Aarzii.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..12/03

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Posted: 15 years ago

#631

woooooooooo guys awesome part really loved it cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#632

Awesome part !

I hope kashish doesnt decide to go away from sujal !

Continue sooooooooooooon !!

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what an update.........................i just loved it like anything.....................very excellent n romantic dears...............sujal really scared her like anything that too on her b'day.............but the surprise was worth scaring her......................he didnt say he got to know from her diary has he said that she would have really scolded him..............by the way whats the name of the chocky??????????????😆................the early morning scene with the sunrise was very beautifully described...................loved it....actually am not a morning person but the way u both described it was very beautiful...............n of cousre for sujal nothing is more beautiful than kashish............n the old house scene was cute.............kashish always like sujal said falls on him only or whenever hes near she falls down someway or the other...............but sujal hai na usse sambhalne ke liye......sujal is the person shes waiting for n hes the only one who can love her unconditionally n take care of her n be there for her every single second.............but when will they both realise hope by 12 they realise....wow sujal arranged such a beautiful surprise for her n the dress really took his breath...............this time also i was looking forward sujal's confusion will be cleared with the park gal whenever it rains but no this time too it didnt happen so................but the scene was veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy romantic n hot....................they both find comfort n secure in each others arms.....................the date kashish had was like ewwwwwwwwww..................none will understand this as sujal is an actor.................but yeh kya hua kashish realised sujal is the person but she thinks hes in love with some1 else............hope this doesnt create a rift between them................feel sorry for sujal n kashish at present...................hope they realise soon..................cont soon dears................twas awesome part....................esp the rain scene.......😉............

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 15 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: crystal fantasy

Hi!Kashish,Summi iam really sorry for late comment maine part pehle hi padh liya tha magar comment karne ka waqt nahi mila tha isilie aaj comment kar rahi hoon.Bohot hi accha part hai.Gayatri ne sujal ko kashish ka BF samaj liya😆 lo sab ko samaj aagaya pata nahi yeh dono kab samjenge.It's so sweet of sujal ke usne celebration ka intejam apne farmhouse par kardiya hai.Jab dinner ke baad sab chale jaate hai aur sirf sujal kashish hi rehjaate hai tab sujal kashish ki table saaf karne madad karta hai aur dishes bhi dhota hai kya baat hai aur jab sujal ke bal pe soap laga hai to jis tarah se kashish saaf karti hai bohot hi accha laga aur jab kashish sujal par girti hai aur who kashish ko zor se pakad leta hai aur utne nahi deta hai lagta hai yeh jo kashish ne us raat 'mysujal'😉 kaha ussi ka asar hai.Sujal itna caring aur supportive hai ke usne kashish ke saath padma ko milne gaya.Jab kashish udaas hoti hai ke padma ke hone ke bawajood use golden bangles heer dene pad rahe hai to sujal jo kehta hai ke bhagwan ne tumhe ek zariya banaya hai tumhari taraf se hi sahi lekin heer aur padma ka rishta to kayam rahega na unka aashirwaad tumheer tak pohanchaogi yeh accha laga.Jab who dono asylum se aate waqt car mein jo convo tha who bhi accha laga aur jab dono ek doosre ko dekhte dekhte jab sujal car kashsih ke ghar se aage leke jata hai aur jab kashish use rokti hai to sujal kehta hai ke shayad wahin tumhari manzil hai yeh bohot hi accha laga.Jab sujal kashish aur heer farm house ke bahar jo baat karte hai jo heer aakhir mein sujal kashish ko kehti hai woh accha laga.Aur jo sujal kashish ke kalayipar kala dhaga baandta hai ke use kisi ki nazar na lage yeh bhi accha laga.Jab prem kashish ko gaana gaane ko kehta hai agar tab kashish gaana gaati to sujal ko pata chal jaata ke kashish hi park waali ladki hai.Mujhe laga sujal park waali ladki ko bhula chukka hai.Jab sab log farm house se chale jaate hai aur sirf sujal kashish hi farm house par hote hai aur jab who dono saare tables saaf kar rahe hote hai tab sujal galti se kashish ke saree par paani gira deta hai yeh accha laga.Aur woh white sheet ka idea bohot hi accha hai😳.Sujal jo kashish ki madad karta hai change karne mein yeh dekhkar mujhe saajhi ki yaad aagayi who to mera sabse favourite ff hai😊.Jab sujal kashish ki madad karne jaata hai tabhi jo light chali jaati hai aur kashish sujal ke baahon mein jaati hai bohot hi accha laga bohot hi sahi waqt par light gayi haina😉.Sujal kashish ki kitni parwaah karta hai ke usne apni aankhen cover karke woh kashish ki madad karta hai.Jab kashish white sheet aur upar se who red curtain se khud ko cover karke aati hai aur fire place ke paas baith jaati hai to sujal waha se hat jaata hai take kashish comfortable mehsoos kare yeh bhi accha laga.Jab sujal poochta hai ke kashish kisi ko pasand karti hai to jo kashish kehti hai ke ek baar woh haa kar de phir kabhi woh use jaane nahi degi to zaahir si baat hai ke who sujal ke bare mein hi keh rahi thi magar mujhe yeh samaj nahi aaya ke jab subah sujal ne kaha ke shayad wahi tumhari manzil hai to phir kashish ne inkaar kyun kardiya aur gaana bhi nahi gaaya to phir sujal ko kaise pata chalta ke wahi park waali ladki hai.Maine kashish jitna confused insaan nahi dekha aur kashish samaj gayi ke jab sujal gaana gaa raha tha to woh kisi aur ke baare mein soch raha tha.Aur jo last scene tha dears itna romantic😳 aur hoooooot😳 tha kya main kya kahoon jis tarah se sujal ne kashish ko kiss kiya aur jis tarah se who usse apni baahon mein utha kar bedroom mein le gaya aur kashish ke forehead par kiss kiya bohot hi accha tha.Yeh dono ka shaadi se pehle hi yeh haal hai to pata nahi shaadi ke baad kya hoga aur lagta hai main padhkar saara din shayad blush hi karti rahoongi😳.Jab sujal chala jaata hai kashish ko bedroom mein chodkar tab bhi kashish yeh nahi samaj paayi ke who usse pyar karti hai ya who samajna hi nahi chahti aur udhar sujal ko aisa lagraha hai ke woh kashish ko aur park waali ladki dono ko dhoka deraha hai.I hope ke jo bhi raat ko hua us ke wajah se kashish sujal door na hojaaye.Ab to lagta hai ke ladakh ke shoot par hi sujal ko pata chalega ke kashish hi park waali ladki hai aur tabhi dono ko ehsaas hoga ke who ek doosre pyar💔 karte hai. Agla part 16 hai to mujhe besabri se intezaar hai kyunke 16^th part mein kuch to special zaroor hoga. Thanks for PM. Plz plz continue soon.BYE AND LUV YOU BOTH.

hey sweetheart thank u soo much 4 ure lovely comments....we r glad u liked this part dear...n dnt apologise...u weren't late at all...autr tumne padh liya wahin humare liye kaafi hai.....haan Gayatri ne Sujal ko uska boyfriend samajh liya...aur sahi kaha tumne inke ilawa sab jaante hain ke yeh dono aik doosre se pyar karte hain😆..yes it was sweet of Sujal 2 arrange evrything at his farmhouse...haan Sujal Kashish ki madat karta hai sab ke jaane ke baad...aur aise mein bartan dhote dhote uske baalon mein soap lag jaatha hai...we r glad u liked the scene after...😆😆😆haan hume bhi yahin lagta hai ke yeh us 'my sujal' waali line ka asar horaha hai uspe...haan Sujal Kashish ke saath gaya tha Padma se milne aur woh humesha hi usse samjhata hai thakay she feels better...aur woh waakay mein zariya tho hai hi un dono ke beech...we r glad u liked the convo between them in the car and how Sujal doesnt realise himself going past her house 2wards his...we r glad u liked hw he sed that maybe that is her destiny...we r glad u liked the scene outside the farmhouse and how Sujal fastens the thread around her wrist...haan agar sagaai mein Kashish gaana gaa leti tho Sujal ko pata chal jaatha...par itni jaldi kaise pata chalne de sakte hain hum😆aur nahin Sujal us park waali larki ko chah ke bhi nahin bhula sakta....we r glad u liked teh scene he accidentally spills the water on her saree...aur haan Sujal usse white sheet mein badalne ko kehta hai aur phir uski madat bhi karta hai....haan Saajhi ki yaad aana tho laazmi tha...aur woh ff humare dil ke bhi utne hi kareeb hai kyunki woh humari aik saath pehli ff thi...and that is sooo sweet of u 2 say its ure fav....haan us waqt light chali jaathi hai...aur yeh light inke maamle mein humesha sahi waqt pe hi jaathi hai😆....haan Sujal sach mein uski bohat parwah karta hai...isliye light jaane ke bawajood bhi woh apni aankhein cover karta hai...aur jab woh neeche aati hai tho woh wahan aag ke paas se hatt jaatha hai...haan Sujal usse poochta hai ke woh kissi ko pasand akrti hai ke nahin...aur Kashish ka jawaab obviously Sujal pe hint kar raha hai...par dono hi confused hain...ab finally jaa ke Kashish ko lag raha hai ke woh Sujal se pyar karti hai..par phir bhi woh confused hi hai...aik baar dono ki confusion door hojaye aur woh is baat ko accept karlen tho sab theek hojayega...we r glad u liked the last scene dear...😆pehle shaadi tho hone do...phir dekhna shaadi ke baad kya hota hai😆aur tab decide karlena ke tumhe kaise react karna hai...maybe ure 2nd reason sounds beter...shayad woh samajhna hi nahin chahti is baat ko ke woh usse pyar karne laggi hai...aur haan Sujal ko lagta hai woh un dono ko dhoka de raha hai...usse kya pata ke woh aik hi hain...do nahin...aur laddakh mein kya hua woh tho tum next scene mein hi dekh logi...and yes part 16 has 2 be special...so sumthing major happened...and it will affect their lives in sumway....in which way...woh tho u will have 2 wait n see....ure most welcome 4 the pm dear!!!! and we will surely cont soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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Rabi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#635

Very very nice part summi and kashish😊

Continew soon👏👏

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 15 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: kyunki_iloveu

Hey Sweethearts.....

Ready for another long comment.... sry.... maine socha tha ke... 15 ke badme.... I wont write a lot.... lekin kya karu...... part 16 padeti hai..... I have to share my thoughts with your guys....... hope guys ok with tht......... I just love love love love.... absolutely and definately love this part........... I knew ke kuch bada honewala hai... lekin itna bada hoga.... yeh muje nahi pata hai.......... aur woh bhi shaadi se pehle......... both of u know how to shock you reader.... in a good way of course....... I love the part...... so pehle se surwaat karte hai...

the first scene..........

Kya triller wish thi........ bechare kashish ke saas he ruk gaye thi........ akele ladki.... in a hotel..... aur raat ko door pe knock... and no one standing there..... but our kashish... like all the characters in the horror film... has to get out of the room and go and check to see where the trouble it.... if it really was killer there.... she would be dead........ but with the surprise she gets.... I must say tht it was a brillant decision on her part........ I would for sure??. go out during any scary situation but only if the threat at the other end is Sujal???? and again they are getting me frustrated???. when you wish happy birthday to frinds?. at night? u just call them or text them???. something simple and something sweet??? nothing like what Sujal did for Kashish?. now tht is a boyfriend wish??. and both of them still don't see it??.. kitna sweet ha sujal?? he went through all of tht just for kashish's birthday??? lekin bechare paas ne waala tha? agar who keh deta ke usko Kash ki diary se pata chala ke uski favorite chocolate kaunsi hai??. phir undono ke love story start hone se pehle hi katam hojati??. but he caught himself in time?. and took heer's name???. and how sweet of Kashish to share her chocolate with him?? aur who bhi intni sweet se??. and of course after scaring her to death he has to go and drop her to her room?. how sweet of him to care for her??? he is the prefect husband material??? he worries about her soo much?? then of course has to kiss her hand??. cause its perfectly ok for guy friends to kiss the girl friends??. lagta hai muje bhi SUjal ke jaisa koi dundna padega?.... but the thing that I love the most about the scene is when sujal says that every year he is going to wish her differently??.. comedy.. romantic?? Kashish might be waiting for the comedy but I am soo waiting for the romantic way??.. triller wish ke tarre romantic wish be temperature bada degi???.. but of course in a good way?..

The morning scene was a gr8 scene with them going to the lake? and of course have some romantic moments???. I have never been to laddakh but seen so many pics and of course heard a lot about it?.. so its one of my dream to go there atleast once and see such beautiful scenery that the both of you have described in part?? to see the sun rise across the mountains while sitting in a boat in the middle of a quiet and calm lake??. and of course have to have that sweet hot man with you to keep me company?.. wink wink??. and sharing the silence with him?.. oh wow that is a beautiful day to be had????. so of course the prefect scene is set??? quiet, calm, silence, and romance, then you have two very good looking people who do love each other together?? there has to be some moments between them???. kashish falling on Sujal when he tries to move and make room for her?. him staring at her for a long time?. of course commenting on her beauty??? sitting close together in a small boat with their legs touching?? geez? there is soo much a person can handle before pulling out her hair and telling them to just admit their love??? apart from the frustrations I loved how the both of you incorporated Kashish's childhood into their trip?? the place where you grow up no matter how bad or how different?. it hold a special part in your heart?.. when we go back to the place and remember the sweet nostalgic moments that we spent there?? Sujal knows how special ladakh is for Kashish and you can just see from his words how much it means to him that kashish gets to visit her childhood and the memories that come???

Then of course they have to go to the market?? whenever I think of markets saajhi kashish entry always comes to mind?.. but this market scene has also made a big impact on me??? a fortune teller?. wow?.. I would love to get my fortune but very scared as to what its going to be?? but of course Kashish has to know her future?? she didn't really have to go the fortune teller?. i mean she just had to look at the guy standing next to her and she will see her future in his eyes??. the love for her? the longing for her?. the desire for her? and of course the heart that is 116% beats for her??? all with one look into his eyes??.. but I think they both should get their hands showed because then they can find out what the other people already know that they are made for each other??? and yesssssssss finally someone tells well atleast hints to kashish that she will find her true love soon??? I love the whole midnight idea?. like from Dil to pagal hai?? and since sujal is going to spend the day with her of course she willll see him at midnight?. hopefully she agree with the fortune and doesn't just push it off?? and the whole he is going to leave her?.. that is not possible?. sujal will not leave her?. I know that he still thinks about the park girl but when he finds out that it is kashish he is going to be extra happy that the both women he loves so much is actually one?? and he will never leave Kashish??? so I don't think that part will come true??. but the whole give her something special that will be hers only??. the KISS?.. of course?. what other thing can be that special?.. well other than his love??. welll the kiss is a show of his love???? looks like she is a very good fortune teller except the love leaving part?? everything else will come true??.. but seeing Kashish soo scared about the her future makes sujal feel so helpless???..soon he will help her see whats in front of her?..wink wink?..

I just loved how you guys wrote the next scene?? it is soo prefect? with Kashish taking sujal back to her old house??. where her memories with her family are?? it takes special courage to open up to a person about your part because with each confession you let them into your hearts and give them the power to hurt you?? but Kashish doesn't think twice about taking Sujal to her house because she trusts him more than anything else in the world and she knows that he will never hurt her???.it was a prefect emotional scene one that touches hearts?.and of course you guys showed you amazing writing abilities and added some sweet romance in it??when kashish falls on sujal and when sujal tells her that its getting a habit of kashish falling on him??..geez what ulterior motive can kashish have??I mean any girl would look for chance to fall if they have a man like sujal to fall on?????its was a good surprise to see that kashish got some of her childhood things that she hid????all in all it was a prefect scene loved it a lot???

FINALLLY?? the last scene?.. omg the first romantic scene???. after this scene how can they ever doubt that there is fire between them??.. I mean they acted 116% like a couple..with Sujal buying Kashish a secret dress?? then taking her out to dinner?? of course it has to be a remote romantic location for a dinner??? the hills?? the path lit with candles?. OMG?. could it be anymore romantic?? loved? it a lot???. How sweetly Sujal prepared everything for KAshish birthday and he served her??.. then of course KAshish has to drop the bomb and say that she WENT OUT ON A DATE WITH ANOTHER MAN?..OMG?. could not believe it that she would do that to sujal?. and I expected sujal to be more mad?. but of course how can he when he still didn't admit it to himself that he loves Kashish??.. but its good that the doctor was a lowlife who cared more about publicity then he did about kashish? and I am happy that kashish left him sitting there? if sujal had been there he would have punched the guy for sure?.. and then of course it has to rain?? it always has a prefect timing?.. and then sujal and kashish dancing in the rain?. Geez could the sight get anymore better?. And finally the KISS?.. I really was hoping that they will get everything cleared out and confess their love but no? kashish ran away and sujal was left feeling guilty and sad???. I am eagerly awaiting the next part??. Ple ple let sujal go to her and let them confess their love?. Atleast kashish knows now??. Thnks hun for this amazing part?. Ple upload soon?? best wishes for future

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Lots love

Mira

hey mira sweetheart!!!! yes we r ready for another long one dnt worry....we r always prepared😆and dnt worry....feel free 2 share ure thoughts with us.infact it is soo sweet of u 2 give such detailed and beautiful comments....and we r absolutely fine with it...we r more than happy that u loved this part sweetheart....😆yes u certainly did guess ke kuch bada hone waala hai...aur yeh hona zaroori bhi tha isliye shaadi se pehle hi hogaya😆...n we are always there 2 shock u guys hpefully...we try n do sumthing different 2 wot u wud imagine 2 happen...

we r glad u liked the first scene...waakay mein it has 2 be a thriller wish😆aur Kashish ki saans tho rukni hi thi na...he made it pretty scary for her...aur Kashish obviously was intrigued and wanted to know what was ging on so she went out to investigate. .yes it could have been dangerous but it turned out to be a good thing tat she went out and checked....😆😆😆and we knw u wud surely do the same if u knew the threat was Sujal😆😆😆...these 2 have been frustrating u since they first met dear!!...and yhh ure right, yeh waakay mein friend ki jagah boyfriend wish zyada lagti hai...par yeh thori na samjhenge...yes Sujal is very sweet and he did go through all that just to wish her....haan woh baal baal bach gaya warna agar woh diary ka naam le leta tho waakay mein Kashish usse chorti nahin😆😆😆...yes it was sweet hw Kashish shared the chocolate with him and made him eat some with her...and yes ofcourse after caring her he had 2 go and drop her off to her room again...and he is very caring and a perfect husband material....and yes he did kiss her hand...aur haan like u sed ke 'friends' mein tho yeh chalta haina😆...we r glad u liked the part Sujal sed he would wish her differently evry yr!!...ab thriller mein romance tha tho comedy mein bhi romance hoga na...oar jab full on romance hoga tab tho waakay hi temperature boiling point se bhi zyada hoga😆

we r glad u liked the morning scene..with the elemnts of romance in it...well we haven't been to Laddakh ourselves but we have heard of it...obviously being one of Rajeev's fav place...so we have tried our best to stick to reality and keep the locations which you would expect to be there...and we hpe ure dream of visiting Laddakh does coem true soon...we are more than happy that u liked the description of the setting...we tried to make it as descriptive as possible....and yes obviously romance has 2 be involved wen we r talking bout SK...we r glad u njoyed the romantic moments they shared...😆😆😆these 2 r quite in control..we wnt say fully bcoz that they r not as u must have seen in recent events😆😆😆but they r quite in control!!isliye even after all this they still r not able 2 confess there feelings which they r yet 2 fully realise...we r glad u liked hw we included her childhood into this..and ure right...the place u r born in will always remain special 2 u no matter what...and Sujal was so happy 2 see her living her childhood once again...wot better birthday could there have been for her😳

yes we had 2 have a scene in the market...and ofcourse there was a lot of reference 2 the market in Saajhi so u would automatically think of that...but yes this was different with the fortune teller...it wud be quite scary 2 go see a fortune teller...like u sed u dnt knw wot wud be the outcome...thats vry true dear....her fortune and destiny is stood beside her but still she is not able 2 understand this...yes it would be good if even Sujal shoed his hand n maybe they would find a link but he doesnt belive in fortune telling...yes the fortune teller does hint 2 her that she will find her love soon....we r glad u liked the idea...n yh it was pretty obvious bcoz Sujal was going to spend the day with her....about the person leaving her...well Kashish thinks he loves sum1 else...but she doesnt knw that the person he is after is also her...as he never mentioned anything to her about seeing that person in the park..if he had told her details she would knw its her who he is finding...but u'll have 2 wait n see wot happens in the future parts...and yes the kiss was definetly symbolic of his love 4 her...no doubt in that...😆😆n yes he surely does make her see at the end what is infront of her...

we r glad u liked the next scene in the house...yes u r right, it is very difficult 2 open up like this infront of someone and let them in2 ure memories but like u sed...Kashish does trust Sujal more than anything in the world and she knows that he would never hurt her no matter wot...we r glad u liked the romantic elements in the scene...😆😆😆yes Sujal was pulling her leg wen he was talking bout her always ending up falling on him😆😆...we r glad u liked that scene dear...

we r glad u liked the last scene...and yes u could call it their first official proper romantic moment that they shared which would leave no doubts that they 4 sure have fire between them...it was pretty obvious in this part that they are more than friends...we r glad u liked the descriptions of the place and also how he brought her that dress...yes Kashish found it important 2 tell Sujal that she had gone on a date...it was obviously bcoz she was trying her best 2 find sum1 so Heer and Prem can get married...and maybe 2 prove 2 herself taht she doesnt love Sujal...but it was pretty obvious in the scene what she feels for Suajl bcoz she was repeatedly thinking of the moments they shared 2gether..yes no doubt the doctor was a low life and wanted the publicity...and Kashish did leave him there...Sujal would have surely punched him if he was there...and he cnt be mad with her no matter hw bad he is feeling bcoz they have not confessed anythign...we r glad u liked Sujal and Kashish dancing in the rain and then the kiss obviously...yes it ended abrupt...with Kashish running off and Sujal feeling guilty...yes Kashish has realised Sujal is made for her but Sujal is yet to know the truth...u will have 2 wait n see wot happens next dear...ure most welcome 4 the part dear...thanx 4 ure lovely comments...and also 4 the best wishes....we will surelu upload soon dear....keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

Edited by kashishdabest - 15 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#637

i am speecless Bravo Good Job

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#638

This was awesum guys Firstly Sujal gave a wonderful surprise to Kashish on her bday. And I luved their each n every scene. When the lady was saying all these.....I was thinking wat cud be the 'amanat'.....and now when I knw I'm just speechless.....u guys rocked the part. Totally awesum. I'm glad Kashish at least realized that its Sujal who is meant for her.....but she now thinks....he luvs sum1 else....ab Sujal khud nahi janta wo dono ore se Kashish ko hi chahta hai....to main Kashish k bare me kya batau. Btw, I hope Sujal reading her personal diary.....wont create any big problem.

Well, It was just simply amazing.....one of the best parts of this fic....(coz I knw many more r cuming ahead....hehe)....Pls continue soon.

P.S. Thank u guys.....for wishing me on my bday.

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#639

Mind-blowing part

I really liked the way sujal got kashish to get out of the room poor kashish got really sweet but atleast she got an amazing surprise.I really liked sujal's idea of surprising kashish and im glad sujal easily handle the situation when kashish asked him how he knew about her favourite chocolates if she found out that he read her diary then she would defiantly be angry with him.Kashish is so sweet I really liked the way she shared her chocolates with sujal and the best part was the way u guys potrayed kashish's innocence.sujal is such an amazing person I really liked the way u described sujal's concern towards kashish and also how he always tries to make kashish happy.It was really sweet of sujal to drop kashish to her room because she felt scared going alone.Cant wait 2 see how sujal wishes kashish on her next birthday I hope it is in a romantic way rather than comedy.

The scenes when kashish took sujal to her favourite place were amazingly described I really liked the way u described the sun rising and kashish enjoying her self to the fullest and sujal lost in kashish,the scene were sujal tries making room 4 kashish on the boat was really beautifully potrayed.i really enjoyed the scenes were kashish was remembering her childhood moments and it seems sujal has become part of all those beautiful moments.The scene when kashish takes sujal back to her old house was really nice im glad she found some momentos of her child hood stored in the attic and I really enjoyed the scene were kashish was gone fall down and sujal came on time to support her.The fortune teller was an intresting aspect of the part I really liked the way u described the relationship between the fortune teller and kashish it seemed the fortune teller still remembered kashish after so long.It seems what ever the fortune teller said was true I hope the leaving part does not happen.

The last scene between sujal and kashish was mind blowing I really enjoyed the way u described the romantic part between Sk and sujal is so cute he got kashish a beautiful dress and it seems he was so lost in her when she came down wearing the dress.I really liked the way u showed how sujal planned everything out by bringing kashish to a beautiful place,and theirl dance was amazingly described and finally the kiss between the 2 I hope this does not affect sujal and kashish's relationship cant wait 2 read the next part to see what happens between the to.

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 15 years ago