ko diya hai and koi Miss Heer Sharma uski project ki incharge hai..
Dad: ha tik hai ek baar usse baat karlo…ki kaam kab se kaam suru kargi…
Prem: dad aaj Sunday hai…I think you should relax…aur aaj mein yudi ke sath hiking pe ja raha hu….aap arahe hai….???
Dad: beta agar is umar mein hiking karne jaunga…toh tujhe Mujhe vahi aas paas hospital mein barti karwana padegi…
Mom: yeh subah subah hospital ki baat kaun karne laga…????
Prem: oooooh…ab boliye kaun hospital ja raha hai….????
Dad: arey voh mein keh raha tha ki mera frnd hospital mein hai…
Prem: (laughing) Aaj phir bach gaye aap…..varna mom ko pata chalta na ki aap phir mar mara ne ki batein kar rahe hai...
Dad: beta mujhe toh aadat hai bachne ki tere ma se baal aise thodi na safed kiye hai...
meanwhile Yudi (prem's frnd) enters
Yudi: Gm dude..good morning uncle and auntyji
Prem: chalo dad yudi gaya hum dono nikalte hai..
Dad: ha tik hai...
Prem and yudi both leave..



Meanwhile in Excel College:
Gunjan enters the college in her car wearing a knee length spaghetti black dress with her hair open.
Mayank parks his car and gets down stands by his car and is busy checking whether Nupur has replied. In his brand new cell which Heer gifted him just a day before….
Gunjan parks her car and suddenly Mayank starts walking and gunjan without realizing that Mayank is moving opens her car's door….
And C-R-A-S-H… Mayank's cell falls dwn..and breaks….

Gunjan gets down
Gunjan: srry srry srry tumhe kahi lagi toh nahi na….
Mayank: Mujhe nahi lekin mere Brand new cell ko lagi and lagta hai uska antim sanskar karna padega…bichara ek din bhi nahi jee paya…
Gunjan: what…?????
Mayank :aur nahi toh kya…mera cell tut gaya…kal hi mila tha…
Gunjan : you must be kidding dude mein tumse tumhare bare mein puch rahi hu aur tum apne cell ka haal bata rahe ho….
Mayank: Look at that cell sweety…it is a brand new model…and you killed it….you killer…
Gunjan: ohk…srry but I need to go…I have to submit my form
Mayank: what…???? Miss killer tum isi college mein ho..please mere aur cell mat todna…please….
Gunjan: nahi todungi….bt yeh mera 2nd year hai..aur tum Mujhe Gunjan Bhushan ko nahi pehchante…u must be new….???
Mayank: oh… mein new hu…toh tum meri senior ho..???
Gujan: ha hi.....im Gunjan…
Maynak: okay…hi im Mayank…chalo I need to go now…bie..cya…soon…
Gunjan: ookiez…cya


Meanwhile in Delhi..
At shergill house...

Samrat: Chipkali.. kya hua hai tujhe.., aaj k din inna sad kyun hai.??
any prob..??
Nupur: bhaiya dun call me chipkali.. n sad... ummm..
Sarmat: boy frnd ka panga hai kya..???
Nupur: aisa kuch nahi hai..
Samrat:Fir Kya hua Hai..?? kuch batayegi..??
Nupur: Mayank hai na..???
Samrat: haan..... kya hua usse..??
Nupur: usse kuch nahi hua.. usne mujhe wish nahi kiya... usne kal kaha tha mujhe subah sabse phele wish karega buh he dint..
Samrat: arrey hua ho ga kuch yaar... relax.. subah k baad ek baar b mail check kiya tune.??
Nupur: nahi..
Samrat: toh fir go n check.. shayad msg aaya ho..
Nupur: msg aaya b hoga toh mai usse baat nahi karne wali...
Samrat: Well Do sallo mein meine kabhi bhi tujhe usse gussa hote nahi dekha toh i guess gussa hone ke chances kum hai.... now go n check ur mail..
Nupur: Ummm...

Precap: Prem Heer Meet...Nupur Excited....and mayank worried...



Please comment...should i write bigger parts or is it fine...???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar update next part sooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzz thanxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome yaar update next part sooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzz thanxxxxx 4 d pm



thank you very much...happy u liked it....😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
M so glad to see that ppl r liking thiZz ff..
awww.... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi ANSHIKA.
lovely update.
Like how mayank was teased by his Di.
also love mayu-ginji meet up.
And u kno a long update alwz made me happy.
So if u think 4 a longer 1,then it will b a great pleasure for me.
.
keep it up.
thanx 4 ur PM
Faria

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi ANSHIKA.
lovely update.
Like how mayank was teased by his Di.
also love mayu-ginji meet up.
And u kno a long update alwz made me happy.
So if u think 4 a longer 1,then it will b a great pleasure for me.
.
keep it up.
thanx 4 ur PM
Faria



Hey thanx for ur sweet comments......will try and write longer one's if i get time...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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marvelous part...........pm me too when u update the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: happylite

marvelous part...........pm me too when u update the next part.



thanx....will surely PM u..
Posted: 16 years ago
#29
do cont soon!!

sooo small part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

do cont soon!!

sooo small part!!



thank u....will update a bigger part next time...sure...

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