Mini AR :: 'WHISPER ' Pls Check Pg 109.. 1/1/11.!!

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Hey guys how u all doing??? well i already hv 2 ff's running.....bt i cldnt help myself i just had to write this one......its actually based on a dream i had some times back.......n i soooo want it to come true.......ok it would be a realy short one of about 5 parts or so.....bt havent yet decided as it depends on the response i get for it.......


(Hey rav thnk u soooooo much for this lovely siggi.....looved it sooooo much...!!!!!!)
"Mom m soooo happy today......dad understands tht i need some time for my self b4 i marry n settle down.....u know he even agreed to send me for my dream vacation......n i know tht its all bcoz of u.....thnk u soooo much mom for always being ther for me......Good Night......Love u....."

Riddhima could never sleep without wishing her mom.....so wat tht her mom was no more ther but she was always alive in her heart......Riddhima had lost her mom when she was 8.....but she clearly remembered her.....she remembered all her teaching.....she rem how she used to make her sleep lovingly.....how she used to hold her whenever she would have a nightmare or whenever she would get hurt.....she remembered how much she used to love her......but when she had died Riddhima had been terrible......she would not eat or drink anything she would just sit in her balcony staring at the sky......

Flashback.....

Shashank had come to wish her goodnight wen he had seen her sitting in the balcony he knew wat she was going through after all she was only a small kid......n she had always been very close to her mom.....he had just gone n sat beside her n she had immediately hugged him n sobbed......

"dad y did mom leave me like this......she knew i can't stay away from her.....thn y" Riddhima had sobbed in her father's arms.....

"shhhhh Riddhi.......ur mom will always be with u......see look up ther she is rit ther n will always be ther watching u.......n plzzz stop crying sweetie u know she hated whenever u used to cry.......now be a good girl n wish her good night n go to sleep.....come on" he had picked her n put her to sleep.....

Flashback Over.....

A silent tear fell down from his eyes......he had been devastated hearing abt his wife's death bt he knew tht he needs to be strong for his daughter his angel........she was the only one he had n he would make sure tht she gets all the happiness.....but at the same he did not spoiled her.......n from tht day he had become her mom n dad both.....

Riddhima had been a great support to her father like he had been to her......she had always been a good daughter.......she had taken care of him for all this years......she never questioned her father's decision as she knew tht he was right......he knew wats good n wats bad for her.......n he was proud to have her as his daughter....

Today when she had come running to him to show him her trophy on topping the university.......he had been sooo happy......n had asked her to make a wish n he would fulfill it......she had hesitated for a moment n thn said.....

"dad i want to live my dream......i want to travel the world on my own....."

"Beta but...."

"I promise u dad i would be ok.....please dad let me go only for a month......i promise u i would do all u say after i get back please......just this one's i want to live on my on.....please dad" she had said earnestly......he had just smiled at her n said....."go sweetie......live ur dream.....but just one request take any of ur friend with u......it would assure me tht u r not alone.....would u do tht"

Riddhima had immediately hugged him "sure dad i already asked Muskaan n Anji n thy agreed.......thnk u soooo much dad.....ur the best......"

How could he refuse her......she had never wished for anything......n had always fulfilled the duty of a perfect daughter.....he knew she was mature enough to take care of herself.......but all he was sacred was of her innocence she always trusted anyone very easily......but now tht Muskaan n Anjali wer with her he need not worry about her......bcoz thy wer always more concerned about Riddhima then him.....

This one month would be extra special for Riddhima......Because she would be living a fairy tale dream in this special one month of her life.......


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Part 1
"So Riddzi u decided wer all are v going"
"I don't know Muskaan.....like the world is soooo big n I wanna go everywer so i cant decide 1 particular place wher v can go"
"Well I have a solution.....we dont need to go only at 1 place we can select 3 most special places wer v really wanna go, one of each our choice.....n m sure we can travel 3 places in a month's time wat say..??"
"Tht's a nice idea Anji.....wat do u think Riddzi"
"Ya cool"
So thn with a lot of decussion n selection thy came up with the 3 most beautiful cities of the world......n the next month thy would be hopping from one corner of the world to the other......n ther first destination was The Land of beaches Bahamas.....
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A week later at Mumbai International Airport......
"So girls ready to go....."
"Ya uncle everything ready......"
"Good n don't forget...."
"We'll call u as soon as we reach ther.....n we'll always be together.....dont worry dad we'll be fine....." Riddhima said cutting him "we know tht.....stop worrying we'll be fine"
"It's the first time u going alone sweetie take care of ur self....."
"I will dad.....now please stop being all senti u'll make me cry....."
"Ya uncle don't worry about her we'll take perfect care of Riddzi...." Anjali said assuring.....
"Where is Muskaan..??" he asked looking here n ther to find where Muskaan is....
"She's ther uncle.....u wait i'll call her" Anjali said going towards her....
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"Ya dude we leaving.....u ready na" Pause "Good thn....wer u now" Pause "ok ok" Pause "no everything is like we decided ther's no change in the plan" Pause "are u freaking out of ur mind she'll kill me if she comes to no about anything at all" Pause "ok listen i gotta go Anjali is calling me.....cya later" Pause "thnk u sooo much......byee'.take care" Pause "ya sure i'll call u daily....ok now byeee" N with tht Muskaan cut the call.....
"Whom wer u talking to.?"
"just a friend Anji.....come lets go we getting late....." n b4 Anji cld ask any more questions Muskaan dragged her to wer Riddhima was waiting for them....
"So Muskaan ready to go."
"Ya uncle absolutely...." she said smiling brightly.....
Thy heard ther flight announcement being made n all three of them after saying ther final byee's to Shashank left for ther first destination......during the whole flight thy made plans of all tht thy going to do ther in ther 6 day stay ther.....
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They wer going to stay at Bimini Bay Resort......thy had booked a suite which had 3 bedrooms a living room n a small kitchen....
Living Room :
Bedroom :
Kitchen :
"Oh my God guys this is one sexy room......"
"truely Muskaan its amazing.....wat say Riddzi"
"ya guys its very nice.....but guys come here look at the view its breathtaking, isn't it" ther suite had the direct view of the beach.....its was just amazing.....
"Ya Riddzi is damn cool I can't wait any more come lets go ther....."
"wait Muskaan m hungry first lets eat something...."
"Ya muskaan we'll rest for some time n thn go....m tired"
After rest for n hour or so.....when thy got up it was actually dinner time.....thy had come to know tht ther is some party on the beach by one of the guest n tht he had invited the whole resort ther......so thy got dressed n went to enjoy ther first night in Bahamas.......
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There was a huge tent set up in the middle of the beach......u could see ther wer losts of people......a barbeque was set up out side......ther wer candles n flowers all over the place......thy had come to know tht this party is for the couple who completed 25 yrs of ther wedding life.....thy went in n joined the other.....thy went to the couple n wished them.....
"aww thy look so cute together na"
"ya thy do.....n even soo much in love even after sooo many years of being together.......i wish i get a life partner who loves much as much as Nick loves Liane (Couples name)"
"u'll surely get one Riddzi.....never mind even if he's not this romantic but staying with u he'll surely become one......n as it is u are so lovable ther is no one in this world who will not fall in love with u sweetie....." Muskaan said....
"awww thnk u sooo much Muski" n she hugged her best friend.....
Thy quickly got comfortable with the surrounding n the people......thy made quick friendzzz.......everyone was just soooo full of life ther......everything seemed perfect ther......thy dance ate n danced again......enjoying themselves for the fullest.....
"Muski i'll be back in few minutes......n want to go out for sometime....."
"Ok but come back soon ok.....v'll be here only....."
Riddhima was too tired now with all the dancing no doubt she was enjoying, bt she wanted to have some fresh air......so she went out n stood quietly in a quiet area......
She was calmly stood ther admiring the night sky......she could here the light music from the tent.....the night was extraordinary special tonight......she felt extremely nice rit now standing ther.....she had the feeling tht something unexpected was going to happen with her tonight......when she felt some one's hand on her eyes.......scared she wanted to shout but stopped hearing the person's voice.....
"shhhh dont shout......i wont do a thing" the person said softly near her ears.....ther was something in his voice which told her tht she should not be affaird.....she calmed her self n said....
"thn wat do u want....who r u???" she asked yet abit scared.....
"calm down sweetie u'll soon come to know who I m bt be rest assured tht i wont harm u.....I promise tht"
"thn y r u here"
"i wanna talk to u"
"thn y have u closed my eyes...."
"hmmm u ask too many questions darling.....just be quiet for some time n enjoy the wonderful night" he slowly slides his arms around her waist.....n brought her a bit more close to himself.....her breathing got heavier but despite of trying hard she cloudnt bring herself to say anything to him all she cloud do was feel him n listen to his silent breath....thy stood ther quietly for a few minutes......
She was soo lost tht she didnt even come to know when his hand left her waist n he had gone....leaving her standing all alone ther.....after few moments when she did not feel his presence behind her, she put her hand on her waist but could not feel his hand......she slowly opened her eyes.....
"Oh my god wat was tht.....wat was i doing.....who was tht mysterious person.....wat was ther about him tht i just couldnt do anything.....but he didn't do anything.....he was just standing with me like any of my friend would have ya but a bit more close......his voice oh god he had such sexy voice.....i cn yet feel his presence around me.....but now i cant wer did he go all of a sudden.....he didn't even tell me anything....." she thought looking all around her.....she couldnt see anyone ther....
"how did he just disappear.....was it just my imagination or was ther really some one.......i need to find out.....but how cn I....I didnt even see his face....shit"
Riddhima didn't knew tht she was thinking it all aloud n tht someone was listening......the person just smiled n went away.....
Riddhima went back in the tent n met Muskaan n Anjali near the barbeque.....

"Wer wher u v had been waiting for u since along time...."
"Oh sorry i didn't realize the time.....u done cn we go back m tired now"
"Riddzi is something wrong....are feeling alrit"
"Ya Anji m fine I just want to sleep cn we go back...."
"Ya sure as is it the party is almost over....."
Thy went n wished Nick n Liene again n thn went back to ther suite.....all of them changed n set in the living area with a cup of hot chocolate.....
"The party was awesome na"
"Ya it was but Riddzi u missed the best part.....the cake cutting ceremony......oh god u should have tasted it......i cn yet feel tht chocolate taste" Muskaan said licking her lips....
"N Riddzi u know ther was this guy.....who was totaly fida over Muskaan......Muskaan i think he really likes u.....mayb u should try for him....he cn be ur Mr. Right...."
"Shut up Anji u know i like desi guys.....frm Mr. Right i rem Riddzi u had a dream na tht u would go on such a trip with ur Mr. Right.....so u r on ur dream trip n we just need to find ur Mr. Right now.....n u know i have this feeling tht u'll surely find him during this trip....."
listening to Muskaan all Riddhima could thing of was about tht mysterious person on the beach.....*he didn't even tell me his name....i ask him when i meet him next......but will i ever meet him again* she thought....
"hello Riddzi wer r u lost...." Muskaan snapped her finger in front of her face getting her out of her trace.....
"Oh nothing....nothing at all"
"Riddzi u ok na"
"Ya Anji m fine.....ok guys I wanna sleep now....really very tired"
"Me 2...." Muskaan said....n all of them went to ther rooms after bidding good night to each other......but Riddhima was not sleepy.....she just wanted to move away from any more questions tht Muskaan or Anjali would have asked.....she didn't wanted to tell them about her encounter with tht stranger.....she slept thinking abt him.....wondering weather she would ever meet him again or not....n even if she does how is she gonna recognize him.......

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Hey guys here is the first part.....i hope u all liked it.....actually i wanted to ask u tht weather i should explain u everything in detail like this part or should i go fast.....do tell me how will u prefer i cn do both.....Guys i even wantes to tell u all tht i have nt been to all the places i mention its all imagination.....plzzz dont mind i write it all with the help of my frnd who has been ther n a little research abt this places.....

Guys a big thnx for all ur wonderful comments it really means a lot....a big hug to all of u🤗🤗🤗.....n guys do comment/criticize wat ever u feel about this part.....silent reader a humble request plzzz do comment it means a lot.....even a word will do bt plzzzz this is the only request.....
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Part 2
Night went by lost in the dream world......n morning sun came smiling dow at the sleeping beauty......Riddhima was sleeping peacefully dreaming about the last night......
"hey sweetie..." said a husky voice...
"hmmmm shhhhh" Riddhima said waving her hand yet sleeping......
"sweetie get up its morning....."
"shut up Muskaan m on a vacation.....so just get lost n leme sleep...."she said pushing the person lightly n thn again went to sleep cuddling more in the blanket......
"hmmm so u wanna sleep....well how about if i sleep with u" saying he kissed her cheek.....startled she jumped of the bed holding the blanket close to herself......her breathing heavy she looked around the room but could not find anyone ther.....
*wat was tht was i dreaming or was someone really ther in my room in my bed....no it can't b i must be dreaming.....but yet smell his cologne n i can yet fel his lips.....bt bt it could be my illusion right....* while she was deep lost in her thought......she saw a paper kept near her pillow with a rose.....she picked it up n read it......
U know sweetie look beautiful wen u sleep.....i could just sit here i watch u sleep for ages.....but thn wen u stired n lnded in my arms i was totaly lost in u n thn ur cute beauty spot on ur heart add's to ur beauty.....u know wat u should show it off....(ther was a dress on the table next to the bed).....i'll b waiting for u on the same beach wer we meet yesterday.....love u....
she gasped reading it....*tht mean someone was really here n i was sleeping....n he was the same person i had meet no felt ya felt yesterday.....oh god i sleep like a pig....i dont evn come to know tht somebody i ther with me....seriously tht's a very bad habit i need to change it soon.....*
"hey Riddzi u up already.....i thought u wont get up b4 lunch"
"huh???? hey Anji ya just got up"
"well thts good.....now we all can go together for lunch.....i hv heard tht ther is a very nice cafe on the beach we went yesterday....."
"beach"
"ya so come on get ready.....i'll go n wake up Muskaan"
Riddhima kept sitting ther looking at the dress wondering whether she sould wear it or not......n atlast she decided to wear it......*ok Mr. stranger here I come......hope i can see u today.....bt ya do u know u have very sexy voice....* giggling she went to get dressed n came out wearing this......

"wow Riddzi u looking very preetty..."

"thnx Muski even u looking good"

"n wat about me"

"awww u too looking good Anji.....now can we go.....m starving...."

"u shld b u didn't have dinner last night.....god knows wer u were"

"ok Muski m sorry but cn v go now...."

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"isn't this place amazing...."

"ya truely its beautiful....can't we spend our whole vacation here...."

"Muskaan....no we can't.....everything is fixed u know na....bt chill we yet have few days here b4 we go...."

"ya ya we do....."

"ok now wat do u wanna eat....." thy decided n placed ther order.....the cafe was located in a sheduled corner of the beach n frm far away it seemed as its built on the water itself.....ther food arrived n thy started enjoying the delicious meal when a waiter came n gave Riddima a letter....it read...

U looking gorgeous.....i sooo wanna hold u like last night.....but we'll have to wait for tht......meet u soon.....byee....love u......

she looked around *stop looking around Riddzi u can't find him.....bt Y???? rem u haven't seen him.....oh ya.......* "this is so not fair...."

"wat Riddzi wats not fair n wats in this letter...."

"oh nothing nothing at all....." she started eating her food n kept the letter in her bag....

Thn thy went to a small market near the beach....n did lotsss of shopping.....later thy went for a dolphin show wer thy touched n kissed the dolphins......thy saw sea lions it was all amazing thy loved interacting with the dolphins n swimming with thm.....n thn thy came back to the beach for relaxing......

"God tht was amazing.....i love Dolphins thy are soo cutteee"

"seriously man thy like soo sweet u know tht sea lion kissed me.....aww he was adorable......i could have stayed ther for long if our time wasn't over....."

"don't worry we'll go again" thy didn't know but ther wer actually very tired....."lets go back.....its evening already.....n thn we'll go for dinner...."

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Thy came for dinner to the same cafe wer thy had come for lunch as it was the closet.....toight thy had a live concert going on n the place was crowed.....

"wow this place looks diff thn the morning.."

"ya it looks much more beautifull.....wat music guys m loving it...."

"hmmm i feel so good coming here..." thy set on ther table n saw a guy sitting in the center playing guitar....

"he's too good.....who's he....looks like n Indian..."

"yes my child u r rit he's n india....he's on a vacation....he comes here daily....very sweet n loving boy..." said n elderly women sitting on the table besides thm....

"wats his name...."

"Armaan Mallik"

"Armaan Mallik wer have i heard this name" Muskaan said thinking hard....

"Oh my god is he The Armaan Mallik......the owner of the Desires" Muskaan almost shouted as she realized who he is.....

"yes u r rit....but u would never know tht he's such a big man....he's very sweet to be a business man.....u know girls its only bcoz of him tht this place is still open as the owner was so much in debth tht he could no more run this place but at tht time he came n helped him....he's a gr88 guy"

Riddhima was constantly staring at him.....*his eyes, his lips his dimple smile hes hot man i havent seen any one looking so hot sexy n cute at the same time 'sigh'....awww he looks soo cute sitting like tht.....he doesn't looks like those big fat ugly business men at all who think thy own everythin.....hes really one of a kind seriously n to top it all he has gr888 sense of music.....n now i wanna hear him sing....shit hes lookin at me....n smiling....shit y m blushing well who wouldn't if he winks at u....but now y is he starring at u.....ok Riddzi look some wer else he's infectious.....bt i can't its as if his eyes hv held mine......*

"Riddzi wer u looking he's gone"
"huh ??? wat....i....umm i wasn't lookin at him....."
"thn wat wer u starring at huh???" Muskaan asked teasingly
"shut up Muskaan i was just...just thinking something"
"acha wat wer u thinking....tell us"
"nothing important....now cn i eat m hungry"
"go ahead who's stopping u"
Tht night Riddhima couldnot sleep at all....she kept on thinking abut tht mysterious man but wen ever she did tht she could see Armaan sitting ther playing the guitar......the buzzz of ther cell got her out of her trace.....msg frm a private number....
Thinkin abt me sweetheart....i know u r i cn see it in ur eyes.....don't look here n ther no use hahaha.....n ya stop staring at guys itss infectious hehehehe.....byeeee.....goodnight.....lots of love n kissses......
*who the hell is he n y is he not coming in front of me......man he's making me crazy......ok Riddzi enough now sleep......this guys all are of no use...thy r just irritating creeps..* when she again received a msg frm n private number....
wow someones angry......chill honey.....don't think this much....it will affect ur sleep.....just relaxe n go to sleep....muaaahhhhh....
*was i thinking so loudly....well possible....m sure he's some wer here only....bt y can't i see him is he invisible like Mr. India....he's making me mad....k now m nt going to think n i'll just sleep.....* with tht she slept again dreaming about 2 guys 1 whos voice she had heard but not seen n other whom she has seen but not heard.....
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Next 4 days went by n now only 2 days wer remaining for thm to leve.....ther had been no letter msg or even ny kind of meting frm the stranger.....n Riddhima was constantly thinking about him.....
*y had he nt msg me.....is he gone, i doubt tht.....he doesn't seems like the one who'll just go away...thn y its been 4 days....so its good na tht hes gone.....ya i suppose i mean it shld be.....bt m missing him 'sigh'*
"riddzi u ready...."
"ya just coming" thy had decided to try some water sports bt riddzi was scared of thm......bt thn after constant nagging frm Anjali n Muskaan she agreed.....thy wer goin for underwater diving......
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"so here we are.....look at this ship its sooo cute n small.....come lets go fast"
"Muskaan are u sure i mean swimming with fishes n all...."
"Riddzi now plzz don't start again thy nt going to eat u.....god we wer playing with dolphins few days back"
"ya we wer bt thy wer trained n sweet.....wat if ther is a sarke in the water"
"Riddzi just shut up n come.....as it is not going to help now"
"Ok Riddzi take a deep breath in jump u going to love it trust me...."
"Muskaan please stay with me...." N with tht thy jumped in the water.....Riddzi who was first scared loved wat she saw inside.....ther in front of her eyes we gorgeous tiny tiny fishs....small small water plants she went deeper to explore this side of nature.....she wa glad now tht she came.....when suddenly the light on her halmet went off....n it bcome completely dark.....she panicked as she couldn't see anything.....she had come far away frm the ship n she didn't knew the way back.....thnk god i hv n oxygen mask....
she kept on swimming bt reached no wer....when she felt some one take hold of her....n she heard a voice "don't go down u'll hurt urself.....come hold me i'll take u up" she couldn't see his face properly as it was covered with the mask even the voice was blur.....she could just see his eyes *i have seen thm b4 but wer i don't rem* ....she held him tight n he carried her up.....she fainted in his arms n made her lay on the chair.....she got up after some time to see Anji n Muskaan looking at her with concern
"Riddzi u fine.....god u scared us.....wer did u go huh???"
"m fine Anji...."
"never do such a thing again got it.....first u just go some wer wen u tell us to b together n thn u faint for like n hour....."
"m sorry Muski i just saw something n followed it..."
"ya ya.."
"Muski now 4get it shes safe n fine now..."
"sorry Muski"
"k m forgiving u this time.....bt next time i'll kill u if u do such a thing...." with tht all 3 hugged each other in a grp hug....
"by the way guys who was tht guy who got me here"
"oh he....Armaan Mallik...rem we saw him at the cafe tht day"
"oh ya...thts y" she said softly
"wat ???"
"ummm nothing...."
"Oh ya b4 i forget...he has invited us for a small party tomorrow night....would u like to go"
"hmmm ya sure....as it is it's ur last night 2moro....lets enjoy it"
"ya it would be fun....he's a very nice guy u know he was here for a long time bt thn he had to go....plus by going ther we cn thnk him for saving u"
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Precape :: AR meeting n lots of fun at the party.....

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So here goes the 2nd part.....i hope u all like it....do leave ur honest comments/criticizms would be waiting for him.....silent readers plzzz comment thy mean a lot.....or do press the Like button if u like it.....
Edited by crazy_4_karan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

"Muski wat u wering tonight..."

"i have decided on my black dress......wat abt u...."

"don't knw m vry confused...."

"here let me help u...." n picked up a cute short dress....."I think this one wld b perfect..."

"thnk u sooo much Muskii....love u"

"aww Riddzi sweetie bt i soo hope tht u get ur Mr. right whom u cn hug n say love u soon......mayb tonight itself" she said with a wink......while Riddhima smiled slightly thinking abt her Mr. Right...."oh madam nw stop dreaming n gt dressed fast...."

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Thy reached wer the party was held n it was thn tht thy got to no tht it was a grand grand affair nt a small get-together types......it was held on Armaan Mallik's private beach......everything was glowing n has its own beauty.......the entrance was beautifully decorated n a huge table was kept on the side for the guest to pick up ther masks......thy went picked up ther mask.....Riddhima got the one which perfectly matched her dress as if it was just kept ther for her.....

Riddhima's Dress n Mask ::

"Riddzi this is perfect for u.....perfect match....n u look very pretty even with the mask on.....u knw u looks very seductive" she said with a hint of teasing......

"ok Muski enough nw cn we go in"

Thy made ther ways inside......to c lots of ppl dancing, laughing, joking or eating........the atmosphere was full of life......thy went to the few ppl thy have come to know during ther stay.....n got involved in the celebration.....

A pair of eyes wer constantly following Riddhima's every move.....

"Excuse Me" came a voice from behind thm thy turned to see a handsome guys standing ther with a smile....

"If m not wrong u would be Muskaan" he said looking at Muskaan...

"Yes...."

"I Rahul Garewal Armaan's best frnd n business partner...." he said shaking her hand...

"he had told me about u ppl......actually he's waiting for u all there" he said pointing to a spot wer a guy was standing with his back towards them talking to some one......

"Ohk"

"So shall we...." thy moved to wer Armaan was standing.....

"Armaan here are ur guest....." Rahul called out to him......Armaan turned n for a moment Riddhima forgot to breath.......the dashing face, n mysterious smile which had got her mesmerized the first time she saw him.....n yet he was smiling his ever so gorgeous smile at thm.....

"hey Muskaan, hey Anji" he said hugging thm lightly.....while his voice had n adverse effect on Riddhima......she kept on staring at him.....he turned towards Riddhima n gave her his most charming smile......

"hello Riddhima, how r u now" his voice soft n calm.....he put forwad his hand for her......while she almst unconsciously held his hands.....n he kissed her hand lightly.....while she felt a little shiver...."how are u feeling today......ur frndz wer very tensed for u yesterday......u should not do like this again"

"M fine now......thnx for all tht u did for me...." she said softly while he yet held onto her hand....."anything for a pretty lady like u" he said flirtatiously......n she cldn't help but blush a little.....
"Armaan thy are here....n thy wanna meet u now"

"Ok m coming in a minute" he turned to thm again... "u'll have to excuse me for a minute i be right back"

"Ya sure no problem" Anjali said..

"Rahul take care of thm..." n he left....

"Rahul plzzz don't mind me asking, but we don't know wats the occasion at all"

"Oh its completely Ok......Actually Armaan had finally got the property he was craving for more thn 5 yrs now.....he gone ther to sign the papers rit now"

"Oh tht's gr888....Armaan seems to be a very hard working guy"

"Ya he is.....wat ever he has is his own no inheritance from anyone....he had worked alot to gain all this" he said looking in the direction of Armaan....

"he is really a very sweet guy.....doesn't look like he has soo much....i mean the ppl who have everything are mstly rude n arrogant n have lots of attitude but he seems to have non..."

"U are he has non he really a sweet n kindhearted human......come guys i'll get u all drinks....wat would u like"

"nything will do for me" said Muskaan.....

"n u" he asked Anjali "everything is fine with me"

"n finally u Miss Riddhima.....i doubt tht u hv nything with alcohol...." he said smiling at her.....

"u r right" she smiled back.....n thy headed to the drinks section n Rahul ordered drinks for thm......shortly after tht Rahul asked Muskaan for dance which she gladly agreed to.....after some time a guy came up to Anjali n asked her for dance n she went with him......now Riddhima was sitting ther all alone looking at her frndz enjoying themselves.....she smiled n picked her drink from the glass n drank it......n made a face...

"y does it taste so diff" n she drank the rest of it "but i liked it" she finished the whole glass......n turned towards the bar tender n asked for another drink.....like tht she had 5 shots of apple vodka...

"can i have this dance with a pretty lady" a guy asked her in a sweet voice.....she turned to look at him......his face was covered with the mask she cloud not see his frndz properly firstly as the lights wer dim n secondly due to the effect of the drink.......she moved close to him n thn smiled sweetly n put her hand in his......while he lead her to the dance floor......

He pulled her lightly towards himself n she landed in his arms n put her hands on his chest.....while his hands slide around her waist.....n he pulled her close......both of thm moved with the song.....well actually the guys moved while Riddhima just starred at him......

"U have blue eyes.....ocean blue.....i love thm" she said softly.....despite being drank she was yet slightly aware of the surrounding.....

"So u love my eyes"

"hmmm......"

"wat else do u like in me sweetie" he whispered close to her ears n kissed her earlobe lightly......n she closed her eyes feeling the familiar touch in it.....

"I love the way u whisper in my ears...." she said with her eyes closed as her hands moved around his neck....while he stroked her back....still moving with the music.....

"the way u hold me....i don't know y but it gives me a sense of protection n i love tht abt u"

His hold on her got more tight "n wat do u don't like in me"

"hmmmm......i don't like the fact tht i don't know ur name.....how m i suppose to remember u when u go away from me" she said looking up to him...

"do u want me to go away frm u"

She thought for a while n thn said "No i don't but u know i don't wanna say tht to u....after all i can't look desperate right.....as u r my admirer so u shld be the eager one not me....right" she said innocently under the effect of the drink.....as she had no idea wat she was saying at all or wats going on around her....all she felt was his hands stroking her back n his sweet n sexy voice which she loved....

"ohhh is it sooo....ok thn don't tell me about it ok" he said smiling at her cute adorable face.....

"ok" she nodded obidently.....

"but y do u want to rem me"

"hmmm i don't know....but my heart says to rem u always....n i feel good wen i think abt u" she said placing her head on his chest n closed her eyes....

"so u miss me"

"yes i miss u....bt nw m going tomorrow will i ever see u ohhh sorry sorry i haven't seen u but will i ever hear u again" she asked innocently......

"Don't worry abt it honey....m going to be with u till u want me too...." he couldn't help but smile at her cuteness....

"U know this all is like my dream which i used to have.....n tht's y i love all this even more...." he twirled her around.....but when she came back he wasn't ther anymore she looked around the room but cloud not find him anywer.....N the next thing she knew was tht she fainted...

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"Riddhima u ok baby....u had fainted bcoz of the excess of the drink" Muskaan said as Riddhima opened her eyes....

"I m fine Muski....bt m head is paining"

"tht's bcoz of the drinks" Rahul said giving her a glass of lemonade....

"thnx" she said talking the glass ....

"Riddzi how did u get drank n wat wer u doing in the middle of the dance floor...."

"I think i by mistake picked up the wronge glass....n thn i was dancing with him"

"with whom do u know him"

"ya i mean no....i don't know"

"wat does I don't know means...its either u know him or don't....wat was his name"

"i don't know his name..."

"ok how does he looked like" Rahul asked to help her...

"i didn't see his face it was covered with the mask...." n thn the door opened n Armaan walked in with Anjali....Anjali saw Riddhima sitting ther n hugged her....

"U fine baby....we got soo scared"

"I m fine Anji.."

"See i told u both she'll be fine....u girls worry too much for her" Armaan said to Muskaan n Riddhima....

"Thnx alot Armaan....n she like our baby doll....we can't afford anything to happen with her....she's our darling" n thy hugged Riddhima together...while Rahul n Armaan smiled at the trio...

"Anjali Muskaan go n fresh n up....u guys look tired n thn u all can stay her the night i'll ask Rahul to check out of ur hotel so u can leave directlyfrm here in the morning...."

"thnx alot Armaan....u have been of a gr88 help....specailly baring her"

"wat do mean by baring me Muskaan" Riddhima asked surprise with the sudden accusation on her.... "hmmm tht Armaan will tell u"

N thy left smiling leaving Armaan n Riddhima alone.....Armaan went n set down on the bed....

"i have heard ur voice b4" she was yet in too minds....as her heart n brain wer having diff thinking abt the same facts...

"hmmm u say stuff like this with drinking also" he said chuckling

"wat do u mean"

"oh u don't rem....ok thn i'll tell u...."

Flashback.....

Armaan moved towards Riddhima wen he saw her standing in the middle of the floor all alone looking lost....

"Riddhima wat r u doing here like this....are u finding someone" he asked her

She hit his head "I was finding u stupid idiot donkey...." n she hugged him tightly....

"Riddhima wat are u doing....i think u have had too much to drink come on lets go in i'll go n call Muskaan n Anjali"

She held his hand to stop him "No no don't go i don't want to tell thm....thy'll think m crazy.....do u think m crazy"

"no i don't i just think tht we should go inside now"

"are i told u na i don't wanna go in" she shouted keeping her hands on her hips....

"tume samjhe nai aata hai kya" Muskaan n Anjali heard her voice n came up to her to see her beating Armaan...

"Riddzi stop wat are u doing...." Muskaan held her

"Muski see na he's not letting me dance n taking me in ...... n he says tht i m drank....u know na i don't drink.....n if papa came to know he'll scold me n call me back....Muskii i don't wanna go back now....i haven't even find him yet.....say something na Muskkii"

"Riddzi calm down no one is calling u back lets just go in...."

"now u too.....n y did the dj stop the music....abe dj music start kar Riddhima Gupta ko dance karna hai" she shouted n thn looked around to see everybody looking at her...

"Muski y is evey boddddd" but b4 she could complete her sentence she fainted....

Flashback ends.....

"N thn i picked u up n here u are..." he said smiling seeing her go all red in embarrassment...

"I m sooo sorry Armaan, i didn't intend to do all this.....m really sorry"

"Oh don't be i really enjoyed seeing u like tht.... look really cute when drunk....waise the bartender told me tht u had 5 shots....which is too much for the first time...."

"....." she couldn't say anything...

"Its ok Riddhima hota hai....now go to sleep u ppl need to leave tomorrow morning...good night sweet dremas....." he kissed her cheek n left the room....while she just stood ther with her hand on the cheek he kissed n automatically a smile appeared on her face n she almost fell on the bed n lost herself in her dream world thinking *I just hope wat my heart is saying should be true....good night Armaan* n she closed her eyes....

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Hey guys here is the 3rd part.....well it didn't turn out to be wat i thought abt it....bt anyways here it is for u all to rate it.....i just hope u all like it.....plzzz guys do comment/criticize wat u feel abt it.....silent reader plzzz comment even a word will do.....n do press the Like button if u like it......😊


Edited by crazy_4_karan - 15 years ago
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Hey..Amazing intro dear.
Reminds me of DDLJ.
very sweet.
Plz continue soon.
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nice another one! i like the intro, do continue it soon!
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hey nice intro......do continue soon....tc...thnx for d pm...........
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hey,
nice start. thanks for sharing n continue soon.
luv
deepu :)
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cute,seems a little like ddlj.do continue.
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Hey
Nice intro
Continue soon
PM me if you can
Take Care
Zoya
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~ Congrats For The New FF ~

awesome intro loved it continue soooon will be waiting for ur parts . . . .
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