Golmaal(AK, AR, SD, PH, KA) Part-11 PG 24 03/05 - Page 10

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nice update

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fab part...
just loved it..
good to have u back...
poor kripa & kavya.... have a heart break... which is not even real....
continue soon

their heart break will lead to a lot of problem in the episodes to come
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Originally posted by: love_KYPH

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it was awesum
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Originally posted by: Henriette

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Part 7 a

Kripa stood there shell shocked angad words were still ringing in her ears, her tears refused to stop "does this mean angad loves that girl" kripa thought

Anjali prepared for her audition with milind as the partner, as milind wished to dance with her because he considered her his best dancing partner. Pammi had performed already and had received appreciation for her performance, she went and sat next to kavya, whose mind was also preoccupied with anjali and angad he was unable to comprehend what exactly was going onn if she was angad love then why was aarman soo possessive about her, kavya had never seen angad being possessive about Ridhima, but he could clearly sense there was a big story behind this girl than it seemed to be.

Kripa had already left NACH in a bad mood, she had drawn conclusion that it was worthless waiting for angad and her love for him was just one sided, her mind was full of the scenes where in she had seen angad saying I love to anjali, when anjali had addressed angad as babloo in the party and when she had seen angad and aarman following anjali last night. Heer followed kripa and gave her the support which she needed during this tough time.

Ridhima still sat with disha and devyani she could feel the tension among the kapoors, she knew something was majorily wrong because she had never seen aarman is such a bad mood.

"kavya do you have any idea who is milind performing with" pammi asked as she wrapped her arms around kavya

"no idea'" kavya said

"who ever it is she can never dance the way milind does' he is too good" pammi said

"and I guess he is next and why do you worry whoever it is she can never be as good as you right" kavya said

"Thanks Kavya" pammi smiled

The comparer announced " Ladies and gentlemen.. now put your hands together for the most talented dancer of Nach Milind Mishra who is going to perform salsa on skates with his dancing partner Anjali Kapoor"

Anjali entered the stage with milind both on skates, disha and devyani looked at anjali with shock, abhay looked at her coolly and dk gave a shocked looked to abhay, angad and aarman stared at each other, Kavya was in trance again this girl had an ever lasting effect on him she could make him loose his control in a second, he turned to look at pammi holding his hands and resting her head on his shoulders just to assure that she had not sensed his uneasyness.

Slowly the music began to play

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

woh bhi ek daur tha

waqt hi aur tha

jab woh the ajnabi

dono tanaha se the

par woh kehte kise

baat jo dil mein thi

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

Milind danced closely with anjali each and every move measured the romance and the sensuality of a salsa dance was evident in their dance, milind held anjali's waist and twirled her around, kavya tightened his fists unknowingly. Abhay was completely blown by the ease of dancing he knew milind was a good dancer but anjali had put life into dancing

gumsum gumsum rehte the dono

phir bhi dil mein kehte the dono

koyi sapana hum bhi to paayein

ek din tute ghum ke woh ghere

jhilmil jhilmil aaye savere

mausam badala jaagi fizaayein

woh mil gaye, woh khil gaye

aur pyaar ho hi gaya

jo maanga tha, woh paaya to

hosh kho hi gaya

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

The judges were equally impressed with anjali and milind there wasn't any doubt that this was one of the best performance of the day. Angad and aarman were also equally impressed by anjali's dancing they were infact proud of anjali and so were disha and devyani.

haule haule abb woh deewaane

gun gun gaaye dil ke taraane

sun sun jhumein saari hawaanyein

dhadkan dhadkan hai behaki behaki

mann mann, mann mann, chaahat hai mehaki

sapane apane jaadu jagaayein

phir dekhoge, toh jaanoge

kya hai nasha pyaar ka

yahi sochoge, yahi chaahoge

sun rahi ye sada

pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

hoti kya hai jawaani suno

ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi

woh bhi ek daur tha

waqt hi aur tha

jab woh the ajnabi

dono tanaha se the

par woh kehte kise

baat jo dil mein thi

Anjali and milind bowed together as soon as their dance finished, and much to their surprise they received a standing ovation from everyone for their performance, abhay and dk were in tears as they stood up for anjali's appreciation, pammi gulped hard she had never seen anyone dance so perfectly with milind, Kavya finched as he saw anjali with milind.

A few seconds later anjali gripped milinds hand tightly and held him for support within in a few seconds anjali fell on the stage with a thud "ann" milind screamed as he saw her falling, angad, aarman, DK and abhay immediately rushed to the stage when they saw anjali falling

"get up girl" milind tapped anjali's face when he saw her eyes closed

"milind move" angad instructed, milind quickly moved giving aarman space to sit "aarman just check what's wrong with her"

aarman checked her pulse "what happened aarman" disha asked as she rushed to the stage

"mom low blood pressure'.her pulse is weak too" aarman said quickly, aarman and angad stared at anjali's pale face

"come on boys don't keep staring pick her up and take her home'..aarman you get her bags from inside" disha said firmly "bhaiya" she turned towards abhay hum ghar chaltein hai she needs to be under observation please finish your work here and come home fast"

Angad picked up anjali in his arms and walked out of the auditorium with devyani, aarman and disha right behind him, abhay gave some instructions to his team and rushed with DK towards home. Seeing the havoc pammi commented "seems like she is someone very close to them I haven't seen angad so worried for some stranger"

"whatever but I dint like his closeness with her" kavya said as he remembered angad's love confession, "what was her name anyway"

"I don't know.. kavya are you done with my dress for the party tonight at Nach" pammi said authoritatively

"hmm.. come I will show you" kavya said slowly

Kapoor Mansion:

Everyone stood at the corner of the bed as disha examined anjali closely "kya hua disha" abhay asked as he entered the room

"kuch nahi just weakness and by what I see she has not eaten anything for the past 2 days" disha said

"matlab' she has been hungry for the past 2 days" DK asked

"yes'. No need to worry'. I have given her an enjection she will be back to conscious in a few minutes'. Till then I will arrange something for her to eat" disha said calmnly.

Disha left the room to arrange food for anjali'. Meanwhile anjali regained conciousness she looked around to see the whole Kapoor clan standing around her "where am I" anjali asked slowly

"home" devyani replied

"how did I get here" anjali asked as she slowly sat on the bed

"you fainted on the stage" devyani said

"oh'.." anjali nodded "I usually don't faint'..so no need to worry"

"yes' why should we worry right'. Afterall you fainted just because you have eaten anything since the past two days' and may I ask you why" devyani asked angrily

"well I am on a diet" anjali replied in a low voice

Just then disha walked in with a tray in her hands "good that you are awake now' how are feeling??" she asked in a polite voice

"better'. I want my bag'." Anjali sat properly "I will take your leave" she added

"no way' I am not letting you go now'..you are still weak" disha said sternly

"but I have a party to attend tonight and my dress is at my hotel" anjali said

"don't worry your hotel bags are here too'. You wont be staying in a hotel now onwards'. For all we know you might again starve yourself" devyani said

"no actually I dint want to eat out of nervousness' I was nervous for my audition and that's all" ajali argued

"just like your mom'. Are you also a nervous wreck" disha asked as she placed the tray in front of anjali

"yup but my mom is strong" anjali said confidently

"you don't know when di was your age she used to get a good scolding from our mom for this'. She always used to skip food" disha smiled

"did she' then why does she scold me for doing this" anjali replied "and what is all this who is going to eat this" anjali looked at disha when she saw quite a few plates full of sandwiches, fruits, rice and dal and chapatti and one big glass of milk

"actually do I really need to tell you'." Disha raised her eyebrow

"I understand' I have not eaten anything since two days but'. I cant eat this'.." anjali looked at disha

"ok'. None of us here has had our lunch' so why don't you have lunch with us but till then you drink this glass of milk" disha handed anjali the glass of milk and picked up the tray again

"do I really have to drink this milk" anjali asked with a constipated look on her face

"yes dear I don't think you have a choice" disha said in a matter of fact tone

Anjali frowned and started at the glass of milk, when her cell began to ring anjali picked up her phone and said "mom' how are you doing" she spoke as she looked at others who were also looking at her eagerly.

"yes I remember sag told me'''." Anjali said again and looked at abhay and angad who looked at anjali with eagerness it took a few seconds for anjali to realize that maybe angad also missed his mother like she missed her dad she quickly put her phone on speaker so that angad and abhay could atleast hear kusum speak

"so just tell me what should I wear'." Kusum said over the phone, angad looked at anjali as soon as he heard kusum's voice and thanked her through his eyes

"hmm let me see how about a business suit..you always look great in it" anjali said "and more over its an award function so its kind of perfect"

"you think that would be ok" kusum reconfirmed

"hmm absolutely more over wear that grey one which I got last week" anjali said as she thought

"pumpkin I need to wear something else I am bored wearing business suits" kusum said

"then let me think mom'. How about a''" anjali said

"a saree" abhay said loudly

"saree??" anjali looked at abhay

"saree' are you sure anjali" kusum asked

Anjali looked at abhay with confusion in her eyes "she looks great in them" abhay said slowly

"yes mom'now enjoy your date ok bye" anjali said and cut her phone and gave a horrified look to abhay

"she looks great in it" abhay smiled

"you know what to tell you the truth I want to see my mom setelled and for that I had fixed this date for my mom with david'. He is a divorcee and stays nearby''.and you made my day" anjali smiled

"what did you just say??" angad asked anjali

"I said thaks to my biological father that I will now have a dad' and you too will have a dad and a brother" anjali smiled

"you did not" angad said rudely

"I did" anjali smiled

"you dint" angad said irritatedely and came and sat near anjali

"and you know our new brother has a really hadsome boyfriend" anjali added

"oh fish and you are okay with this'. How can you anjali you she is my mom too and still you are happy for getting a new family a divorced dad and gay brother" angad said in a irritated tone

ok so this is just one part of it the rest would be up soon but as I see the kapoor family is getting closer and the others have started having their doubts about anjali.

on one side where kripa is highly upset about anga and anjali ridhima is just simply confused kavya is unaware of his feelings in the coming parts sujal and kashish will make their appearence and make all couples understand about relationships and true love till then keep reading the fic

love

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Edited by apra - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
well ur ff is so awesome, had a good laugh. Please continue.

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