FF: Milan (based on MJHT)NOTE on PG 26 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey ! 😊

Twas awesome! Try adding some more MayUr scenes na! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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IQ i like the story brief

do put me in the pmlist

i will catch up with it :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
awsome countinue soon pls thx for the pm!!!

-amna-
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
Awesome part!! Loved it! Plz continue soon! Thnks for the PM!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
wawwwwwww... update was really good... please continue soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*reserved*
*unreserved*
I totally loved it LOL Samrat serious about his grades and Gunjun not caring hehe and then having mayank a prankster hehehe I still can't get my head around that one hehe,
Sheena is already annoying me but it is sweet that Nupur and Gunjun are friends, but hmm Samrat not liking Gunjun or not really caring about her interesting!
I can't wait to see what happens next next
Cont soon! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
ommmgg iqra and zainab wowwww
dat was awesum
i totally loved it
every single scene just rocked!!!
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was amazing. 👏 loved mayank and nupur...they are so funny...😆 thanks for the PM and continue soon. 😊




love
Afreen

Thanks afreen, lol..yea mayur....hehe
yup ur on the PM list😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Asthuox

Will read part two kal! 😆😳

Its ok take your time Asthuu!😉
This is the comment for part 1. Im so SORRY for posting it LATE!
Ohh woww, oh ho no sorries its ok totally fine😆

*Holds ears* 😳oh no now apologizing here😆

It was VERY ---> Wonderfully awesome + amazing + outstanding + enjoyable + very natural + easy to picturerise everything = Perfect start! 😳😳
Was missing you equations!😉😆Thankk you!!!

I LOVE the way you started it. Seems like watching a show while imagining everything dudes XD!
The sammy and mayu's entries. Those lucky girls, let's join them!
Asthu (doing her little dance) SAMRAT SAMRAT! MAYANK! MAYANK! I LOVEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUU <33! Aw, mayank has a silver charm bracelet. i want one!!
Ahh yea, we loved that scene too😉*IQ does a lil dance with asthu*😉heh yea benji and gunjan do too😆 heheh awww i'll gift one on ur B'day😆😉

@ challenge. Haww, CHEATER mayu 😲 . Buh heck i LOVE his character here :P Total masti munda! 😳😳 But that little scene also showed how much samrat cares for nupur! Aweeeehhh!
HAHAHA ya, he IS like that in our FF, 😆yeaaa....the bro sis love...lol..😆
@ BenJan scene. Aweeeehh how adorable are these two and aweeeehh they have a silver charm bracelet each 😳😳 ! I like the idea of the three besties having the same bracelet. How cute!
Yea i LOVE Benjan! to the core!😳😆 yea hey do they are actually really cool na thats why😉Thanks!
@ Nupur's entry & bonding. Aweeehh she is so ADORABLEEEE! LOL those boy's wasting their time for nothing and i liked how you kept it real that they are scared of her brother 😆😳.
HAHA yea....those dumbos, always line maroing on Nupur, real? me and Zainab make sure its not too fictional 😆Thankssss!!
The dinky SaNu scene. How sweet. I love the brother-sister bonding. GunPur friends? Can't wait to see how you portray their friendship. 😃
Yup GunPur friends! their friendship is kinda different here, read the next part and you might get some hints😉

@Sheena/Mayank class room scene. *SIGHS* this girl. She makes me wanna PUKE! 🤢 Go mayank for getting her in trouble! i love you <3 keep making me proudd! 😆😳
She is designed that way, that its automatic to puke after seeing her.
AWWWWW Sheena is there, to get in troube you see😆
I love you toooooooooooooo🤗
--i love you both <3 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Ohkays. i was so confused at first because apparently i had missed the first part *crosses arms* where was my PM? :(

Awww my sonu monu!!*pulls cheeks* actually ur reply was after the first part so i thought you have already read it..im sooo sorry hun😳
ohhwelllss.. i caught up and it's really good Iqu and Zainab.. i love the setting out in part 1 could u have it like that for all the parts?? PPLLLZZZ?? thank you
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AWWW thanksss!!! oh you mean sfx, and camera movements and all that suspense scenes?
we'll try😳
do cont soon.
Thankks Sonu!!!
xxSonia

Thanks Farda=)

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