FF: Incomplete Life - Ch 21B on PG 76 & Note PG 78

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nm8792

@nm8792

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

It was not boring at all infact you have beautifully described Jai and bani's state of mind. Loved it. Both thinking of the time when they first met and how the jija sali relationship progressed and now the eqaution has suddenly changed.

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Yoga4life

@Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Hey,

Read all the parts in one go. I am liking it the way the story is going. Poor Jai and Bani are in such an awkward situation. It would take time for them to accept this new relation. I know Ananya will remain in their hearts for ever so now it will be their real test to accept their new relation whole heartedly with Ananya still in their memories. Human emotions and relations are sometimes so tangled....

Waiting for the next part

Shweta

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Desriee1

@Desriee1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Totally love the updete. Your heart have to go out to JB and the pain there in. Hope the pain can be forgotten soon.

P.S. Did not fall a sleep, Continue soon, and happy writing.

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Ramya

@iloveserials

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Great part Dil.

You have penned the emotions of Jai & Bani beautifully especially their past relationship as Jiju & Sali - partner in crime. I liked it.

Both of them would definitely need time to adjust and accept this new relationship. Things were too fast for them. Waiting to know how the life of compromise develops / blossoms into life of love.

Plz continue soon....As usual your FF rocks.

ILS

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hey dil

really feel bad for JB

as what was their relationship in the past

and now what they both have got themselves into

loved the choco bribes jai used to give to bani

hope both are ablt to understnd each other

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Hey!

great update..so they are married!!

Both Jai and Bani are feeling awkward...

I like the way you described their feelings and thoughts..

continue soon

nadia

p.s. the update was not boring at all..

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

amazing part

i really liked the way u described jai and banis first meeting and the way u showed how similar they are 2 each other.

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shweta

@shweta76

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#48

very emotional story ....both of them are in a very awkward situation but I think its harder for Bani :(

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kitkat_2002

@kitkat_2002

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

i read ur update in morning bt didnt get a chance to leave a comment as was in a hurry to go to college...

in no ways dil was it boring... in fact as usual u had done a good job...

the way jai is drinking and remembering abt his wife...

or the way he averted his eyes when bani was sleeping...

really liked the way the story is progressing...

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

i read the story today. jb's dilemna is so well written, her desier to be yash's mother overcame all others and jai is torn between disgust and helplessness at the situation. cant wait for their bonding

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