#2 Dill Ki Chahat... NOT UPDATING SOON - Page 20

Finally I am here...lol 😃 Just within 6 days...not like you...

Awesomeeee part...Very well enjoyable and interesting...Fantastic !

Muskaan is great fun, so cute. Preet reaction was so funny. The overall scene and everyone reaction was hilarious and enjoyable. It was fun in reading. Very nicely written.
Oooh Muskaan is looking her Raj, huh sure she will meet her dream boy but not R se Raj, It will be R se Rahoooool. I like the way she said those dreamy lines. Jhansi ki Rani. 😆

And not mention becoz i have said before, I love the way you start changing the scenes from here to there with continue of dialogue.

Boys rocks as usual. I don't think i need to mention that I definitely like the boys scene. It was fantastic and so much enjoyable and also very interesting. The way Atul was telling them about Sanjeevani, and like the way Armaan ask him to stop and leave little bit for Principal to say, and also Rahul's reactions. It was all so funny and fun in reading.

LOL like the way Avani enter and dragged Armaan. And nice description about their bonds.

Yippe without not such much problem Armaan is going to Sanjeevani. But how and why Rahul and Atul will also go to Sanjeevani ?

Now I am waiting for Armaan and Riddhiam encounter with each other, like the way you plan. Wanna know what you had planned like before Sanjeevani or in Sanjeevani. Can't wait to read it.

I like the scene between Avani and Abhi and Armaan saying 'Mujhe iss jungle se bachao…!' So funny.
And also like the way Daadi asked from Abhi age and start the talk regarding marriage and how she told about herself, it was so funny. 😆 And Armaan saying 'Small Town Girl'.
I hate his father for scolding Armaan for such not-a-big-issue.

🤣 Ms. Jhansi ji Rani still remember that guy, even after months, hmm Interesting. I likeeeeeeeeeeeee it. The way she was giving gaali's to him and beating him in dream, uff who knows what will happen in reality. 😉 Connection !

Aww sweet, emotional scene between Riddhima and Shilpa.
Btw Lali do you know ' What's the RAAZ behind Shilpa's story ?' 😆😉

Overall I like the part. It was really so enjoyable, funny at parts. A W E S O M E !


Precap is so exciting Abhi talking about Nikita Malhotra. Ahh Niki wait for your perfect man, he is coming.

Will be waiting to read next part soon, as i commented soon. 😃

really nice part.. :D.. but u took a long time to continue.. i understand u must have a very tight schedule.. :D..and sometimes u just dont feel like it.. lolz but its ok.. :D.. and awesome part....

Loved the part Lali Di. It was awesome👏
Just can't wait till the girls meet the boys.
And Muskaan abhi se rahul ke sapne dhekne lagi hain😉
Thanx for the PM

Awesome part!!!

Lali
The part was beautifully done. ⭐️ Bravo...

The part where dadi is talking about abhi's marriage (well 20 seems to early but still :P ) was very cute.. the interactions of brothers-dadi and avni was very very good. And then the suspense after KDs comments about his sister.. - you have set a big foundation today for why abhi wont be able to take Niki :( but i am sure that would mean more drama and more tensed - intense moments .. :)

Precap - wooooohoooo.... you have to write it very quickly... you cant keep me miserable for long time...

hey super cool part.............interstin precap............tc..............thnx for d pm.......

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Ok WoW!! Awesome Part Lali!!

It was really very cute!

and Muskaan is still dreaming of Rahul.. aye hayye.. kya pyaar hai! 😉

and I LOVED the way.. as soon as Muskaan said "par kisko"

Rahul said "mujhe"

it was really sweet and cute!! 😃