~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Wow....gr8 part. Wat a cool entry of our hero Raj. Wah.....bhai ho to aisa!!!! Main bhi usse tips lungi...lol. Anyways, Vishal was really romantic wid Nandini but wid a bro like Raj he shud hav been more careful....poor guy!!! But Raj has collided wid a girl....hmm....sensing another imp entry. Pls continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part-2
He turned around and froze....there a girl was bent over the ground trying to straighten her ruffled hair and dress. Unlike him she didnt seem to have balanced herself so well. He smiled to himself....Thats why he loved marriages...so many girls to flirt with. He cleared his throat and said apologetically
"I m really sorry if I have hurt you "
"Its fine...But please dont around like that. Kisi ko chot lag jayegi"the girl had still not lokked up. Her long hair obscurred her face.
"Wo main to bas....Agar nahi bhaagta to problem ho jati"
"Mere khyaal se to aap koi problem create karne ke baad hi bhaage honge."The girl looked up, flipped back her shining hair and stood up.
Raj just stared at her. It wasnt that she was some miss universe glam doll but his heart skipped a beat.(jaise hero ki adat hai heroine ko ghoorne ki...jab tak ye scene na aye na, pata nahi koi story puri kyu nahi hoti😲) She was dressed in a pink saari and wore virtually no make up..or jewellery. But still amongst all those heavily laden ladies, she stood out. She had arge liquid eyes and a lovely smile which she flashed at him and said
"Mai chalti hu...bahut kaam hai.."and she begun to walk away from him.
Raj was now thinking why didnt he notice her before this...he realised she was gone and turned to call her
"Hey..miss apna naam to batati jao"he said turning and praying she didnt ask him to call her Mrs.
"Kya zarurat hai....aap pata kar hi lenge"she said laughing as she stopped to look back at him
"Haan wo bhi hai par aap bata dengi to mehnat bach jayegi you see..."said Raj gaining back his composture
"Nahi aj aap mehnat kariye....mehnat ka fal meetha hota hai.."she said and suddenly a small girl came and pulled her saying,"Didi apko bula rahe hai.."she looked at him and said "bye enjoy"
Kya ladki hai...thought Raj...iska naam to yahi batayegi.....He laughed and walked away.

There Vishal was completely bluffed and didnt know what to do. Then his mother came and said
"Kya tu chopra uncle chopra uncle chilla raha tha wo to abhi tak aaye hi nahi hai"
"Oh mujhe laga..."He muttered even more irritated. "Ab aap log sagai karvane ke mood me hai ya mai Nandini ko lekar mandir chala jau or direct shaadi karke waapus aau?"
"Acha to ye baat hai....Thik hai me pandit ji se muhurat ka time puchti hu"said his mother and left.
"Is pandit ki to mai...khud to shaadi kar ke bachche paida kar liye meri sagai bhi nahi karwa raha"Vishal said😡
"Sabr karo...."Said Nandini
"Wahi to kar raha hu...lo a gaye the great pandit ji....namaste pandit ji..."
"Khush raho beta"said the pandit
"Ji aap rehne de tab na"he muttered. Nandini laughed.😆
"Beta kuch kaha tumne?"Pandit asked
"Ji apka ashirawaad rahe to khushi hi khushi hai"Vishal said.
"Bahut sanskari hai apka beta"said pandit ji turning to Vishal's mother.
"Aur aap jaise logo ka antim sanskar karvane me bhi exprt hai"Vishal muttered again. Nandini was trying so hard to control her laughter that she thought 2 of her ribs must already have cracked. She elbowed Vishal who grinned.😆
"Ky a beta zor se bolo shor me sunai nahi de raha"said pandit
"Ji ye to apka badappan hai"said Vishal loudly so the pandit stepped back
😉"Achcha...shukriya beta...ab rasm shuru kare..."
"Thank God warna mai to sone wala tha"Vishal said again but this time pandit didnt hear him.
"Apni anguthi nikalo.....samdhi ji aiye...ye Raj kaha hai..."Vishal's mother and Nandini's mother started gathering everyone. Raj came and winked at his brother who glared back. 😡

Then he noticed that beside Nandini the same girl was standing and whispering something. She didnt seemed to have noticed him. Then his mother came and announced
"Chalo shuru karo"
(Now guys I donnu ke pehle kon ring pehnata hai...meri sagai nahi hui hai na abhi tak...still akad bakad karke Vishal aya to first Vishal)
Vishal put his hand in his pocket for the ring but it was not there...Raj held it out for him and said"Mujhe pata tha aap bhul jaoge"
He smiled and put the ring in Nandidni's finger. Nandini did the same to him andeveryone clapped.👏👏 they got up to take blessings of everyone. Then the music started playing and Vishal took Nandini to the dance floor. They waltzed gracefully. Raj asked out the first girl he saw and changed partner after every song....He was a complete flirt. But his eyes were searching the girl..he didnt know why but he wanted to talk to her.
After dinner they all sat down together and Raj said"Lets play something...girls side vs boys side...."
"Ha sure"said a chirpy girl from Nandini's family
"Kya khele?"said a guy
"Truth or dare"said someone
"OK."Raj said standing up"so sab circle banao and yes bhaiya bhabhi aap bhi khelenge so sit here"pointing to a seat. Nandini and Vishal took their seats but then Nandini called a girl named Vishakha and whispered something in her ear. She nodded and ran away.
"Ek minute ruko Raj, koi ana baki hai"Nandini said to Raj who smiled and nodded. Vishakha came back dragging the girl with her who looked uninterested. Raj smiled happily and thought"ab ayega maza"😉
"Tum bhi khelogi.."Nandini said sternly.
"Please Nandini no...mai ...mujhe ye sab nahi ata"she pleaded
"Nakhre band karo and baitho...meri sagai pe tum itna nahi kar sakti?"Nandini said
"OK"she gave up and sat down. Raj delibrately took the seat opp to her, took the bottle and spinned it. It stopped at Vishal. Evryone hooted.
"To kahiye bhaiya....Truth or dare?"said Raj
"Tujhe to mai dekh lunga...chal truth"Vishal said
"Hmmmm....Apne bhabi ko apni kitni girlfriends ke naam bata rakhe hai?"Raj winked
"Saale shaadi se pehle divorce karwayega"
"Truth or dare"Raj replied
"3"said Vishal
"Kyu bhaiya baaki mai bata du?"
"Chup kar"
"Just joking...3 se zada gf to aap jhel hi nahi pate....gud honesty is the best policy"Raj said
"Raj mujhe Vishal pe pura bharosa hai"Nandini said
"Yahi to prob hai bhabhi"said Raj who shook his head dramatically and spinned again. This time it was some boy who was asked to copy Dharmendra...The game continued but Raj's attention was fixed over the girl opp to him who sat withher eyes fixed on the ground. She looked sad. He wondered why. Finally the bottle fixed at her. "DIDI"screamed the girls. Raj smiled and looked into her eyes as she looked up startled.
"To...truth ya dare?"he asked
"Truth"she said slowly
"Apka naam kya hai?"Raj asked. Everyone stared at him.
"Ye tu kya puch raha hai?"said Vishal laughing. Raj ignored him and stared at the girl who looked stunned.
"Sur"she replied.
"Thanku"said Raj and passed the bottle to his cousin to spin.
"Question kaha hai Raj?"Said a friend if his
"Puch to liya...aagey badho"he said. He had planned something else for her but she looked so scared that he decided to spare her. He didnt know why but he didnt want to see her getting embarassed in front of evryone. He felt odd as he had never done something like this for anyone before. Sur looked at him surprised and he smiled back, before looking away to the next bakra.
The game went on and on and everybody enjoyed alot. When it was very late and time to go home, They said their goodbyes and moved on. Raj noticed Sur standing in a corner. He went to her and and "Miss Sur....You have a very nice name...."
"Thanks"she replied
"Aur ek baat thi....aap bahut khubsurat hai...par aap muskurate hue zada achi lagti hai...pata nahi kyu mujhe aisa lag raha hai ke apko koi baat pareshna kar rahi hai....khair thats ur personal life...par use apne chehre pe mat ane diya kijiye....apse zada imp apki taklif nahi ho sakti na...so please be happy...aur agar apko meri kisi baat ka bura laga ho to sorry."
Sur stared at him dumb. Nobody had ever bothered to tell her this and this stranger was speaking like he knew her for years. He smiled and said
"Apko koi bula raha hai"
"kya"she said. Raj pointed to Nandini's mother behind her back. She turned and saw that indeed she was calling her.She turned back to Raj but he was gone. She looked around and saw that he was getting into a car. She smiled and went back to her family, pondering over his words.
That night Raj wondered what he ahd done and more importantly why he had done this......He hit himself with the pillow and went to sleep.

Ok guys dis was all fr 2day.....plz leave comments if u read dis.

temme if i shud cont

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Wow....I luv this character of Raj. And am glad dat Sur didnt behave like a typical heroine who is always over-confident of her beauty n thinks the hero is always there to flirt wid her. I liked the way she talked to Raj smilingly after the collision n didnt create a scene out of this small sweet 'takkar'.

Vishal was really hillarious. His dialogues for the pandit was so funny. That was really a wonderful scene. And it was really sweet on Raj's part to bring the ring....it shows how responsible he is!!! *sigh*

So Raj kept his word n Sur told her name herself....thats like my hero. But Sur was sad.....I hope its not sumthing big. But the things Raj told her wer amazing. 'Apki problem apse zyada imp nahi hai'......I luved this line.

Overall I luved Raj-Sur first meet. Nahi pehli mulakat me jhagra hua...nahi pyaar...nahi dosti.....it was a silent sweet memory for both of them n I really liked it a lot.

Pls continue soon n PM me when u UD.

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thanks for the pm....................

very nice part................raj's convo with sur at the beginning was very nice..................then vishal was very very funny.................liked the scene very much................and truth or dare was nice............raj asking sur her name was cute.....and his talk with her atlast was indeed lovely................

cont soon dear..................

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Wow....I luv this character of Raj. And am glad dat Sur didnt behave like a typical heroine who is always over-confident of her beauty n thinks the hero is always there to flirt wid her. I liked the way she talked to Raj smilingly after the collision n didnt create a scene out of this small sweet 'takkar'.

Vishal was really hillarious. His dialogues for the pandit was so funny. That was really a wonderful scene. And it was really sweet on Raj's part to bring the ring....it shows how responsible he is!!! *sigh*

So Raj kept his word n Sur told her name herself....thats like my hero. But Sur was sad.....I hope its not sumthing big. But the things Raj told her wer amazing. 'Apki problem apse zyada imp nahi hai'......I luved this line.

Overall I luved Raj-Sur first meet. Nahi pehli mulakat me jhagra hua...nahi pyaar...nahi dosti.....it was a silent sweet memory for both of them n I really liked it a lot.

Pls continue soon n PM me when u UD.

Thnku sooooooooooo much....ur comments are so encouraging....actually i m not much of a romance person so mujhe ajtak love at 1st site ka funda samajh nahi aya....i wil cont very soon....

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Originally posted by: spvd
thanks for the pm....................

very nice part................raj's convo with sur at the beginning was very nice..................then vishal was very very funny.................liked the scene very much................and truth or dare was nice............raj asking sur her name was cute.....and his talk with her atlast was indeed lovely................

cont soon dear..................

Thnx alot will cont very soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part-3
Now lets talk abt the family of Raj. Vishal and Raj are the sons of the Malhotra family which is a business family owning the Malhotra Group of Companies. Vishal is CEO and Raj has just joined in as the the MD. They both are very hardworking and in the just a few years they have taken their company to the new heights. But Raj is more of a playboy and is seldom serious abt anything. Vishal is responsible and smart. His marriage to Nandini, the daughter of K.D. Khanna is an arranged marriage. Khanna family is an equally bigshot business owner. Nandini is a fashion designer while Sur is the MD of Khanna industries.
As the atmosphere of marriage ceremonies took over the houses, Everyone was very cheerful. Nandini wanted to do some last minute shopping for her marriage so she asked Sur to come along with her. Sur refused at first but then agreed. There Vishal and Raj also decide to go shopping.
Nandini:Chal Sur kitni der karegi mai shopping tere saath hi karungi, ye mat sochna ke tu late ho jayegi to mai kisi or ko le jaungi
Sur:Coming....itna chila kyu rahi ho me apna cell phone dhundh rahi thi bas.
Nandini:Mil gaya to ab chale?
Sur:I wil drive
Nandini:Sure...Maa apke liye kuch lau?
Nandini's mother,Mrs. Khanna:No beta, bas apne liye aur Sur ke liye achi si dress aur jewellery le lena.
Sur:OK Mama
Nandini and Sur reach the shopping mall where Raj and Vishal are also there. They go inside and lokk into the articrafts section for something to decorate Nandini's room. Nandini started looking at wall hangings while Sur moved on to windchimes. She selcted one and started playing with it as she loved winchimes.
Sur:"I think ye acha lagega Nandu, have a look.."She turned to call Nandini but she was not there.
She came out and started looking for her but couldnt.
"Nandini"She called and in her haste collided with someone.
She looked up to see that it was Vishal
"Jiju aap!"She said surprised.
Vishal:"Haa mai...aap yaha kya kar rahi hai sali sahiba"
Sur:"Mai aur Nandu...I mean Nandini shopping kar rahe the par pata nahi wo kaha chali gai"
Vishal:"Call her up and ask her"
Sur:Arre haa, mera bhi ajkal dimag nahi chalta
Sur calls up Nandini and asks her to come.
Vishal:Vaise acha hua ke aap hume yaha mil gai...ek to vese hi aap shadi ke liye late hai....Sagai me pehli baar dekha kal mene aapko
Sur:Ummm I m sorry actually mujhe confrence meeting ke liye jana tha...Dekho Nandu a gai.
Vishal:Nandu...nice name ...mai bhi shadi ke baad use yahi kehkar bulaunga...Hello
Nandini:Aap yaha
Vishal:Haan bas apki yaad a rahi thi na to hum chale aaye
Nandini:Kya? Apko kese pata ke hum yah..
Vishal:Arre hum I mean mai aur Raj kuch shopping krne aye the to bas mai Sur se takra gaya.
Nandini:OK..To Raj kaha hai?
Vishal:Hoga ladies section me, ya kisi ladki ke sath
Nandini:Ha vo aisa hi hai...Sur tum itni chup kyu khadi ho...
Just then Vishal's phone rung and he recieved the call
Vishal:Haan mere bhai kaha hai tu?......Arre yaha aja teri bhabhi hai yaha par.....art nd craft sec....jaldi a ...bye
Raj comes there and greets Nandini. He was surprised to see Sur there and says a quite hello
Sur:Hello
Nandini:Ab jab sab a gaye hai to jis kaam ke liye aye the vo karle
Vishal:Ji aap mil gaye aur kya baaki reh gaya
Nandini:Vishal(she blushes and Raj laughs)
Raj:Bhaiya bhool gaye mai aur Sur bhi hai yaha
Vishal:Shut up. Jb teri shadi hogi na tab dekhiyo mai kya karta hu.
Raj:Bhaiya mujhse shadi karne k liye to bhagwan ko 1 pari ko bhejna padega.
Nandini:Aur tumhe wo pari bahut jald milne wali hai
Raj:Kyu bhabhi aap janti hai kisiko?
Vishal:Arre isko kisi ladki ka naam mat batana bechari fas jayegi
Raj:Exactly
Nandini:Koi baat nahi Raj meri shaadi ho jane do fir fatafat tumhari bhi karva dungi
Raj:Mujhe abhi zindagi enjoy karni hai....Mai shadi nahi karunga
Nandini:Arre ye Sur kaha gai?
Raj:Apki beahan me kya invisible hone ki power hai? Gayab hoti rehti hai
Nandini:Vo rahi! Actually vo thodi reserved hai so zada baat nahi karti...Chalo chalte hai
They go to Sur who was again selecting winchimes. She was trying to get one of them off the hook which was too high for her. Raj came from behind her and took it off and handed it to her.
Their eyes locked and Raj felt something as his heartbeat quickened. Sur dropped her gaze and said
Thanks
Raj:Anytime
Sur:Do you like this? Ye mene Nandini ke kamre ke liye select kiya hai
Raj:Its beautiful...
Vishal:Ha Sur tumhari choice to badi achi hai...Aur ye kya Raj bhi maan gaya...Meri aur iski choice bilkul nahi milti. Tabhi to hum kabse yaha time waste kar rahe hai aur kuch bhi nahi kahrida. Ek kaam karo Sur ko apne sath le jao aur apne liye kapde lelo, mai aur Nandini decoration ka saman dekhte hai
Raj:Hann zarur bhaiya mai to wait kar raha tha ke kab aap koi bahana bana ke mujhe aur Sur ko yaha se bhej doge...Thik hai hum ja rahe hai..
Nandini laughed:Nahi tum dono ko kahi jane ki zarurat nahi hai hum sath me rehte hai
Sur:Nandini aj meri meeting hai 2 ghante me, so plz jaldi kare?
Raj:Thik hai hum jakar apni dress ke order dete hai, aap dono apna saman dekhiye.
He pulled Sur by her hand and suddenly realised what he was doing. He released her hand and led the way to partywear section.
Raj:Sur tum..I mean aap, apne liye kuch select kar lijiye
Sur:Apko mujhe aap kehke bulane ki zarurat nahi hai. Tum chalega
Raj:To tum mujhse itni formally baat mat karo
Sur:ok..vese tumne us din jo kaha uske liye thanx
Raj: Thanx ki koi baat nahi hai...Mujhe jo sahi laga mene kaha
Sur:Vese aisi koi baat nahi hai, mai bahut khush hu, bas us din meri tabyet thik nahi thi....
Raj:Thats really good...kyuki tum hasti hui achi lagti ho
Sur:Thanx. Dekho pehle tum apni dress lelo fir ladies sec me chalenge...
Raj:fine, to ye kaisa rahega?
Sur:No I think you shud go for a dark color pichli baar tumne light color pehna tha na
Raj:Acha to tum batao konsi lu?
Sur picks out a sherwani for Raj.
Raj:This is fab. Suniye, pack this up
Sur:Apna size to dekh lo
Raj:Oh
Sur:Turn around..(she put it Raj's shoulder and checked the size)ye thik hai...pack this
Raj:Now its your turn...
They went to the ladies sec and Sur asks for some saris. Raj kept staring at her as she tried them. He noticed how her flicks always kept tumbling into her eyes, her big beautiful eyes...her eyes always gave him the feeling that something was missing there.
Sur:Raj
Raj was lost in his world
Sur:Raj(she clicked her fingers in front of his eyes. He was stratled)
Raj:Sorry wo mai kuch aur soch raha tha..tumne sari select kar li?
Sur:I m confused...ye blue wali lu ya red walli?
Raj:Hmmmmtum shadi ke liye itni simple sari kyu le rahi ho?
Sur:Kyuki mujhse zada heavy saris manage nahi hoti
Raj:ok...so ye kaisi hai?(Raj pulled out a peach sari with red embroidery on it.)
Sur:Its beautiful...
Raj:Aur tumpar ye color bhi bahut suit karega....Red and blue are quite common
Sur:Thanx. Ye pack kar dijiye
Sur and Raj went back to meet Vishal and Nandini who were also done.
Raj:You said something abt a meeting....To tum job karti ho?
Sur:Actually I work for papa's company...you can call it a job
Raj:Kya post hai tumhari?
Sur:Wahi jo tumari hai
Raj:MD? I m impressed.
Sur:Aisa kuch nahi hai....aj ek imp deal honi hai na
Raj:Why dont u take a break? After all tumhari behan ki shadi hai
Sur:Break lekar hi to ayi hu...me London office sambhalti hu, bas ajkal India me hu. Par papa chahate he me unke sath hi rahu
Raj:To acha hai, tumhe London me akela nahi lagta
Sur's cheerfulness suddenly vanished but she composed herself and said:Adat pad jati hai
Tabhi 1 ladki dressed in a short skirt and tank top comes and hugged Raj. Raj hugged her back and she said
Janu where were u and ye kon hai tumhare sath?
Raj:Arre me yaha shopping karne aya tha shadi ke liye. Ye bhabhi ki behan Sur hai....Sur this is my gf Sonia(He winked)

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Well dats all for 2day...temme kaisa laga..I know story slow chal rahi hai but agey I will make it fast...plz leave a comm if u like dis

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

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pls cont so soon

its a grt stry

aap jadi cont kiya karo pls

waiting eagerly for nex prt

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

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PART-4

Sur stared at the girl and then at Raj who seemed to be enjoying a private joke.
Sonia:"Hello..."
Sur:Hello nice to meet you
Sonia:Same here
Then she turned to Raj and said
"Come on darling lets go for a movie and lunch..."
Raj:Not today sweetie I have lots of work to do...Abhi tum jao agar bhaiya ne dekh liya to problem ho jayegi
Sonia:Ok...but nxt time no excuse
Raj:Sure jaanu..
Sonia:You love me na baby
Raj:Course I do
They hugged each other and Sonia left. Raj let out a deep breath and muttered"Thank God"
Sur:ye sach me tumhari gf hai?
Raj:Sort of
Sur:Sort of matlab...tum usse pyar nahi karte?
Raj:Pyar! Pagal ho gai ho kya...oh sorry I mean mai aur pyar! Impossible. Ye to bas timepass tha
Sur:To tumhare hisab se ladkiya sirf timepass ke liye bani hoti hai
Sur looked very upset now. Raj noticed this and quickly said
"Of course not. Mai ladkiyo ki izzat karta hu par uski jaisi ladkiyo ki nahi"
Sur:What do you mean?
Raj:You think ke mai use dhokha de raha hu aur uske pyar ka faida utha raha hu, right?
Sur:Aisa hi kuch
Raj:Tumhe lagta hai ke wo mujhse pyar karti hai?
Sur:Haan
Raj burst out laughing and said
"Uska pyar dekhna chahogi?"
Sur:"Kya keh rahe ho-"
Raj pulled her hand and took her to the corner section. There Sonia stood arm in arm with a rich looking guy. Sur was dumbfounded.
Raj:"Dekha...Use mujhse nahi mere paise se pyar hai...so mujhe bhi maze lene me maza ata hai"
Sur:"Thats really bad ...Mujhe lagta tha sirf ladke hi ladkiyo ko dhokha dete hai...par yaha to...agar tumhe ye sab pata hai to use chod kyu nahi dete?"
Raj:"Mujhe usse koi shikayat nahi hai....Mene kabhi ye expect hi nahi kiya ke wo mujhse pyar kare...Uske bas ka nahi hai kisi se pyar karna...aur shayad mera bhi nahi.."
Sur:"Aisa kyu keh rahe ho?"
Raj:Sur tumhe pata hai...kisi ko pyar karne ke liye ek saaf dil ki zarurat hoti hai...mai kabhi sacha insaan tha hi nahi...aur jaisi ladki mujhe chahiye...wo to kabhi mujh jaise ladke ki taraf dekhegi bhi nahi.
Sur:Ye tumhari galat faimi hai....Tum ek ache insaan ho..
Raj:Mazak mat karo Sur...abhi jo mene kiya..ache insaan aisa nahi karte
Sur:Tumne mujhse jhooth nahi bola
Raj:To isme konsi badi baat hai?
Sur:Hai Raj...Tum nahi samjhoge...Jaane do...
Sur turned away as though avoiding the topic.
Raj:Tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai?
Sur looked up and Raj saw an unexpected pain in her eyes. He was shocked but before any of them could say anything, Nandini and Vishal came there, carrying shopping bags.
Vishal:Raj mai kabse dhundh raha hu tujhe...Sur isne tumhe pareshan to nahi kiya na?
Sur:Ofcourse not jiju..humari shopping bhi ho gai.
Nandini:Kyu hamesha uske piche pade rehte ho? Acha bhala ladka hai
Raj:Ha dekho na bhabhi bhaiya hamesha mujhe tang karte rehte hai
Vishal:oho....Harishchandra ki akhri aulad...bhala ladka..Nandu tum ise janti nahi ho....par tumhari galti kaha hai, iski shakal jo aisi bhole bhale jaisi hai...dont worry ek baar tum shadi hokar a jao, do din me iski asliyat samne a jayegi
Raj:Aur aapki bhi
Vishal:Muh band kar
Nandini:Vishal stop fighting...chalo..Sur ko der ho rahi hai
Raj:Ya, lets go..
They all go out of the mall and towards their car.
Raj:Sur wese kaha ja rahi ho meeting ke liye?
Sur:Taj
Vishal:To hum lunch karne wahi chalte hai..Sur ko drop kar lenge aur lunch bhi sath me ho jayega.
Nandini:Bahut dur padega yaha se...par its ok...hum wahi chalte hai
Sur:Koi zarurat nahi hai. Mai gadi leke akele chali jaungi aap sab yaha paas me kahi lunch kar lo...
Raj:Tum akele mat jao, me ata hu tumhare sath
Sur:Its ok iski zarurat nahi hai
Raj:Zarurat hai kyuki mujhe kisi kaam se jana hai aur wo jagah raste me padegi...Can you drop me?
Sur:Thik Hai
Vishal:To done...Raj aur Sur Taj chale jayenge and hum dono lunch karke ghar
Nandini:Thats fine
So Raj and Aur together left in Sur's car while Vishal and Nandini went for lunch
Sur:So kaha drop karu tumhe?
Raj:Ghar pe
Sur:Par tumhe to kaam tha na?
Raj:Tumhe meri shakl dekh ke lagta hai ke mai kaam karunga wo bhi jab mere bhai ki shadi hone wali hai?
Sur:So you lied..why?
Raj:Kyuki bhaiya bhabhi ke sath akele rehna chate the...aur me vaha ruk kar bore ho jata..kabab me haddi banne se acha to yahi hai na ke mai tumhare sath chala jau...Ghar se apne dosto ko call kar lunga, wo a jayenge mujhe pick karne
Sur:Tum Jiju se bahut pyar karte ho na
Raj:Tumhe kaise pata
Sure:Tumhari baato me unke liye kafi concern hota hai
Raj just stared at her surprised..Nobody had ever termed him as sensitive, or caring. For all the people who knew him he was a spoilt brat who cared about nobody
Sur:Kya hua kaha kho gaye?
Raj: Wo...ummm...Nothing...You drive well
Sur:What? Oh thanks
Raj kicks himself mentally and said
"To tum London se kab wapis ayi? I mean mene tumhe pehle shadi ki kisi rasam me nahi dekha
Sur:Sagai se 2 din pehle...Bahut kaam tha
Raj:Workaholic..bahut pyar hai apne kaam se?
Sur:haan bahut...mujhe apni mehnat se zada kisi par bharosa nahi hai
Raj:Ab samajh me aya tumhari company itni successful kyu hai....Jab boss itni dedicated ho to baki
employees ka kya kehna
Sur:Company meri nahi Papa ki hai...Mai bas waha kaam karti hu
Raj:Ok as you wish
Sur:Lo ghar a gaya
Raj:Baato baato me pata hi nahi chala na
Sur:Ya....
Raj:Chalo andar chalo mere sath
Sur:No Raj please.. I m getting late..kabhi aur
Raj:Please Sur..
Sur:Raj mai aaungi promise but my meeting...Try to understand
Raj:Thik hai jaisa tum thik samjho
Raj got down from the car.
Sur leans out of the window and said
"Tum mujhse naraz mat hona please Raj par mai..."
Raj:Of course not mai bilkul naraz nahi hu...I understand professionalism very well. Par tum mujhse milne mere ghar zarur aogi. Promise?"He held out his hand. Sur smiled and took it
"Promise"
Raj turned to go but suddenly stopped. Sur who was about to back the car said
"Kya hua forgot something?"
Raj walked upto her and said
"Happy friendship Day Sur"
Sur looked at him surprised. Raj smiled and said
"Kal Friendship Day hai... I guess you dont know...Par mujhe abhi yaad aya..to socha tumhe wish kar du...Tum meri sabse nayi dost jo ho..."
Sur:Dost?
Raj:Haan...ab aise kya dekh rahi ho? Mai tumhe propose nahi kar raha...na hi tumpar line maar raha hu...Bas tumse puch raha hu ke kya meri dost banogi?
Sur was amazed because pehle kabhi kisi ne usse aisa sawal nahi kiya tha
Sur:Zarur...Thanku and same to you Raj
Raj:Thanks....Vese me tumhe bata du ke tum pehli ladki ho jise mene apna dost banaya hai....
Sur laughed and said
"I m honoured"
Raj:The pleasure is completely mine..Khair tum jao you must be getting really late now.."
Sur:Haan mujhe chalne chahiye..Bye, take care
Raj:Tum bhi...sambhal ke jana
Sur drove off feeling really happy now. She reached Taj and gave a mind blowing presentation that floored everybody and she got the contract. She reached home and saw Nandini was waiting for her.
Nandini:Kya baat hai badi khush ho,contract mil gaya kya?"
Sur:"Yes...3 saal ka contract mila hai"
Nandini:"Thats great aisa ho hi nahi sakta ke tum presentation do aur contract na mile"
Sur:Aisa kuch nahi hai....How was your lunch?
Nandini:Acha tha...Vishal acha hai
Sur:Haan Nandini sabko pata hai k jiju ache hai...
Nandini:Shut up....Raj ke sath tu thik thi?
Sur:Ofcourse thik thi mujhe kya hoga?
Nandini:Kuch nahi.
Sur:Chalo mai upar ja ke aram karti hu, I am tired
Nandini:Thik hai jao
Sur left for her bedroom looking very cheerful. Nandini watched her go with a feeling of contentment and thought
"Aj kitne arse baad Sur ko is tarah muskurate hue dekha hai...Lagta hai ab wo sach me apne bite hue kal se bahar a rahi hai...Bhagwan kare k ab use bhi koi aisa humsafar mile jo uski hasi ko kabhi kam na hone de....uske haq ka pyaar use de..."
End

Hey guys I know iss baar kafi late ho gaya but I also hav 2 study na...neways...ye batana how was dis part,leave ur comments..pleezzee

Lotsa luv

Sur😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Wow....lovely part. Raj, Vishal, Sur n Nandini in the same shopping mall. Accha hua Vishal n nandini ko space dete dete Raj aur Sur ne bhi akele tym spend kiya n they knew each other better. The way Raj told her abt Sonia...it was gud. At least she came to knw not always its the guy's fault. I luved this convo btwn them. But Sur ka ek past hai jiske bare me janne k liye main ab betaab hu.,,,hehe. Ye Vishal kyun wrong tym pe aya??

Khair I luved Raj's dialogue that said Nandini will also knw Vishal's true colours...hehe. He is an awesum bro.....(but I absolutely dont want him as a bro...hehe).....he went wid Sur so that Vishal n Nandini can spend sum tym 2gether....awe....so cute!!! N the way he extended the hand for frndship saying he's not proposing or flirting...it was lovely. Am glad that Sur can c the sensitive n caring side of him. N I really like Raj's character...he's funny, sensitive, hardworking, playboy, serious...everything (mostly he's Rajeev...hehe).

Pls continue soon.

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