FF: Incomplete Life - Ch 21B on PG 76 & Note PG 78

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johnangad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#191

jai better fall foor her asap too

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Isa_de

@Isa_de

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Posted: 15 years ago

#192

lovely part.....

Can you plz also update Along came Jai.............

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kamarunnisa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#193

Dil.. i was actually goin to ask you to update ur ff and what i see u have updated.. it has been a long time yar now you dont take too long...... i loved the update. the gradual changes in their mariage was written nicely you are one of the best writer in here dil......... keep it up.

take care

love

kamy

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janam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#194

Excellent update.Can you plz also update And Along came Jai.............

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Rockyy_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#195

Dil, awesome chapter.

The leap is a wonderful insight into how Jai and Bani relationship

has progress. Bani loving Jai and Yash being so possessive of her

is truly something.

Continue soon please, this story is truly amazing like you the writer and

all your other stories.

All the best and take care.

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jeenal

@jeenal20

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Posted: 15 years ago

#196

hey dil

taht was again a gr88 part

so bani is in love with jai

and jai is alaos forgeting anayas memories

and good to see rano come and stay in WM, atleast bani will have some company

and loved the talk between JB during bani

heheheheee too cute and yash is really becoming a spoilt brat

plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#197

Very nice....the way Bani's feelings have changed over two years. But when is Jai going to change & stop treating her like a servant?

I hope he misses her while being away too.

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#198

Wonderful update....!!!

Very nicely written update...!

One idea.. Use Ranveer to make Dr Jai jealous !

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Desriee1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#199

How long does Jai thinks he can ignore Bani's present and

his increasing feelings for her.

Dil update soon please.

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Ramya

@iloveserials

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Posted: 15 years ago

#200

Wonderful part, Dil. The leap shows the change of scenarios and the progression of JB's relationship wonderfully. Bani is hopelessly in love with Jai and she cant even bear a week's seperation from Jai. Jai is yet to come to terms with his feelings but he has admitted to himself that he can't imagine anyone except her by his side and feels a deep connection with her. Only a matter of little more time and something major to realize his feelings and stir something inside him.

I do wish Jai bonds with his son. Poor Yash does not get to spend time with his dad and he is still Bani's ladla.

Rano is also here in the picture now. I hope she becomes that someone in bringing JB closer to each other.

Great part. Continue sooooooon this time. Wishing u a very Happy NY in advance. Would love a NY treat from u...maybe the next part. I know I am not asking for too much, just a small gift to make the start of the NY a happy one.

ILS / Ramya