The moment I saw you-Prida FF(Update pg 17 4/09/10

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fibrinogen9

@fibrinogen9

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!! its a ⭐️

omg......................

great going dear.....👏

u deserve a 🤗

plz continue...desperately waitin

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Arpita Madan

@Arpita.Madan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

ok i just read your whole fanfic in one go and OH MY GOD I CANT WAIT THIS STORY IS SO CAPTIVATING.......my heart was thumping constantly.....please PM me when u update!!!

hugs

arpita

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Priya

@little_dragon

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

hey yar. Am priya a first timer to ur ff. This is awesom a ff. Would like to read more . Please add me to ur pm list.

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

awesome part

what is wrong wid prithvi?

plzzz continue soon

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Hey ..i just read ur FF...its really awesome..

So SaVni are best friends..thats nice..

n wow..the way Prithvi saved her going thru all that danger!..bravo!..n that impressed her..!..nice!

All their intimate scenes shows clearly that they;re attracted to each other..

I wonder why he did'nt call her 4 6 months!..thats a long time..n if he missed her he cud hv..but he did'nt!..he did only when the news of the engagement came..i'm sure he's not happy wid tat..

n he acutally kidnapped her?!..m sure he' wanz 2 stop the engagement for happening..

n will Damini scream or not?!..she seems really frightened by him..he is acting scary!..i hope she dusnt..more PriDa!..lol..

btw do maintain an index..n update the title whenever u cont..

update soon

-Aish

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

damini scared?!! thats new!! thats defo not out damini ryt??

amyways its n amazing part do continue sooon!!

n pri better ve a goood explanation 4 not contacting her for 6 months!!

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

PLeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeee
Continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!
Waiting desperately.. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Cheers,

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