Childhood Prem (RM/Ar/AA MIni FF)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys I am starting a Mini FF on Rahul and Muskaan including Armaan and Riddhima and Atul Anjali...So Enjoyyy'yay'😆


Mumbai -a city of dreams. Here, everyone think about only themselves'No one cares about others'People accomplish their dreams in this city'Whether they want to be an actor or an actress or a doctor'In this populous city, there lives a Chadda family. They first lived in Patialla, a small village in Punjab, but then they moved to Mumbai, 25 years ago, to fulfill their dreams'Mr. Chadda started his life in Mumbai being a small accountant in a bank'whereas Mrs. Chadda stayed home taking care of her husband and their little house. Soon, Mrs. Chadda had a beautiful daughter'As soon as she was born, she had a smile on her face and so both Mr. and Mrs. Chadda named her Muskaan.

Today, Mr. Chadda owns a company. And they are living a better life than before. Muskaan is 13-years old. Soon she is going to be 14 on December 16. Her chulbuli, natkhat, always happy-go-lucky and fun-loving character creates a joyful environment'Wherever she goes, she spreads happiness all over'

Its July 12, and today is the first day of school'Mr. Chadda always tells her to go to school with the driver in the car but Muskaan being a chatter-box, always walks to school with her friends so that she can have a great conversation with them'

Muskaan: oye Riddima'ruk (she screamed loudly and rushed towards her)

Riddhima, one of Muskaan's best friends. She is very calm, sweet and a quiet girl'She loves to help people just like Muskaan.

Riddhima: Hii Muskaan'Jo Bole Sonihaal (she waited for Muskaan to complete the sentence)

Muskaan: She stopped for sometime to relax and took a deep breath'''Sastriakal !!

Riddhima: Kya yaar kitna bhagti hai'I wasn't going to run away from here'You should have just walked a bit faster'

Muskaan: oye theek hai'theek hai'chal ab bata ki tera Summer kaisa tha'? Nahi ek minute pehle ye bata ki Anjali kaha hai'?

Riddhima: Muskaan tu bhi na'Ab mein bolo'?

Muskaan: chal nakhre karna bandh kar aur bolna Anjie kaha hai'
Riddhima: Anjie'paata nahi yaar'who ati hi hogi'

Anjali: HI guys'wats up'

Anjali, another Muskaan's best friend. Her behavior depends on her mood'She is usually very rude and mean but at times she can be as sweet as sugar.

Muskaan: are waah aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai'? (she whispered to Riddhima, just joking around)

Riddhima: Muskaan sshh'!

Muskaan + Riddhima: Hi Anjie'!! (they both said it in excitement)

First, they all hugged each other since they met after a long time'And then started talking about their summer'

Muskaan: arey guys tumhe pata hai ki iss summer mein apne'

Anjie interrupted: Muskaan tum hamesha phone pe apne summer ki baat karti ho toh if u don't mind can we please talk about our Summer'? (She said it giggling)

Muskaan: Sure'I don't mind'Go ahead'waise bhi I want to talk abt London and Mahabaleshwar'So how was ur experience guys'?

Riddhima visited her relatives in London'And together all of them visited some new places in London'She was just enjoying herself throughout the vacation'

Anjali went to her favorite place - Mahabaleshwar , a hill station in India, with her parents for some cool air and beautiful weather'

Anjie: So Muskaan tumhare sweet bhaiia Gullu, ki shaadi kaisi thi'?

Muskaan: don't even ask, it was beast...Do u know we had'

Her shiny eyes stopped at an old blind lady who was trying to get help from someone as she needed to cross the road'Muskaan quickly ran towards the lady and said'aapko kaha jana hai ma-ji'?

Old Lady: beta mujhe baas yahi saibaba mandir jaana tha'

Muskaan: Mein le chalti hoon apko aur saath mein apko yeh bhi bata ti jaoongi ki raste mein kya kya ho raha hai'Chaliye'

Muskaan holds old lady's hand and starts walking'Riddhima and Anjali joined too'

Muskaan: Ma-ji, yaha chaar bachiyan khel rahi hai'oops ek patni apne pati ko joor se pit rahi hain'ouch'(after 2 minutes they reached saibaba mandir)

Muskaan: ye lo aa gaya apka saibaba mandir'

Old Lady: Tumhara bhala ho beti'hazaroon saal jiyoon'(she said putting her hand on Muskaan's head'She even gave blessing to Riddhima and Anjali when they both bowed to take aashirwad)

Muskaan took a look at her clock and it was already 12:25 PM'And the school starts at 12:30'They all hurried up to reach the school as early as possible'As Mrs. Garcy would kill them if they got late'


Okay guys,so I hope that u liked it'I need some of your point of views if I should continue my story or not...If u can then please give me some of your ideas that can help me write this story...Thank You
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Luv Vikshu...😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Vivkshu
I loved the concept
and i cant wait till you continue
I wonder where Armaan and Rahul come into this story though..but seems really nice :)
Luv Anu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Vikshu,
Jo Bolo So Nihaal! ____________!
OK..i know your muskaan but is me anu angie and riz? if so i wanna be angie..lol...but really cute and i'm glad you included that satriasal part..to too cute. i can't wait till rahul comes....i'm so glad you finally started your story!!! yay! can't wait to read more...thanks for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: peacewithin

Hey Vivkshu

I loved the concept
and i cant wait till you continue
I wonder where Armaan and Rahul come into this story though..but seems really nice :)
Luv Anu



Heyy Anu...
JO BOLE SONIHAAL______!!

Thnk u soo much....Armaan and Rahul...hmm thoda intazaar karna padega...😆 They both re going to come soon...!! 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MuskaanGarewal1

Vikshu,
Jo Bolo So Nihaal! ____________!
OK..i know your muskaan but is me anu angie and riz? if so i wanna be angie..lol...but really cute and i'm glad you included that satriasal part..to too cute. i can't wait till rahul comes....i'm so glad you finally started your story!!! yay! can't wait to read more...thanks for the pm and continue soon



Heyy Siddhu...
Sastriakal...
JO Bole Sonihaal_____!!

Thank u soo soo sooo much...U can be anjie...But ur not usually rude and mean...Still u can be anjie and Anu - ridzie...Finally I started my story...Yesterday I was confused if I should start or not...But then I ended up writing it...😆

Edited by rahulcccmuski - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Vikshu!!

Awesome concept yaar!!! Im Loving it!!! 👏

Continue soon!! 😊
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this ones simply beautiful n outstanding
a huge round of applause for this one
Good work keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ibdt2004

Hey Vikshu!!

Awesome concept yaar!!! Im Loving it!!! 👏

Continue soon!! 😊
Thanks for the pm!!



Heyyyy....Thnk u soo much...Ur welcome for the PM...😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: imane568

this ones simply beautiful n outstanding
a huge round of applause for this one
Good work keep it up



OMG u made my day 2day...yayyy....Thnk u sooo much....!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey dear very lovley FF 👍🏼 can't wait for rahul's Intro 😳
Thxx for the pm WILL be waiting for nexxt part!! 😳

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