Finally got to read it and able to reply now.
Why i have find the part small ? Anyways how are you now ?
The part is awesome, it's really very nice and interesting with A3 - Armaan, Abhi, Avani scene and also flirting Armaan with Pooja and Preet and Niki which i don't like, i mean i liked the scene and the way you have written it but you know i don't liked the crossed connection between them. And also interesting with Muskaan's interesting, she's awesome with her antics actions. lol
Why Riddhima said ROMANCE ? I mean what was going can be called romance but Riddhima calling it out and but no reaction over it.
Great fight between them, so cute. I liked ! If Muskaan also with them then the poor guy was killed by them.
A3 scene was really nice. lol Avani 'Bhaiys' funny logic.
I liked Abhi's reaction in the end and how Niki said 'main', i liked it. Really nice and also liked the Abhi's dialogue. Am waiting Niki to save him from them. 😉
Ok now tell Armaan no more flirting with others as Riddhima is coming in his life so not any more with others.
Poor Riddhima still finding way of saving herself from going to Sanjeevani, arre yaar someone tell her to go freely coz she going to meet Armaan there.
Bi entering was nice and her character is also very nice.
Seriously can you believe no such questions. lol ! Be happy it's your lucky, no no not lucky, lucky reply from my side. lol 😉 And i think i won't able to ask questions in few coming updates, why ? Becoz i know little bit important things of them so no question left. lol 😉
Overall the part was great and very well written. I like it. And also enjoyable in reading.
Waiting for next part ! Be soon
:)Edited by star_fan - 15 years ago