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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update . too good. loved it.continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! thankyou shaina

Devraj's boss in angry with him and he wants Devraj to complete the job soon!!!!! arent all bosses like that?

But Devraj cannot bring himself to betray Aasma or put her in any kind of danger!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 well, lets see if he does that

Devraj drove to Aasma's office and waited outside to meet her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 thats only cuz he wants to keep an eye on her

Aasmna is a bit suspicious kyunki woh jahan jaati hai Devraj usse mil jaata hai!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” well, she should be

Devraj noticed his boss' man following Aasma and instructed Aasma to take the other route to her house which had traffic jams!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj banged his car against the man's car and it crashed against the railing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ yeah, he doesnt like interference

Aasma ish admi ko dhundh rahi thi as she had information that she will be watched!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”But who is this man??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” well, any guesses?

Aasma was suspicious as Devraj had saved her twice but Devraj is very careful and had his answer ready!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ he doesnt want to go to jail so soon

Devraj is confused about why he had saved her!!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Devraj reminds Aasma of her old friend and she is lost in his memories!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 well, we all love our friends

But Devraj cannot tell her that he is her old friend who she is so fondly remembering!!!!! so sad

She doesn't know that he is back with her only to get secret information from her!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” exactly

So Samarth aka Sam is Aasma's younger brother!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 yeah

Devraj agreed with Sam that Aasma should go home!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 well, he wants to clear his way

Devraj said ke subah tak yeh admi subah tak mar thode hi jayega!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ah well he is smart

Devraj had gotten the man killed and hid a smile when Aasma got the news!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sam is very cute and is scared but still saying he will not let anything happen to his Di!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 well, he is cute for now

Sam wants to go to Essel World and Aasma announced that Raj is also going with them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj, Aasma and Sam all are having a good time and enjoyng each other's company!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

Devraj and Aasma have gotten close and are holding hands!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” things are getting fishy arent they

Karan's phone call brought Devraj out of his past!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan warns Dev ke woh gusse mein kuch aisa na kare jisse baad mein pachtana pade!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” well, he knows dev too well

Finally Maxwell se badla lene ka waqt aa gaya hai jis din ka Devraj ne bahut intezaar kiya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ yeah, wait ends

I think Maxwell is the one jiski wajah se Devraj ko Aasma ko dhoka dena padha tha!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Was Maxwell Devraj's old boss??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

I think Aasma ke maut ke peeche bhi Maxwell ka hi haath tha jiski wajah se Devraj usse badla lena chahta hai!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 devraj is not innocent as well

Why is Naina so confused??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Devraj's words are still ringing in her ears!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 poor girl

Is she doing things according to her boss or is she betraying him??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• lets see

Something is fishy about her alright and I think she is working with the police!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

thank you so much for your comment shaina! :)



Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sur dear...

How r u? πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ....main bahut khush hun yaar pata hain kyun i noticed that u already started replying on comments ..iska matlab tu bahut jaldi update karne wali right...ab tu hi bata sakthi ki meri guess sahi hain ya galath
Actually jab maine ye part read kiya tab i felt so sad .....iska matalb ye nahin tha ki i dont like the update...its awesome n fabulously written πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘..... sad kyun thi ye to tujhe pata haina..ye naina ne kya kiya yaar ....main abhi bahut gussa main hun naina par ..lekin ye jarror janna chahungi ki naina ki pov kya hain.....she dont feel anything for raj 😭 😭 😭
so raj ne asma ko nahin maara...mujhe pata tha raj kabhi aise kaam nahin karsaktha..finally raj ne maxwell ko maarke apna badla leliya....yaar kya ab raj jail main rahega...plz dont torture him too much....ab to sam bhi yahi hain ..pata nahin what he will do with raj...ek baat poochun ...karan kaha hain ...i hope wo kuch na kuch karega raj ke liye
tumhe pata hain last line(he received a push) padhke mujhe na bahutttttttttttt bura laga..aur sam pe bahut gussa bhi aaya...usse raj ko push karne ki jarrorat kya hain ..he is ready to come with him na
chal ab jaldi se next part post kar ..waiting for the update
aur teri note main question ka meri answer to bahut pehle se jaanthi hain ...isiye main yaha kuch nahin kehrahi
love
yogitha
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its nice to finally read an update for this FF.
Naina manages to seduce Maxwell just as they had planned. And finally Devraj was able to take his revenge. He has always felt guilty for asma's death and in some ways he had been responsible. Asma had trusted him and his love and it was this trust that
had betrayed her.
The most shocking part was Devraj's arrest. Nain is an undercover cop. Devraj seems satisfied that he has been arrested only after he had completed his revenge. He even tries to give Sam a friendly greeting.
As for the ending ...you can write it which ever way you want. It will be sad to read the tragic ending..but as the writer you should have creative freedom. An happy ending would always be fun to read
Please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoooooooome.........
superb..........
fantabulous......
excellent.....
wonderful........
loved it to the core.........
thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooome.........
superb..........
fantabulous......
excellent.....
wonderful........
loved it to the core.........
thanx for the pm........

hey dear
thankyou so much for the appreciation..m glad u liked it
you are welcome for the pm and thanks for commenting
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome update . too good. loved it.continue soon.

thankyou rakhi for the comment and aprreciation. will cont really soon, and i mean it this time!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Superb part. Would like to read both the endings happy n the sad one too. Pls do write it and post it asap. Also after u r finished with this fic waiting for an update of the other fic of urs.

thanks alot golu for showing interest in my POV. thanks for commenting too. will cont really soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sur, hi guglu!

Superb part... Well I don't know what to say... I mean...I m happy that Raj was able to avenge Asma... but he got arrested. And Sam sure is the person I had expected... hmm, i understand. this is pretty predictable im sure...

I can't say I hate Naina...but I can't say that I like her as well... Maybe if it hadn't been Raj, I would have reacted differently... but as it is all of us are crazy raj fans.... But again this part was along the expected lines... yeah...crazy fans...when i started this, i meant Devraj as anegative character..but then the rajeevian in me woke up and told me to justify his every course of action, no matter how lame it is!!! 🀒

As for your ending...it is your fic girl so it is you who should know what to do best...so be it a sad ending or happy ending or whatever you wish...I will read it happily...so follow your thoughts and go ahead girl...will be waiting eagerly for the next update... thankyou so much for giving me this freedom Di...It really means alot. :D thanks for commenting!

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sur Hi Di! how are you?

chalo finally u updated this fiction.. even i felt that its getting impossible now πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
I was shocked after reading dis..I always doubted Naina in this fiction..She was an undercop.. ah...well, this had to happen
Devraj was finally able to kill maxwell but somewhere I feel that Raj too is responsible for Aasma's death..She loved him n he betrayed her..I am not talking abt the feelings but still she died n he is somewat responsible.. well, ofcourse he is responsible! he could have saved her but he did not! and this was his mistake for which he has to pay...
Even Sam is dere to arrest Raj..He hates him n I am not surprised at this..He was responsible for his sister's death..Pls dont torture him..πŸ˜†πŸ˜† ah, i wont..i love Raj too!
I'll b glad to read the happy ending but as Dhara said I dont mind a sad ending too.According to me Raj is not so innocent but again as RN fan I want them to b together in the end..πŸ˜ƒ
Ending can n somewat like dey showed in Gangster😊 thanks alot for this Di...u know, 1 ending for RN fans and 1 for the ones who liked the story!
Pls continue soon sure! thanks alot for the comment! bye
Bye

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