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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aishar

awww yar plz unhe sath liyao!

Awwweeeeeee.............yaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrr...............you'll have to wait for some time dear....lolzzzzzzzzzzz.......

Love Ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ria020594

Hey nidha di....

Am glad that you loved abhi angel talks......i love them toooo......lolzzz.....

Well.....i don't mind a bit about what you said....cause i know anyone who came to know about this ff would be confused....as rucha's ff also shared the same storyline.....but i never intended soo.....

And you know what.....i think you have forgotten that famous saying by one person.....No sorry's or Thank you's in friendship......hmmmm.....and that preson's me......lollzzz......

Nidha di....don't feel that i would be hurt.....in fact i am glad that on IF i have so many mindblowing friends....who care soooo muuuuuuucccchhhhhhh for me.....so don't feel sad okay.............

Will surely continue soon.....

Take care....

Love

Ria



that's really sweet of u i said all this coz sometime it hurt but glad to know u r comfortable. Regarding friends even i said to my friends so that no confussion if angry den also forgive same time😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Ria sweetheart..........

the part was awesome infact so sugary & sweet............

the part was full of sweetness & cuteness............. i just loved each & every word........... so much emotions...........

u know wat da part was fully justified......... each character had his/her own importance.......... & tht made it bst............ u know wat character havng his/her own importance is a commendable job done by u in one part ria & thts awesome

i loved nikki , ashi, ridz, armaan, rehan & even rahul & muski in it......... there little confrontation made da part so cute & adorable..........

lovely part............ i loved it..........

& ya cont asap & do pm me positively nxt time😉

love
sanna

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Posted: 16 years ago
i love this ff plz add me to your PM list!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys....

Part 10 will be up in few mins......

Love

Ria

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys.....thanks a lot fot the sweet sweet comments.....n i am really sorry for making you wait this long.....well here gos the part....
ENJOY !!!
PART 10
1 week later

Ridz "Hey nikki....tune Sexy se baat ki ???" she said while entering nikki's room....

"Ummm....last week kuch kaam tha iss liye call kiya tha...." nikki said patting the seat besides her on the bed telling ridz to seat down...

During this span of a week....ridz was now slowly slowly coming back to normal....nikki n everyone else had always tried to make ridz happy....n it seems that they are now becoming successfull day by day....ridz has once again started to smile with from her heart....but still there was something missing...n ashi....he angel of the house was not even leaving a single chance to make her massi smile....n she would always get happy on seeing ridz happy....she would talk to her Dada n say him that 'Dada now i am a big girl...i am god's angel na....so don't worry....riddhi massi will surely smile like me....' while abhi was really thankful to nikki that she has given birth to such a sweeet angel...he was really gladfull for everything he had....n never would like to lose anything....ridz was like a sister to him....n he was always there by her side....

Now ridz would go to drop ashi to her school....n also go n pick her up...as she wanted to be busy....so that she could pull of the thoughts which would surround her mind....she Really wanted to get rid of her past....she was totally tired....but she thought that there was no way out of this....she would never b able to forget her past....no one could....she would make ashi do her homework regularly....n even ashi was now a great fan of her....she was glad that atleast there is someone who Loves her Actually.....

"Then let's call him na ??" Ridz said picking up the phone....

"No yaar....wo busy hoga...." nikki said taking the phone from her hands...

"Let me remind you nikki....woh mere liye kabhi bhi busy nahi hota...okay..." ridz said with confidence n took the phone from nikki's hand n dialed the number....

"Hello who's this ???" the voice came from the other side....it was a mere whisper....

"Hey sexy...." ridz said with a big smil on her face....

"It's you Beautiful...." the voice now seemed to be more clear n exited too....

"Hmmm...." ridz said...

"Ummm....just a minute haan...." with this he took the phone in his hand n got up from his chair...

Yes nikki was right....he was busy in a meeting at this hour also....it was dinner time n he was still in th office....but as ridz told he is never busy to her....he will always take out some time for her.....

"Umm....guys...i think the tender is all in our hands...so for now it's enough...n now everyone back to work...you all know na....i want everything perfect....we should only get that tender....is that clear ???" he said addressing to the members sitting in the conference room looking at him asking for a response....

"Yes sir...." everyone replied....

"Umm...anne please...." he said to his PA telling her to take eveyone outside....

And now he was all alone in the room....n so he took his seat once again....

"Ab bol....aaj aapko hamari yaad kaise aa gayi ???" he said with a little naughty smile playing on his lips....

"Just shut up okay....sexy....ek toh specially call kar rahi hoon...aur ek tum ho...." ridz said pouting....

"Itne dino baad baat kar rahi hai....phir bhi nakhre waise ke wasie hi hai...."

"Sexy...." she raised the pitch of her voice....

"Okay...okay....sorry....fine ??" he said...

"Hmm...." she said with a slight smile....

"Anyways...what's up.....how r u ??" he asked....

"I am fine n you...." she also asked....

"Perfect.... waise tu abhi hai kahan...i mean...." he asked....

"Sexy....i am here in Canada....with nikki n abhi...." she said....

"What ?? You're in canada.....pls turn on the loudspeaker....." he also jumped up hearing the news....

Ridz did what he said n put the phone on the able so that nikki could hear...

"Okay....now speak up...." ridz said....

"Nikki ki bachi.....how dare you do this....huh.....you didn't tell me ridz is living with you...." he said with a fake anger....

"Come on Sujal.....usse aaye aabhi kuch hi din toh hue hai....." nikki said defending herself...

"Kuch hi din toh hue hai..(mimicking nikki...)....pagal hai kya...."

"Hey guys...cut the crap na....aur sexy tum mujhe keh rahe the ki main abhi waisi ki waisi hoon....tum kahan badle ho...." ridz said getting tired of the arguments....

"Fine..." he sighed....

"I think abhi toh tum newyork mein ho na ??" nikki asked getting serious...

"Yeah...."

"Ohho....no bussiness talks allowed...okay....waise sexy how's kashish bhabhi n my naughty ryan...." she asked with her eyes glistening.....

Just then ashi came running in the room n immediately jumped on nikki's lap....

"Welll.....your bhabhi is gr8....n your naughty boy is getting more n more naughty day by day....." he said taking the photo frame in his hand....it was his family photo.....

"Well....that's a good progress...." ridz said giggling....

"Haan haan....lekin tujhese toh thoda kum naughty hai.....okay..."

"Okay boss...." ridz said laughing out loud....

"Hi...sujal uncle...." ashi said.....

"Awweeee....my angel is also there.....hi baby....how r u ??" he said with a cute smile....

"I am fine....how is ryan ??" she asked curiously....

"Ryan is also fine....but very naughty.....just like his big sister...right...." he said.....

"Wrong....i am not naughty....am i daddy....." she asked looking up as she saw abhi enter the room with a briefcase in his hand....n he was loosening his tie....

"Aare....no ways....my angel is not naughty....she is very sweet....hmmm...." abhi said looking at ashi as she smiled....n nikki got up n went to abhi n loosened his tie....

"Hey dude....you r lucky huh....getting attention from 3 ladies....bhabhi...ridz....n my own Wife too....." abhi said putting up his sleeves settling down besides ridz.....while nikki gave a slight slap on abhi's back....

"Yeah...that's true.....afterall....i am superhot n sexy...right...." sujal replied....

"Sexy..." ridz said angily....

"And you r also lucky....at least this 3 beauties are sitting with you....." sujal said with naughtiness....

"Oh guys....leave it....we're going now....come nikki ashi....let them do their guys talk...." ridz said getting up n taking a hold of nikki n ashi's hand....while abhi giggled at them.....

"Thank you madam....for giving us some privacy...." sujal said....

"Urrgghhhh....disgusting....." she said at last walking towards the door....

"Thanks once again....." he screamed so that ridz could hear.....

"Your welcome...." she also screamed back shutting the door behind her.....

Sujal Mehra....a well known bussiness person....he was....ooopppss sorry....he is ridz's best friend....he is more then a brother to her....while they were in India n sujal was studying his bussiness in London....he would always call her at least 5 times a day n get all the latest updates....while nikki was stuck in between this duo...whenever sujal was coming to india...he would call up nikki...n tell her not to tell riddhima about his arrival...as he wanted to give a surprise to her.....but nikki would becom nervous when it came to hide something.....but ridz would immediately point it out n utimatey she would come to know about the whole plan....while he had some problem then he would call up ridz n thy would solve it out....once he told ridz that he was in LOVE....ridz really got very exited....she told him to propose her....otherwise it would be late....n so he proposed the girl he loved....it was none other than Kashish....n to his astonishment....the answer he got was a YES !!! He was on cloud nine that day....so he asked ridz that he would her anything she wanted....but ridz told him that sh would surely ask for anything when the actual time comes up....but the time has not yet came.....


**FLASHBACK**


Riddhima felt comfortable with armaan during their coffee talks....n armaan came to know about riddhima's project on his company....he was really happy as he was meeting on of his fans....'my fan....come on dude....she is not your fan....she is company's fan...okay...' he thought while discussing about the project that ridz had prepared....n he even came to know that ridz was a complete encyclopedia when it came to HIM....she was knowing everything about the progress of his company....even she knew a lot about him.....even she knew that his favorite colour was White !!!....

Two days has passed by n ridz was really tensed about her presentation....she was wearing a short jeans skirt n a baby pink coloured top.....it was gifted by nikki....n nikki wanted her to wear it.....but ridz was totally feeling shy....as she never wore this type of dresses.....she was glad she wore a short jacket n her cream coloured leggings....the boys were eyeing on her....n she was cursing nikki under her brath evey minute.....she was nervous all her way to her class...but she got a smile on the thought of Armaan...she remembered how he told her that he would love to help her in the project if she needed....but she denied the proposal....she wanted to prepare it by herself n not taking help of the same person on whom she waspreparing the project !!!

Now it was her turn to present her work in front of the class...she got up from her seat...took the charts n every neccessary things n stood near the teacher.....at first she was nervous...but the after some moments she was enjoying the thing.....at last the prsentation got over.....n she took a deep breath....was waiting for the response from the class....but suddenly she heard some clapping sound....she turned to the voice....just to be shocked n astonished at the sight in front of her....her eyes widened.....it was HIM !!!.....just then everyone else started clapping.....every girl was looking at him....no one has ever imagined that this Guy would come...that tooo personally at their College......

"Welcome Mr.Mallik...." the teacher said going to him.....

"Thank you maam...." He said with a smile....

"Come i'll take you to the principle's office...." teacher said....

"Umm.....actually i first want to talk with one of your students...." He said looking at ridz shocked face n giving out his million dollar smile.....

And then the students leaved the class...but the girls were still starring at him....while ridz was still confused....she would have never imagined to see him once again.....

"Hi...." he said walking to her n passing his hand through his hair....

"Umm....hi....par tum yaha kaise ??" she asked with a confused look....

"Can we talk in the cantene if you don't mind...." he asked....

"Umm...no come...." she said with an embarrased look n then lead towards the cantene....but still the girls were hovering around.....

"Hey....you did the project greatly....i am impressed.....gr8 job....keep it up...." he said taking out a chair for her to seat.....

"Thank you...." she said smiling at him....

"And yeah...i am here for making a donation....i have heard this college collects funds for an orphanage....that's why...." he said settling down opposite her....

"Oh okay...." she said looking down....n then they talked about a while n ridz told him that it was her parents dram that sh studied in this college.....but still did not reveal that she didn't have her parents Now....

"But now that i am here...can i ask you something ???" he asked a bit shyly....

"Umm....sure..." she replied...

"Actually....i am new here na....so if you don't mind can you show me Mumbai.....if you don't have any problem...." he asked out....

"Umm...." she was confused.....her heart wanted to say yes....but her mind was telling her no....'he is new here....but he comes from that Fame world riddhima....how can you be sure that h won't take any advantage....' her mind quarelled.....

But armaan took the answer as yes....he got up....

"Okay then i must take your leave now...." he said looking around....n saw that everyone was starring at him....

She also got up...."Okay..." she said with a confusion....

Then h cam close to her.....n slowly kissed her cheek.....she felt hr senses going numb....goosebumps went down her body....she had never felt this feeling....she had Never let any guy come this close to her !!!....but waht was this ???...suddenly she felt his warm breath near her ears.....

"Umm.....be ready at 5:30 in the evening.....i will come to pick you up....okay...." he whispered.....

Sh was unable to utter even a single word now......she stood dumbfolded.....

And before sh could even speak up anything....he moved away n started walking.....but again turned....n winked at her cutely n gave away a flying kiss.....n smiled cheekily.....n then again started walking towards the principal's office.....

Riddhima was still in a shocked state....but a small smile formed on her lips....she didn't knew whay but she lovd the small small gestures of armaan.....n this one....a kiss....it was not expected even in her dreams....but still she was happy from her heart.....


**FLASHBACK CONT...**


While here even armaan was becoming normal after that incident....at first he thought about the incident....but then decided that he will try his best to kee away his past from his present.....he now spent most of his time at home....trying to learn some culinary activities....n as he knew what rehaan liked to eat....it was like more easy for him.....n he even spent most of time with rehaan....playing with him...n making him feel that his daddy was there with him....no matter whatever happens !!!!


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Guys i know you're dissapointed on not giving you some part on Armaan n rehaan...but i promise next time it will be dedicated to little Rehaan.....okay....

For now....you all read the part n tell me how was it.....

Do comment.....n press the 'Like' button if you liked the part......


PRECAP :


More flashback....with more of AR moments.....

And the most awaited.....

AR meeting finally !!!!!!!!



I hope you are happy now......

Sorry for the late update.....but was stuck in studies n tests.....sorry once again.....

And yeah...pls pls comment.....

Take care...

Love

Ria



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Posted: 16 years ago

haiii Ria😃

thats simply an awesome update yaar!!
I never imagined Sujal's entry!!
thats really a nice surprise!👏
wooowwww Armaan surprise visit to Riddhima's college is simply fabulous!!
looooveeed it!!
n the precap do u even what to know my views about t!!
its quite interesting one yaar!!
now I can't wait for ur next update yaar!
will be waiting for it!!
Takecare . . wth lots of Love . . hima😃
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

ria part is nice even Sujal 's entry was unexpected,but i like that.

AR r always darling .
Even i love armaan's little gestures.Really wanna them together soon but seems impossible right now in mid of story .

u r right i miss Armaan nd Rehaan both .


Your lips speak soft sweetness
Your touch a cool caress
I am lost in your magic
My heart beats within your chest

I think of you each morning
And dream of you each night
I think of your arms being around me
And cannot express my delight

Never have I fallen
But I am quickly on my way

plz continue soon .

love

ritu

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Ria hmm... impressing flashback Armaan already kissed her fast guy!
Can't wait till the next part when they meet I hope it will be otal filmy style heroine yahan se aarahi hai aur hero usse dekhta hai there is a 10 second stop on that sene and evrything is black n white lolz! U could do it however you want though just a suggestion!
I find Rehaan really cute and in the last or part before the last part when he was pulling Muskaan curls was really sweet and devilish!
Love u and continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thanx for the pm loved the part plz ocntd soon

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