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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#281

hey dear that was awesome
loved it completely
i so wished something like that happened in LRL too
plz continue soon

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#282

thank you for this update.

naina aur raj sach ek dusre ke saathi hain chaha khushi ho ya gham.

i am glad ke raj is only veer.

why was raj in jail????????

naina is best cadet ,i am very very happy.

thank u once again .beautiful uodate

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#283

Brilliant part. 👏👏👏

Raj is still angry at naina for not leaving the party hall when he had asked her to. But when he sees that Suriji and Lolita has been guarding the blast site all night. He sends them to get some rest. Raj is always worried about others and not himself. 😊

He sends naina away when she comes to call him for breakfast. But then at the very next moment feels bad for being so cold towards her and not even asking how she was feeling.😔

His anger rises even more when Suriji tells him that naina had been preparing breakfast instead of taking rest. He controls his anger which fades away on seeing naina taking care of him.😉

He makes her eat breakfast with him ..because how could have eaten while she had not. And then applies medicine on her wounds. And is surprised to see how much naina trusts him.😊

Naina finds out that Raj is her friend Veer and now it is her turn to get angry at Raj for not telling her the truth. Raj comes to her rescue when naina is participating in Nair's drill by taking special permission from Brigadier Sareen.

Naina finally forgives him on the condition that he would always be there with her.

Coming to the present....😊

Why is Raj in jail or some other place where he is hiding? Abhimanyu has realised his mistakes and apologizes to Raj. He knows that Raj is thinking about his cadets and specially naina as today is their graduation day. Brigadier Sareen seems to be on Raj and Cadets side. 😭

I think it is Raj who has come to see Naina win the best cadet awards just as he had promised.

please continue soon...

Edited by dazzling_glory - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#284

pahle ek baat bata...???

kya main sweet hun...???😛

kya main cute hun...???😛

thik hai thik hai...mujhe tera jawab sunai de raha hai ki tu chilla kar "NAHI" bol rahi hai...🤢😆!!! phir bhi itna toh maanti hai na...ki main teri dost hun...😃!!! toh is dosti k naate late hone k liye maaf karr de...😃!!! baht pareshan rahti hun aaj kal...!!! sorry yaar...late hun...par dekh tere next ud se pahle comments karr rahi hun...!!!😃

first of all....😃

yeh Mana aur tujhe ho kya gaya hai...😕??? mujhe tum dono se yeh umeed toh bilkul bhi nahi thi...😕!!! matlab long UDS aur tum dono...??? hey bhagwan...mujhe sach me num badalwani padegi...😆

haan...haan ab jyada bhaav mat kha...yeh ud sach me long tha...😃!!! par ek prob tha...batayun...😉??? naaaaaa...jane de...😛!!! achha chal bata hi deti hun...!!! tu bhi kya yaad karegi ki kis sarphiri se pala pada tha....😃😆

ud na....................ek dam................😡

AWESOME....BLOSSOME tha yaar....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

mera fav scene thaaaaaaaaa....😃

ab tu toh guess kar hi chuki hogi...!!! yupe vohi...RN ka voh band kamre ka scene...😛 😛 😛

par tujhe nahi lagta voh scene tune kuch jaldi khatam karr diya...!!! matlab main koi hot romantic scene ki baat nahi karr rahi (yeh suit karta hi nahi)...par jab voh scene khatam hua na...toh mere dil me tere liye aur RN k liye ek gana baja...😛

"RN ek kamre me band ho...

aur sher aa jaye... (pata hai lyrics change hai...maine jaan bujh kar kiya hai😛)

sher se main kahun...RN ko chod kar guglu ko le jaye...."😆

yaar...tabhi RN thoda aur tym ek dushre k sath rah pate...😆

jokes apart...😃

seriously voh scene na itna achha tha ki mujhe laga ki tujhe na ek jhappi toh deni hi padegi...🤗!!! phir socha...summer season hai...discount dete hain...matlab ek jhappi k sath 4 muft muft muft🤗 🤗🤗🤗

ab suru se baat karte hain...!!! 😃

silver button...yeh kis ki hai...??? khair jis ki bhi voh RN se bach kar thode hi na ja payega...!!! raj ka bhi na dimag hamesha one track par chalta hai 'main ek sipahi hun'...hadh hai in mahaatma ki bhi...!!! naina se kaise berukhe se baat karr raha tha...!!!😕

par chalo koi gall nahi...der aaye durust aaye(meri tarah😆)...use bhi apne is bhvr par bura laga...!!!shalini ki entry achhi thi...!!! 😃hamesha jane anjane me RN ko ek sath karr hi leti hai...!!!😃

raj kya main khud bhi hairan thi...ki naina ne khana banaya...!!! 😕 matlab Raj k liye banaya...yeh sahi kiya...yeh us ka birth right hai...par pure academy k liye...??? aur voh bhi is halat me...!!! chalo koi gall nahi kudiye...raj hai na naina ka dhyaan rakhne k liye...😃

phir raj ka naina ko brkfast k liye puchna...😃??? aur us k baad ka pura scene...aweeeeeeeee🤗...kitne achhe se tune voh scene describe kiya hai yaar...love u for dat🤗...varna main tujhe pyar toh bilkul bhi nahi karti...😈

naina ka passing out parade hai...aur raj us sadhe hue jail me hai...😆!!! use pata hai ki naina hi best cadet bani hai...yaar...kahan fasa diya mere raj ko...😆

khair yeh Abhimanyu...yahan bhi...😆!!!sorry yaar...mujhe is se allergy hai...aur is allergy k liye Avil-50 bhi kaam nahi deta...😆!!! aur mana toh koi medicine bhi nahi deti...kyoun ki use bhi allergy hai...😆

naina bhi baht miss karr rahi thi Raj ko...!!! obvious hai...us k zindagi ki ek badi jagah Rajveer ne jo le rakhi thi...i mean hai...😃

toh Rajveer hi us ka fone frnd Veer...hai...😃!!! sach kahun toh maine yeh socha nahi tha...maine kuch aur socha tha...par kya voh nahi batayungi...😆!!! jane de...tu kahegi ki ek toh pagal hai...dushri apne pagalpan kahin bhi chodti rahti hai...😆

Raj...in passing out parade...??? yaar...naina k sath sath mujhe bhi jhatka mila...😛!!! aage kya hoga jaldi se likh...Deba...ahh Guglu...😆

tu apne UD ko long kah rahi hai...zara dhyaan se padh mere comments ko...full bakwaas hi sahi...lengthy hai...😃!!! aur dekh maine sab kuch detail me likha hai...matlab maine pura tan-mann aur dhan de kar padha hai...😛

ab tu jaldi se ud post kar...main late hi sahi...par tere next ud se pahle comment karungi...😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#285

Hi Priya...

Sab se pehle to tera signature line mujhe bahut pasand aaya...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆typical priya style...😆😆😆😆😆😆 aur reply mai baad me karungi... aur haan sun...mai adhiktar long updates hi deti hun...samjhi...

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sanchari mookherjee

@saanch_69

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#286

Heylo heylo

Firstly I have to clear up a query....someone told me that this was a double update?????? 😔 was this really one??? I don't think so....coz this wasn't long enough for a single update too Try it the very next time

Anyways now cuming to the update

It was brilliant....I just love the way you put things, that makes it so niiiiiiiiiiice to read

It goes without saying that I loved Raj n Naina's convo the most. Aalekh really understands Naina more than anyone....sometimes he does that even more than Rajveer.

Raj in Jail....not able to see the last parade was sad...but I liked the way he said..."Shuru Ho Jao" to abhi 😳

He's so sweeet na? Ofcourse I dun need to wait for the reply haha

Do update soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: guglu088
Hi Priya... hiii Guglu😛

Sab se pehle to tera signature line mujhe bahut pasand aaya...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆typical priya style...😆😆😆😆😆😆 mujhe pata hai main chache kitna bhi pagal panti karun...tum sab digest karr hi lete ho...😆

aur reply mai baad me karungi... aur haan sun...mai adhiktar long updates hi deti hun...samjhi... is baat par ek gana yaad aaya...!!! 'Jhuth bole kawa kaate...kaale kawe se dariyo...main short UDS k list bhej dungi...tum padhte hi rahiyo"😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Lee Min Ho

@gujunpyo

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#288

i gotto revise this one🤔..i forgot everything😳

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Bhej am waiting...and trust me...I had it ready to incorporate more in this part...par fir maine socha ki agar yahan end nahi kiya to tum log to gaaliyan dene se rahe...isliye na chahte hue bhi iss ko yahin end karna pada...😭