FF: Milan (based on MJHT)NOTE on PG 26

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiii!

i like ur FF very much.

plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue ..............

update karo na.😃

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kavya

@kavya.b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

first of all very sry for late comment.. couldn't help
cmng 2 ur FF
wow iqra n zainab.. u both r doing a splendid job
read everythign jus now
it was mindblwing...it's quite different ... it's nice 2 imagine everyone in different avatars n u ppl r doing a job in potraying them

do cont.. soon
n yeah pm me wen u update nxt tym

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Khushali

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

wow yaar...such a nyc update...jaldi jaldi update karna....m waiting...

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Ranjana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Hey! Really great ff and a fantastic start. Plz add me to ur PM list.

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

Part 3

"Tum????" Nupur says tensely. Her hands start shaking as she disconnects the call. She takes a deep breath and turns around to find a questioning Samrat. "kaun tha? Aur tum itni tense kyun ho?" Samrat asked worriedly. "Woh'. Pata nahi aise hi' you know' blank calls' aur phir ajeeb batein kerte hain' umm... choro use'. Main sone ja rahi hoon' good night!" And nupur rushes off to her bedroom, leaving a confused and worried samrat behind.

Next day-Jogging Park

Nupur is jogging and listening to the song Twist (LAK) on her I-pod. From the opposite direction Mayank is proceeding towards Nupur and both are jogging towards each other. All of a sudden they look at each other and Nupur completely ignores Mayank. "Subha subha kis ki shakal dekh li" Nupur mutters to herself with a frustrated expression. While on the other side Mayank looks at Nupur and passes a naughty smile.

Both of them are slowly coming closer when suddenly Mayank crashes his shoulder against Nupur's willingly.

"Excuse me!!" Nupur says irritatingly.

"Excused"Replies Mayank. "Mayank!"Nupur's more annoyed words come out.

" Ji'aap ne mujh se kuch kaha kia?" Mayank says trying to be innocent!

"Tum' Wht was tht?? I knw tum ne jaan booch ke kya!" Nupur says seriously.

"Kya kiya maine??" Mayank says acting unknown to the situation.

" Dekho tum'" Nupur tries to say pointing her finger towards Mayank, but he interrupts " Dekhao tum??".

"Apne aap to buhat smart samjhte ho!!" Nupur says. "No no no' I think u r mistaken' samajhta nahi HOON!" Mayank says with attitude.

"Ohhh!! Smart or tum???" aik baat kahoon' itna attitude sehat ke liye acha nahi Mr. Mayank!!" Nupur says with frustration.

"Tum kya diet planner ho?!" ya phir free mein advice deni ki adaat hai? Sara din chapar chapar!! Miss Chatter BOX!!!" Mayank says this and starts laughing!

Nupur gets irritated and points out her first finger towards Mayank and says, "tum' tum na'" and tries to find words'

Mayank interrupts, "haan haan... mein kya" and moves closer to her.

Nupur gets confused and says quickly " Tumhain to mein dekh lon gi!! Choron gi nahi!"

"Pehle pakro to sahi" Mayank says letting her anger boil.

"Uhhh!!" Nupur gets irritated and continues jogging. "Ohhoo abhi choti bachi ja ke bhaiya ko batae gi! Are mein to dar gaya' awww!! Jao baby jao! Ja ke apne bhai to batao!" Mayank says and laughs. "kya cheez hai kya yeh bhi! Miss Chatter box!" he smiles and continues jogging.

Scene Shift 'ExcelUniversity

Samrat and Sheena are sitting the Cafeteria holding hands. Samrat was a bit uncomfortable from the "holding-hands" but he had to otherwise Sheena would be whining, complaining all day! And he wouldn't be able to afford that.

"Samrat, can we go outside' for a date". Sheena asked Samrat and was expecting a straight 'NO' Samrat looked at Sheena with a serious expression. Sheena gulped and was ready to accept a NO from him. Samrat smiled lovingly and said YES.

Sheena smiled broadly and hugged samrat. He hugged her back and moved her back as he couldn't breathe properly in those "sticky" arms.

A few miles back Nupur was standing. "Tumhari yeh date buhat yaadgar hogi Sheee-nah!!" Nupur said smiling. "Sorry bro' per tumhare liye I have to do this."

"So where are we going??" Samrat asked Sheena. "Umm'let's go to Gardenia, the food is amazing there!" Sheena said excitedly. "Done. I will pick you at 8." Samrat said. "Ok. Perfect! I will be waiting sweetie!" Sheena said smiling and left the Cafeteria giving samrat a side hug. Samrat left too after an ice Cap. Nupur was standing there and thinking of some plan. "Hey Nups!" Gunjan came all of a suddenbehind her. "Hey! Dara diya mujhe!" Nupur said smiling. "Kya soch rahi ho?.. Mayank ke bare mein??" Gunjan said teasingly. "Kya gunjan! Kiska naam le liya! Aur mein us idiot ke bare mein sochon gi! Kabhi nahi!!" Nupur said and both of them proceeded towards a table. "haha!! Acha woh choro... tum kya soch rahi thi??"Gunjan was serious. "kya bataon' yeh sheena hai na! Samrat ke peeche hi par gayi hai! you knw I hate her! Aur mein Samrat ko us ke bare mein kuch keh bhi nahi sakti! Tum janti ho na last time us ne kaise mera aur Samrat ka jhagra karaya tha! I can't stand her a moment!" Nupur was getting hyper now! "Relax yaar' even I hate her! You know she is also behind Mayank!"Gunjan tells her secretly. "Us ke liye to yeh perfect hai!" Nupur said to herself. "kya??" gunjan asked. "kuch nahi' you know Sheena Samrat ko date ke liye force ker rahi thi! un sahab ke aankho par to pati bandhi hai na, haan kar di and now they are going! aur mein nahi chahti ke woh jayein!" Nupur says. "Don't worry yaar! Mein hoon na!! Woh mujh se bachke kahan jayegi". Gunjan looked at Nupur mischieviously and both shared a laugh.

"troon troon tun tun troon troon toon " Suddenly Nupur's cell phone rang the nokia tone. She picked it but there was no answer. Then again there were a few missed calls. Finally she answered the call and stood up in shock. "Tum' stop calling me!! Whtas ur problem??! Kyun mujhe tang ker rahe ho! You know its over!!:" Gunjan was getting worried as she heard this. "Nups everything is fine??" Gunjan asked worriedly and was looking at Nupur with a confused face.

"Woh' Nupur takes a deep breathe and sits down. "Yaar gunjan, I don't even wanna remember that freaking guy! I hate him like anything!!!" "GUY?? Nups' tell me the full story! I m so lost!" Gunjan said this with excitement! "Well' so listen' this guy named Rahul was with me in grade 11. He was really arrogant and mean. But after a few days we became friends. I was mostly with him and I thought that he is not that bad after all. But you know what! That dimwit!! He wanted to date me!! I was like WTH?!! I talked to him and he was like he wants to DATE me! I just ignored him! But he kept following me! You don't know how I escaped! It was really hard! And you know' one day I was in trouble! My dad saw me with him fighting after school' he talked to me personally and I told that it's just about a project! Otherwise I would have been dead!!" Nupur took a deep breathe after this. "Ohh! Such a weirdo! Acha does Samrat knws abt this??" "NO!!! R u crazy! Marna hai kia mujhe If he comes to know, you don't know what's going to happen! I will be dead!"Nupur says. "Relax Nups. I can understand!"

Scene Shift-Gunjan's Home

Gunjan and Benji are watching movie. They are completely lost in the movie and are enjoying it. It's about love and emotions. "What??/how is that even possible, she's just like us humans!" Benji says this after the eye lock session between the girl and the guy when they meet for the first time, and moves towards the kitchen to take some popcorns! "Exactly, aur phir uski aankho mein koi new release to chal nahi rahi, why is he so lost"

Gunjan says laughing."May be its true". Gunjan and Benji turn around and find Mayank standing there with his arms folded. "I think that it might be true' you never know' people say love is blind! So who knows when you fall in love". Mayank says with feelings and emotions. "haha!! Kal pata chala mayank koi ajeeb girlfriend le ker aaye aur bole LOVE IS BLIND! Haha!!" benji says this and imitates Mayank. "haha! True benji!" Gunjan agrees with benji. "Come on guys' what if true?!" Mayank says this and raises his eyebrow. "And what if its not?!!" Benji and Gunjan say it together and share a laugh! Gunjan and Benji look at each other and start singing,

"pyar mein saw uljhane hain pyar mat karna,

jeene marna ka koi iqraar mat karna!"

And both start laughing their heads off! They give a hi5 to each other and leave a confused Mayank behind.

N e x t D a y

Scene Shift-Excel University

Gunjan is sitting in her English class and is really bored. "kya yaar! Kitna boring lecture hai!" she yawns.

As a matter of boredom she starts

doodling on the note pad and suddenly gets an idea, which her face clearly states. She draws a heart on apiece of paper and throws where RV was sitting.The paper hits RV.

(Note : RV is a stupid boy here. He is not clever and is a total dumb).

"yeh kis ne..." RV looks around and finds a smiling Gunjan who's blinking her eyes trying to blush. "Is ka matlab' hehe" RV blushes and keeps looking at Gunjan. Gunjan keeps staring until she winks at RV. "KKdaak!" Rv falls from his chair, due to the sudden reply of Gunjan. Everyone starts laughing. The professor tells RV to get up and act more like a grown up. Everyone shuts up, and Gunjan makes a "I feel so sorry for you" face. The bell rings an everyone leaves the class, except for RV who was in the dreamland of his and Gunajan's ;)

Phew!!!

firstly, we apologize for updating late! we were supposed to update last Saturday but due to some net problems we couldnt.

Another thing, school's opening from September 8th, so we might not update regularly,(depends on the work we have)

Hope you all enjoyed!

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