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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#341

sorry yaar...main is baar late hun...

main hamesha naina par shaq karti thi...akhir vohi hua...jo maine socha tha...

n Raj ne maxwell ka The End bhi kar hi diya...

par kahin na kahin mujhe lagta hai ki aashma k maut ka zimmedaar thoda-baht toh raj hai hi...😭

ab sam bhi raj ko arrest karne k liye aa gaya hai...

main frankly kah rahi hun...mujhe toh Happy ending hi chahiye...!!! arre yaar...vaise bhi lyf me kamm tension hai...jo apne fav place par aa kar fav fic ko padh kar dukhi ho...??? main toh bilkul bhi sad part nahi chahti...mujhe mushkurana hai...samjhi...!!!😃

ab chap 13 par chalte hain...😃

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#342

hmmmm...tumhe sach me is part k liye comments chahiye...😕

i mean mujhe toh type karte hue taklif ho rahi hai...kitna sad part tha yaar...aur main kya likhun...???😭

par kahin na kahin...naina/sana me abhi bhi raj k liye kuch feelings hain...😃

sach kahun toh mujhe Dhoom 2 k jaisa ending chahiye...!!! ab tum par bhi bharosha hai yaar...!!! janti hun ki tum jo bhi karogi...hum sab ki bhalai k liye karogi😆

cont soon😃

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golu_1677

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Posted: 15 years ago

#343

another amazing part... loved devraj the waybhe reacted to sam's question... what will naina do now??? waiting for the next update try n post it soon

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#344

Hey Sur,

First of all congratsfor completeing 50 pages dear 👏 👏 🥳 🥳 🥳

love your story soooooooo much

Now coming to the present update Amazing part 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj ki haalath dehkhe i am feeling sooooo sad 😭 😭 😭 😭 ,sam ka behavour towards raj ,mujhe bilkul accha nahin laga...so naina is sana n she is an under cover agent nshe is also sams best friend.... thank god naina/sana kuch to feel karthi hain raj ke liye and she did first aid to him..lekin she also ralked so rudely with raj

U have written nainas dilemma so beautifully 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

waiting for the next part so eagerly please continue soon

love

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Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#345

Sana feels disturbed about arresting Devraj. She knows that she has done the right thing and that she should be happy about the justice that will be done. She is definitely in love with Raj.

Sam is very angry with Devraj and so hits him mercilessly. Devraj knows that he is responsible for Aasma's death and so does not protest. In some ways he wants to be punished. But what is most painful for Devraj is Sana's betrayal.

Sana is unable to stop herself from caring about Devraj. She brings him forst aid to dress-up his wounds. Devraj knows that naina also loves him just like he loves her. Sam is surprised to see such a change in Sana's behaviour.

Please continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#346

G8 update. 👏 👏 👏
Firstly i would like to say thank u for updating the fic when i was thinking that u r not going to update the fic anymore.
Lovely part.
Now i think Asma has some doubt on Devraj. He got irritated when he received call that he is not doing his work properly but i think he is in love with Asma, as she is his childhood frnd. Sahi bhi hai har jagah pe jis tarah se jaise us ko Dev mil jaa raha hai that is pretty doubtful.
Aur vo bhi jab Asma khud ek Police Officer hai. Liked the way Dev tried to save Asma, kahin na kahin doubt hona hi hai. Aasma ko Raj us k bachpan k dost ki yaad dilata hai aur shayad nahi jaanti hai vo ki ye vahi Devraj hai.
Maxwell ko maarna chahta hai Raj aur Naina se kiya vaada bhi nibhana hai us ko, it will be interesting to know ki kuch aisa kar paata hai Raj ya us se pehle hi Naina k bichaye jaal me fuss jaata hai. I don't know y i still have some doubt over Naina.
update soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#347

Congrats dear for completing 50 pages.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#348

Brilliant update on pg. 43
Mujhe pehle se jo cheejin doubtful lag rahi thi yes they r.
I knew that kahin na kahin Naina police se mile hue hai. Sam k baare me previous update me padh k maine us ko aur us ki sis ka badla lene ki story nahi sochi thi.......i am clear.
But sahi hai yaar, Devraj ne jo bhi kiya chahe jaise bhi kiya accha kaam bhi agar galat tareeke se kiya jaaye na to us ka koi positive effect nahi hota hai aur yahi yahan is baar bhi ho raha hai.
Devraj ne kabhi nahi socha tha ki Maxwell Asma ko maar dega, us ne socha tha ki vo Asma ko bacha lega par aisa hua nahi. She really trusted him a lot n he betrayed her.
Vo kehte hain na ki kahin na kahin baddua ka asar hota hai, shayad Naina k roop me us ko us ki karni ki saza mil hi gayi. In between ye jaroor accha hua ki Maxwell ki kahani khatam ho gayi.
Naina acted well n only by this way Naina could catch him.

Ur fic is really superb n continue this.
We would love to see a happy ending being RN fans.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#349

Hey i have an opinion about the fic.

I know most of the people will not be agree with my thoughts and views about it but if u r asking about the type of end in the fic so i would prefer A Sad Ending.

Reasons are here too with my logic.

If Devraj is trapped by police and he has done already a lot of illegal activities so i think the best option will be sad one because we know "Kahin na kahin har insaan ko us k karmo ki saja bhugatni hi hoti hai."

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#350

Awesome piece of update dear. 👏
Mujhe lagta hai Sam ka behavior natural hai kyounki us ne apne sis ko khoya hai aur vo bhi apni early ages me. 😭
No one can replace that harm and that's y he hates Devraj.😡 Up to an extent i feel kuch na kuch galti Devraj ki hai hi. Kuch nahi shayad kaafi kuch.😲
Naina or Sana is still in confusion, she wants to hate him but how can she?😕 She tried her best not to face Devraj anymore but it's not in her hands.😉
She saved Devraj from Sam because some where in her heart she has a liking on Devraj.😛 I think Sam likes Sana much more than friendship. 😉Sana ne reasons to kaafi strong diye hain but Devraj bhi jaanta hai ki kuch na kuch to vo feel karti hi hai us k liye.😳
That's y she came back with first aid box and she applied that over his wounds.😉 Devraj knew that she will come back to him for sure.😊
But wrong timing again because Sam came there and he observed everything.😡 I like Dev's dialogue that he doesn't have any regrets and complains with Sana.😲
Try to update this soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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