FF: Incomplete Life - Ch 21B on PG 76 & Note PG 78 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow dil that was an amazing part... now what with this scrap book will Bani be guilty to get closer with her husband? will Ananya's shadow haunt her? wont she get out of the painful pasts? sigh!!!!!!! she shouldn't have gotten married with her brother-in-law in the first place...

you can give us all the naswers by updating soooon.. the chapter was perfect and like i say u r the best!!!!!!!


love

kamy
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi
So Bani seems to truly miss her husband and Jai seems to connect with her in some level. But why is he always so sarcastic with hre. Does he find it difficult to accept the fact that Bani is now an important part of his life still. Yes he might show concern and feel the need to have a partner but in the true sense will he open up to Bani is something I would liek to wait and watch. And the subtle way in which she takes care of him has him a bit unnerved looks like. But Yash seems to ahve a lovely mother. And the last stanza were in Bani is lost in memories. Is it that both of them love to dwell in the past.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dil,
the update wasn't boring at all..
Bani is really missing Jai and looks like jai is missing bani too..
it was so sweet of him to call and ask if she wanted anything and her reply was even sweeter!
I hope bani doesn't get the idea that jai is not happy with her at all as compared to how happy he looks when he was with ananya...
continue soon
nadia
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Posted: 15 years ago

Great update so well written loved the emotions going on between Jai and Bani thank you so much for this great update.

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update.....gr8 work..plz cont. soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey when did you update??????
this was great jai already went to i mean came to london....kiya yaar london and a sunny day, no, never...it sooo much snowing, i am hating it now, hvnt been to school,
oh bani is sooo missing jai...and jai too...where was my baby yash...was dying to read about him...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Bani missing Jai. Jai too is missing her but hasn't expressed that enough for Bani to feel it. How will he when he himself hasn't. He should know that soon so that Bani can start her real married life with her.

In spite of getting comfortable in her current life she is sill not complete.

Good that he is not thinking much about Ananya & has gotten over the grief.

Just wondering why Jai is not so attached to Yash? & there no ineraction between the two?
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Posted: 15 years ago

Time for Bani to move on with life and start building new memories

for herself, Jai and Yash as a family and stop living in her sister's "Ananya"

shadow through her things.

Dil, wonderful chapter, can't wait thou to see what happens when

Jai comes back from London.


P.S. your updates are never boring, only insightful.

Take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a nice update, Dil. How can u say its boring?
Bani is missing Jai terribly but I hope she realizes that Jai shud not be completely lost in Ananya's memories and that he must move on. It was sweet of her to stick Yash's picture in Ananya's scrap book but she must try more & put much more effort to get closer to Jai now that she realises that she loves him and make him feel the same.
Jai also misses her, keeps thinking about her, wants to buy her something from London...but doesnt realise it....he has to come to terms with his feelings.
Dil, why cant these two be alone together with Yash...just the three of them and spend some time...maybe they'll come closer.....want some cute JB moments in the next update. Plz...............
Waiting for more. Nice update.
ILS / Ramya
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part please cont soon

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