KHHP~~~~IMP NOTE on pg 15

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Hey Guys Im Anshika nd I m writing my first FF. Thought of writing one....so I and my friend Shraddha (coolgirl143123) are together writing this FF.
Friends I m posting the Title track and the character sketch of the story. If you want me to continue please comment.....

Title Track:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TNEo0i-oM5E


Kyun hota hai pyaar...

*Character Sketch*

Nupur Shergil
: She is studying in B.Pharma 1st year. She is a very straight forward girl. Likes to chat a lot. She always busy in her sweet dream world. Loves her family a lot. Loves shopping. Lives in Delhi but she dies go to Mumbai. Finally shifts to Mumbai. Loves her brother and family very much.


Mayank Sharma: he is studying in B.Pharma 1st year in Excel College and is very bright and focused guy. He also loves to chat. Lives in Mumbai. He loves rain a lot. Loves small things in life. Is always happy. Thinks something is missing in his life but doesn't know what's missing loves his Family and sister a lot. Singing and dancing are his passion. He is the superstar of his college known for his singing and dancing.


Samrat Shergil
: He is studying in B.com second year in Excel college. He is the champ and the most popular guy in his college. He's good in sports as well as in studies. He makes friends very easily and is trustworthy. Loves his sister very much and tells her everything. Lives in Delhi and later shifts to Mumbai.


Gunjan Bhushan: She is studying in B.com second year in Excel college. She's the diva of her college. A very confident girl. Is not afraid of anyone. Thinks boys only know to flirt so doesn't take them seriously. Loves her dad who is her only family. Her mom died when she was seven and her dad taught her to look forward in her life and never look back

Prem Juneja: He has just finished his studies and helps his dad in his business. He is quite a happy go lucky person believes in living life to the fullest. He hates discussing Office work at home and loves his parents very much. He lives in Mumbai. He lives with his mom Gayatri Juneja and his dad Lalit Juneja who owns the Juneja Industries and is thinking abt retiring soon and giving all the responsibilities to Prem.


Heer Sharma: She works in Gulmohar Designing house and has just finished her studies. She wants to achieve some goals in her life and is really working hard for them. She loves her brother and family very much. She enjoys working very much. She loves spending time in her garden. She is a quite person and doesn't express her felling easily before anyone. She lives in Mumbai with her family.



Heer and Mayank's Family:
Mom: Indu Sharma: A confident lady loves her children very much
Mayank's Dad: Dilip Sharma: looks after his business and travels a lot.


Samrat and Nupur's Family:
Mom: Prerna Shergil: a house wife and loves her kids very much. Believes a lot in god
Dad: Yashwardan Shergil: Is a busy man but takes time out of his business for his kids.
Dadi: Savita Shergil: loves her grand children very much and helps them when they need her.


So guys if you want me to continue then please comment'..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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here's the first part.....


Part 1:

In Delhi: Shergil Mansion:

Day: Sunday

Nupur woke up in the morning with the sound of the alarm clock and with the chirping of birds outside her windowpane. Without even getting up properly she ran towards her laptop to check chat messages and mails'.

Nupur: usne apna promise pura nahi kiya.

It was nupur's b'day and her chat frnd had promised her to wish her 1st in the morning. But he dint wished her.. nupur was sad' ummm very sad'

Samrat Knocks on nupur's door:

Sam: oye chipkali kina soye gi.. uth n open the door yaar'

Nupur: (in a sad voice) opening..

Opened the door'

Nupur:Bhaiya aaj k din toh chipkali mat bulao

sam: accha ni bolata.. btw happie bday... chipkali.. oops sorry..

nupur: thanks bhaiya.. n mera gift..??

sam: voh toh shaam ko party k waqt milega..

meanwhile dadi enters..

dadi: happie bday bittu..

oo dadi thanks..

mom dad also cum... happie bday bittu..

tanq mamma n dadda..

mom: wel now go n get ready fir mandir b jaana hai..

nupur: mandir..?? (sadly) okay...

sam: dekho toh.. mandir k naam se iska face kaisa sad ho gaya...

nupur in mind abb bhaiya ko kya batau.. y m i sad..??

nupur gets ready n go to the temple..

Meanwhile in Sharma House, Mumbai

A girl wearing a cute pink salwar kameez enters a room and opens the curtains as the sunlight entered the room. The sunlight fell on a boy who was sleeping.

Girl: Mayank ut ja. It's 11.

Mayank jumped up and sat

Mayank: what 11'shit yaar..heer Di apne Mujhe utaya kyun nahi'???

Heer: poore 3 baar ah chuki hu utane. Raat ko kaha tha so ja but tujhe tere friend se chatting karne se fursat kaha'

Mayank: shit shit shitab mein kya karronga'???

Heer: aaj Sunday hai relax'..aur Bandar uja'

Mayank: nahi aap nahi samaj rahi aaj nupur ka birthday hai and I promised her to wish her first.

Heer: oh teri girlfriend'

Mayank: nahi meri chat friend.

Heer: voh teri chat friend kam aur girlfriend jyada lagti hai'anyways ut ja aur neeche ake nashta karle'phir se mat so jana aur apni girlfriend ko wish karle'

Heer turns and goes and Mayank shouts from behind

Mayank: she's only my friend di'

Mayank jumps from his bed and goes to his laptop and starts typing'.

Srry Srry Srry Nupur'

I knw I promised bt mein late uta'.

Wish u a very happy birthday but srry again'

I hope tum gussa nahi hai'

After freshening up Mayank goes down as he is coming down the stairs he is thinking about Nupur. Nupur kitna gussa hogi'.aur sad hui hogi'

Suddenly cutting off his thoughts he heards heer's voice..

Heer: yeh agaya humara Romeo'mom'

Mom: Chat Romeo'

Mayank: guys chill okay'she is just my friend'

Heer: I can prove it that she's not your friend.

Mayank: okay prove it'

Heer: Uski date of birth'???

Mayank: aaj hai di'

Heer: okay use kaunse type ka music pasand hai'???

Mayank: bollywood'.

Heer: telll me something more about her na'.???

Mayank: she loves shopping and watching movies'she loves her family very much..he brother specially'she is very sweet cute..and loving'

Heer cuts him off: tell me something about your friend Mitali'

Mayank: mitali'..she is sweet'quite helpful also''[thinking] and''.

Heer: soch ke kal bata dena'[laughing]

Maynak: that does not prove anything'

Heer: It does my brother'it does'

Mayank: mom aap hi bolo does this prove anything'????

Mom: it does Romeo'

Mayank: mom'

Mom: I mean Mayank'ab bas karo tum dono..aur Mayank nashta karle'aur apna college form barle'yaad hai na admission mil gaya iska matlab yeh nahi ki from nahi bharna'

Precap: Prem's entry, Gunjan's entry, Nupur at mandir...and Mayank at college meets Gunjan..


do comment.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*Parts*


Part 1- pg 1
part 2- pg 3
part 3- pg 5
part 4- pg 7
part 5- pg 10
IMportant Note: pg 13 nd pg 15
[plz see]

Edited by angel_1692 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dont forget to pm me
i love it and next
hey but who is mitali
loved the name
bander and chipkali
wow nice part
soon prem entry
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hey dont forget to pm me

i love it and next
hey but who is mitali
loved the name
bander and chipkali
wow nice part
soon prem entry



thanks for replying...mitali is just a friend...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome part! Do Pm me wen u update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Awesome part! Do Pm me wen u update!



thank u...i will surely Pm you
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi
like ur ff very much
so i never want 2 miss it.
plz Pm me ur next update.
Faria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi
like ur ff very much
so i never want 2 miss it.
plz Pm me ur next update.
Faria



thank u so very much...i'll add you....to the Pm list....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey...liked it...pls add me to ur pm list...me too anshika😃

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