I Hate You For Loving Me RN FF ch15pg64 - Page 33

Created

Last reply

Replies

445

Views

69.5k

Users

44

Likes

528

Frequent Posters

Sur_10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

finally madam updated....................good.................well i did expect naina to be in the police force but not sam ..................so aasma was killed and now whats gonna happen i really cant guess..................one thing i want is no sad ending.......................cont soon dear...................

hey deepa
thanks alot for your comment and opinion deepa. this update was pretty expected i guess...so...well, im glad u liked it!
Sur
Sur_10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

I HATE NAINA !!!! 😡 😡 😡 aww...do you? Doc, dont give those angry looks, she might as well faint

Poor Raj !!!
Well...the update was supeeerrrrbbbb !!! 👏 👏 👏 thankyou...im shocked that nobody wants to kill me
Veryyyy well written ! 👏 thanks
The way maxwell was caught and the flashback as well as the coldness with which Devraj behaved were awesomeeeee !!!
But i hate hate hate Naina ! 😡 again? oh well...
waitin for next update ! that will be soon
Update sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn !😊 sure, thanks alot for commenting!

Sur_10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

me first................................😆 😆....................hey nice to see you first!!! :D
firstly thanx 4 update...............🤗................................thanks for not forgetting this fic!its been long wait...............yeah....but after reading part ............wait seem worthy enough.......👏 👏 👏.................😃................really, thanks!
really happy.......raj was able to take his revenge 4m maxwell........😃 😃.............
but yeh kya kiya..........😭 😭 😭...........devraj ko arrest karwa diya...........😭 😭 😭......& Sam.......Asma ka bhai.........back too......... ah..ye to hona hi tha na!ghost of past returns
i doubted Naina 4m very beginning...........kuch gadbad zaroor hai........& u proved my speculations true.....😃 😃..............sab bechari ko shaq ki nazro se dekhte the.
ab devraaj ko jail mein torture mat karwana...........😆 😆 😆..........i know he did many crimes but.............still.......thodi punishment ke baad chod dena...........😆 😆 😆..........dont make him die.............pweese..........😛......ah, no not much for sure.
& yes wud be expecting a happy ending with RN oopsss i mean Devraaj naina love
confession..........😳 😳....& shadi too...........😳 😳 😳sure, thanks for the opinion.

p.s-- as 4 ur note in the end...........
will only say one thing.........continue much sooner this time................😆 😆 😆...........oh yes.........4got.....dusre fic ka kya hal chal.................😉 😉 😉......
ah well sure...and other fic will take time..m thinking of some quick uds here.

Shaina_b thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina manages to lure Maxwell towards herself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

They gave Maxwell drugged wine and took him to Naina's room!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had never seen Devraj look so dangerous and for the first time she was scared of him!!!!!

Devraj waited to Maxwell to come to his senses kyunki usse uske maut ka kaaran pata hona chahiye!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

In the meantime Devraj went back to his painful memories!!!!!

Devraj had slowly become a part of Aasma's family and Aasma trusted him a lot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aasma had dressed up and Devraj knew what was coming!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Aasma told him the truth about her work that she is a special agent!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She confessed that she loves him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

But I think Devraj did not love her in that way!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj wanted to tell her that they are better off as friends but couldn't!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

He remembered the cost of leaving his mission incomplete!!!!!!

Aasma went away the next day and Devraj traced her out and followed her to Bangalore!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Aasma asked him to meet her and handed him the confidential information as she could not trust anyone else!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Just as I had guessed the girl who died in the prologue was Aasma and the guy was Devraj!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Maxwell had killed Aasma and left Devraj alive!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I am happy that it was not Devraj who had killed Aasma!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj had felt guilty for Aasma's death and had resolved to kill Maxwell as he had not slept in peace for a single night since then!!!!!

But it was not his fault as he had atleast tried his best to save Aasma!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Agar woh nahi karta yeh kaam toh koi aur kar deta!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Devraj ne Maxwell ko wahi dialogue bola jo Maxwell ne usse tab kaha tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj told him that he is doing this as Maxwell had broken a promise and broken commitments are not tolerated by him!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Finally Devraj was able to take his revenge and killed Maxwell!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina was shocked as she could never have imagined a man like Devraj take revenge for somebody else!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Just as I had guessed that Naina is an undercover cop!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔This twist was very cliched!!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

Devraj got arrested and Naina walked past him without glancing at him!!!!!

I hate Naina!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

How can she do this after knowing how much Raj loved her??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Devraj ne usse apni jaan se zyada pyaar kiya aur badle mein usne Devraj ko dhoka diya!!!!!!

Devraj's eyes were still fixed on the doorway from which Naina had exited!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Even Sam is here to arrest Devraj as he hates him and his eyes looked familiar to Devraj!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Devraj knew him after he said who he was and tried to give him a friendly greeting!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Devraj ko jail mein torture mat karna and please don't let him die!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Main nahi chahti ke Devraj aur Naina kabhi bhi juda ho in life or in death!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I want a happy ending kyunki Devraj loves Naina very much and they deserve to be together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Anth mein sab theek ho jaata hai ...... Happies Ending!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur agar sab theek na ho toh woh anth nahi ........ picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
Sur_10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Sur dear... hi yogitha!

How r u? 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃....im good...:)main bahut khush hun yaar pata hain kyun i noticed that u already started replying on comments ..iska matlab tu bahut jaldi update karne wali right...ab tu hi bata sakthi ki meri guess sahi hain ya galath next ud coming up in 5 minutes!!!akhir itni dhamkiyo ka kuch to asar ho ga na ;)
Actually jab maine ye part read kiya tab i felt so sad .....aww...im sorry!iska matalb ye nahin tha ki i dont like the update...its awesome n fabulously written 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏..... sad kyun thi ye to tujhe pata haina..ye naina ne kya kiya yaar ....main abhi bahut gussa main hun naina par ..lekin ye jarror janna chahungi ki naina ki pov kya hain.....she dont feel anything for raj 😭 😭 😭 yeah, isliye hi nxt part jaldi post kar rahi hu...for naina's POV
so raj ne asma ko nahin maara...mujhe pata tha raj kabhi aise kaam nahin karsaktha..finally raj ne maxwell ko maarke apna badla leliya....yaar kya ab raj jail main rahega...plz dont torture him too much....ab to sam bhi yahi hain ..pata nahin what he will do with raj...ek baat poochun ...karan kaha hain ...i hope wo kuch na kuch karega raj ke liye
well, Raj as good as killed her...he was also responsible. aur uska badla usey kafi mehenga pad gaya.
tumhe pata hain last line(he received a push) padhke mujhe na bahutttttttttttt bura laga..aur sam pe bahut gussa bhi aaya...usse raj ko push karne ki jarrorat kya hain ..he is ready to come with him na lol, how was he suppossed to behave then? plz sir, aiye? ab sab thodi na humari tarah Raj se pyaar karte hai? :D
chal ab jaldi se next part post kar ..waiting for the update im waiting to post it!
aur teri note main question ka meri answer to bahut pehle se jaanthi hain ...isiye main yaha kuch nahin kehrahi well, uske wajah se hi mene yaha pe sabse puchne ki himmat ki...lets see what majority says...thanks for ur support, comment and aprreciation!
love
yogitha

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
Sur_10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! thanks shaina!

Naina manages to lure Maxwell towards herself!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 well, with her skills, one can hardly fail

They gave Maxwell drugged wine and took him to Naina's room!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had never seen Devraj look so dangerous and for the first time she was scared of him!!!!! yeh, he was really angry then

Devraj waited to Maxwell to come to his senses kyunki usse uske maut ka kaaran pata hona chahiye!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 he is not the type to attack a sleeping man

In the meantime Devraj went back to his painful memories!!!!!

Devraj had slowly become a part of Aasma's family and Aasma trusted him a lot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 that cost her life

Aasma had dressed up and Devraj knew what was coming!!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Aasma told him the truth about her work that she is a special agent!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 another mistake

She confessed that she loves him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 too bad for her to fall for him like that.

But I think Devraj did not love her in that way!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 he didnt...he held some special regard for her in his heart.

Devraj wanted to tell her that they are better off as friends but couldn't!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

He remembered the cost of leaving his mission incomplete!!!!!! didnt have much of a choice u see

Aasma went away the next day and Devraj traced her out and followed her to Bangalore!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 he wanted to finish it off quickly

Aasma asked him to meet her and handed him the confidential information as she could not trust anyone else!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 wrong guy

Just as I had guessed the girl who died in the prologue was Aasma and the guy was Devraj!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔 yup..i wouldnt kill off naina would i?

Maxwell had killed Aasma and left Devraj alive!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 yup..to save himself

I am happy that it was not Devraj who had killed Aasma!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 he was the cause though

Devraj had felt guilty for Aasma's death and had resolved to kill Maxwell as he had not slept in peace for a single night since then!!!!!

But it was not his fault as he had atleast tried his best to save Aasma!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 well, he could have tried a little harder

Agar woh nahi karta yeh kaam toh koi aur kar deta!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 maybe

Devraj ne Maxwell ko wahi dialogue bola jo Maxwell ne usse tab kaha tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 hehe

Devraj told him that he is doing this as Maxwell had broken a promise and broken commitments are not tolerated by him!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 yeah...broken commitments are not good

Finally Devraj was able to take his revenge and killed Maxwell!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina was shocked as she could never have imagined a man like Devraj take revenge for somebody else!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 that was unexpected for her

Just as I had guessed that Naina is an undercover cop!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔This twist was very cliched!!!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 yeah i know

Devraj got arrested and Naina walked past him without glancing at him!!!!!

I hate Naina!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 you too?

How can she do this after knowing how much Raj loved her??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Devraj ne usse apni jaan se zyada pyaar kiya aur badle mein usne Devraj ko dhoka diya!!!!!! well, didnt devraj do the same thing?

Devraj's eyes were still fixed on the doorway from which Naina had exited!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Even Sam is here to arrest Devraj as he hates him and his eyes looked familiar to Devraj!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 he was waiting for it...

Devraj knew him after he said who he was and tried to give him a friendly greeting!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 well, what else could he do?

Devraj ko jail mein torture mat karna and please don't let him die!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 sure

Main nahi chahti ke Devraj aur Naina kabhi bhi juda ho in life or in death!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I want a happy ending kyunki Devraj loves Naina very much and they deserve to be together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 ok..point taken

Anth mein sab theek ho jaata hai ...... Happies Ending!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah...

Aur agar sab theek na ho toh woh anth nahi ........ picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 we can always open up a sequel then!thanks alot for commenting shaina


Sur_10 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Chapter 13
Sam marched inside the Commissioner's room and saluted him.
"Goodevening Chief." the commissioner greeted him warmly and asked him to take a seat next to Sana who was sitting silently with her hands clasped in her lap.
"I must say you guys have done the impossible. Jab Sana ne mujhse undercover agent bankar jaane ki baat kahi thi, mujhe laga tha ke ye plan kamyab nahi hoga...Devraj bahut chalak hai...magar tum dono ne ye kar dikhaya...Chief Sam, apki American unit se hume jo bhi help mili uske liye shukriya. Mujhe aj bhi yaad hai, tumhari behan, Aasma, meri junior hua karti thi. She was an amazing officer. Pata nahi uski maut hui kaise. And Sana, I can only congratulate you. 1 sath Devraj aur Maxwell dono ko hi khatam kar dia tumne...very well done...."
The commissioner kept speaking for about another half an hour. But Sana was not listening to him. Her mind was blank...somewhere else. /she could hear him speaking and Sam replying to him but it was all irrelevant. It seemed like everything had dissolved around her. She had been an undercover agent in many operations...But this time, she felt, she had chosen the wrong place and the wrong man.
The look Devraj gave her was overpowering her. She had not dared to look at him even once. But their eyes had met on the way to prison and she was surprised to see no anger there for once. There was only shock. And disbelief. Nothing else. She had looked away quickly and now this was troubling her alot. Usually she used to enjoy to see her victims' reactions. Her pleasure at arresting yet another criminal was mysteriously gone. The only thing that came to her mind was Devraj's eyes...and his confessions of his love, which would not let her sleep. Trapping a guy was very easy for her, courtesy her attractive looks. But she was never as heartless to play with somebody's emotions. A hand tapped her gently on the shoulder and brought her out of her reverie. It was Sam gazing at her intently.
"Answer Commissioner Sir Sana..."
"W-What?"
"Sir just asked when is the party?" His face broke into a big smile. She gave him a small smile while the commissioner laughed and said
"Sana, you may go now...you look really tired. Take a few days' leave and enjoy. After all you have been on your toes for months!" She gladly got up and left while Sam followed her. Once out of the cabin, he gently touched her hand.
"Sana...sab thik to hai na?"
She looked at him blankly. He was a close friend of hers from school. They had studied together until his sister died and his relatives took him away to USA. Since then they had been in touch and used to help each other a lot.
She did not reply but just crossed her arms and closed her eyes.
"I think mujhe chalna chahiye..."
Sam did not leave her wrist and said, "Usne...tumhare sath kuch...I mean, mission ke dauran kuch galat to nahi...He didnt try to take davantage of you did he?" Sam's voice was full of bitterness when he spat out his worst fears. Sana looked at him in amazement.
"Nahi, aisa kuch nahi hua...I was fine."
"Thank God...Varna Devraj jaisa insaan...wo to insaan kehlane ke layak bhi nahi hai...Im really glad that we have him. Tum nahi janti ho k maine is din ak kitni besabri se intzaar kia hai, Sana, ke mai is admi ko iske kiye ki saza de saku."
Sana did not reply and gently signalled him to let go of her wrist. He smiled and did that. When they reached the end of the corridor,Sam turned around to go to the place where Devraj was at that time.
"Sam! Duty hai tumhari?"
"Nahi...bas aise hi."
Sana sensed what was coming up. It was around 2 in the night and the place was isolated. She ran upto him and said
"Tum pagal to nahi ho gaye ho...We cant kill him."
"Really?"
"Sam no!"
Sam ignored her and pushed the door open to the high security cell guarded by 2 guards. Sana followed him frantically but kept quite as she did not want to create a scene in front of the guards. Sam asked them to leave and stopped infront of the bars that held Devraj. He was still dressed in his suit and was sitting calmly on the bench, his head bowed. He looked up at the commotion to see Sana and Sam there. Sam opened the cell and entered while Sana remained outside. He looked curious like a child. Sam gave hima bitter smile and asked
"So...kaisa lag raha hai Raj...Apni sahi jagah akar?"
"Kuch khas nahi...Im bored...Cant I get a newspaper atleast?"
Sam's blood boiled at his words and he punched his face hard. Devraj's head banged against the wall and begun to bleed. Sana gasped and entered the cell but before she could stop him, Sam was already out of control. He clutched his hair and said in a low voice
"Tumhe hisab dena hoga Devraj...Tumne meri behan ko dhokha diya hai...aur ye mai achchi tarah janta hu...Mai tumhe chain se marne bhi nahi dunga...aisi halat karunga tumhari, ke maut ke liye bhikh mangte nazar aoge...yaad rakhna meri baat...."
At that point Sana pulled him back with a jerk and screamed
"Have you lost it Sam? What the hell are you doing?"
Sam lost his temper and shouted right back ignoring Devraj who was slumped against the wall, breathing heavily, his eyes fixed on Sana.
"I have lost it? This man killed my sister and I have lost it! Dammit Sana tumhe ho kya gaya hai? Jab se wapis ayi ho pata nahi kis tarah behave kar rahi ho...Mujhe to lag raha hai ke tum sach me Naina Roy hi bann gai ho!"
Sana was stumped at this and remained rooted to the spot as Sam banged open the cell door and left. She kept staring at the cell door which was moving to and fro with the impact of being slammed until she heard Devraj's movements in the corner. He was still gazing at her intently. Her expressions hardened and she turned around to leave when he called her.
"Naina"
"Mera naam Sana hai...Officer Sana Azmi..."
"Mere liye to tum hamesha Naina hi rahogi..."
She spinned around and said in a harsh voice
"Wasnt Sam enough?"
Devraj ignored her words and slowly massaged the back of his head, sitting up straight.
"Apne jazbaato se Itni jaldi haar jaogi Naina? Tumse ye ummeed nahi thi mujhe."
"Apni bakwaas band karo...agar mai chahu to abhi tumhari jaan le sakti hu. So mind what you are saying." She had crossed her arms and looked very rude now. Devraj smiled again.
"Agar tum chaho to... Go ahead, I dont mind."
"Tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko? Tumhe kya lagta hai, bhaag jaoge tum yaha se? Ajtak tumne kia hi kya masumo ki jaan lene k siwaye? Tumhari zindagi ka 1 1 lamha kisi na kisi k khoon se ranga hua hai. Isliye mujhse ya kisi bhi insaan se daya ki ummeed mat karna!"
"Mai tumse daya ki ummeed nahi karta...Sach to ye hai k jo tumne mere sath kia, wahi maine bhi kisi ke saath kia tha...magar bas itna bata do, k tumne aisa kia kyu...kya dushmani hai tumhari mujhse? Something personal...or just professional?"
Sana was shocked to hear his question. He looked like a man who had accepted his fate and had no complaints from it. It was easier to kill people who resisted. But when they handed you the weapon to kill them, it was impossible.
She looked away and said
"Everyone who is human is your enemy Devraj. Mujhe tumhare jaise admi se koi rishta nahi rakhna...dushmani ka bhi nahi."
With that she left and he rested his head spinning head against the wall, looking at his hands covered with his own blood. All he could comprehend was that Naina would never be his now. First time in his life he had felt that he possesed a heart with emotions. His whole world had begun to revolve around Naina to such an extent that everything else- his violence, anger, illegal business, everything had ceased to matter. And then he had decided to let go all of it. Except one- only one desire- of revenge against Maxwell. That one desire to taste the vengeance proved to cost him his dreams. And that was it. when he had seen the police in the doorway, his first thought was- Save Naina. But when she walked away, his dreams crashed around his ears and suddenly he felt like Sam was his best friend. He could have tried to fight...and maybe had even managed to escape. But he wanted that one answer from her- why she did this. For when he had loved her endlessly, why she had betrayed him. He was not angry. He was sad. Sadness had been an unknown emotion to him for when he wanted something and he could not get it, it sparked a determination in him to snatch it. And today when Sam came in front of his eyes, he got his answer. There are no answers to why me in this world. He knew now how Aasma must have felt when he stood in front of her with the gun. He knew somewhere deep inside his heart that if Maxwell had not appeared, he would have shot her dead. Whatever reasons he might cite in favour of this deed, he knew it was actually driven by the cause that it was the easiest way out at that time. But he had not anticipated that this would haunt him for the rest of his life. Only Karan knew about this phase of his life, apart from Maxwell ofcourse. Karan...He had had not time to think about him...Where was he? Devraj knew that none of his employees were arrested. Then what happened to Karan.... He wished he would have survived and was safe. His own humanity amused him.
******************************************************
Sana practically ran out of Devraj's line of vision as his gaze was hurting her now. She wondered why she stopped Sam from giving him the treatment he rightly deserved. She was known in the entire department for her ruthlessness towards criminals and this was unprecedented behaviour. She had to stop herself from caressing his hair and comforting him. Bleeding...she had seen the blood on his hands...seen it trickling down his neck. She stopped and looked around for the doctor. But he was not there. Upon enquiring, she came to know that he was on leave. She saw the first aid box placed on its corner and picked it up after steeling herself.
Devraj looked up again as the cell door opened. Blood was flowing freely now and it was weakening him. He couldnt see clearly but he knew it was her. And that made him smile. Sana tried her best to ignore that captivating smile which held a combination of helplessness and victory...as if he was saying, I knew you will come!
She sat down next to him and bent his head to have a look at the wound. It wasnt very deep and just required minimal dressing. She started to clean it up, trying not to notice his breathing and close physical proximity. He remained silent throughout and was smiling to himself unnoticed by her. When she was done, she looked at him again and her eyes fell upon his chained wrists. His hands covered in scarlet blood were bound by a long chain. The sight somehow repulsed her and she quickly wiped his blood off using her handkerchief. His hands closed around hers as she was pulling the now red handkerchief now and she felt a current pass through her body. He released her as quickly as he had held and she again got up to run away but halted suddenly. Sam was standing at the cell door, his eyes filled with anger, disgust and disappointment. He had come ther to ask her if she needed a ride home.
He turned around and left wordlessly. Sana was further irritated. she looked up at the dim bulb lighting up the cell and wondered why in the first place she took this case.
This man was jeopardising her life, her friends, her morals and everything else she cherished.
Devraj decided it was best not to react. But her touch had been really amazing. It was worth the pain after all, he mused.
End

hi guys
see, this time super fast ud! last part was really tedious and took along time to finalise...this one was comparitively easy so i here. im really sorry for that disappearing act...hope this makes up for it.
all the people who are yet to comment, im sorry, i couldnt wait as im leaving my place tom and might not be able to post this ud. and since it was ready, then why wait?
as for the ending, everyone, plz let me know. happy ending is guaranteed to guys from my side. sad one is an option. plz let me know frankly. big thanks to all those who expressed their opinions.
tina_1234, psruthi, princessyogitha, hinal60, guglu088, Dhara_s, suhana_dixit, spvd, golu_1677, dazzling_glory, PrithviSanyo1, thanks to you guys for pressing the like button! :D
will try to post the next part soon too, though that may be delayed.
Sur
Shaina_b thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

So Naina is Sana, an undercover cop and Sam's best friend!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

But what has happened to her??😛 😛 😛 😛She knows she has done the right thing but she is not happy at all!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She feels disturbed about arresting Devraj and all she can think about is the look he had given her!!!!!

The only thing that came to her mind was Devraj's eyes and his confessions of love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

She is definately in love with Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Sam was worried if Devraj had tried to take advantage of Sana during the mission!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I think Sam likes Sana and wants to be more than her friend!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

I loved Devraj's answer to Sam's question!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Sam is very angry with Devraj and so hits him mercilessly!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Sam's emotions can be understood and Devraj knows that he is responsible for Aasma's death and so does not protest!!!!!

Thank God Sana stopped Sam otherwise Sam would have killed him!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Sam is angry as usse lagta hai ke Sana has really become Naina and I think he is right!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Devraj called Sana Naina and said that she will always be Naina for him!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Sana is angry and speaks rudely to him but she is struggling with her own feelings!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj now feels that Naina will never be his now!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

He loves her so much that everything else had ceased to matter!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

He is not responsible for Aasma's death and even if he had refused they would have gotten someone else to do the job and so he should quit blaming himself!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

He is sad as it really hurts when someone betrays you and Sana has betrayed him like he had betrayed Aasma!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Sana's betrayal is most painful for Devraj!!!!!

Devraj wished that Karan had survived and was safe!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope so too and want him help Devraj escape soon!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Sana is unable to stop herself from caring about Devraj and she wanted to comfort him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

She goes to give him first-aid to dress up his wounds!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj knows that Naina also loves him just like he loves her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Devraj smiled as he knew Naina would come and his smile held a combination of helplessness and victory!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj held her hand as she was wiping the blood from his hand and she felt a current pass through her body!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Sam is angry and disappointed to see the change in Sana's behaviour!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

For Devraj her touch had been amazing and it is worth all his pain after all!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I feel so bad for Devraj and I want him out of that prison soon!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I really want a happy ending to Devraj and Naina's love story, maybe an ending like Dhoom 2!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
nisha1984 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update
thanks for pm.......
So now Naina/Sana is definitely in love with Raj but what will happen now? He is criminal and Sam is angry but he doesn't know that Devraj didn't kill his sister......................
Update soon...........
eagerly waiting for next part....
Kool_Naina thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sur😊
im Naina read ur both fic they were awesome👏
in this fic hope naina n raj are 2 diff people
hope raj aur naina jaldi saath ho😊
update is fabulous
now naina is definately in love with raj😳
sam's anger is justified just hope use sach pata chal jaye
do continue soon😊
plz pm me next tym

thnxs

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".