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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

Hi Guglu,
finally mein comment kar rahi hun

tum bhi sochogi ki aaj suraj kahan se nikla hai jo yeh comment kar rahi hai, par tum to meri puri history janti ho to samajh bhi jaogi.............I know, tum meri SH ho na phir........

Part 9:-
Yeh huda bhi na uski vajah se wo nakli waiter nikal gaya, gadha kahiin ka, pata nahin hamesha kaam kharab karne kyun pohanch jata hai wo. naina ko asli waiter mil gaya, par wo behos tha. raj ne sabko bahar jane ko kaha par wo huda hai ki uske questions khatam hi nahin hote. Idiot, Ullu, Pagal, bas aur nahin bol sakti...........

raj ne naina ko dhnte, naina ko uski chinta hai tabhi to usse bol rahi thi, par raj ko apne gusse pe control karna hi nahin aata, kitna dhanta usse. par raj bhi pareshan tha to usne dhant diya because he also cares for naina, isliye usse maaf kiya.

OMG....bomb, acha hua naina vahiin par thi usne raj ko khinch liya aur wo roll hote hue kitne ache lg rahe honge na.......errrrr.mein pagal hun, situation ek according jana chahiye tha......aa gayi dubara, raj naina ko bhi chot lagi na.....thats very bad yaar......naina aur raj khud zakmi hain aur ek dosare ke bare mesoch rahe hain, mene bola na they both r very sweet

BC aa gaye baad me, yeh kabhi time par nahin aa sakte aur wo nair to hai hi kamina, dil karta hai usse mar dun mein....par wo kaam raj akr lega, mein tension nahin le rahi.............vese raj kisi k baat nahin manta, abhi bhi apni koi chinta nahin, acha hua usse sula diya gaya.................ab uth ke phirse kaam hi karega,

mein aati hun agli ud par.........................
Luv Preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Guglu..........................how dare u do that?

Tumne aisa socha bhi kaise, ki tumne mere comment ke bina update kar di to mein comment karna band kar dungi, tum to kehti ho na ki hum team hain, to phir aisa ho sakta hai ki mein tumhari problem na samjhun........U really hurt me yaar, by saying this. Aur tum mano na mano par mein ab tumhe bore karne ke liye use to ho chuki hun isliye tumhe bore karna chood nahin sakti aur na hi comment karna, tumne to mujhe dracula hi samajh liya jo ki tumhara khoon choos jayega, par me dracula nahin hun, mein tumhe samajhti hun, par tumne aisa keh kar acha nahin kiya.....

Ab mein tumse baat nahin kar rahi, sedha update me aati hun........
mene last part mein hi bola tha na ki yeh subah subah pohanch jayega, dekho aisa hi hua, araam karna to isse aata hi nahin hai.......uff kya hoga is ladke ka

Suri ji to bahut khush ho gaye unhe lolita ji ke saath time spend karne ke time jo mil gaya.Raj kabhi bhi hope nahin chodhata thats y he is the best. aur dekho usse clue mil bhi gaya. he is too gud na. aur naina se wo bahut naraz hai yeh uske bolne ke tarike se hi pata chal gaya, naina ab tumhe raj ka gussa jhelna hi padega.

Raj bhi na pehle pocha nahin phir jab naina chali gayi to usse yaad aayi ki mujhe uska haal pochna chahiye tha, yeh jab kaam akr raha hota hai to kya apne dimaag pe lock laga keta hai jo aise galtiyaan karta hai hamesha

Suriji aur raj ka scene bahut acha tha, raj naina par gussa ho raha tha aur suriji usko batate hi ja rahe the, Loved it. aur raj ne to order hi de diya vese raj kaise bhool gaya ki naina ka kaam uske room ke chakar lagana hi hai aur kuch nahin, chahe jo mrjhi ho jaye.

raj ko hosh aa ho gaya ki usse chot lagi hai aur jab usse itni pain ho rahi hai to naina ko kitni ho rahi hogi, jaldi hi yaad aa gaya na...........vese thank GOD, aaj hi dhyaan me aa gaya

Naina is so hurt with his cold behaviour. but the trust she has shown in him is so touching and finaaly raj is back on his track. Par fir se naina ko dhant diya, jab wo jane lagi to fir usse rok liya, naina gets so emotional there. No one has taken care of her like this from a long time.The whole scene was so emotional. aur ab to raj ne naina se promisekar hi diya ki wo uska saath zindagi bhar dega aur uski zindagi ka hissa ban ke rahega, loved it yaar.

raj kitna udaas hai is baat se ki aaj wo naina ki life ke itne imp din me uske saath nahin ho sakta, it brought tears to my eyes.

Raj aur abhi ka scene both hi touching tha par ab rona se kya hoga, abhi ki vajah se raj ko itna dard sehna hi padha hai, to ab chahe wo roye yan kuch kare usse wo time vaapis to nahin aayega na, I just hate him.

Naina is missing raj so much, tumne sab kuch bahut ache se explain kiya hai, just loved ur way yaar, naina ki halat dekh ke to koi bhi rona lag jaye. Aalekh ne ache se sambhal liya naina ko, usne sahi kaha wo naina ki khamoshi ko samajhta hai, aur yehi vajah hai jo wo har baar uska saath deta ahi.

Naina is remembering her times with raj, with every moment. Oh, is tarah naina ko raj ke uske phone friend hone ke bare me pata chala tah, gud. The whole scen was awesome yaar, I just loved it, u ahve expressed their comfort level and anger so nicely.

Yippe.............Raj vaapis aa gya........m so so so happy with this, aur kya entry mari hai isne, vese sahi time pe entry marna to shoro se hi raj ki aadat rahe hai.

Now, continue soon.
Baki mein bas update pe comment kar rahi hun because I love ur ff aur me tumse gussa isliye hun kyunki tumne socha ki mein comment karna chood dungi, aur ek baat sun lo, yeh is janam me possible hi nahin hai me tumhari jaan nahin chodhne wali, jo marjhi kar lo.
Ab TDQ bhi UD kar do.