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Surbhi

@arvanu

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#321

*sniffs* *sniffs*......😭🥺

Absolutely magnificent,Komal!!

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story,sweety!!

It was indeed lovely! I've no words to praise you enough..!!

Thanks for the PM!!

-surbhi😊

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Jenifer

@Jenifer.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#322

OK, I've typed up my comments 3 times now and all 3 times I have lost it. There goes the 'third time lucky' statement out the window. So, hoping that this gets posted (if not then I literally give up) then I would like to say: Komz, I've read and hopefully I can post my detailed comment some other time. I just don't have the energy to write it up all over again.

But, before I go, I would like to say a few things:

@Borna: In reply to your comment of my comment (lol) - it's is very saddening that someone has to brace themselves for death. Everyone has to die, it's a given, unescapable fact but death is also a very unpredictable event. Most imagine death of old age but most also know death could be round the corner in their prime time. Someone shoudn't have to be able to predict their death within a timeline. That's just wrong and to me it feels evil. A sad, morbid thought, I know, but it touches me.

@Kom-Kom: I'm not going to say something along the lines of 'you're so good' or 'how do you do it?'. Not this time. What I am going to say though is, thank you for doing this 'good', however you do it.

Chandini Raatein is definately my most loved peice. The others run very close but this one runs slightly ahead. I don't know what it is that makes it so. Is it because of the characters? The simplicity? The sensitivity? The personal experience? Maybe a mixture of all? I dunno but this one holds very dear to the heart. Thanks for the dedication but thank you more for writing this beautiful story. Love you loads.

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#323

Ok Komz, finally read part 3!!! Wow those two places are beautiful especially the Jahaz Mahal!!! Love how u always introduce me to such beautiful places, especially the Santorini islands b4!! 😍 Loved this part, the way you described Anjali's room and everything and how they explored the two places, i got totally lost in it!!! Awesome job!! Oh no but the ending of this part, with Anjali turning him down, me no likey 😒!! will read the last part soon and comment on that!!! 😃

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#324

omg this was beautiful.. it made me cry.. it mustve been hard.. this sounds hard to deal with i mean not feeling the sun.. i'm a sun girl..cant live without it... thank you so much for this. it taught me something new. thanks:D

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#325

i have a lot of stuff going on in my mind, so i think i should start from when i saw your pm
ok so when i saw your pm i resisted this great urge to open it and read the update, but then i was like i should save the best for last, but i guess i was too desperate to read it so that didn't work out
then i started reading it and once again i got lost in the characters, in the emotions, in the story
this update was a roller coaster ride, if you think about it
so i start reading, and its all nice and all, then anjali comes and i could feel a smile on my face
atul introduces her as his girlfriend, and the smile grew bigger, and i keep smiling cuz everything is going so good!
and then they kiss, and i squealed out loud, no joke! and my face started hurting from smiling so much lol everything was so perfect!
and then atul gets the awful call and the smile is wiped from my face like it wasn't there in the first place
i keep reading and i don't know it gets both better and worse, better in the sense that i love the way its written and how close atul and anjali are, and worse cuz well thats kinda obvious lol
and the end i was trying not to cry, but when she dies i did end up crying, it was so touching, i couldn't help it!
the note just left me stunned, its sad that people actually have to deal with this stuff, and it makes me feel lucky you know? that despite all the problems i might have, i am much much better off than some people, for whom i can do nothing but feel bad for!
you've once again managed to amaze me with your writing skills, i swear every one of your stories are as awesome (if not more) than the previous one
i totally loved this story di!! it was fabulous!

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#326

Finally finished it Komz....and i really don't know what to say!! i am like totally heartbroken after reading this, i felt like i had gotten soo close to AA in your FF and this is one story i will definitely never forget!! It really touched my heart it did!! Oh no the way you wrote about how she got burned in the sunlight, really brought tears to my eyes!!

I loved this line:

I have one last wish now… Don't burn my body after I'm gone. The sun has burned me enough. I want to be buried. Forever under the sun without the fear of being harmed.

that was brilliant and the way you described how Atul saw even his mom there in the moonlight that night with Anjali!! Just loved that part!!

Komzie loads of hugs and love for you 🤗 🤗 You have really made me think deep about life and appreciating what i have. i mean just becoming aware of people in the world having XP it really shows us what we have and how thankful we should be for it, Alhamdulillah. Thanks sooo much for sharing this story with us!!!! 👏 👏 👏 You have done a brilliant job as always, and i think i am going to take the liberty of telling some of my other IF friends to check it out!! i think it is a must read for anybody!!!!

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MelodiousDreams

@MelodiousDreams

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#327

@Jen: You typed it up 3 times and it disappeared every single time? That's awful. I'm wishing you luck for your detailed comments now, because Komzie isn't the only one who's going to read them!

That sad, morbid thought is indeed touching. I feel the same way about it. No one should have to say "Oh, I'm going to die on such-and-such date, or such-and-such year..." I personally wouldn't be able to bear it. I guess it depends on being at peace with yourself when the time comes...

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Reine

@Reine

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#328

OMG I am in love with this!!!

BBL to comment =]

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#329

i will start reading chandni raatein asap!

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Surbhi_rox

@Surbhi_rox

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#330

@Chandni Raatein-Part 1

omg! wow di..! d concept is so very interesting. I loved it to the core. Atul being a college guy, criticizing the place..missing his frnds..n mumbai..and den he meets anjali..who is a vampire? when she actually said yes..she was a vampire..i was really shocked! It was the last thing i expected. Is she actually one? or its just a prank or something..i have to read the next parts to know more!!
But i loved this vampire..lolz..and its really interesting..
i'll read the next part asap..and den leave my comments!!

luv u!

-Sanjana

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