~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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pls pls pls pls ..... cont soon

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#302

Hey Sur hello,
Tum ne is fic ko RA fic nahi banaya us k liye thanks kyounki yahan problem ye hai ki RA waale RN fics nahi padhte hain aur RN waale RA fics to heroine nahi dena sab se safe option tha.
Hey dear just read parts one to five
Loved that
Sur ne apni zindagi me aisa kya kho diya hai? Jis ki vajah se vo kisi aur ko apne pass aane nahi de rahi hai? Kyoun vo sab se itne doori bana k rakh rahi hai?
Raj n Sur ki mulakaat first part me hi ho gayi n Raj ki to aadat hi hai koi acchi ladki dekhi nahi bus sharat start.
Vishal ko ab Nandini ko compliment karna hai aur us ki mom lagataar us k saath hain to compliment hi kaise kare bechara, but sach me acchi trick apnanyi hai apni mom ko vahan se hatane ki aur us ko chance bhi mil gaya na apni wife se flirt karne ka.
Vishaal is really cute n Nandini k saath us ki baatein kaafi cute thi.
Raj n Sur filmy style fall na.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Here comes the reply for part 3 & 4:-
Gud updates,
Raj ki Sur se fir se mulakaat ho gayi shopping mall me jahan sab ek saath pahuche hue the. Vishal to apni honewaali wife ko dekh kar vaise bhi clean bold ho jaata hai aur yahan bhi vahi ho raha hai, Raj to yahan bhi flirt karne me laga hua hai ladki k saath i mean us ki so called gf jo kisi aur k saath busy hai.
Aisa hi hota hai, humesha hero heroine ki choice milte hai ek doosre se aur yahan Raj n Sur ki bhi choice kaafi similar hai.Accha hua Raj ne Vishal n Nandini ko saath me bhej diya shopping k liye ab us ko bhi time mil gaya Sur k saath. Sur ka opinion us gal ko dekh k jaroor change ho gaya hoga ki bus ladke hi nahi ladkiyaan bhi hoti hain aise.
Sur ko dikha hi diya Raj ne ki vo so called us ki gf kitna pyaar karti hai Raj se, par pyar k naam par Raj us ki aakhon ka dard miss nahi kar paaya aur us ko feel ho hi gaya na ki kuch kahin khoya hua hai Sur k andar se aur kitne bhi koshish kar le vo apna akelapan chupa nahi paa rahi hai.
Is baar phir Raj ne intelligently Vishal k saath bhej diya Nandini ko aur khud Sur k saath aa gaya. Dosti bhi kar li acchi khaasi aur ab Nandini ko Sur ka khila hua chehra dekh k hi samajh me aa raha hai ki kisi baat se aaj bahut dino baad bahut khush hai vo.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#304

Read two more parts and here comes the replies for that.
So the marriage has been over and Raj once again got blown when he saw Sur in the marriage wearing the same saari they choose there in the mall.
She was really looking different to him as compared to all of the girls. But Raj still felt that something was missing in her eyes, that charm or may be we can say a loneliness was there in her eyes.
He thought that to discuss that with his bhabhi but not now he should discuss that afterward.
In night both were thinking about each other, Sur was thinking about his new frnd that she will prove herself a good frnd of him but Raj was thinking something differently.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Next update:-
So two ppl r going in the Seminar, both the MD's of their companies. N they never thought that they will meet like that.
Mil takra gaye dono, they always meet in the same way.
And now they r going in each others company.
Raj found a book in her purse and that showed him she is disheartened up to an extent.
She wanted to show the world that she is tough but she is not from inside, she is just trying to do that.
A bad nightmare she saw n woke up, but when she found the novel in his hands she took that back.
She is not interested to share her pains n sorrows with him. But i think she can feel now that Raj is getting her soon.
She offered him to saty with her but he refused but ab kya rehna to padega hi na saath me jab room available nahi hai to.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Read part 6 & 7:-
So Raj had to stay with Sur finally, jab ki vo apne aap room dhoondh k rehna chahta tha.
A good flat with all basic necessities, Raj k liye Sur ne pasta banaya.
Raj knew that very well ki agar Raj yahan nahi hota to aise hi sone waali thi madam, kuch bhi nahi khaati fir.
But the most beautiful scene was there of their dance. Jab Raj ne us ko dance k liye poocha hai n us k baad jis tarah se Sur n Raj ne saath me dance kiya hai that was fantastic specially jis tarah se tum ne sab describe kiya hai that was good too.
Sur ko bhi i feel kuch to feelho hi raha hai na Raj k pass aane par, i hope jaldi hi Raj apni feelings Sur k liye samajh lega.
So Raj ne apni dream share ki Sur k saath ki vo ek Music Company kholna chahta tha but us ko laga ki vo nahi kar paayega n he dropped that idea.
Sur was right, hum sab ko hak hai apni har wish poori karne ka so as Raj ko bhi karna chahiye na. Varna life time us k andar ye feeling reh jaayegi ki kahin us ne kuch miss kar diya hai.
Vow that's g8 Sur k sapno me aise khoye the janab to neend kaise aati aur subah jaldi uth k ek kaam to accha kiya ki sab k liye nashta bana liya.
Sur ko late ho gaya is baar to kitne pyaar se uthaya na us ne aur kitchen me kaam karte karte bhi Sur ko dekh k jabardast jhatka lag gaya tha us ko.
Bechara kya kare bhi vo us ko control hi nahi ho raha hai na Sur ko dekh k. Matlab cook accha hai na Raj. Fatafat nashta bhi ban gaya n thank god Sur ne timely breakfast bhi kar liya.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#307

First Sur tell me y it has been not updating since a long time?
Than if ur not going to update the fic than y should i comment here?

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neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#308

It has been more than 6 months since u last updated ........... Any chances of u cont this fic

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

#309

So Raj is just ruining his life all because of Sur. But i think there is no need to do that all because she will be his surely.
Oh god how much over burden he is taking yaar? Working up to 2, it's wrong n thank god Nandini called him on perfect timing so that he was returning to the home back.
Topic is back again i mean Sur n the matter related to her. Raj is so eager to listen all that whatever she says about him but the phone interrupted them.
Sur n Nandini's dad is injured n Raj really behaved very sincerely this time. His father is serious and now he has to call Sur n he informed her and now she is coming back.
Raj is so much exhausted and he need to sleep n he got that. He had to pick Sur from airport n he must be excited to see her back after a long time.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 14 years ago

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So finally they met after a long time hmmmmmm, and once again Raj is bowled over her.
She is too much concerned about her father but Raj really did right by bringing her to her father directly and when she saw his condition her condition worsen but still he was there to support her.
And this made her feel once again that she is so much connected to him and whenever she will be sad or disappointed Raj will always be with her.
She must not feel it like that whatever happened in her life was all because of her. She wasn't at fault than y is she punishing her for such thing?
Raj sent the jeeja saali to home and was there to take rest. Already Vishal ne bahut mehnat ki hai apne in lawa k liye. Superb morning scene yaar, when Raj woke up his head was on Sur's shoulder.
She insistly sent him home and this was destined to be happen na. Nandini has read his diary and now she knows very well that Raj loves Sur. Now i am sure Nandini is gonna do something for that.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago